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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
finally you are updating a romantic story
wait am i dreaming or really it is not
a tragic story woa the prologue was awesome
awn poor girl getting bullied by uday
and why is she blaming him for her mother dead
and the last part is ...AWESOME
cannot wait for chappy 1
the cs is soo good
yeaaa jai uday ki behenn haii
do send me a pm
huggss
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Awesome Prologue and character sketch ...

very nice and interesting
DO PM me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

i know i was supposed to update but i am extremely sorry i have to postponed the update i have deiced to update both my ss at the same time so sorry all over again i will try to update fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Awesome Prologue and character sketch ...


very nice and interesting
DO PM me if possible


thank you so much
actually i am facing some email verification problem hence cannot send you request but will try to send pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: annabh

finally you are updating a romantic story
wait am i dreaming or really it is not
a tragic story woa the prologue was awesome
awn poor girl getting bullied by uday
and why is she blaming him for her mother dead
and the last part is ...AWESOME
cannot wait for chappy 1
the cs is soo good
yeaaa jai uday ki behenn haii
do send me a pm
huggss


no you are dreaming chotu hahahhaha
wait a sec i can still turn into a tragic you know payback for troubling me
yes the way you get bully me
wait chotu will give all your answer
do not want love triangle
no i will not
get lost
hugzz back

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: chocohollic


i know i was supposed to update but i am extremely sorry i have to postponed the update i have deiced to update both my ss at the same time so sorry all over again i will try to update fast

its ok
but update it fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: roopali15

its ok
but update it fast


in five mins
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1

She was standing in the hostel courtyard looking lost , she adored the green hill and the blue sky , something she wanted to pack with her luggage and take back home. Finally her ISC exams were over and now the time had come for her to get back to her home , a place she had been escaping , people from whom she maintained distance and from a past she kept running and never wanted to face but as people say world is round no matter how much we run a day comes when we find our self in the same spot . Now she had no reason to stay back , it was time for the princess to go to her kingdom , Her Father would come any hour of this day to take her back, nobody have accepted it as all thought he would send his pupil to keep his royalty but only manyata knew that to her father she was the given more priority than anything else , as she was in her school uniform , the last time she could wear the short grey skirt , that amazing white washed shirt with navy blue tie , a warm black stocking and blood red sweator to prevent each student from the bitter cold but still today manyata eyes were swollen and her nose the reason was clear she had been crying , since last one month the thought of separation from her beloved irani maam killed her and arose such inner pain that could be handle only by tears , at times she did ask irani maam to accompany her but she rejected the proposal as after the dead of her family this the home filled with their memories was the only reason to live and so manyata had no option but to part away after all meeting and separations were a part of life , as she was deep into her thoughts the peon came to her and said in a hurtful voice

PEON: your father have come manyata , he is waiting for you in the office

Manyata could see the tears in his eyes as she was knew she was the candy of all eyes and parting apart gave them equal pain too as the only thing she could to smooth the old was a warm hug as tears flowed from their eyes in no time her luggage was bought down to the car her father could see the pain of separation in her eyes as she bide irani maam the last good bye and sat in the car while it drove downhill she kept her head on giriraaj ' shoulder and shed tears of separations


He sat there with a confuse look on his face , an hour had been passed as they sat in the same position , the menu card covered half of his face with each passing second her anger and was increasing with each passing seconds as he stared at the menu card finally loosing her patience she asked him with much anger in her voice

UNNATI: vijay are we going to spend our entire date like this ? you have been in the menu card for the past one hour

VIJAY:I am sorry uni it is just that I am unable to decide whether I shall order chocolate ice cream or two in one

UNNATI:I cannot believe the entire time you was confused about which order you shall place god vijay you are just so unbelievable

Saying this she got hold of her bag as she stood up and tried to move but just then a waiter blocked her way, he carried a huge cake and as her eyes fell on it , it had her picture in it as it read a beautiful message

" happy 2 nd anniversary my sweet heart congratz you managed to survive with this utterly crazy and stupid boy friend of yours

Love vijay"

A cute blush played on her face as the waiter placed the cake on the table and left the couple all alone she sat back into her seat as he teased her

VIJAY;I thought you was leaving uni

UNNATI:I have changed my mind

VIJAY: changed your mind did my cake tempt you to that extent

UNNATI: shut up vijay

She said all lovingly hitting him playfully on his chest as they held the knife together and cut the cake , the very first slice they fed each other , and then the lunch was lead as the entire time flew in laughing and feeding each other as after their romantic dinner they came out of the restro with there hands locked with each other


He looked at the wall clock it was time he wondered if her plane had already landed finally after so many years he would see his princess , but that would only happen if he could get a chance to get out of this boring board meeting which seemed like never ending , he envied as he was aware all his family member was already in Devgrah palace welcoming her and it was only him struck here but as a Yuvraaj his responsibilities towards his throne is kept first but only if he could convey his heart the same thing , he revised his speech for the very last time , this was a very important meeting and if he was able to crack this deal with Priyan Group Of Builders than there would be no difficulties in getting the tender passed of his another hotel in Delhi but everything he tried to focus his mind mingled up with the thoughts of manyata as finally it was his turn he stood up buttoning the his court and headed towards the projector with his signature smirk , he could already feel all females in the room including the director of PGB Miss Priyan eyes hooked on her as he started off with his speech and the rest remain silent

UDAY; a very good afternoon to you all , I Mr Uday Veer Singh would like to present my view and idea of behalf of my company , Jaigarh Industry so here our company wants to make our chain of hotels bigger by building it in the capital of the nation Delhi but this time the theme would be different as you all are aware of my hotels they are mostly posh hotels with disco , pool and many other such other entertainment but this time the themes of hotels will be completely be on family yes this udaynivas will be a family hangout spot with children park , gaming parlour and spa for there parents to relax .

At the thought of children and family the only thought that came to his mind was of his princess the hotel was actually going to be her honey moon gift he lost control over himself as being absent minded her continued his speech

UDAY;and so according to me I trust none but the best builders of the nation to carry out this project that is my main focus to join hands with Princess …..

The entire conference room stared at him blankly as he rectified his mistake and concluded

UDAY:I mean Priyan Group Of Builders well that is all I want to say

The rest of the meeting went uneventful and the other companies failed to prove there standard so the deal was handed over to uday though he noticed Miss Priyan chuckling at his antics while signing the contract , after the work was done he was racing back home as he smiled and said

UDAY:I have not met you yet you got your hooks so deep into me wonder what will I do when I met you princess


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Edited by chocohollic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
wow that was srsly awesome!!!
plzz do continue!!
and update soon

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