Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile - Page 71

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Posted: 10 years ago

 

The Moment to Die for


Brutus--O my dear friend! Welcome to the capital
You trampled the superstitious signs...
Congrats to you,my lord!!
Welcome in my heart, to the core of heart.

Caesar--
How can I get so frightened??
You all are with me my hands...
I share respect to you all
Let's make this evening memorable...

The party begins.Trebonius prays for his nephew to Caesar but he dismisses his prayer.Trebonius gets closer to him & hurts him with knife. Within a while,all repeat the same.

Brutus--
Do you feel pain my lord??
I know...you're paining,you're bleeding;
I'm with you my buddy,me too paining.
I'm on the horns of a dilemma...


Caesar gets much weaker due to unceasing bleeding.

Caesar-- where are you my dear Brutus??
I know you will prevent them
Make them understand my purity
I heartily trust you my friend.

Brutus gets nearer to Caesar & hurts him with all of his strength.

Brutus--I've hurt myself Caesar...not you.
I've more wounds & pains than you.
But I've performed perhaps committed my duty
Even with the blood of your heart as well as mine.

Caesar--
Oh,Brutus! You too!
You too treat me as an unscrupulous!!
This pain is much bloodier than your given wounds.
Ohh...you too, Brutus!!

(Falls dead)

Brutus-- I've killed you darling,
I've killed my sensitivity,my tears...
For that rubbish general welfare.
God bless you my friend, god curse me well.

Good bye...
True love never dies.

 

Edited by surprising - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES...Pore Comment Korchhi !!

--Edited--

Oshadharon, The Way You Depicted The Pain Of Caesar When Brutus Stabbed Him...The Immense Pain Of Being Betrayed By A Friend...But At The Same Time You Also Brilliantly Portrayed The Inner Faithfulness Of Brutus By This Para :-

Brutus--I've hurt myself Caesar...not you.
I've more wounds & pains than you.
But I've performed perhaps committed my duty
Even with the blood of your heart as well as mine.

The Last Line, :-


God bless you my friend, god curse me well.

Reflects The Loyalty Of A Friend Perfectly. Lovely Love It !!!! (Sorry, Aami Bangla-te Kotha Bolte Temon Kichhu Potu Noyi...😳)

Edited by Radhikerani - 10 years ago
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wow wow wow dis is simply fabulous 👍🏼
loved it ❤️
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wow beautiful poem 😳
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fabulous poem..
et tu brute...
very beautifully written:)
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WOW!!!!!
Simply fabulous