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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: XxMevKhanxX

awsum update👏👍🏼 loved taani n vihaan prt n also i lovd yash, adi n vihan prt n obv loved taarey update soon n wnt more taarey in nxt update.

thanku dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: u-me-aur-D3

yay ek aur update... but i hope that u listened to what i said n rested ur hand!!!

hahah i can imagine vihaan making making a full on Vicky entry 😆
... 🤣 vihaan taani ke saath flirt kar raha hai 🤣
i dont know if thats super cute or super creepy
but i seriously loved rey's reaction 🤣
hehe i love how possesive every male gets in the house when raj is mentioned
bechari angel... everyone is messing up her love story 😆
awww adi n yash r super adorable... adi canceling his match for his lil sis
n yash offering to go on the trip even though he's not at school 😛
wow... i never thought reyam would drop the raj thing so easily
i though they would come up with a plan to make angel stay or something
but vihaan's possessive too... aww angel is super lucky to have so many awesome boys in her life
ahahaha 🤣 i was not expecting that reaction for vihaan... "uske aankhen kharab hai kya"
😲 poor vihaan.. yash aur adi se itna dar tha hai...
aww swayam's worried for angel... now he is the swayam that i was expecting
hehe yash's comment about the "lovebirds" 😳
Yash... is going to... ST LOUIS!!! omg next generation D3 gang... please tell me ur going to write a sequel to this
n in that make sure u write about yash at st louis n the new dance team
n make yash become "sharon" n find a girl to be "swayam" n rewrite the entire swaron love story
but with new characters... the next generation of D3... kya idea hai 😃
awww adi n angel fall asleep together... i remember when i used to do that to my bro
awww n yash joins them too... kya family hai yaar
haha vihaan n vicky were as usual eating... i see vihaan bilkul vicky pe gaya hai 😆
aur neha kitna cute mom hai par vicky has not changed at all 😛
awww the men have tears in their eyes on angel leaving... i wonder how they will react when she gets married 😆
awww
Simran raj... angel n vihaan... please tell me that they end up together
please tell me that actual raj goes away somehow... i want vihaan and angel together!!!!
hahaha i love that random strangers line 😆
aww dono ke fav movie same hai... vo bhi ddlj... i'm loving this pairing
... 🤣 simran... vihaan meets simran... "hi i'm raj" 🤣 ahahah
but seriously... please tell me that vihaan n angel end up together
u can make simran n raj fall in love if u want 😆 but vihaan n angel r too cute together
phir bhi teri story hai toh tu vo likh jo tujhe likhna hai
angel felt weird...meaning jealous... meaning she likes vihaan... right??
adi... aur naina... i like this
awww adi aur naina ke beech kya chal raha hai 😉 blushing n all huh
hahah raj becomes jealous of naina's little sis 🤣
awww adi is super cute... bilkul rey pe gaya hai... he gave naina chocolates 😳
now i want to eat pani puri too 😉
hahah taani already dono ki shaadi kar rahi hai 🤣

I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE
n i really hope to see more adi n naina scenes soon
they have become my favourite couple in this FF
ab jaldi se yash ke liye bhi ek ladki lao

loved ur comment as always
always wait 4 ur comment
thanku muah love u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

OMG,its a pleasure to read ur updates dr,ty r so soothing! Cmg to d update,Vihaan hai allah,flirting with Taani! Bechara Rey,hehehe! Angel is bng so excited fr her trip,here all d posessive mens of her life tkng charge listening Raj name,Thank God Shani managed d situation.
Haye,Adi wnt to skip his match fr her sis n Yash wanna go wit her,caring bhais.Poor Vihaan is ensnared b/w posessive bro's.Silence ws occupied in d hm since Angel is gnna leave fr her trip.
Sharon consoling Swayam wr Yash joined thm to mk a picture-perfect family ws adorable.On d other hand Taani consoling Rey ws super cute.N Neha bng a typical mom ordering her son wt to do n wt nt to do,pretty good! Vihaan ki bacche is in full masti mood,akhir Vicky ka beta hai,itna toh banta hai boss! Finally Angel left fr her trip! Hehehe,Vihaan-Angel scene resembling Raj-Simran of DDLJ,freaking adorable! Vicky bangng to Sim n getting lost,haye.
Hmmm,Taani n Rey missing Angel wr Taani soothing d situation wit her lovely antics(truely said,ye log truly love each other 2 much) n God,Taani ka pani-puri*sniff* ruined romantic moment.
Awe,Adi isnt able to concentrate on his match,hw sad.Hmmm,Naina,nt bad haan! Glad to c d budding feelings wit d 2.Adi jealous of Baaby,i ws grinning like hell.Haye,Adi-Naina adoring Taarey eating pani-puri,so sweet.
Hai Rabba,Taani kitna typical bangayi ti soching abt hr as bahu,ufff.Nice to c d fatherly care by Rey to Naina!
I'm so scared n anxious to knw wt may happen to angel.Totally excited wit precap.

omg thanku thanku thanku thanku 4 such a long comment love u muah
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shanya8

uff meri jaan kya likh dala hayee itna pyaara mai to mar gayii hayee soo sweet yr n me really sorry 4 late comment yr maafi to banti haii hehe well jakes apart it was really a possessive chap hehe n sab hii angel ke piche uff n yeh 4 possessive bhaii kya hoga inkaa really wanna know what is next n simran n raj scene hayee hmm lets cc update soon

muah love u my baby sis
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tareyfan

i noe m laggin behing bt has mat ..

n cumming to d update me angel ko utha ke ghar le jaa rhi hun tu apni story ke liye koi doosre ladki dhonndle she is soo soo soo cute yaar


n yash n adi troubling her ..😆

par thora emotional blackmail karna parega (angel puri mumma pe gyi hai )



An saw this n caughs(fake) to make sw realize her presence'.soon sw saw her n goes to her

Sw-hey my angel sorry mamu ne aapko dekha he nai

An(sadly)-its ok mamu

Sw-arre hamari angel itne sad kyu hai'hmmm let me think angel ko chocolate chahiyeh hai

An thinks-(ha chahiyeh toh hai par right now trip is more imp focus angel focus)

An-nai

Sw-toh phir new dress chahiyeh

An think-ha plz no angel focus'focus'

An-nai

Sw-toh kahi ghumne jana hai

An-nai

Sw-ok fine kya chahiyeh batao tu joh bolege mai wo la donga ok

Now angel smile an devil smile because this is what she was waiting for'sw looks at her n got scared n think-yeh ladki kya sooch rahe hai ab kya karne wale hai'ek dum taani pe gaye hai bacpan mai taani bhi aise he smile karte the jab bhi wo kuch garbar karne wale hoti thi


OMG YAAR STOMACH DUKH RAHA HAI HAS HAS KE N MERI UPAR WALI PREDICTION SAHI THI..TAANI USKI MOM PE HI GYI HAI

BECHARA SWAYAM PHAS GAYA...🤣


Now angel with a proud smile enter her house back n adi n yash saw her

Yash-abbe isse kya hua

Adi-yeh bahar thi na'bahar toh mamu bhi the

Yasj-shit!!!! Dad bhi na 2 min mai maan jaate hai

Adi-matlab???

Yash-isne dad ko mana liya n dad ne permission de de hai

Adi-what!!!!!


HEHEHEHEHE YAAR I CN ACTUALLY VISUALIZE IT ...ANGEL AISI AAYI HOGI GHAR ME WAPIS


Just then rey comes down n sw also comes back to take his phone back

Rey-taani mera cell kaha hai

Taani-mujhe nai pata wahi hoga dekho na

Here angel holding rey's phone goes to him

An-dadda yeh raha aapka phone

Rey-thanks my angel'he was about to pull a chair to sit when an pulls a chair for him n smile at him'.rey find it weird

Then an runs to kitchen n takes a glass of water n goes back to rey n gave him

Now rey was sure angel wants something n she is buttering him

Rey-angel kya chahiyeh hai aapko'


YOU NOE ME ABHI BHI AISE HI MASKA MARTI HUN


Adi-acha sun dhyaan rakhna is paagal ka(pointing at an who was dreaming)'puri paagal hai yaha waha na chali jaye


ME MERE BHAI KE BEST FRIEND KO BHI AISE HI BOLA THA

JAB WOH TRIP PE JAA RAHA THA 😳

N MOTI YAAR MERA BHAI CALLS ME D SAME...😳





Sh-mai bhootni ho mr. reyansh singhania!!!!...maine tere itne help k tu jab sw se chupke taani k bedroom mai jaata tha tab mai help karte the tere'aur jab tu taani ko date pe le kar jata tha tab bhi maine sw ko busy rakha'.aur toh aur jab tune taani ko kiss'

Rey-bas kar meri maa marwaege kya

Sw-ek min ek min tu taani se kab bedroom mai mila aur date pe kab gaya

Rey-dude chill shaadi se phele k baat hai

Sw-tu shaadi se phele meri behan k bedroom!!!! Rey I m gonna kill u

All laugh

Yash-dad aap abhi bhi bua k liye itna possessive ho

Sh-look who is talking'beta tum bhi toh angel k liye possessive ho

Adi n yash-wo toh hai


HEHE BECHARA SWAYAM WAS UNKNOWN OF SUM FACTS




N MERE BHI DAD CN NVR REFUSE ME HAAN


Rey-mere baap galti ho gaye mere se tere behan se shaadi kar le

But taani heard that n shout-kya!!!! Mujhse shaadi karna aapki galti thi!!!! Rey mujhe aapse baat he nai karne

Rey-arre nai taani sweetheart suno toh'but taani went

Rey glared at sw

Sw-what??? Maine kya kiya infact tune mere behan ko naraz kiya hai!!! Mujhe pata tha k tu uske liye right nai hai par meri sunta kon hai'he went in kitchen to meet his lady love

Rey-hey bhagwaan kya karo mai in bhai behan ka!!!!...hey taani k Krishna ji aapne taani ko sw k behan kyu banaya!!!!


🤣🤣🤣 TOO GOOD YAAR JST TOO GUD...


LUVD THE ENTIRE THING TO D CORE YAAR..DIL KHSUH KAR DITTA...MUAH LUV U 4 THIS ONE YAARA

N AGLA PART KAL PADHUNGI ..ABHI ME GONNA RUN AGLA UPDATT KAL PADHUNGI...

aww love u 4 commenting this long
but u wanna take my angel
no not done phir meri story ka kya hoga
muah love u a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago

ok guys i m not sure about this chapter i just wrote it in a real bad mood anyways if u like it then enjoy..😊 n ya i m soo happy just completed 7th chapter n already 50 pages r over thanku to my readers love u all CHAPTER-7

TAAREY N ADI N NAINA IN CAR

Rey was driving n taani was sitting beside him…n adi n naina was sitting in back seat

Naina-thanku 4 the lift sir n mam

Rey-my my yeh ladki formality kitna karti hai

All laugh

Taani-beta hamare yaha formality k koi jagah nai

Naina-ok….waise aunty maine suna hai aap bohot acha khana banate ho

Before taani could ans….rey-arre nai beta aisa kuch nai hai taani bohot bekar khana banati hai bas mai adi aur angel kaise bhi kar k kha lete hai

Hearing this taani n adi mouth was opened like "O"

But soon adi jump in for his dearest mother

Adi-dad aisa kuch nai hai ok…..pata hai naina mom world k best cook hai….wo itna tasty khana banati hai na k bas pooch mat aur abhi se nai wo toh apne collage time se tasty khana banati thi itna tasty k mamu mom se zayda unke khane k liye possessive the kisi k saath asani se mom k haath ka bana khana share nai karte the

Rey-ya mere saath bhi nai…I m his bestfriend

Maina-wow aunty apko pata hai ek din adi mere liye(adi looks at her)….i mean hum sare friends k liye apke haath k bane aalo k parathe laya tha it was so tasty aunty

Taani smiles-acha itna acha laga toh kal ghar aao na breakfast pe mai waise bhi kal aalo k parathe banana wali ho

Adi(excited)-ha ha naina kal ghar aaona plzzz….phir hum wahi se school bhi chale jaenge…(taani giggles at her son's excitement)

Rey-aalo k parathe!!!!!...taani kal tum aalo k parathe banana wali ho wow

Taani-arre arre aapse kisne kaha k aapke liiye aalo k parathe ban rahe hai mai toh bacho k liye bana rahe ho aur waise bhi aap ko toh mere haath ka khana acha nai lagta na!!!!

Taani wink at adi n both had a hi5

Rey-arre taani mai toh mazak ka raha tha hahahahaha kya tum bhi joke nai samjhti

Taani-rhene do aap…. koi aalo ka paratha nai banega aapke liye health dekhi hai apni mote ho gaye toh!!!

Rey-oh plz ha I m still very handsome ladkiya marti hai mujh par…aaj bhi mai ek smile kar do na toh ladkiya fida hoti hai mujhe par

Naina-I agree uncle(both hi5)

Taani-really!!! so mr.reyansh singhania…

Rey-yes miss taani reyansh singhania

Taani-aap bhool rahe hai k collage k rose day pe mujhe 10000 rose mile the n yeh record aaj tak nai tota hai

Rey-ha pata hai!!!! God itne saare rose dekh kar toh mai paagal ho gaya tha!!!

Taani-kyu us time toh hum saath mai bhi nai the

Adi-come on mom samjha karo dad jealous the hahahahaha

Rey-well I was seriously as I loved her that time…..i seriously wanna know who all gave roses to her at that time

Nai-u r so possessive

Rey(laughs)-n not to forget intelligent also

Taani(confused)-kaise

Rey-ab dekho mai toh kuch kar nai sakta tha as hum relation mai nai the n us time toh hamara cold war chalta tha…toh maine iske cool se bhai ko bola k beta dekha kya ho raha hai tere behan k saath rossess n all…bas phir kya tha the most coolest guy in collage turned into the most dangerous bro on the earth n wo jake taani k side mai khada(stand) ho gaya uske baad taani ko ek bhi rose nai mila

Taani-what!!!!!!! Wo apne kiya tha!!!! Kya rey agar aap nai karte na toh mere pass 12000 roses ho jate…L

Adi-god mamu bhi kitne possessive hai…typical Indian bhai huh mai toh aisa nai ho

The rest of three glared at him like- " u seriously want us to believe that"

Adi(pouts)-f9 thora sa ho

Nai-thora sa!!!!...aapko pata hai aunty isse na hamare ek friend "raj" pe doubt hai k wo angel ko pasnd karta hai

Rey-wo doubt nai hai true hai…he likes my baby!!!

Naina looks at rey with a shocked expression

Taani-beta "raj" is a touchy topic in our house

With this both taani n naina laughs n rey n adi looks at them like what he do likes angel!!!

SCENE CHANGE….SOMEWHERE IN DARK ROOM

Guy- sir ek news hai

Boss-kya news

Guy-sir wo reyansh singhania

Boss-kya news hai reyansh singhania k bare mai

Guy-uski bte kisi school camp par gae hai

Boss-oh toh angel finally chali he gae good

Guy-sir akele gaye hai

Boss-kya!!! Matlab adi nai gaya

Guy-nai sir ….sir yahi sahi mauka hai par sir uski bte k saath koi uski hi umar ka ladka bhi hai

Boss-kon

Guy-koi vihaan hai…pura naam vihaan kalsi

Boss-vihaan kalsi…….suna suna sa lag raha hai

Guy-sir kisi vikram jeet kalsi aur neha kalsi ka beta hai

Boss-oh ha Vicky aur neha…nice…suno yahi sahi mauka hai us vihaan se mat daro…hai toh woh ek 14 saal ka ladka he na wo kya kar lega….yahi sahi waqt hai…so mr reyansh singhania the dangerous game is about to begin…..hahahahaha(laughs evily) this will be fun

NEXT MORNING

AT THE CAMP

Angel was sleeping beside simran when vihaan enter to wake angel

As soon as vihaan enter he saw simran sleeping peacefully n he thinks-kitne cute lag rahe hai yeh

Till then angel wakes n saw vihaan n she said a little louder

An-oye tu yaha

Vih-oye tu dhere bolege simran uth jaege

An(looks at simran)-tu janta hai isse

Vih(dreamingly)-ha

Till then simran due to noice gets up n saw vihaan

Simran-vihaan tum yaha

An-ha actually vihaan is my best friend

Sim-oh kaise ho tum

Vih-mai theek ho…they continue talking fully ignoring angel

An thinks-yeh ho kya raha hai yeh dono aise kyu behave kar rahe hai….aur yeh vihaan ka bacha mujhe ignore kar raha hai tu ruk vihaan tujhe toh mai ache se sabak sikhaongi

An looks at her phone n saw 10 miss calls from adi n 15 from yash n thinks-hey Krishna ji aaj toh mai gaye

HERE IN SINGHANIA HOUSE

Moring at the breakfast table

Adi was lost in his thoughts that y angel is not picking his calls when rey enter

Rey-hi champ tere angel se baat hue

Adi-nai dad wo mera phone nai utha rahe hai

Rey-hey bhagwaan meri bachi…

Taani(from kitchen)-kuch nai hua apki bachi ko madam abhi tak uthe nai hogi…maa ho uski mai jante ho usse

Rey n adi makes faces….just then adi got a weird feeling n he looks at door n rey looks at adi like isse kya hua

After a min…naina enter setting her hairs…n looks straight at adi n both smile n got lost in each other

Rey thinks-oh my my mera beta itna badha kab ho gaya….yeh dono toh bilkul mere aur taani kl tarah hai

Just then taani came out holding breakfeast she looks at adi who was looking out so she moves her eyes in that direction n saw naina ….soon taani n rey smile knowing their son

Taani-arre beta naina andar aao(this made adi n anina break their eye lock)

SCENE CHANGE IN SHIKHAWAT HOUSE

Well here Sharon rai prakash oops sorry I mean Sharon swayam shikhawat was in a bad mood…let's see y

Sh-haad hai yeh sw bhi na pata nai kaha rheh gaye the kal…kitne baar bola hai k time pe ghar aae par meri yaha suntan kon hai dono baap bte pata nai kaha ghoom rahe the!!!...aur yeh angel ne subah se call nai kiya ab pata nai iske mamu aur bhaiyu ko mai kaise handle karongi

Just then yash enter with sw…

Yash-mom wo…

Sh-kya hai

Sw n yash was taken a back with her irritated voice

Yash(slowly to sw)-dad kya kiya apne

Sw-maine??? Maine kya kiya

Yash-toh mom upset hai kyu hai

Sw-oye sh agar upset hai matlab maine kuch kiya…aisa nai hai

Sh looked at sw n yash n shouts-kya hai….kya aapas mai baat kar rahe ho

Sw-siren tum

Sh-don't u dare to call me that…..kal late kyu aae

Sw-woo sorry thora busy tha

Yash-come on mom hota hai just calm down

Sh-aur tu calm down k bache!!!

Sw-nai wo mera bacha hai kisi calm down ka nai

Both sw n yash laughs n yash said-dad that was seriously a pj

Sh-yeh joke tha

Sw-tha toh

Sh-I don't like joke

Sw-I don't like u

Yash-mom dad chill guys kya ho raha hai

Sh-tu toh chup he kar kal raat late kyu aaya kaha tha tu

Yash-wo mai…mai angel k fav place gaya tha uski yaad aa rahe thi isiliyeh

Sw-mujhe bhi bohot yaad aa rahe hai

MEANWHILE BACK IN SINGHANIA HOUSE

All were having breakfast when taani's phone rings she stands n goes to her n see it was angel…she picks up

Taani-ha angel..beta breakfast kiya??? Tu theek hai na??? theek se soe na raat ko???? Problem toh nai hue???

An-mom mom mom chill I m f9 n breakfast nai kiya…

Taani-kya tune breakfast nai kiya

Hearing this adi n rey runs to taani

Rey-mujhe angel se baat karne hai

Adi-nai phele mai baat karonga

Rey-I m her father

Adi-so I m her brother

Taani puts phone on loud speaker n angel speaks

An-dadda…bhai stop fighting

adi-tune breakfast kyu nai kiya

An-kyuki mila nai abhi tak

Rey-what yeh kaise trip hai breakfast nai diya abhi tak

Meanwhile taani tells naina what rey is about to say next

Taani(slowly to naina)-I m going to sue the school

Rey-I m going to sue that school……..both taani n naina looks at each other n laughs…..rey glared at them in anger

An-oh god dadda chill abhi mil jaega…anyways I got to go bye dadda bye bhai bye mom

Nai-hey say bye to me too

An-naina??? Is that u….aap waha kya kar rahe ho

Nai-long story tu aaja phir bataongi

An-ok anyways bye all love u….she cuts her call

Rey n adi talks with each other while taani n naina hears them

Rey-how could they do this

Adi-exactly dad do something

Rey-I m going to file a case against them

Hearing this taani n naina laughs like hell

Taani-rey adi tum dono paagal ho gaye ho

Rey-whatever

Adi-oh crap!!! School…naina chalo jaldi

Naina went to door n adi was about to leave when taani holds him n slowly said

Taani-wo…naina achi ladki hai

Adi(smiles)-mom I m going bye….bye dad

Rey-bye champ….bye naina….adi n naina left

Rey(getting close to taani)-naina toh achi hai par adi k hot se sexy se mom bohot bohot bohot achi hai

Taani smiled n rey started coming cloe to her

Taani-rey aap kya kar rahe hai

Rey-kuch bhi toh nai(coming close to her)

Taani-rey suniyeh….

Rey hold her from waiste…

Rey-taani hum ghar mai akele hai angel hai nai or adi bhi gaya ab bas tum aur mai

Taani-rey apke irade mujhe kuch theek nai lag rahe hai

Rey-jab tum meri baho mai ho toh irade kaise nek ho sakte hai sweatheart

Taani(blushes)-rey kaam par jae aapko late ho raha hai aur mujhe bhi

Rey-no way….give me a kiss

Taani-what no way

Rey-f9 then I won't leave u

Taani-rey yeh kya zid hai aap late ho jaoge na

Rey-I don't care

Taani-f9(she kiss him on cheek) n was about to leave when rey hold her again

Rey-mam I didn't mean this kiss…I mean my passionate lip kiss now comeon otherwise I won't leave u

Taani(thinks acha ji toh janab ko lip kiss chahiyeh abhi batati ho)

She secreatly calls sw n he picks n she puts call on loud speaker…

Sw-yea my baby sis

Hearing his voice rey gets apart from taani n stands away from her

Sw-taani u der kya hua..tu theek hai na

Taani(giggles on seeing rey reaction)-ha bhai mai bilkul theek ho…wo rey ko aapse kuch baat karne thi….he gives phone to rey

Sw-ha rey bol kya baat hai

Rey-wo wo wo

Sw-wo wo kya kar raha hai bol na

Rey-tu aaj office aa raha hai na

Sw-kyu aaj Sunday hai kya joh nai aaonga ofcourse aaonga

Rey-heheheh ya silly me f9 office mai milte hai bye

He cuts phone n again start coming towards taani

Taani-u want me to call bhai again

Rey-wo mai bag le raha tha(he picks his bad) n glared at taani

Rey-u just wait n watch u have to pay 4 this…he went

Taani giggles-aww my bhai is sooo sweet muah I love u bhai

BACK IN SHIKHAWAT HOUSE

All were having breakfast when sh phone rings n it was angel

Sh-angel beta kaise hai tu

Yash snatch phone n turns speaker on

Yash-angel tu phone kyu nai utha rahe

Sw-koi prob toh nai

Yash-us raj ne kuch kiya toh nai

Sw-tune breakfast kiya k nai

An-oh god mamu bhaiyu chill I m f9 n breakfast abhi kar longi u guys chill….acha someone is calling me got to go now bye…love u mamu…bhaiyu n mami plz save me from them

Sh-don't worry baby u enjoy…bye beta

She cuts call n now sh looks at sw n yash

Sh-agar ab kisine bhi angel ko call kiya na toh mujhse bura koi nai hoga…arre trip pe gae hai wo usse enjoy toh karne do ab koi call nai karega samjhe dono

Yash n sw nods their head….

Yash-ma mai jar aha ho collage ka kuch kaam hai…bye dad bye mom…he left

Sw looks at sh with a romantic glare

Sh-what

Sw-u look beautiful

Sh-awww u r soo sweet…J…..sw!!!! office rite now

Sw ran to grab his bag n goes out n drives 4 office

MEANWHILE IN CAMP

After calling everyone angel is sitting hungry when simran came

Sim-hey u had breakfast

An-na abhi bulaya kaha hai

Sim-dear hurry koi bulane wala nai hai just run before it get finish

An runs to the counter but the breakfast was finished…a sad angel looks at her tummy n remembers the time taani use to call her for breakfast but she ignores her…

An thinks-I m sorry mom ab samjh mai aa rahe hai apki value…L

Seeing a sad angel…simran runs to vihaan who was about to eat his first bite

Sim-vihaan

Vih-hey kya hua

Sim-wo wo shanaya breakfast is finished n she is hungry

Vih-what ab kya kare…..he looks at his plate n without thinking much ran to angel

Here angel was holding her tummy n sitting on rock anyone can she that she is hungry

Vih-hungry???

An turns n hugs him-very hungry

Vih-yeh le

An- yeh breakfast???

Vih-ha maine tere liye phele se nikal kar rakha tha( hi lied)

An-awww u r the best(hugs him) n starts eating like a kid….an-god I was dam hungry

Vih look at his best friend he is even ready to give his life for his besti toh breakfast kya cheez hai……he turns n found simran in tears

He took simran aside so that an could not hear them

Vih-what's wrong y r u crying

Sim-u r so sweet u gave ur breakfast when u know u was so hungry

Vih-she is my besti I can do anything 4 her

Sim-par ab tum kya khaoge

Vih-hmmm nothing its ok….he turned when simran place her hand on his shoulder n vih turn n found a plate

Vih-yeh

Sim-mera hai let's share

Vih(smile)-ofcourse…

So they share breakfast……

Meanwhile with yash at st. loius

Yash park his "cycle" at cycle stand n move inside collage only to get bump into an old man

Yash-oh I m really sorry sir

Man-its ok young man

Yash-I m seriously sorry it was not my intentions really sorry

Man-my boy I said its ok calm down what's ur name

Yash-….yash…yash shikhawat

Man-yash what

Yash-shikhawat sir….yash shikhawat

Man-oh ok this sir name reminds me my fav student swayam shikhawat

Yash(smiles)-I m his son sir

Man-what!!!!!...really wow u do look like him….by the way I was vp at that time but now I m trustee

Yash-nice to meet u sir

vp sir went n yash also went smiling as he loves when someone say he is like his dad as he respects n want to be like him….

But his thoughts was disturbed by some one……

Huh finally I m done with chapter 7 plz do like it n comment

Precap-who was the boss n what's his story???...what is store 4 angel???? Will adi n naina get close????who disturb yash thoughts???

Wanna know then stay tune

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Res/unres
Car convo was fab
Loved to know Rey's intelligent side. 😳
Awe adi took his moms side for food :)
N how they looked at adi when he said I m not typical Indian brother 🤣
Raj is a touchy topic lol 😆
Swaron Bol jhok was cute
N awe angel didnt like vihaan ignoring her :(
Liked the short convo of angel with adi dadda mamu n YaSh
Bad guy nooo :'(
Please don't let them b harsh on angel :(
Loved taarey romance and Bhai scene was hilarious 🤣
Reminded me of someone ;) :p
Angel remembering was cute
N cutest was when vihaan lies and gives angel hi plate
Awe they share the food cool
Loved the entire update
Sowwy if missed to mention any part cause it was like I loved it all :(
So in short muah awesome update SS 👏
Now update faster ok ;)
Love u SS 🤗
Edited by --Ta_Sha-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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anazing update...

i thought yash ke thoughts dusturb karne wali koi ladki hogi...

love the convo btw tarrey adi nd naina
Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update dear...
do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome chapter itna wait karne ke baad aisa chapter milega toh i wait for long time.love angel so much she is damm lucky.love talks between taarey adi n naina

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