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Posted: 10 years ago

Undercurrent of Faith

 

Are you a killer??

Don't get wrathful

Every moment of everyday we kill-

Our self-respect,creative power & compassion.

 

We nurture too something...

That is...our pseudo-truth,disloyalty & musk of friendship...

We're dying everyday--

Dying every moment of life as a human being

& living as a creature that has more destructive power than good ones.

 

Can you kill your mother??

 

If yes, then at first kill the God in you

If no,then take an oath to protect her from every trouble.

 

Can you kill your sister??

 

If yes,at first kill your brotherly heart

If you are confused, you're a mobile corpse!

If no,embrace your sister just like a father.

 

Can you kill your friend??

 

If yes,then at first destroy the Faith & Love

If no...See,the yellow rose is waiting.

 

Can you kill your lover??

Don't your stings of heart air a loud protest??

 

How can you kill your wife??

At first,please sever your heart & sinews from yourself.

 

A zygote, sign of true love 

Breathing silently through the new mother,

Gaining inheritance of the new father...

...your unborn daughter...

 

If you kill it,you will kill-

You will kill all the relations made by God.

Don't forget that you,the father has given the embryo X chromosome instead of Y.

So that it's going to be A BABY-GIRL...

Mother has no contribution in case of gender-determination of the embryo.

 

If you lull it,you will gain...

A bond of fatherhood-affectionate & caring.

A new friend-UNDEFINED.

A faithful bridge-between your older rose & you.

A healing medicine-to cure all pains & sufferings.

An awesome blithe-that can bring back you to your life. 

 

 ...decision lies in your hand...

Edited by surprising - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Killing of female embryo is one of the most serious & anxious problem of today,no doubt. This mentality is voraciously engulfing our good sense...the poem is just a little try to make people aware regarding this fact...it has become too much longer...please excuse me for this.
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Posted: 10 years ago
its beautiful with a beautiful message!! 
loved it!! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
that seriously was one intense poem
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hatts of to u

U describe very well done way

Claps 4 u 👏

Thanx 4 pm me

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Posted: 10 years ago
really touching very beautiful..

i know this has become a hard issue.. just because its girl, the life is taken.. and ppl often forget its the same girl who bears the child in her womb! 🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its outstanding...
mon chuye gelo...osadharon...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
very beautiful nd thought provoking..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heart touching poem dr.
Hats off to u dr!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Khooob Shundor !! I Loved It To The Core !!!!!