Waiting For You #2 - ArHi FF - Thread 3 link in Page 147 - Page 45

Originally posted by: munam_13

hI!!!

I stumbled upon ur story and read all 21 parts in a stretch. This is a wonderful story I must say. What attracted me the most was the magic of the different relations be it brother-sisters by blood or only by heart, the friends, the mother daugther and the children.. the essence of the story lies in the simplicity of the relationship you show.. The struggle which you potrayed of Arnav and Khushi individually kept me at the edge of chair. I literally felt the pain they were succumbed to.. I hope they would see brighter days in the future days...


Update soon
Love
Priyo

thank u so much for reading my story...
hope u enjoy the rest of the story too...

Originally posted by: ayaanshi

well, that was like OMG effing awesome update...i am out of words... the way the story is coming up is marvelous... each n every moment of the two chapters is amazing... i wish ipkknd 2 to somewhat inspire from this... i would really wish to see this on television... gosh, i dunno what to write next as i am spell bound...

till today, i used to admire arnav... i still do n will be doing this for the rest of mah life but i guess the list will add KHUSHI n AMAN also... what a gr8 personalities they are... one's a gr8 woman, mother n ia m proud of her n the other is the best friend along with brother one could ever EVER get... really loved the update

well as for now

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thanks a lot for ur comment, li'l sis...
i am very happy that u feel that way...

Originally posted by: kushigowda

yes yes yes...
i had guessed it right from the beginning😊
great

thanks for ur comment...
and congrats on ur guesses...😛

Originally posted by: MaRyLoVeArShI

First of all a big SORRY for the very late coment
Was busy

I read all the chapters
They were just amazing
This is my favorite ff of yours :)
But there was a thing i couldnt understand :
When arnav learns khushis age , why did he reacted the way he did ?
Can you explain this to me plz

Happy to know that vaishu isnt khushis real daughter
So that means she wasnt pregnant at a young age
But sad for vaishu coz' her own parents didnt wanted her ... :(
i love aman-arnav and aman-khushi bonding

Now waiting to see when khushi will understand that she loves arnav
Continue soon
Once again sorry for late coment
Will try to be more regular in the future
Thnx for pm <3

thanks for ur comment...
no probs if u are late...
arnav got angry when he learnt about khushi's age becoz he thought she was irresponsible and got into a relationship with suresh when she was fifteen...

Originally posted by: Alai123

Awesome chapter of 20 & 21
So Khushi is not the real mother of Vaishu but it is very great of her to take such a huge responsibility of taking care of vaishu.
Poor vaishu have heart problems :( hope she will get well soon...
Arnav is surely regretting what he told to Khushi...
At last suresh is out of the chapter :D
So is the next chapter going to be full of Arshi convo???
Hope they both will talk and clear everything...
Thanks for the pm 😉

thanks for ur comment..
the last half of the next chapter wil have arnav and khushi convo...

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR

Even though this post was supposed to be present on a post reserved for me by J...yet i m posting it here..for J is currently travelling...when she'll be bk..i'll make sure it reaches its rgt place.

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I liked the "watch buddy...what u hv done to urself" attitude of Aman for Arnav. Its so good tht Aman understands and cares for Arnav so well...and tomake him see sense even when he's fuming.

And then offcourse...it was good to see Aman remain firm on his promise and not judge Khushi from what he hears...I liked the way u made him standup for Khushi..without having him flinch tht he was standing up against something Arnav said. Also..tht he kept the truth of Khushi's childhood from telling Arnav..despite him asking for it repeatedly. A typical protective brother.

Poor Vaishu...got tht heart disease...😲😲 it scared me. At first it confused me...when u mentioned tht Khushi knew it all abt tht heart disease...all the while i was wondring ...how? but offcourse later part explained it all. Khushi is such a talented person..handling a job, and full time course besides being a full time mother...woah! averyhard-working person she is. And its evenn more surprising tht she topped the college with a record-breaking score...superb yaar!

Arnav's reaction well-explained on learning about khushi being the student with highest marks.

I would simply say...i loved to the core...the whole scene where Arnav comes to assume Khushi consumed alcohol during pregnancy. U got me convinced too. I was trying to come up for reasons what mst hv got khushi into drinking. Clever style of writing! 😉

Arnav..well quite confident he was in his college days..typical him! 😆😆

It was good to see a little seen of Anjali-shyam-Arnav being interjected...it had been a while since u last talked of them.

The Whole truth about Khushi-Suresh-Vaishu-Nithya shocked me yet agn...! Pehle i was hell-bent on believing tht Vaishu was Khushi's adopted daughter...later u convinced me atleast...tht Vaishu was her daughter and now i get to hear agn...she is not her own daughter...😲😲😲 I m telling u...u r dangerous being...how easily u convince us to believe...the way u want to. Huh! *faking anger*😆😆 On contrary, Seriiously...i believe tht is a really big achievment any writer could achieve to make her/his readers think exactly the way u they want us to. And I have proofs now...u master tht! REALLY well done at tht! keep up!

finally..Arnav as well gets to know whole truth about Khushi. Phew! Poor Khushi..a sad life she had been through.

It was amazing to see the way Khushi stood up for Vaishu against Nithya-Suresh...determined to not let them even hover around Vaishu anymore.

ITs good to see all things being cleared now.

thanx for extra-long update. ! Love u!

hey captain...
long comment for my long update...loved reading it...
especially I m telling u...u r dangerous being...i laughed a lot when i read that...

Scroll down for part 22 😉



I think I was a bit fast this time... 😆