virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 73

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Posted: 12 years ago
i think at last kabir is a little bit better than maya😊
this piyali is just too cute...
they are perfect and their creation 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay you updated again, but I will miss this FF when you end it. 😔. I loved the update, Piyali and Virat were so cute. This trip sounds interesting, hope Maya and Karan are exposed soon. Also, I have exams comming, and I will try my best to comment on your FF's but if I am not able to, could you please continue PM me? I promise I will comment on my missed updates when I get a chance if I miss them 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update..!! Love besharam Maanvi n Naughty Virat with their natkhat beti..Superb Combination..:) Waiting fr the trip..:) !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorryyy naina 4 again late so i should not waste tym now
Part 21 : Awsum update as usual⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ so finally virat told maanvi about maya dat she was d same grl who broke his heart n he told maanvi about his fear dat maya n kabir r here on purpose 2 separate dem as he knows dat kabir has feelings 4 his wife 4 which maanvi got angry with him dat how can he misunderstood her frnd n she knows kabir 4rm childhood so how can she misunderstood him but virat got angry n question her luv 4 him i thought dat maya was suceed without doing anything yet but u saved it n dere fight expressed how much dey luv eachother hope virat will show maanvi d true colors of kabir n maya .
Part 22 : Such a cute update i luved d bond btw virman n piyali she is really adorable n naughty so mission starts 2 get rid of dat witch maya 😡😡😡😡😡😡 , liked maanvi very much when she shut maya mouth n not let her say anything against her hubi , kabir is not a bad guy its only maya who is lying 2 him dat her mani is not happy with virat n just compromising with her life hopes kabir leave maya soon n not do anything which spoil his frndship relation with maanvi now eagerly waiting 4 d next update n soorrry again 4 late
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!! Such an awesome update!!
Loved Piyali and Virat parts!!😆
I hate Maya and Kabir!!😡
Loved the Virman moments!!😳
Continue soon!!
x Avika x
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 23

on the way
virat was driving while manvi beside him with piyali in her lap and maya n kabir seated at the back.
manvi : virat where are we going...???
virat : cant you just shut up manvi...
manvi : virat please...
virat : what please...
manvi : please dont start again... i am sorry... but please dont do this in front of others especailly piya... (whispering it to virat but it was audible to both kabir and maya)
virat : then its better you dont talk to me...
manvi looked down and tears started forming in her eyes which infuriated piyali while maya and kabir were enjoying this... because they always wanted this and today it was happening without any effort from their side.
piyali : manvi mumma... dont cry... vilat kyun daant rahe ho manvi ko...???
virat : piya i dont want a word from you... do u hear that...???
piyali hugged manvi and said " he said doesnt love me any longer... he only loves that small baby..."
kabir : virat yaar.. its okk... control dude... mani didnt say anything that is wrong...
virat : listen you... you have really no right to talk in between me n my wife... its about my manvi not your
mani...
maya : yeah kabir i think virat is right... we shouldnt say a word... its between manvi n virat and who are we to interfere in between...
kabir : cmon maya... cant u see how much hurt mani is...??? and virat... how can you talk to her like that...???
virat : i can do whatever i wish like... u know why... because manvi is my legally wedded wife and i have all the rights on her...
maya : kabir please... cant u just-
kabir : shut up maya... just shup up... i never thought you just want to own my mani... and how can u behave with your wife n kid like that virat...???
manvi : please stop it kabir...
kabir : mani...??? how can u live with such a man...?? he treats u like a commodity and i have seen it with my own eyes right now...
manvi : please... i beg you kabir... please stop it...
virat : listen to her... its better than arguing with me...
kabir ; but -
virat : maya...??
maya : yeah... yes virat... (all desperate)
virat : can u please just ask your boyfriend to calm down... he is being protective about somebody's wife... its not a good sign...
maya : i understand... dont worry...
maya turned to kabir and held his hand...
maya : please calm down kabir... everything would be fine... trust me (she winked at kabir which didnt went unnoticed by virman who were trying hard to control their laughter)
manvi nudged piyali to start her part of the act.
piyali : mumma... are we going back...???
manvi looked at virat as if pleading him to answer the question.
virat : no... we are not... dont u wanna go out n enjoy piya...???
piyali : but u dont love me anymore...
virat : i love u baby... dad just lost his calm... i love u piyali...
piyali : nooo... i know u love this small baby more... (pointing at manvi's stomach)
manvi : shh... no more talking about the small baby...
virat : manvi u should teach your daughter to control her tongue...
manvi : virat please... i never told u bring us on a holiday... n piyali is not only my daughter... she is your blood virat...
virat said nothing and switched on the stereo at a high volume making maya n kabir wonder what has worsen their relationship... or was it like this only from before... do they just act as a happily married couple in front of the family...

at the resort
kabir was hell upset and now he only wanted one thing - manvi's happiness and he would go to any extent for making manvi happty.
virat : here is your room keys kabir... i am sorry for the outburst dude...
kabir : thanks... (saying this kabir went towards his room)
virat : manvi... go to the room... i just want to be alone for something...
manvi : virat but-
virat : i said go...
manvi went away with piyali...
virat looked at maya who was the only audience left for whom he did that drama...
virat moved to the cafe and sat there while maya followed him...
virat was sitting there sipping his coffe when maya joined him.
maya : may i...??
virat : sure...
maya : are u alright...??
virat : do i look like one...
maya : i know... but can i ask you whats wrong between u n manvi...??
virat : let it be maya... u tell hows your life...??
maya : mine is also not less complicated virat... (putting her hand over his)
virat : matlab...???
maya : kabir... he could never get over manvi... i think... (this particular statement meant virat burn in jealously... though it was all a drama from him n manvi but listening to kabir n his soft corner for manvi made virat uncomfortable)
virat : tum kehna kya chahti ho...???
maya ; dont take me wrong... but dont u think manvi and kabir... i mean...
virat : will u get it straight...???
maya : mujhe lagta hai hum do pyaar karne waalo ke beech aa gaye... ek aisi dosti ke beech aa gaye jo pyaar mein badal sakti thi...
now this was the last thing virat ever thought of listening... this was the end of his patience...
virat : just just up...
maya : you cannot ignore this fact virat...
virat : main manvi se pyaar karta hoon... ye hai fact...
maya : listen...
virat said nothing, got up and made his way to his room... but one thing was not ready to leave his mind. maya's words ringing in his hea again n again...


"mujhe lagta hai hum do pyaar karne waalo ke beech aa gaye... ek aisi dosti ke beech aa gaye jo pyaar mein badal sakti thi... "

"mujhe lagta hai hum do pyaar karne waalo ke beech aa gaye... ek aisi dosti ke beech aa gaye jo pyaar mein badal sakti thi... "

"mujhe lagta hai hum do pyaar karne waalo ke beech aa gaye... ek aisi dosti ke beech aa gaye jo pyaar mein badal sakti thi... "

Next part will be soon~~~~

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Main first!!🥳
Res!!
Unres!!
Wow!! Awesome chapter!!
Luved the Virman fight!!🤣And their plan!!🤣
Kabir seems ok but reallly hate Maya!!😡
Continue soon!!
x Avika x
Edited by Avika318 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow u updtated am very happy...your update was cute...
virat maya convo was the highlight ...waiting to read more...
do update soon dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...I liked d update...especially piyali...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Naina!! 👍🏼 Virman aur Piyali teeno hi pakke dramebaaz hai!! 😆 Loved their plan.. Piyali is so cute 😛.. Kabir doesn't seem to be a bad guy.. He really cares about Manvi and her happiness but Maya chudail is so so annoying 😵.. She is trying to create misunderstanding between Virman 😡.. Virat's reaction on listening to her words about Manvi-Kabir friendship is unexpected.. Hope he won't fight with Manvi for this.. Warna drama karte karte sach mein dono ka jhagda ho jayega 🤔.. Excited for the next part.. Will be waiting for it.. Take care 😊

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