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Posted: 12 years ago
nice preview pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

lagta hai doni apna gussa dikhane k competition mein 'Kaun Jeetega' crown ke liye lad rahe hai..😛😆

ab dono itne ziddi jo hai..hum kya karein inka 😛😛(inke yahi nakhre to bade acche lagte hai 😳😃)
waiting for the update.

ek secret batau. crown Ram hi jeetne wala hai.
this time also update is not happy wala😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

ek secret batau. crown Ram hi jeetne wala hai.
this time also update is not happy wala😕


uhuhuhu😭 aise kyun karte hooo
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

ek secret batau. crown Ram hi jeetne wala hai.
this time also update is not happy wala😕

per kyu ? last update me v apne hume rulaya, pls thora happy wala de do na yaar pls
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

ek secret batau. crown Ram hi jeetne wala hai.
this time also update is not happy wala😕


I don't care who wins -waise mai ek secret bata du ladkiyoan ka na wo khud jeete ya phir uske husband jeete , jeet to ladki hi hoti hai😛😛😛

yahi baat hui na...mujhe happy aur sad ka firk nahi padhne wala hai jab tak wo ek dusre ko samjh nahi paate aur uska ehsaas nahi hota hai to kisi bhi gam aur khushi ka kya matlab haan..
zaroori nahi har baar happy wala hi smile la de chehre pe, infact sometimes MU bhi bahut kuch sikha dete hai aur uss pal ka value karne ka ehsaas de jaate hai..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dsudipa

per kyu ? last update me v apne hume rulaya, pls thora happy wala de do na yaar pls

arre problem Ram ne khadi ki hai toh usko teek karne mein time toh lage ga na.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3


I don't care who wins -waise mai ek secret bata du ladkiyoan ka na wo khud jeete ya phir uske husband jeete , jeet to ladki hi hoti hai😛😛😛

yahi baat hui na...mujhe happy aur sad ka firk nahi padhne wala hai jab tak wo ek dusre ko samjh nahi paate aur uska ehsaas nahi hota hai to kisi bhi gam aur khushi ka kya matlab haan..
zaroori nahi har baar happy wala hi smile la de chehre pe, infact sometimes MU bhi bahut kuch sikha dete hai aur uss pal ka value karne ka ehsaas de jaate hai..

aap bahut deeply sochte ho aur correct bhi. mein khud soch mein pad jaati hoon ki muje aage likna chahiye ya bhi nahi. itna acha comt karti ho toh aap kuch likne ka try kyun nahi karte. Tongue
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Originally posted by: sandhyasn

aap bahut deeply sochte ho aur correct bhi. mein khud soch mein pad jaati hoon ki muje aage likna chahiye ya bhi nahi. itna acha comt karti ho toh aap kuch likne ka try kyun nahi karte. 😛

Arre mera dimaag bahut kam sochta hai yaar..aur ek secret batadu mujhe stories padh ne ka bahut shuak hai sirf padhne ka..likhne mein to sirf bada/big zero hoon.😊

To aap apna likhna continue kijiye aur main apna commenting jaari rakhoongi..
thx agar aap ko mere comments acche lagte hai to..mai koshish karoongi accha comment karne ki..
ok i m done
Boss danda leke mere peeche padhe hai kuch pendign kaam hai nipataake aavu.

Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago
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thanks for all comments😃update coming in a minutes
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This part I am dedicated to all those who commented in my previous update and hit the like button😊
I really don't know whether I have given justice to Ram's tears or not. Please let me know by ur comments.
Here comes the update

PART-29

Scene 84
Priya met doctor

Shipra and priya reached hospital. Doctor took her for sonography.

Dr.:- Priya tumhe yeh kab notice kiya.

Priya:- aaj subah''

When done Dr and Priya came back. Shipra is worried.

Shipra:- gabrane wali koi baat toh nahi hai na doctor

Dr.:- Nahi'bahut rare cases mein yeh hota hai. baby is fine. Par Priya ko abb bahut jyada care lene ki zaroorat hai. I prefer full bed rest. After 3 months she can do her normal work. Lekin abhi ke liye no work and no stress.

Priya continue with your folic acid. Next meet next month. Next sonography when u complete 3 months.

Priya and Shipra left''

Priya apni maa ke saat Sharma house aati hai.

Shipra:- Priya''sab teek toh hai na

Priya:- kya maa'.aap eise kyun pooch rahi hai..

Shipra:- nahi Ram ko inn sab ke baare mein pata hai na. tum itni subah doctor se milne aayi'.Ram tumhare saat nahi aaya'.sab teek toh hai na

Priya looks down and avoiding eye contact.

Priya:- haan maa sab teek hai. Ram kal kaam ki wajah se late aaye'.subah dekha toh woh gehri neend mein so rahe the. Toh laga aapko saat lete chalu'.waise bhi unhe pata chalta toh darr jaate'.

Shipra:- achha tu aaram kar. Ram ko phone karke bata de ki tu yahan hai'.aur tu aaj office nahi aa rahi

Priya:- nahi maa'.mein office ke liye nikal rahi hoon'

Shipra:- Priya tum office nahi jaa rahi ho. Pata hai na Doctor ne kya kaha. Tumhe aaram ki zaroorat hai. aur waise bhi tu nahi bhi jaayegi toh kuch nahi hoga. Ram sambhal lega'.

Priya:- nahi maa'ghar baite bor ho jati hoon. isse achha hai ki mein office jau'.

Shipra:- mein tumhe kahi nahi jaane dungi'aur tuje batane mein problem ho rahi hai toh mein bata deti hoon Ram ko'

But priya not agree. At last she convinced her mother.

Shipra:- aaj kal ke bachhe kuch bhi nahi sunte'.kuch samjane jao toh hame hi suna dete hai'abb Ram hi bachhaye'.

On the other side in KM

Ram stirred from his sleep. He looks to his side and found Priya is not there. He checks in his bathroom. He calls his name and came out from his room. He searched everywhere. But Priya is nowhere found. Then he called bansi kaka.

Ram:- BK Priya madam kahan hai

BK:- Priya madam toh aaj subah subah chali gayi

Ram:- chali gayi??????kahan gayi, aapne poocha nahi

BK:- nahi'.madam ne kuch kaha nahi'.bola ki mein jaa rahi hoon. saab uthe toh chai aur nashta de dena'''.. Saab????

Ram:- kya hua

BK:- Madam thodi gabrayi hui thi'kafi jaldi mein thi'.

Ram:- achha tum jao aur kamre mein chai bejo'..

Ram then called his driver and asked about Priya.

Driver:- saab, madam auto pakadkar chali gayi. Mein unse kaha bhi mein chod deta hoon lekin madam suni nahi'..

Ram then, called her but; as usual her phone is switched off.

Now, Ram instead of worry gets angrier on Priya's behavior.

Ram to himself " Priya '.shaadi ke baad aaj pehli baar eise hua hai ki subah uthe waqt tum mere saat nahi ho. Muje batana bhi zaroori nahi samja. Aane do office mein"

Ram left to office.

Scene- 85

Ram and priya in office

When Ram entered, he overhears the talk of his two employees.

1st employee:- yeh toh hona hi tha. agar bade logo ke saat shaadi karegi toh anjaam bhi eisa hi hoga. Bade log sirf apne matlab ke liye shaadi karte hai, matlab khatam toh chod diya. Yeh log sach mein pyaar thodi karte hai

2nd employee:- sach mein jab Priya ne Rajat ko chod Ram se shaadi kar li, muje toh tabb hi samaj aa gaya tha, zaroor koi gadbad hai. agar aaj woh rajat se shaadi karti toh aaj woh kush rehti.

1st employee:- apni Priya madam paisa dekhar shaadi kari. Abb dekho'.

2nd employee:- kya faida shaadi ke baad boss ki biwi hone par bhi aaj bhi hamare saat baithi hai. unke life mein koi changes nahi aayi..

Both started laughing giving a hi-fi.

Ram who is standing outside hears all this. He fumes in anger. He entered in a full rage.

Ram:- Mr. Singh'agar kaam se mann bhar gaya hai toh aap jaa sakte hai. Corridor mein kade hokar bakwaas karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. This is first and last warning for both of you.

Ram in his cabin. He is desperately waiting for Priya. As usual today also she is late. When

Priya entered, Ram send peon and told him to send Priya inside.

Priya entered into his cabin. Ram saw Priya and forgets his anger.

Priya:- sorry woh thoda late ho gaya'mein sham ko makeup kar lungi.

Now, Ram is more irritated.

Ram:- subah kahan gayi thi

Priya:- muje thoda kaam tha'

Ram:- itni subah subah !!!kya kaam tha'.

Priya said nothing'..and looks down

Ram pissed off from her behavior. He gets up from his seat and holds her with shoulder tightly and repeats the same "Priya kahan gayi thi"

Priya tries to move but, Ram holds her very tightly.

Priya:- Ram you are hurting me..

Ram:- Priya'kahan gayi thi'

Priya:- woh mein'doc'..doctor ke paas gayi thi'

Ram:- (controlling his anger) Doctor ke paas!!!!!! Priyaaa''agar tumhe kahi jana tha toh muje batakar nahi jaa sakti thi. Priya'.office mein hum employer-employee hai lekin ghar par hum ek rishtey se bandhey hue hai'.tum kahi bhi jao, kuch bhi karo, tumhe muje batana chahiye.

Priya:- Oh really Ram'..jab aap raat raat bhar bahar rehte hai, aapko itna bhi yaad nahi rehta ki aapki shaadi ho chuki hai, aapki biwi aapka intezaar kar rahi hai. tabb kahan gaya rishtey nibhane ki baat.

Ram leaves her. Ram ke paas Priya ke sawaloo ka jawab nahi tha.

Priya turns to go, when she feels uneasy. She tries to hold the door handle but she falls, Ram saw her and holds her in time. Priya becomes unconscious.

Ram carries her and laid her properly in the couch. He calls her name, tap slowly on her cheeks, but she is not responding. He calls Vikram and vikram entered. Ram sprinkles some water on her face, slowly she responds. Her face becomes dull. She feels vomiting. She gets up and runs towards washroom. Ram helps her.

Ram gives some water to drink. He called doctor, but Priya stops and said that she is fine.

Vikram:- abb kaisa lag raha hai Priya

Priya:- Vikram please muje mummy ke ghar chod do. Mein yahan apna tamasha nahi banana chahti.

Ram understands that she is taunting him.

Vikram:- ok fine'.both Vikram and Priya leaves'''''.

Scene- 86

Ram express his feeling

In the evening,

Around 7o'clock

Ram reaches home. He entered and saw Priya is not at home.

Ram thinks "Priya maa ke ghar se abhi tak nahi aayi

He calls Priya but she is not picking up the call. Ram then, called her landline.

Shipra attended. She said everything about morning doctor checkup and said in the afternoon also she is not well and now she is taking rest in her room.

Ram hangs up the call. Ram instead of going out, decided to take drinks at home. When he is fully drunk, Bansi Kaka stops him to take further drinks and takes him to his bedroom.

Ram takes the photo of Priya and starts talking with her.

"aaj tum pehli baar mere saat nahi ho. Tumhe bhi meri fikr nahi. Tumhe kya lagta hai Priya mein yeh bachha nahi chahta. bilkul chahta hoon'.mein iss bachhe se bahut bahut pyaar karta hoon. lekin muje darr hai Priya ki mein iski parvarish teek se nahi kar paaunga. Issliye tumse waqt maanga tha. tum jaanti ho jab Sid ek saal ka tha, tabb se meine usse bada kiya. Usse har woh khushiyaan di, uski har zidd poori ki. Meine usse apne bachhe ki tarah pala aur usne kya kiya. Mein usse yeh tak nahi sikha paaya ki Priya uski bhabhi hai, maa samaan hai,aur woh apne hi bhabhi par buri nazar se dhekta hai.

Tumhe kya lagta hai Priya tum muje kuch nahi batati toh muje kuch pata nahi chalta. Pehle din se hi mein jaan gaya tha ki sid tumpar galat nazar se dhekta hai. kya karta mein, kisse kehta mein ki tumhe maa, behen biwi mein farak karna nahi aata, usse parvarish toh meine di thi na. woh jo bhi karta,muje tez pahucta tha. issliye tumhare batane ke baad bhi usse mein koi saza nahi de paya. Usse apni nazro se door kar diya.

Priya muje apne parvarish par vishwas utt gaya tha. muje laga mein ek achha baap nahi bann paaunga. Issliye jab tumhari pregnancy ki baat suni tabb mein darr gaya aur tumhe bachha abort karne ke liye hospital lekar gaya. Mein darr gaya tha. bahut bahut darr gaya tha. lekin abb nahi Priya'muje pata hai ki tum hamare bachhe ka achhe tarike se khayal rakkogi, hamare bachhe ko ek achhi parvarish dogi, aur agar mein kuch galat kar raha hoon toh tum muje rokogi'.

Yeh Ram sirf tumhare liye possessive rehta hai. usse pata hai agar koi hai jo uska apna hai toh sirf tum ho Priya. Sirf tum.

I love you priya'.love you very very much and holds her photo near his chest and slept''''.

On the other side,

Priya is standing in front of window. Cool breeze hits her face and she lost in the thought of Ram. She just remembers about her cute moments with Ram. Smile crept in her face. She is playing with her mangalsuthra, she is missing him badly.

Note:- I know ki jo preview diya tha woh abhi tak aaya nahi. issliye I will give next update either tomorrow or day after tomorrow.

Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago

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