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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
cute and lovely update
loved taarey's meet
do writing soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
i read all the chapters today.. n mst say ur ff is rely goin gud... update soon... wana kno more bout the reactions wen d truth cmz out of der real relations wid each othr..pm me plz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
wow...
tarrey walk..
their first hug n their kiss...
awesome..
plzzz update soon😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Sorry !!! itni late update karne k liye !!actually I was thinking what to add first taarey romance or sharey friendship , but now I have decided that these two chapters (this+ tom.'s chap) will end sharey mu n will bring taarey closer :). M vry sorry bcoz I promised hoter chaps in my bday month bt I need to end this first. The chap that I'll update on 24 july dat is my bday will be vry romantic !! now the update -
TUJHE SOCHTA HU
CHAP 5

IN LOS ANGELES
Swyam is walking behind Sharon in the whole house :
"Sharon,Sharon,Sharon,Sharon plsss try n understand .Trust me this will surely work !!"
Swayam shouted softly.
Sharon puts her hand up to make his mouth shut: " Swayam, plss I've already told u that I'm clear on my side. Mujhe Rey se koi problem nhi hai .Yes,I agree that b4 some months I used to hate him but you cleared my MU. If Rey is nt ready so don't force him, I can't tolerate me getting more hurt bcoz of anyone"
Swyam shuts his mouth; leaves from there , goes into a corner n calls Rey (Rey,Swayam)
Here in India with Rey- y do I love this moment ?? urgghh !! whatever abhi khush h na , so be happy . Lets think about this later.I'M SO HAPPY !! zzz mera phone?? Swayam ?? utha k dekhta hu .
(REY'S POV ENDS )
(PHONE CONVO )(Swayam,Rey)
hello
hello mere pyaare dost , itne achchi achi baatein karta h tu, aur bata kyu phone kiya, mere pyaare yaar (still lost in taareyworld)
"Oye kahan hai tu , come back to Earth!! Aaj se pehle toh kabhi mujhse aise baat nhi ki . Chakkar kya hai ??"
(comes back to world )" nhi woh kuch nhi, aur bata kaisa h ?? kyu phone kiya??"
"woh.. woh.. haan!! yaar Rey since I have shifted to L.A , u have nt come to my house . Everytime I come to India . PLSS PLS PLS PLS is baar aaja na yaar mujhe tujhse milna hai!!"
"yaar Swayam you know na that .. (Swayam cuts him)"
"bas I don't know anything, you have to come !!"
"Swayam, try to understand, no "
"Tujhe humari dosti ki kasam !!"
"OH GOD !! achcha theek hai , I'll come !!"
"Now thats like my friend , I'm booking tomorrow's tickets fr u , K??
"K , BYE "
Both hang up.

INDIA > Rey
Rey didn't want to leave Taani but he had to bcoz Swayam has given him swear of their friendship. He was in a galaxy of emotions & confusion, bt he had no option :( so he decided to tell Taani about this and he went to Taani's house fr giving this news.
TAANI'S POV
I'm sitting on my bed thinking about today's hug. I am blushing !! It was such a cute moment!! My beautiful thoughts r disturbed by the doorbell bt y do I have this feeling that its Rey ?? whatever !! let me open the door first I go n open the door .
My dress
(exclude the bow)
OMG !!! Its actually Rey!! (taani, Rey)
hi
hi
woh sorry itni late woh..
its ok , kuch kaam tha?? come in !!
no no its ok . Mujhe woh tumhe kuch batana hai
haan bolo
Taani u know that there is no woork left fr us to do in the project ??
(I don't know what he is trying to say, but I'll be normal) ya I know
So Taani, actually I have a friend who lives abroad n he has called me . I need to go .
I'm feeling bad n even he is -I can guess from his expression . But if he needs to go then I shouldn't stop him :(
k then bye
ya bye
He looks at me for a second and then just hugs me , I hug him back the same way . I guess even he is not liking his departure :( . We break the hug n he goes. I come in n zzz my phone vibrates I see the name 'bhai'
flashing. I pick it up.(Swayam , Taani)
Hey
Hi bhai, how r u
m missin u , yaha aaja na !!
Actuaaly this would be a good idea !! There is no work left n Ill be envolved there so my mind will also be diverted.
ok bhai I'm coming !!
kya baat hai itni jaldi maan gayi !! achcha leave that come soon:)
I'll come tom.
ok by.tc
by
I call Ruhi to book my tickets n she has booked them. Now I'll be back to L.A . Hmmm I'm gonna miss alll this :)
(TAANI'S POV ENDS)

NEXT MORNING
Rey gets ready n goes to the airport. Now after a long flight he has reached Los Angeles n he is standing in front of Swayam's mansion.

LOS ANGELES
Rey rings the bell n Swayam's open it n then the famous Reyam jigri yaar type hug !
Swayam : Rey !! kaisa hai !!

Rey: mai theek hu !! arey waah boht paise kama liye h !!

Swayam : sab aapki blessings ka fayda h mere guruji !! lol

Rey: haha arey yaar, I wanted to talk alot bt m very tired:(

Swayam : oh !! fine there is ur room , jaake thoda chill maar n fir 1 hr tak milte hai ??

Rey: thanx bro

Reyam have an urgent hug n Rey goes to his room to freshen up n have rest.

On the other hand,Taani has also reached L.A , her very own hometown. She is happy bt still missing something.
Taani's dress

She goes to her the mansion n rings the doorbell. Swayam opens it n as soon as he sees Taani , he hugs her tight . Taani is nt able to breath with that tight hug.
Taani: bhai !! leave me , I cant breath

Swayam : oh , I am so sorry !! itne dino baad mile na toh ..

Taani: hum 3 din pehle hi mile the :P

Swayam : haan toh ?? still its 3 days without u meri pyaari behna .

Taani: bhai plss

Swayam : ok fine !!

Taani hugs Swayam bcoz she didn't respond in their last hug. Same time , Rey comes out of his room n sees Swayam hugging a girl, he can easily guess that this girl is nt Sharon. (he can only see Taani's back).

Rey's pov
Who is the girl Swayam is hugging ?? I know that I don't agree with Swaron bt still Swayam cannot cheat any girl !! That girl is going to some random room, What ?? she will stay here ?? Swayam is going outside the house . I guess I should see who the girl is .
She is moving upstairs n I am behind her . She seems engrossed in thinking something. I pat her shoulders n startles, she is about to fall . Now I encircle my arms around perfect figured waist n Whatt ????? this girl is none other than Taani !!! She looks into my eyes n we both are engulfed in an eyelock bt wait y was Taani hugging Swayam ??? I make her stand properly.

I : what r u doing here ??

Taani : This is my house .

I : What ?? bt this is Swayam's house !! U live with Swayam??

I am fuming in anger, I mean she lives with my best friend in his house !!

Taani: ya !! He is my brother !!

Oh thank god Swayam n Taani r brother - sister

I: oh !!

Taani: what oh ?? y r u here ??

I : I am Swayam's best friend.

Suddenly I hear Swayam's voice

Swayam: Hey u guys know each other ??

Rey: yup !! we r business partners

I smile towards her n she blushes n smiles back towards me . Wait , I n Taani will stay in the same house !! yippie !!
We three have a small random conversation n then we go into our respective rooms.
Me n Taani had lunch together n I had a beautiful time. Now Taani n Swayam r in Swayam's room discussing something n suddenly the doorbell rings.
"Rey, plss look who is there ??"Swayam shouts .
I go n open the door.
She!! its her !!

____________________________________________________
Who is on the door ??
How will they both react ??
How will taarey react upon the whole mess ??
stay tuned !!

Scroll fr a important note !!


Edited by akshitaTaarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Guys I wanna ask something !!
See I'm a sensitive person bt I don't like really really emotional things . So I don't want Sharey part to be very very emotional .I'll keep it a bit emotional, friendly n sweet .
R u all Ok with it ??
Plss tell
N also U r liking the dresses im inserting??
Or should I stop inserting them ??
Plss tell
Luv u all
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
nice update...lovely...i think she is sharon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Awesome update
update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
resss/unress-

I lost my first place huuu pari ( dipu) 😡

me first nahi aayi but koi baat nahi me third toh aayi third Anna b koi easy task nahi h Chalo. Chalo Congrats me


btw coming to update its awesome loved it to the core


omg reyam convo was superb and funny the way rey greet swayam is so much funny I loved it


aww poor rey bechara swayam ne b usse swear dedi but USSe kya pata uska L.A Jana bhut beneficial h hume pata h but usse nahi pata na



taanis outfit was superb me love it


taarey convo


reyam and tayam meet so nice


and taarey meet in LA was so amazing


yup rey tumhe chance mil raha h taani k pass rehne ka but don't forget woh swayam ki sis h agar uska possrssive Bhai jag gya toh tume koi nahi baccha payega


precap seems int I know that girl would be sharon but very excited


update soon and pm me ...


this is small gift for you



Edited by --taareylove--- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
thnx 4 d pm... nyc update... taarey meet up in L.A. ws sweet..well as far as evry1 cn guess n so do i is dat the girl at door wud b sharon.. nyways thnx 4 updatin .. update soon.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --taareylove---

resss

I lost my first place huuu pari ( dipu) 😡


KOI BAAT NHI :) AB JALDI SE UNRES KARIYO 😆

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