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Before updating the next part I wanted to tell you something. So many readers asking me why u are showing Ram like this.

I like this track as there is little reality in it. I thought to show this through my FF, also some dialogues of Priya is also real. I just wanted to show how women's goes through.

You will see negative shade of Ram in my coming updates. I am really sorry for all Raya fans specially Ram's fans.

PART- 28

Raya bedroom

Ram entered in his bedroom. He saw Priya is sitting there. He came near to her and sits beside her. He touched her chin and moves her face towards him.

Ram:- kya hua'.tum kamre mein kya kar rahi ho. Tumhe toh neeche hona chahiye. Aaj toh double double khushiyaan hai, celebration toh banta hai. tumne abhi tak cake bhi nahi kata. Tum sahi keh rahi thi hame kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai sirf mein aur tum''rgt. Chalo'..

Ram clutches her hand and takes her to the hall. He lit the candle and asks her to blow

Priya saw rage in his face. First time she saw another face of Ram. She really scared. She blows up the candle. Ram sings a birthday song. She is shivering. Both cut the cake together.

Ram feeds Priya but when Priya did the same he stops her in between.

Ram:- bahut achhi lag rahi ho priya'lekin afsoos tum mere liye taiyaar nahi hui.

Saying this he goes back to his bedroom.

She feels bad and started crying. She wipes her tear and goes back to bedroom. She saw Ram is sleeping. She remove his boots, remove his coat, She also change and sleeps besides him.

Scene 83

Heating argument between Raya

In the morning,

Ram stirred from his sleep and get ready for office. Priya is sitting on the bed. She saw ram is coming from the changing room. She goes near to him

Priya:- mein aapke liye chai lekar aati hoon.

Ram:- nahi'koi zaroorat nahi hai'..mein kaka ko bol diya hai woh laate hi honge.

Priya is standing there only.

Ram:- kuch kehna chahti ho?????

Priya:- Ram''mein apne ghar jana chahti hoon'.

Ram:- kyun??????

Priya:- mein yeh baat aur nahi chupa sakti. Unhe bhi yeh jaanne ka haq banta hai'.aur mein Maa (Ram's mother) ko bhi batane wali hoon'.muje insab se chupane wali koi baat nazar nahi aati'.

Ram:- toh tumne faisla kar hi liya hai ki tum iss bachhe ko''.

Priya(cutting him in between):- haan'.aur Ram aap yeh sab kaise keh sakte hai apne bachhe ke baare mein'.. yeh hamara bachha hai'hamare pyar ki nishani'.aap isko abort karne ke baare mein soch bhi kaise sakte hai'.aapko ho kya gaya hai'..

Ram:- Muje kuch nahi hua hai ;tumhe jo sochna hai soch lo Priya'..but mein bachha nahi chahta'aur agar tum apne faisle ke hisaab se chalna chahti ho toh chalo'lekin mein tumhara saat nahi dunga'..aur yeh mera aakri faisla hai'..

Priya:- aur mera bhi yeh aakri faisla hai ki mein aapka saat nahi de sakti''.pata hai muje aaj kya lag raha hai'.aapne kabhi bhi muje pyar hi nahi kiya. aap sirf muje apne bed par''

Ram shouts and raise his hand (but stops in between)'.Priya moves her face aside'.Ram is really angry.

Ram:-(clutch her from her shoulder) mein kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki tum itna cheap bhi soch sakti ho'..how dare you Priya?????

He left her and goes from there.

Priya calls KK and said about her pregnancy.

She also calls her parents. Shipra is very happy and giving her instruction of do's or not do's list. Her happiness is no bound. She is giving this news to her relatives, friends and all society peoples.

Here Priya is upset. She decided to call Neha and said everything about Ram'.

Neha:- phone rakko Priya mein tumhare ghar par hi khadi hoon. tumhare kamre mein aa rahi hoon.

Neha enters and saw Priya is disturbed. She sits beside her.

Neha:- kya hua???? Tum dono ke beech mein koi problem hai kya???? Aur tum itni disturbed bhi lag rahi ho

Priya said everything to Neha and Neha is just shocked to hear all this.

Neha:- how disgusting!!!! Ram tumhe doctor ke paas'.. Ram eise insensitive kaise ho sakta hai. muje yeh samaj mein nahi aa raha ki Ram eise kaise soch sakta hai ki bachha uske liye ek burden hai. Ram hamesha mere bachho ko dekhkar kehta tha ki Neha tum inn sab ko kaise sambhalti ho, aur mein hamesha kehti thi ki jab tumhare apne bachhe honge toh sab seek jaaonge. But muje bilkul bhi andaaza nahi tha ki Ram itna serious tha.

muje hi yeh sunke itna bura lag raha hai toh mein samaj sakti hoon tumpe kya beet rahi hogi.

Priya is crying'..

Neha hugs her and wipes her tears.

Neha continue'.

Priya dekho rona nahi. Sab kuch teek ho jaayega'.hum hai na'.hum baat karenge'mein abhi Vikram se baat karti hoon. chalo abb tum jaldi se khaa lo'aur thoda aaram kar lo'..

Priya:- (Crying):- nahi neha mujse kuch nahi kaya jaayega'.

Neha:- dekho Priya'tum abhi Ram ki tension matt lo.. apne bachhe ke baare mein socho'.thoda khaa lo aur aaram karo

On the other side in the office,

Ram is angry and shouting at staff about their work for unnecessary reason. Vikram trying to speak but he is not listening.

He called saudamini and asked her about some work

Ram:- tum Krishna pharma ki file dekh rahi ho naa''uspar kaam poora ho gaya'..muje unka total invoice kitne ki hai dekhna hai'

Sau:- sir!!! Krishna pharma ki file Priya dekh rahi thi'.. mera matlab hai Priya Madam dekh rahi hai'Aur aaj madam aayi nahi hai.

Ram:- toh jao aur apni Priya madam ko phone karo aur bolo ki woh abhi yahan aaye aur apna kaam pura kare. Muje aaj sham tak report ready chahiye.

Sau:- Sir mein!!!!!

Ram:- saudamini tumhara hi name hai na. toh meine tumse hi bola hai. abb jao'

Saudamini left. vikram who is watching all this is shocked and asked:-

Vikram:- Ram yeh sab kya hai' tu khud Priya ko phone karke pooch. agar priya aayi nahi hai toh tu usse zabardasti kyun bula raha hai. usse koi kaam hoga'..tu kisi aur se bhi toh kaam karwa sakta hai na. aur kal tu uuse gift ke taur par company present karne wala tha na'.uska kya hua. aur jo tune kal kiya bilkul achha nahi kiya'.Priya kitni upset ho gayi thi'

Ram:- bass!!!!Priya ..Priya'Priya'. meine yeh kiya ,woh kiya..bass mein aur kuch nahi sunna chahta'.Priya ka kaam hai usse samaj mein aana chahiye ki kaam time par hona chahiye. Agar uuse leave lene ka itna hi shouk hai toh apna resignation de de. Aur rahi baat company gift karne ki toh usme abb hi kuch clause mein problem hai..

Vikram:- Ram'tu mujse jhoot mat bol. clauses mein koi problem nahi hai. Aur yeh tu kya bole jaa raha hai.

Ram:- mein uuse abhi gift karna nahi chahta. Bass mein iss baare mein aur kuch nahi sunna chahta.

Ram went outside and announces that in next two hours there will be an urgent meeting and everybody should ready with their presentation.

On the other side saudamini called priya. Priya is taking rest at that time as she is not feeling well. Priya pick up the call and saudamini said about the conversation between her and Ram.

Both hang up the call.

Priya getting ready for office when Neha came and asked:- kahan jaa rahi ho

Priya:- office jana hai'.Ram ne kuch kaam diya tha usse pura karna hai..

Neha:- What!!!to uuse bolo ki kisi aur ko de de' tum kahi nahi jaa rahi.. mein abhi Ram ko phone karti hoon

Priya:- rehne do na Neha. Waise mein abhi teek hoon. aur aaram karungi toh eisa lagega ki mein sach mein bimar hoon. isse achha hai ki mein office jau.

Neha:- teek hai lekin mein bhi tumhare saat chalti hoon'

Both reached office. Priya apne seat mein baithi hai toh sabhi uuse ajeeb tarike se dekhte hai. she avoids and engrossed in her work. Whereas Neha goes directly into Ram's cabin.

Neha:- Ram!!!! Yeh sab kya hai'. muje Priya ne sab kuch bataya. Ram!!!tum

Ram:- (cutting her in between) neha'muje iss baare mein kisi se koi baat nahi karni'muje abhi kaam hai tum jao aur apne pati ka sar kao.

Neha:- how mean!!!!!tumhe pata hai Priya ki tabiyar karab hai aur tumne usse office mein bulaya. Initial period mein kaafi mood swings hote hai, tabiyat karab rehti hai aur tum ho ki uuse support karne ke bajay usse kaam karwa rahe ho'

Ram:- Neha Priya ki tarah baaki ladies bhi hai jo eise waqt mein bhi kaam karte hai'woh sab toh chutti lekar ghar nahi baitthe hai'

Neha:- sahi hai Ram'.lekin baaki sab logo mein aur Priya mein farak hai' she is your wife. Ek baat batau Ram actually tumhe iss bachhe se problem nahi hai'actually tumhara EGO hurt hua hai. Tumhare mana karne par bhi Priya ne yeh kadam utaya. Tum hamesha yahi chahte ho ki sab tumhara kehna manne. Tum jaisa chahte ho waisa ho'.issliye Priya ke tabiyat karab hone par bhi uuse yahan bulaya hai'.lekin muje lagta hai ki Priya ne jo kiya bilkul sahi kiya hai.

Without waiting for an answer she left the cabin in fury. Ram throws his pen in anger. He saw Priya from window. She is doing her work and looking very calm.

He called peon and told him to give Priya a glass of water and also ordered two cup of tea and told him to give one to Priya.

Peon did the same as ordered. Priya takes the water but refused to take tea. Ram is watching all this from his cabin. Even Priya knows that Ram is looking at her.

After 2 hours,

Everybody is ready with presentation. Priya is also sitting along with her colleagues. Ram and Vikram are looking at presentation one by one. Here Priya is not feeling well and feels to puke. She left the hall and uses the wash room.

Ram with his expression said saudamini to attend her.

She is sitting in her seat and evades the meeting. She is completing her file.

Sau:- Priya kaisi ho'tumhari tabiyat teek hai na'

Priya:- thanks saudamini'mein abhi teek hoon. tum jao tumhara presentation hai na

Sau:- (Putting her one on Priya's shoulder) tumhare aur Ram sir ke beech sab teek hai na. Aaj Sir bahut gusse mein hai.

Priya:-koi baat nahi hai Saudamini.

Here ram also thinks not to disturb her.

In the evening,

Everybody is leaving. Priya is yet to complete her work. She is tied.

Vikram:- Priya sab staff jaa chuke hai. tum bhi abhi ghar jao. Baaki kaam kal kar lena. Ram ko mein sambhal lunga.

Priya:- nahi Vikram. This is my job aur waise bhi mera kaam ab bas khatam hi ho gaya.

Around 7'oclock,

She completes her work and entered into Ram's cabin.

She hands over the file and turns to go when Ram calls her.

Ram:- apna tamasha matt banao yahan parr. Agar tumhe waqui mein tabiyat teek nahi lagti hai toh sick leave le sakti ho. Meri biwi hone ka itna toh faida utha sakti ho.

Without saying anything she left from there. Vikram who is standing outside listen all this. He entered and said

Vikram:- aaj tune jo kiya achha nahi kiya Ram'. Muje pata nahi tum dono ke beech eisa kya hua hai aur tu muje bata bhi nahi raha hai'lekin jo bhi hua ho uska gussa iss tarah se nikalna'.mein chalta hoon Ram. Kal P.S ke post ke liye interview hai, yaad hai na. tune yeh post Priya ke liye khulwaya tha. tune toh abhi tak uuse company ke baare mein kuch bataya bhi nahi. Toh kya karu interview cancel karwa du.

Ram:- koi zaroorat nahi hai interview cancel karne ki. tumhe jaise teek lagta hai waisa karo. Kaam bad gaya hai, muje P.S. ki zaroorat hai.

In KM,

Priya came. She is tied and her head is paining. She finished her dinner and goes back to her room and slept.

Ram came very late. He saw Priya is sleeping. He changes and sleep besides her. He has his dinner outside.

In the morning,

Priya stirred from sleep. She feels some catemenial problem. She becomes scared. She changes. She booked an appointment for doctor.

Priya called her mother and headed towards the hospital.

Precap:- Priya starts living with her parents, she left the job. She got another job in different place. Ram forces her to live with him.

Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tumne first aane ka rasta band kiya but hum ne pakad liya😕
😕 ram is tooo much itna gussa... ab priya leave hre job lives with her parents😭 this story is going n unexpected way😭


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Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
am amazed that Ram is behaving like this to Priya, I can understand his emotion and his logic but as a human he should understand Priya's mental condition, anyways I really don't mind seeing Ram as a negative character coz I know he loves Priya from his bottom of heart just behaving irrationally now, continue ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx a ton for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one
waiting for next
continue soon

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