Here I am going to start.. Else will never get done..
Lovely self thoughts... Ashutosh is being pained at all that transpired ..the guilt gnawing at him..
Armaan the rock and pillar as usual..
Nidhi is infectious .. She is getting deeper under his skin.
Why do I get the feeling.. The banwarilal case is going to play a big role in Ashni relationship???
The conference was just a superb idea.. I felt it was the cherry so far on the cake..
Their ride to the hotel very well written..
The drunken scene , the eye scene nicely done .. I could visualize Ashu in them. That is been the highlight of your writing for me.. Me being able to play the scenes in my minds eye.
The game of chess ahaan . And the prize great.
And you have too been bitten by the bug called "the cliff hangers" haan???
I cannot play the song right now.. But as soon as I have access to a PC will write and comment on it.
Shirley you have done a great job my friend.. ⭐️
Edited by deepa17 - 12 years ago
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