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swarontaarey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Very good update...👏...keep writing...n thanx for the pm...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Awesome

Liza 's life in danger ohhh

Hospital Mai Kush to chot rha haiii

Sha ans Sam 's convo amazing

Masa so swttt and grt de

Thanx 4 pm me

I don't know why I am late 4 commenting

Sorry de 4 late cmmnt

Update soon

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pravallika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

loved it helna..
Sameer shaleen and masa were just so lovely..shaleen chamcha.. Spilling beans..
Hope arjun will find the girl..
Liza in danger.. Kya ho raha hai.. Thats interesting again..

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yas23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

awesome update
loved shree and liza scene
shaleen sam and mum conversation was amazing
so zaid and naina are at shaleen place
continue soon

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846182

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Awesome Update!

Well, there is nothing new to say..

Except I love to repeat those words I used last time.

Sam... I love this Sameer!

And Sam-Masa jodi is rocking!!

Shaleen and Masa also have a great bonding, but unlike Sam, Masa is more compassionate towards Shaleen

But ek baat mujhe Masa ki khardki... "Shaleen must find a girl for himself"😳

Too bad for him that i m not there, varna usse akele rehne nahi deti😆

Just kidding!

Shree's encouragement to Liza was good!

I hope our ARJUN solves this case too.

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Annu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

superb story

read in one go

split personality...different story line...

superb...

love the all parts...😊

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Moner_Radio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

kunchu :

OMG so much happening together ..liza's life is threatened but good that shree is with her, and what with this Minister Tripathi's case ? the police is already bribed .. else they wouldnt have given out info about shree and liza's statements to anyone else .. bdw, is the attack on liza somehow related with Tripathi's case 😲? i have a gut feeling that it is !

update soon.

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sashashyam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

A very neat filler chapter, my dear Kunchu.

There is Liza, facing a situation straight out of all the medical thrillers from Robin Cook's Coma downwards.This must not be uncommon anywhere, and the use of intimidation in order to avoid having to take more drastic action must also be common tactics. Liza is now screwing her courage to the sticking point, with apologies to Lady Macbeth, but it will be tough going as she panics easily, poor girl. This sort of investigation needs an iron nerve and a deadpan face that gives nothing away.

The Shaleen-Masa equation is a very touching one. She loves him more than she loves Sameer, simply because he is in one sense, with what he sees as a shrap haunting him., like a bird with a broken wing, and thus needs her more than the more emotionally robust Sameer. He is filled with self-loathing because of that terrible incident, and needs a lot of love and caring to heal him even partially. I hope he gets it soon, on a permanent basis.

As for the Zaid-Naina investigating team, they are feeling their way, and it remains to be seen where they get.Nowhere near the vigilante, one hopes. I am all for bumping off such lowlife the way he does it, it is the only way to deal with them.

Shyamala Aunty

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Edited by sashashyam - 13 years ago