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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely ss dear
read all the parts.
Feeling bad for maaneet. How could prem stoop so low
hope maan ko sach pata chal jaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor maan😭 want to hit prem hope maan know truth soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hw could geet marry prem... she should hv told maan abt d truth & should hv moved out of his life bt nw she is going to give him & herself a lifelong pain which cant be cured... wanna knw wat maan will do nw will he marry sameera...???
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Posted: 12 years ago
its a very diff stry...reali u cum up wit diff stories...waiting fr next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is good
geet and prem got married but due to this maan and his family is really shocked
maan is totally broken but geet is really hurt too
plz cont sooon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

After separation Part 5



Naintara was crying in her room.Dev became upset.
D:Naintara...don't cry..
NT:Sameera had called me.Maan devarji is very upset.
D:Naintara...I talked to Maan over the phone.He is feeling better.So don't cry.
He wiped her tears.
NT:Poor Maan devarji.How much pain he must be undergoing now...I can't understand why Geet cheated him.Dad used to tell that Geet was not apt for Maan devarji.It was true.That's why Geet cheated him.But since she is pregnant with Prem's baby dad could'nt oppose their wedding.
D:Yes.Otherwise we would not have allowed her to enter the Khurana Mansion.Characterless woman and Prem...he is so cheap.
He wiped her tears.
D:Anyways you don't cry Naintara.Be happy that Maan bro escaped from Geet.
NT:You are right.I feel happy about it.
D:Then my beautiful wife... you smile.
She smiled.Dev smiled:That's it.
Yash and Meera tried to comfort Maan.
Meera:After the UK stay Geet has changed a lot.UK changed her a lot.That's why she betrayed Maan.
Y:Maan...don't shed tears for the girl who cheated you.
Meera:Now onwards Geet is not our friend.
After a few weeks...
Naintara visited Maan.Maan was very upset.
Naintara became upset.
NT:Maan Devarji!
M:Naintara,don't worry.I am alright now.
Naintara tried to smile.Maan pretended to be happy.After spending some time there Naintara decided to leave.She whispered in Sameera's ears:Sam,come to the Heaven Restaurant.I want to discuss an important matter.
S:Ok.
Sameera came to the restaurant.
S:Bhabhi,what i sthe important matter you want to discuss?
NT:Is Maan really changing?
S:Yes bhabhi.Maan is recovering from despair.
NT:Good.It's because of your support.Otherwise he would not have been recovered.He needs your support through out his life Sam.
S:I will support him always.Through out my life I will be his best friend.
NT:Only as a friend?Can't you accept him as your life partner?
Sameera was shocked:Bhabhi!
NT:Don't you have feelings fo him?After all you both are living under the same roof.If you both live together through out Maan devarji and you will have a heavenly married life.
S:No bhabhi.Just because we live together we can't be lovers.We are only close friends.
NT:I am sorry.But still you can give him a piece of your heart.Right?
S:Sorry bhabhi.I have already given my heart to someone.
Naintara was shocked:What?
S:Yes.Maan will surely get his soul mate.Because he is that good.But that won't be me.
Naintara became dull.



Meera was crying in her room.Yash sees it.
YASH:Meera..why are you crying?
M:All are teasing me.They are asking me if my baby has a father.
He is hurt.
YASH:Don't be hurt.Let others say anything.
M:This is very serious.Our child will face humiliation in future.We should not let that happen.
YASH:What do you think we should do?
M:Shall we get married?
YASH:What?
M:That is need for our child.I don't want him to be insulted by others.
YASH:Ok.We will get married.
Laboni entered the room hearing it.
L:Good decision.I'm happy for you both.
They smiled.

Yash and Meera got married.

Geet entered with a gift.Seeing Geet everyone became dull.Geet suppressed her pain seeing Maan.
Maan left the place.Sameera ran after him:Maan!
M:Sam,you go back.I want to be alone for some time.You enjoy the party.
Maan went away.Sameera came back to the party.Geet gave a gift to Yash-Meera.Due to anger Meera threw it down.Geet was shocked.
Meera:Why did you come here Geet?Did we invite you for our wedding?
G:No.But you both are my best friends.So..
Yash:You are not our friend Geet.
Geet burst into tears:What did you say?

Yash:When you cheated Maan itself we broke our relationship with you.
Geet felt like crying.
Yash:Because of you Maan left the party.If you had'nt come here he would not have left so early.
Meera:Get lost Geet.
She looked at Sameera:Sam!
Sameera turned off her face.
Geet ran out crying.Sameera thought:Geet's tears look so innocent.It's hard to believe that she is a cheater.

Maan looked out through the windows.It was raining.His eyes became wet remembering the rain dance he had with Geet before.

Geet walked out feeling the rain.
G:Maan,when you were with me I used to find rain very beautiful.But now rain is painful.I hate this painful rain.

G:Why this is my fate?Why Maan was snatched from me?But it's only my fault.I believed Prem. Teri khataa hai mere jiyaa
Un pe bharosa kyuun tune kiya


Maan was crying looking at the rain.M:Why did you make false promises Geet? Sab jhoothe jhoothe vaade the unke
Chal peechhe peechhe aayaa tu jin ke
Wo piyaa aaye naa
Piyaa aaye na wo piyaa aaye naa

M:You broke my dreams Geet.Ab sab hi un khwaabon ki tu dagar chhod de
Ab sab hi un khwaabon ko tu khud hi tod de
Woh piya aaye na

Geet cried.Teri khataa hai mere jiyaa..
Maan...you think I cheated you.But I have not cheated you Maan.Your Geet can only love you.I know that you will believe me If the truth is out.But I don't want you to know the truth.It will break your heart.She cried loudly.



M:May be it's because of my fault that I lost you.

Har khataa kee hotee hai koi na koi sazaa
Gham likhe hon kismat mein to ban hee jaatee wajah
Ab sabhi gham ashqon mein simat se gaye
Ab sabhi aansoo palkon se lipat se gaye
Woh piya aaye na..

M:I thought the biggest truth of my life was our love.But it was just my illusion.
Sach lagaa thaa jo be-vajah hum ko
wo bharam ho gaya hai
Mod aane the jis fasaane mein
Wo khatam ho gayaa
Bhoole hum bhoole wo
Kaise sab se kahein baat ye..


Maan cried.M:I lost all my hopes Geet.
Ab chalo hum dheere dheere bihal se gaye
Ab chalo hum jaise bhi ho sambhal se gaye
Woh piya aaye na.. wo o.. piya aaye naa..

Geet cursed herself thinking of her intimate moment with Prem which caused the destruction of her relationship with Maan.She was completely broken down.


Teri khata hai mere jiya
Un pe bharosaa kyun tune kiyaa(
Aashiqui 2).

Sameera went near Maan:Maan,what are you doing in the rain?
M:Nothing Sam.Simply.

S:Maan...can I tell you something?
M:Ya.
S:You left your house as you were angry with your father for opposing your relationship with Geet.Now since Geet betrayed you,you understood that your father was right.Then why don't you go back to your house.They will be missing you a lot.
M:Sam,how can I go there?I won't be able to control myself seeing Geet and Prem together.
Sameera was reminded of that situation by Maan.
S:You are right.I had'nt thought of it.
But still you can meet your father.Right?
M:Right.I will meet him.
Sameera was happy.She caressed his face:That's my best friend.
He smiled.

Maan and Sameera went to the mall.Maan went to the changing room.Suddenly a handsome guy appeared before Sameera.
Sameera is surprised:Nihaal!What a pleasant surprise!
Nihaal:Good thing that you remember me.
SAMEERA:How can i forget you?All the girls were mad about you in the school.
He smiled.
Maan came back.
SAMEERA:Maan..look at him.
MAAN:Nihaal!
Nihaal:So you also remember me.I'm back from US.Because mom wants me to get married.
Maan:Did she find a girl for you?
Nihaal:No.Because I told her that I will find a girl for myself.
Sameera:Did you find a girl?
Nihaal:Yes.
SAMEERA:Wow!Who is that lucky girl?
Nihaal:I will tell you later whom I am in love with.But before that tell me.I heard that you both are living together.
SAMEERA:Yes.But don't misunderstand us.We are just friends.
Nihaal:Cool.
SAMEERA:Who is that girl?
Nihaal:Be patient.I will tell her name soon.But not today.We will meet later.
MAAN:Ok.







Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
gurti30 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful part dear
feeling bad for maaneet.
I thought sam loves maan but they are good friends
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional part
maaneet in pain😭
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is good
so maan is sad and his friend yash and meera cnat see him like this they decised to broke their friendhsip with geet
here geet too is crying
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
feeling bad for maaneet

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