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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys thanks for all the likes and comments.We really appreciate your support a lot.It is very encouraging to us.Here is the next chapter...😊



CHAPTER 4


Swayam was about to say something but they stopped when they heard a loud sound.

Who let the dogs out'.who let the dogs out'

All the guys immediately recognized the sound and started glaring at Vicky.It was vicky's so called favourite ring tone. "Vicky am gonna rip ur head off if u don't change the ring tone of urs!!!!"Swayam yelled. "Arre but its so nice yaar!!! Its my fav song.."replied Vicky.

"I know dude, it totally suits '"nilesh added.

"But nil'"

Who let the dogs out'

Swayam was again interrupted.. "Vicky go pick the call right now!!!"he shouted.Vicky ran from there to receive the call and returned after sometime.

Vicky, "guys, rey ka call tha.He's called us back."

Swayam, "ya lets go.."All of them nodded and started walking back.


"Hey rey'Wassup dude? All gud? Why did u call us back?"Swayam asked as all the guys went and surrounded rey.

Rey,"Ya dude everythings gud' Actually my sister has come from india. She's come here with her friend who is the planner for my wedding.So both of them will be leaving to kriya's place in a while for the arrangements.I wanted to introduce her to u guys as she doesn't know anyone here in california.So in case they need any help'"

"Hey rey'"he heard her shouting before he could finish.

"Hey here are my friends'.this is swayam,Vicky,nil,amar and bharat"Rey said "and guys this is my darling sis, simmi".All of them nodded and shook hands with simmi.

"Hey simmi, wer do u live in india?"asked nil starting off the convo and the other guys except swayam joined in and started chatting.Swayam on the other hand stood like a zombie in the same place,his face expressing many emotions together.He was amused,excited and more than anything happy.He had spotted her again.His angel.Involuntarily his foot moved towards her, his eyes glued on her.She was supervising at the arrangements and didn't notice him.Slowly he started reducing the distance between them.Lost in his dreamland he didn't notice a worker standing on the ladder placing the curtains and crashed with the ladder making the worker fall down and the curtains on Sharon.She was trapped inside the pile of curtains and was facing a hard time getting rid of it.He realized about the mess he had created and started helping Sharon to get out of the curtain.She was not looking at him but continuously cursing him for creating such a mess.She finally got out of the mess after about 5 minutes.She turned to look at the person who had done the honours of turning her perfect arrangements into a crap.He was standing right there but she couldn't look at his face he had trapped himself in the curtains in the process of getting her out.She just gave him a disgusted look and walked away.All the guys who had witnessed the scene that swayam had created came forward to help him.Once he was out all of them started laughing like maniacs.

"Whats so funny?",he asked disgusted.

Nil, "Swayam what is up with u?In the morning when u saw her u were looking like a sand sculpture and now u made a mummy out of urself!!!"

"Guys stop talking all nonsense and get back to wrk its rey's wedding tomorrow",he said irritated and walked away.

Next morning

There was a lot hustle bustle in Rey's room. Rey was getting ready and rest all boys were teasing him. Rey was excitedly pacing around the room.

"guys get ready fast we need to leave'we should reach there before Kriya guys...nd decoration bhi toh dekhna h'.nd agar last min koi change hua toh'..Jaldi karo guys plz'."

"Dude just chill'.itna zyada nervous kyun ho rha h tu toh bride ko bhi complex de rha aaj nervousness mein" said a calm Swayam

"Tu nhi samjhega abhi jab teri shaadi hogi tab dekhunga mein" Rey replied back to him

Hearing word marriage Swayam was again lost in the thought of his angel..How Beautiful nd innocent she is..

"Chalo guys'..now everyone is ready na" Rey's voice brought him back frm his trance'They all left for the venue'

On reaching the venue everyone was mesmerized by the decoration of the venue'Whole place was decorated in Pink and white giving a romantic feel to the place'.It was a beach wedding venue.

"Wow how beautifully Sharon has decorated this place'.I'm sure Kriya will like this a lot" exclaimed a excited rey'.

"Sharon" said a surprised Swayam..

"Yeah sharon the wedding planner and simmi's friend" rey answered back

Now he got what she was dng at rey's place yesterday..then she would be present in the party too'His eyes searched all around the venue to get a glimpse of his angel..But she was not seen anywhere..

He walked in the venue and joined the group.In some time kriya arrived.And the wedding ceremony began with an extremely excited rey and a shy blushing kriya taking vows to stay together and love each other for the rest of their lives.As they finished their vows rey placed a long peck on kriya's cheek followed by the cake cutting.It was a beautiful cake with the same feel as that of the venue...

After which Sharon had arranged a post wedding party for the couple.Everyone directly stepped on the dance floor grooving.All were enjoying a lot while swayam's eyes were only searching for her.

Suddenly he heard simmi's voice "Hey sharon, come lets dance'"he turned around to see who it was.But her back was facing him.He immediately recognized those long flowing brownish waist length hair.He moved forward determined to talk to her this time.She was at the other end of the dance floor, he increased his pace and moved through the dance floor...thats when everyone heard a loud thud.


Please leave ur reviews...they mean a lot to us...

Edited by -Chaitra- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
unres

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yipee

dhinka chika dhinka chika 🥳

Party Time 🥳

am first one to comment on my bestie's ff 😳

Awsome update 👏

"who let the dogs out" 🤣 its vicky's ringtone.he nd his liking

Its rey nd kriya's marriage nd sharon is their wedding planner .

Swayam is so lost in her that he didn't notice the worker. 😃

Sharon didn't notice swayam nd cursed him for trapping in the curtains.

precap is interesting.what will happen at the dance floor 😲

waiting for the next part.

update soon.

thanx for the pm.

keep it up girls 👍🏼

love u ❤️

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Edited by sania_arora - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
res for morng...
Awosm mindBlowing Wrk
😆😆😆😆
poor swayam 😉
Edited by nature2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
RES
unres

nice
i loved it
the update was nice and simple
thanks for the PM
update soon
and do PM me
Edited by -spongy- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
i just finish reading your all chapters in a go...
wow just loved it till now all... sharon and swayan both lost and in deep thoughts...
and they both got out by their friends... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
wow gud writing, grt pictures, waiting for their union
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
res

unres...

sowiee didu...m damm late in unresing this...

but i must say its so cute one n so yummy cake...😆😆😆
mujh bhukkad ko cake ki treat,...heheheheh..

btw jokes apart...ur hardwrk can be seen easily...n my poor swayam...chooo cute...

waiting for ur update...:):)
love ya didu:P:P
Edited by KaNcHaN_06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
very sweet update
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Awesome update 😊
Sharon is Rey's wedding planner n Swayam gets lost whenever he sees Sharon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Vry sweet n cute update
loved it
thnx for pm
update soon
n pm me

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