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Posted: 12 years ago


wonderful update...

ha ha good joke Sameera...it is not ur luck working for Maan...it is Geet's luck which is joined to him when he accidently filled her maang in front of God in that auspicious time...maano to yeh hi shaadi hai na maano to kuch nahin hai...

Geet is suffering from fever...Maan is worried for her...

aage kya hoga...really very eager to know...

waiting for next part...

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These monkeys are sooo cute 😆
Dii ab to update de do
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where are you...

pls update soon...

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Originally posted by: sandymg

where are you...


pls update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends
I m back to update

actually no one said me that ther are waiting for my update
and I wanted to see that waiting posts on my thread that's why I said that I m updating.
I m happy to see those waiting post so I m updating now

joke of the decade
hai na
actually my son was using net so i could not get a chance now it's free so i m here.Just wait for few minutes,I m updating, after coloring it


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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

hi friends

I m back to update

actually no one said me that ther are waiting for my update
and I wanted to see that waiting posts on my thread that's why I said that I m updating.
I m happy to see those waiting post so I m updating now

joke of the decade
hai na
actually my son was using net so i could not get a chance now it's free so i m here.Just wait for few minutes,I m updating, after coloring it



will be waiting di!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

hi friends

I m back to update

actually no one said me that ther are waiting for my update
and I wanted to see that waiting posts on my thread that's why I said that I m updating.
I m happy to see those waiting post so I m updating now

joke of the decade
hai na
actually my son was using net so i could not get a chance now it's free so i m here.Just wait for few minutes,I m updating, after coloring it



will be waiting
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Mein bhi hoon ..waiting list mein...😛
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Part-63


All enjoyed for some time ,cake was served and after some time Ram was again in the center of the hall.This time Priya was with him
Ram-Ladies and gentlemen,I m here again.It's time to announce the second reason for this party.today my son is going to be engaged with her long time friend.But I want my mother to do this honor as it was her dream to see the bride of her loving grandson .Maa please come here.
Savitriji came and stood near Ram.She looked at him and he assured her to be confident.
Savitriji asked Maan to come near her.He came and held her with her shoulder
She said-Aaj mere liye bahut hi khushi ka din hai,Duniya ke har ek dada dadi ki wish hoti hai ki wo apne pote ya poti ki zindgi settle hote hue dekhen,Aaj mera ye sapna pura hone jaa raha hai, Iske baad mujhe aur kuchh nahin maangna us upar wale,jab bhi main apni aankhen hamesha ke liya band karoongi to dil me ek sukoon hoga ki maine zindgi ki har khushi ji li.
Maan-Dadi please stop it .ye aap kya kah rahi ho.
Savitriji-Nahin Maan ye sach hai beta.Bhagwaan har maa baap ko tum jisa beta de kyunki meri wish puri karne ke liye hi tum shadi karne ko razi ho gaye.
Maan-Dadi ye emotional character aap ko suit nahin karta.
Savitriji smiled and patted her cheek-Haan shayad sab log bore ho rahe hain mera lecture sum kar
All laughed at this and clapped for her.
Savitriji-Ab main aap sabko Maan ki hone wali dulhan se milaana chahti hoon.Please welcome the beautiful daughter of Mrs Pammi Khanna and Late Sagar Khanna.. before she could complete her sentence Sameera came ahead and moved in the direction where they were standing .Maan closed his eyes as he didn't want to hear that name. Geet didn't have any strength to look there so she stood there starring at the floor.She could see every thing going far away from her.
Savitriji completed her semtence-GEET
Guests gave a huge round of applaud for the girl but some persons were standing frozen at their places.Maan opened his eyes with a jerk as he thought that dadi was being emotional so she called Geet by mistake.Geet was looking at them with wide eyes as she thought that she was not having the full control over her mind so she heard it wrong .Sameera was stopped in her track as she thought that dadi was speaking some alien language.She looked at Savitriji with confusion and Pammi thought that Savitriji was used to like Geet so she took her name unknowingly. Salma was too confused too.abhi abhi to kaha tha ki Sameera aur Maan ki Sagai hai aur ab Geet ko bula rahi hain.

Maan-Dadi what are you saying.I think you called Geet by mistake.
Pammi-ji maa ji, Sameera aur Maan ki engagement hai to aap Geet ko kyun bula rahi hain?
Savitriji-Nahin Pammiji.maine galati se nahin balki jaan boojh kar Geet ko bulaya hai.I m sorry ki ye baat humne aap se pahle nahin kahi but Maan aur Geet ne majboor kiya hume ye kadam uthaane ke liye.humne Maan ko bahut samjhaane ki koshish ki par ye razi nahin hua.aap ko bataate to aap Geet se baat karti aur wo bhi nahin maanti
Geet was watching all those happenings with dumb expression.she could sense today that every thing was going to be snatched away from her.Today she was going to be an orphan in real sense
Maan-Papa what's going on.Maine aap se kaha tha ki aisa kuchh mat kijiye par aapne meri baat nahin maani.Ye ek toofan hai jo sab kuchh apne saath lakar jaayega.
Ram-I m sorry Maan but we could not see you in pain so we did this.
Maan-Papa sab kuchh thodi der me khatm ho jaayega tab aap decide karna ki kaun sa dukh jyada bada tha.
Savitriji-Pammiji,Maan aur Geet ek doosre se pyar karte hain par Geet apni bahan ko dhokha nahin dena chahti thi isliye apne pyar ko qurbaan karne ja rahi thi.
Pammi-Par Maaji Geet Maan se pyar nahin karti.Maan ne mujhe khud bataya.Geet ne bhi kabhi kuchh nahin kaha.
Savitriji-Aap ko pata tha ki Maan Geet se pyar karta hai .aap tab bhi apni doosri beti ka rishta Maan ke saath karna chahti thi?
Maan-Dadi ye kya bachpana kar rahi hain aap.maine pahle hi kaha tha ki main sameera se shadi karna chata hoon,Phir aap ye tamasha kyun kar rahi hain. Though it was his dream to hear her Geer's name for being her soulmate. but not in this way. It wasn't the correct moment. Maan could see the coming moments in which Geet was going to face that humiliation which he never wanted her to face.May be he was going to lose Geet for ever today. He smiled while looking up as he was accusing the almighty.
Savitriji-Maan baar baar kahne se jhooth sach me nahin badal jata.tumhen suboot chahiye.it's okey maan today we have a proof too that you don't like Sameera. she signaled Samrat and Samrat nodded after few second all heard Maan's voice in the hall followed by Geet's voice
(It was a recorde voice)
Maan-Geet
Geet-Tum yahaan? sorry aahkh lag gayi shayad.
Maan-have your food Geet
Geet-nahin.actually i m not hungry so it's ok.i don't need it.
Maan-thoda sa kha lo Geet.warna Raat ko neend nahin aayegi.
Geet-lekin
Maan- ya tum mere haath se nahin khana chahti?

Geet and Maan could not believe their ears.It was their confession which they made last night and it was recorded.now every one was hearing that confession(you all can check that confession on part 56 page-76on thread-4 and I want to say that technology is so advanced that every thing is possible in the world of fiction.you should remember that all the friends of maan are engineers and know it very well to use the technology)Dadi invited them on a purpose to make maan and Geet realise their love for each other.they brought Geet too here last night as they were sure that Maan was loosing control on his heart.They did record their confession for a safer side and now it was a proof to show them that all know about their love

soon that confession was over and now it was time to answer the questions

Savitriji-Maan ab bhi kuchh kahna baki hai.Main maanti hoon ye tarika galat tha, par tumne koi raasta hi nahin choda. I m sorry that I involved your friends . when I told them about you they were very surprised. and I made them agree with me to help me.Maan tum log apne saath saath Sameera ki zindgi bhi kharaab karoge.Pyar kisi se aur shadi kisi aur se.life me in sab ke liye koi jagah nahin hoti Maan.Marriage is the other name of commitment.

Pammi ji kya aap ab bhi chahti hain ki Sameera ka rishta maan ke saath ho.wo aapki chhotio beti se pyar kare aur badi beti ke saath Shadi. Ye to galat hai na.

Sameera tum bataao kya tum aise ladke ko apna jeeven saathi banaaogi jo tumhaari hui chhoti bahan se pyar karta hai.khush rah paaogi aise ladke ke saath?hamesha tumhaare dil me ek darr rahega .Ji paaogi us darr ke saath?

Sameera didn't have anything to say.She didn't love Maan and she knew it well that Maan too didn't love her. It was a marriage for convenience to her. She didn have any thing to say.She nodded her head and turned to go to Geet, Dadi was happy to see that Sameera didn't take it on heart.She watched her go towards Geet.
She waited her to bring Geet in the center.. Geet was wacthing her coming to her self She was having tears of guilt in her eyes.Sameera reached near Geet and Geet backed with fear
Geet-Sameera I m sorry jaisa tum soch rahi ho waisa kuchh nahin hai.please forgive me.Mujhe pata hi nahin chala ki mainkab maan se...
before she could complete her sentence she received a tight slap from Sameera on her face.Geet hold her cheek and again try to said but Sameera again rose her hand to give her one more slap but couldn't touch her face.She found Maan holding her hand in air.
Maan-How dare you Sameera to touch her.
Geet already was in fever so was very low in energy she was almost going to fall but Maan held her in her strong arms-Geet. Geet was about to faint due to weakness.Maan helped her to stand by keeping her in his arms.
Sameera-so you have shown your true colors Geet.Tumne promise kiya tha na ki tum maan se shadi karne me meri madad karogi.this was the way you were helping me.Mere peeth peechhe Maan ke saath pyar ka chakkar chala rahi thi.
Maan -Sameera control your toungue.
Sameera-kya galat kah rahi hoon.Aakhir apni asli aukaat dikha hi di.Meri hi galati thi ki tum par bharosa kiya maine.
Geet-Nahin Sam aisa kuchh nahin hai.mera yakeen karo main sachche dil se chahti hoon ki tumhaari shadi Maan ke saath ho.
Sameera-Ek aur naya natak.Ye sab to tum maa ke pet se seekh kar paida hui na Geet.ki kaise doosron ki khusi chheeni jaaye,kaise doosron ke haq par apnq haq dikhaya jaaye.waise isme tumhaari kya galati galati to us khoon ki hai jo tumhaare andar daud raha hai.
Maan-Sameera ek shabd aur nahin .warna mujhse bura koi nahin hoga.isme Geet ki koi galati nahin hai.abhi tumne suna tha na ki maine hi Geet se kaha ki wo apne pyar ko accept kare .ye nahin chahti thi par maine hi...
Sameera-come on Maan tum to iski side loge hi na ,pyar jo karte ho.

Geet was standing speechless.she couldn't understand what was going to happen with her.
All were watching this unexpected happening with shocked expressions. There was pin drop silence only Sameera and Maan were talking.Still they were talking in a low tune so no one could clearly hear them.
Finally Ram interfered -ye ho kya raha hai?
Sameera-ek baat bataao Geet, kya ye sab tumhara sach jaante hain ya phir tumne inhen bhi meri tarah dhokhe me rakha hai.
Maan-Sameera stop it now.
Geet-Nahin Sameera please kuchh mat kaho.I m sorry.I promise ki main chupchap yahaan se chali jaaoongi but Please don't say any thing.
Sameera-Kyun ab darr kyun lag raha hai.sachchai saamne laane ki baat aayi to maafi maangna lagi.

all the family members came close to them when they saw Maan Geet and Sameera arguing
Savitriji-Tum log ye kya baat kar rahe ho? kaun si sachchai sameera?.Kya chhupaya hai Geet ne?
Geet-Sameera mujhe apni chinta nahin hai.mjhe pata tha ki ek na ek din sach sabke saamne aa hi jaayega.but please think bout Vicky.wo bachcha hai Sameera aur wo sach bhi nahin jaanta.uska dil toot jaayega.I promise main yahaan se kahin door chali jaaungi .kabhi apna face tum logon ko nahin dikhaaongi par sabki nazron me apne liye taras aur nafrat nahin dekh paaungi.
Maan-Geet ye tum kya kah rahi ho.tumne aisa kuchh nahin kiya hai that yoyu are feeling ashamed.
Geet-Nahin Maan.saari galati meri hi hai.agar main tumse pyar nahin karti to aaj ye sab nahin hota.Sab khush hote main hoon hi aisi badkismat ki sabki khushiyan chhin hi leti hoon.
she went nearPammi-Mom Please sameera ko rok lijiye.vicky nahin sah payega sach.please mom.
Pammi-Sameera pls chup ho jaao ab uss sab se koi faayda nahin hai.
Sameera-Nahin Mom.jis ne meri har khushi mujhse chhin li usko main itni aasani se nkaise jaane doon.isko bhi to pata chale jab apni khushi chinti hai ti kaisa lagta hai.
Savitriji-chup ho jao aur mujhe bataao ki ye tum log kya baat kar rahe ho?
Geet was even finding herself to stand.she had no more energy to protest.her eyes were downcasted.
Savitriji-Geet kya baat hai?aisa kya hai jo tumne humse chhupaya hai.
Maan-Dadi noting important .aap in baaton par dhyan mat dijiye.
Sameera held Geet with her hand and dragged her in front of Savitriji-Dadi jis ladki ko aap itne pyar se apni bahu banaane ki baat kar rahi hain pahle iski sachchai to jaan lijiye.phir decide karna ki ye aapki bahu banne ke laayak hai bhi ya nahin.
Savitriji-don't talk in riddles sameera,saaf saaf kaho jo kahna chahti ho.
Maan closed his eyes to wait the storm that was standing in form of Sameera to take the every happiness of his life.Geet was crying badly.Maan came and entangled his hand with Geet-pata nahin kitni der ka saath bachha tha.
Vicky was now scared with all these talks.he came to Geet-di aap ya kya baaten kar rahe ho?Meri samajh me kuchh nahin aa raha.Geet hugged him -kuchh nahin vicky tum jaao yahan se.
Geet was scared if Vicky could not bear it? if he too hates her
Sameera-Geet vicky koi chhota bachcha nahin hai.wo ab ye sab jaanne ke liye kafi mature hai.Dadi Geet hamaari kuchh nahin lagti dadi ye meri aur Vicky ki bahan aur Mom aur dad ki beti nahin hai,ye to hamaare ek maamuli driver ki beti hai jiseuske maa baap ke marne ke baad dad ne adopt kiya tha taki ek besahara ladki ko pariwar mil jaaye.Par dekhiye isne kya inaam diya hamaare pyar ka aur apne pan ka.padhaya likhaya aur is laayk banaya ki apne pairon par khadi ho jaaye.par khoon to asar dikhata hi hai na.wafadaari ki to ummeed hi karna bakaar hai.
Loud sounds can be heard across the hall which were full of shock. Priya closed her open mouth with her palm.She couldn't believe what she heard. Ram was like-What?
All friends too standing numb after hearing the truth.Arjun and naina could not believe what they heard. Vicky too was surprised.It didn't matter him what they were talking about his di.he came forward-nahin Sam di aap jhooth bol rahi ho.ye meri di hai.meri Geet di.
Sam-Vicky tujhe samajh me nahin aata ki ye hamaari kuchh nahin lagti.Isse mom ne janm nahin diya hai .Iske papa dad ke driver the.
Vicky -to kya hua. agar mom ne janm nahin diya.Geet di ne mujhe aap se bahut jayada pyar diya aap to bas mujhe daantti rahti ho.
But Savitriji was the one who got the biggest shock.she didn't want to believe what Sameera said-she held Geet's shoulder-Geet ya kya kah rahi hai ?kya ye sach hai ki tum Pammiji ki beti nahin ho?
Geet-I m soory dadi .wo main..mujhe nahin pata tha ki ye sab
Savitriji-Kya nahin pata tha Geet,Tumne ye baat chhupa kar rakhi ki tum ek naukar ki beti ho.
Maan -dadi please
Savitriji-Tum sab jaante the na tab bhi tum chup rahe Maan.
Geet folded her hand-dadi please mujhe maaf kar dijiye.she tried to hold her hand but Savitriji stopped her by her hand.and she felt some pain in her heart and she clutched her heart with her hand and fell down on the floor.
Ram and Priya-maa
Maan-dadi
Aarti who was watching whatever was going on with tears in her eyes.she wiped her tears and came quickly ahead and she asked to put Savitriji on some comfortable place. Her husband Anil too was feeling bad for all of them.
Ram-Maan please pick up her and put on this sofa .jaldi karo.
Maan left Geet's hand and came to pick dadi up. Geet was feeling herself responsible for all.Maan bent down to pick dadi and after taking in his arms he got up and Saw Geet taking her steps back. she looked at Maan for the last time. Maan saw her but she smiled with her teary eyes and turned to go from there
Maan-Geet ...he wanted to stop her but Ram said-Maan jaldi karo, Aarti ko check up karna hai.maan was feeling like to cry loudly but hold himself with lot of control and said in his heart-Keep youself safe Geet.Mere liye apne aap ko sambhalna..kuchh aisa mat karna ki hum zindgi bhar ek doosre ko dekhne ke liye tarste rahen.Please Geet'
and he put dadi on the sofa. his eyes were burning with tears.Aarti came and checked her up. All were waiting with their breath in their lungs.no body was concerrned now for Geet or Sameera. their whole concern was on savitriji who was lying almost lifeless.there.

Precap-I want you all to guess it as I have a surprise for you

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I think i created quite long dialogues.I know they are in hindi as I find it emotion give their best effect in the language which we use in routine.If any one finds it difficult to understand any of those dialogues or any perticular word, please feel free to ask.-Rashmi
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