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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 21

that night
manvi : i really had fun... thank u for the ice cream... (caressing his head which was in her lap)
virat : anytime... its just an ice cream... biwi ho meri... har baat ke liye thank u kahogi...
manvi : par kehne mein kya burai hai...
virat : manvi... i want to tell u something...
manvi : i know...
virat gets up n looks at manvi in shock
virat : what do u know...???
manvi : i know that you love me n u desperately want a small baby as piyali says...
manvi blushed n hugged virat.
manvi : i too want that...
virat was too happy... he wanted to hear it from manvi n now she was saying so.
manvi : i want to be a mother. i want to carry our child virat...
virat separated manvi from him n took her hands in his.
virat : u dont know how happy i am listening to this... i feel like flying... but i need to tell you something... something that is bothering me from so long... something that i want to share with my life partner... with my wife...
manvi : i am listening...
virat : manvi... u know my ex girlfriend- (manvi cut virat in between)
manvi : haan wo chudail... maya shaya... kamini...
virat : shh... listen to me jaan... (virat put a finger on manvi's lips)
manvi : hmm...
virat : that maya n the maya living in our house... they both are same... kabir's maya is the same maya who broke my heart. n from the time kabir n maya came, i... i dont feel good... there is something about them... i dont know exactly what... but i have a feeling that they are here for some purpose...
manvi : purpose...???
virat : manvi... i think kabir likes you... i have seen it in his eyes n his so called relationship with maya is not at all true... they both dont love each other... they are together just to separate us...
manvi : what...?? i never thought you were so good in cooking stories...
virat : excuse me... do u realise what u are speaking...???
manvi : u had something with maya... okkk... people do have past n i really have no problem with that... but that doesnt mean that u will go on n put the blame on my friend... kabir aisa nahi hai... wo kabhi aisa nahi karega... i know him n i know that he doesnt love me... he likes me as a friend n nothing else...
virat : oh so u believe that friend of yours instead of listening to your husband... strange...!!! wait a second... are u sure the feeling isnt mutual...?? (leaving her hand n looking directly into her eyes)
manvi was shocked by the question n asked virat " what...?? "
virat : let me get it straight then... ARE YOU SURE U DONT LOVE HIM...??
manvi ; v..virat... what are u saying...??
virat held manvi by her shoulders n pulled her towards him.
virat : do u love him manvi...???
manvi : virat listen to me-
virat : yes or no... think about it... are u sure i am not a substitue in your life...??? kabir nahi toh virat hi sahi... aisa toh nahi hai na...
manvi was now in tears because she never thought that virat would ever question her love for him.
manvi : you are questioning my love for u... are u...???
virat : yes i am...
manvi : then i feel no need to answer you... i dont feel the need to prove my love for you... in fact i have already proved my love when you told me that u had a past which you... you mr. vadera intentionally hided the truth from me... dhokha tumne diya tha mujhe... maine nahi... you were the one who kept me unaware about my own husband's life n its important part...
virat : shut up... just shut up... i love u way too much to tell u that painful past... i was scared to lose you... i wanted you in my life god damnit...
manvi : when u loved me soo much... why are u now questioning my feelings, my love for u... how could you virat...??? how could you...??? u proved that u dont have a single ounce of trust on me... you just desired me n now u got me... may be i was just a mere attraction...
virat : desire...??? i desired you not your body... do u get that...??? attraction...no mrs. vadera i love you... attraction is the most unsuitable word to express my feeling towards you... u know outer beauty leads to attraction... n i.. i loved you... i loved your heart n your soul... loved you with everything i have...
manvi : then why are you saying that i dont love you...??
virat : i am sorry... manvi i am really sorry but i am not lying... i poured out my heart in front of you... maya n kabir has come in our lives for a reason... n i... i can die but i cant afford to lose you...
manvi : i love you too... i really love u...
virat hugged manvi and she cried in his embrace.
manvi : but are u sure that kabir...
virat : jaan... i know its difficult for u to accept it right now... you are just innocent as an angel manvi... n thats why u see the world like this... world isnt a good place manvi... all the people arent good lke you...
manvi : but motu toh mera dost hai na...
virat : chalo meri madhubala... so jate hai n kal se main tumhe dikhaunga ke sach kya hai... aur jhooth kya... kal se tum dekhogi sach jo tumhara pyaara patidev tumhe dikhaega...
manvi : okk... lekin abhi toh mujhe godi lelo...
virat : kyun...??
manvi : take me to bed virat...
virat : heights of deperation... aaj bhi compensation chahie...???
manvi hit his arm playfully n virat scooped her in his arms n made his way to the bed.
virat switched off the light n manvi hugged him.
manvi : aaj ki compensation udhaar rahi tumpe...
virat : okk... as u say...
manvi : aaj na main thodi upset hoon toh...
virat : toh kya...???
manvi : toh fir compensation ka kya fayda jab maja hi nahi ayega...
virat : ohh god... have some shame manvi... you are a married woman...
manvi : so... i am only talking to MY husband... kisi aur se thodi discuss kar rahi hoon...
virat : hehe... yeah... okkk goodnight...
manvi : goody goody night...
and they slept in each other arms peacefully without thinking of what will happen tomorrow.
next morning
manvi : mele pyale bandal... get up its morning...
virat : manvi come baby sleep for more time...
manvi : alley no... i am the bahu na... i have to get up on time...
virat opened and his eyes n smirked.
virat : you are getting up early so that u dont miss your breakfast bandariya... go n fool somebody else...
manvi : you know me soo well jaanu...
virat : bandal se jaana... badi fast ho... (pulling manvi on the bed)
manvi : tumne notice kia...?? badi tez ho...
virat : i know... now get serious n listen to me...
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at the breakfast table...
swamini : where is manvi virat...???
virat : she is just coming bua ji...
kabir : yeah that was i wondering mani isnt here...
virat : mani... oops manvi is just coming.
manvi : i am sorry everybody... actually na i was waking up piya... n she wasnt feel like going to school so i brought her down for breakfast.
piyali : morning everybody...
jeevika : good morning piyali... but why not going to school today...???
piyali : manvi...
manvi : di let her be na... cmon its okk...
piyali : witch aun=... woh i mean maya i am sorry...
maya frowned but smiled at virat n manvi and replied " its okk baby... "
virat : come baby... have breakfast now... and then vilat will take you out...
manvi : woww thats a nice plan... hai na motu...???
kabir faked a smile n replied " yeah... "
manvi : maya n motu can also join us na virat...??
virat : yeah yeah... if u both want, ur welcome...
maya : yeah we will join you guys...
manvi : good...
jeevika : okk guys first focus on breakfast...
manvi : oh yeah... me n baby are both damn hungry... hai na piya...
piyali : yesh... mujhe nahi neeni aa rahi hai...
virat : aww... pehle food n then neeni... okk meli princess...
piyali : okkk... i love u vilat...
virat : vilat loves u too piya... cmon now eat something...
the story to end soon... soo keep liking it n loving it guys...
love
naina
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Posted: 12 years ago
huh mujhe laga ab toh inka pakka bahot bada jhagda hoga but thank god no jhagda and all...instead pyaar ki barsaat ho gayi 😉
but finally virat ne manvi ko sab kuch bata diya thats a relief 😃
and virman talk abt baby aww that soo cute
then manvi doing her besharmi talks virman convo was fun 😆
then morning piyali's time with virat and manvi was soo cute and karan and maya getting furious over it was damn fun 😆
time for virat to prove it that he is right...
soo update next part soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Naina! ⭐️ So Virman in jassos mode 😎.. Virat made some plans to expose Motu and Maya! Interesting.. And Piyali is also a part of it I guess.. Loved Virman arguments.. Kafi serious wala nok-jhokh tha.. But I loved their dialogues 😃.. Very well written Naina 👏👏.. But Virat finally put some sense into Manvi.. Loved the way she asked him to pick her up 😉.. Cute Mannu 😛.. Loved the update ❤️.. Looking forward to the next part.. Thank you for the tag 😛.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love the update Naina. Manvi's sadness at Virat doubting her love, it was perfect. I am Virat told her that Maya was his ex, now hopefully they will leave my Virman alone. Piyali was too cute again. The highlight of this chapter for me though was Manvi agree for ek chota sa baby, yay Piyali's wish will be fulfilled. 😆. Thank you so much for the update and congrats on the 100 pages of this FF🤗 !
Edited by nimi00 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oww they are planning something, i like it😊
and what it will come to an end ??😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
plzzz plzzz update it soon waiting...
keerthu27 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
i thught virman were fighting seriously😲
BM i would have killed you🤢
lovely update
something is cokking in virman's mind continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update Nianuu👏👏👏 eeks mannu maan gayii baby keliyee😉😳 finally virat ne bol diyaa :DDD haww virman fight !!!! :( main toh dar hi gayii thi 😛 upar se gussa virat !!! uff😉 the fight was for good 😛 n the result bhi mast niklaa :DD the way virman expressed their love through fight !!! superb 👍🏼 wow !!! virat plan ;DDD so sacchai bahaar lene ki mission started !!! this is Awesome Nainuu ⭐️⭐️ i m really looking forward aakir chal kya rahaa hai virman ke dimaag main😉 will be eagerly waiting for next update!!! loved the whole update to the core ❤️ thanks for the tag🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow naina awesome part dear
Virat very well know their intension and our innocent soul didn't get that
Waiting 4 next part
Update Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..!!! Virat finally spill the beans which was nice n like their sweet little argument...n then Virat;s plan to show the truth...Superb...Like Maanvi she is seriously innocent...Eager for next Naina..!

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