MG:SS Will u marry me???/pt 38 updatd on pg 71 29th june'14 - Page 11

Originally posted by: valli22

little confusing nimi..

who is nanu..n neelum

maneet not together..

Haan di confusion solve ho jayega bt till den w8 & read...

Originally posted by: nimi216

Confusion will take time 2 b solved bt till den next update chahiye kya???

Next update part 17 by 12.'o clock. ...

PART 17


1st thanks to all of u 4 comments & likes...hv't got time 2 reply since long bt ws stuck in something so only couldn't give update...hope u understand.
extremely sorry 4 updating so late...


I m a bit worried dat how I m going bt do support me & tell me whtz going wrong. if any suggestions u are alwayz welcome plze do tell me how cn I improve more.

Khurana house.
Maan was getting ready for an official meeting.
Wen a small little girl with teddy bear in her left hand comes inside taking small small steps towards maan.
Maan notice nanu coming towards him he smiles & turns.
Maan:good morning nanu...
Nanu:daddy no nanu...mine name not nanu.
She showz a angry face to maan...
Maan smiles on this & cupped her face & kiss hr on forehead & tickles...
Nanu:hahaha...no stop tickling nup..hahaha..
Maan:hmm...tua some1 can't take tickling haan...
Nanu:nup...stip daddy stip...
Maan:nanu itz stop...
Nanu:haan peass ddon't tiki...
Maan:ohk...but I want a kissi...
Maan forwards his cheek & den nanu comes ahead & make her teddy bear kiss maanz cheek & runs..
Nanu:hahahaha...ulu bana daddy fool bana...
Maan:nanu...
Nanu:nt nanu my name isss muskan...muskan maan Khurana. ...got it...
Maan:ohkkk...sorry baba itna kyu gussa kar rahi ho...take a chill phill...
Muskan:daddy u saw srk movie. ...
Maan:wht...
Muskan:haan RA ONE...take chill feel...
Maan:phill...
Muskan:haan wahi...feel...
Maan:haha...ohk...so subhey subhey were is nanu going...
Muskan gives him a glare.
Maan:ohk muskan were r u going..
Muskan smiles
Muskan:office...
Maan:really...bt I m nt taking u...
Muskan make a cry baby face.
Muskan:daddy...muskan want to go...office jana hai...
Maan:no baby...office work place na...& den u won't b able 2 play der.
Muskan:I will pay in ur office pay garden. ...dat empoy 1...
Maan:no...wayz...
Muskan make a cry baby face again & looks at Maan.
Maan also looks at her...
Maan:ohk...f9 I m taking u bt u won't play in office play garden u would b sitting in my cabin till I finish my meeting. ..
Muskan:ok...daddy take a chill feel...
Maan laugh on dis & takes Muskan up in hand & goes down for breakfast. ..
THis part I will post in two different posts so will post next in continuity...& next post will update tomorrow.

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

very confused with update...

thanx for pm...

Yes I no bt dis happened coz I couldn't pm u guyz sorry for dat...will surely next time keep dis in mind bt 4 nw srry...& plze try 2 manage without pmz coz I m a bit busy with baby so it takes lot of time hope u understand. .

continued...update

On breakfast table.
Daadi:maan aap aaj ghar jaldi aazana aaj hamey hamari ek friend ko hospital mey deykhane jana hai.
Maan:daadi mey nanu ko office lekar ja raha hu tua u can go 2 ur friend freely.
Muskan:not nanu muskan...
Maan:ohk muskaaan...
Muskan:no muskan...
Maan rolled his eyes seeing his so small daughter with so many nakharaz...maan smiles & nodes.
Muskan:daadi muskan nahi khana..
Maan:kyu beta itz ur fav na see aloo parathas
Muskan:aaj muskan ko paratha nahi chahiye...wo paneer paratha chiye...
Maan:hmm...daadi ask nakul to make plze.
Daadi:haan beta ohk.
Daadi ask nakul to make paneer paratha 4 muskan.
Daadi:muskan beta ur paneer paratha is coming bt till den u can eat few bits of aloo paratha also r8...
Muskan:no daadi...no paratha...muskan paneer chahiye. ..
Maan:not 4m daddy also..
Maan forward a piece & muskan can't say no to her daddy so she ate d paratha.
Muskan:bass..
Maan:ohk last bite den bass den u eat ur paneer paratha ok.
Muskan:aah...
Daadi:maan tumari beti mera tua sunti hi nahi bigaad degey aap inhey...
Maan:daadi...
Muskan:take a chill feel...
Maan laughs on dis & smiles. ...whereas daadiz eyes were propped out...
Maan:Muskan finish ur paratha fast we are late...
Muskan nodes and finish her paratha fast.
Maan & Muskan leaves for office.
In London
It was night in London.
Neelum:nanu baby ohk plze come out plze hv ur dinner plze...
Nanu:no eelum 1st find me den hum dinner khayegey...
Neelum:bt baby I m searching u 4m last half an hour were are u baby...
Nanu:ohh...
Here door opens & geet comes inside the house.
Nanu comes out running as he heard opening of door...
Geet:nanu...baby how ar u???
Nanu:mom Neelum nt giving me food...
Geet:wht...
Nanu:yes I m asking hr to give food 4m last 1 hr...
Neelum:baby y r u hiding d truth haaan...I askd u na dat would unlike to eat bt u only told dat u will eat if I play hide n seek with u...not fair baby...
Geet:nanu no lie babu...bad manners. ...mom have ttaught u no dat lie people fail in life & babaji also punish pple if dey lie...haan..& if u lie 4 a good reason & 2 help sum1 den babaji forgive u...tua how can my baby lie to me...
Nanu catch his earz & sayz sorry...
Geet kiss him on cheek & picks him up.
Geet:nanu y u were hiding 4m Neelum. ..
Nanu:nanu wanted to eat dinner with mom so I ws hiding. .
Geet:oh...my baby...ohk don't worry mom kal se jaldi ghar aayegi & we will hv dinner also 2gether ohk...
Nanu kiss hr on her cheek & smiles.
Geet feeds nanu & make him to bed.Geet ws patting him so dat he could sleep.
Nanu:mom whtz 2dayz story...
Geet:2dayz story...hmmm ohk
Geet: u close ur eyes & I will say d story ohk...
Nanu:hmmm...
Geet:hmmm...d story is of rabbit & tortoise.
Rabbit was a very fast runner...& tortoise is a slow walker.
Geet telkz d story & till den nanu sleeps...geet tuck him nicely under the quilt & come downstairs.
Geet:Neelum u hd ur food...
Neelum:yes ma'am. ...should I place ur plate 2.
Geet :no u may go 2 sleep I will help myself.
Neelum: ohk madam.
Geet walks inside the kitchen & finds aloo paratha over der she smiles & keeps it in oven.
Geet hv her dinner & goes upstairs to sleep. ...or could be said dat to show dat she is sleeping.
Geet ws not able 2 sleep at all...she got up & took some sleeping pills & den slept.

Khurana house:

Maan & Muskan return back 4m office.on d way Muskan also ate wht she like all yummm food burgers pizzas & chocolate icecream.
Daadi:aagaye aap...muskan how are u baby wht all u did & u got bore r8...
Muskan:yup daadi daddy office bore...no small nanu der...only me & all big nanu...
Daadi smiles on this & make her sit on lap.
Maan:muskan come letz get fresh den u tell all ur boring stories to daadi.
Muskan:mine nt boring storries...
Maan:ohk baba come..
Maan picks her up & takes he to room. He gives her a bath Change her clothes & gives her teddy in her hand...
She got vry happy.
Muskan:daddy Muskan fresh fresh. ..
Maan smiles & go to take his bath...
Both got fresh & comes down.
Muskan tell all wht happened in office
Maan:muskan kitni baate karti ho bilkul aapni mama par gayi ho...
Daadi:maan...
Maan who was working on laptop getz up 4m der & goes to his room.
Precap:coming up is past.

only when past is revealed everything will be clear.

Originally posted by: valli22

only when past is revealed everything will be clear.

y maneet r apart

r they married n got seperated..

Di plze check if u hv read part 15 den 16 & nw 17...coz I hv doubt dat u must hv nt read dat part...