KAAM KARNA MANA HAI OFFICE MAI season 2 link page 117/ 14th feb

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hai cherries how are you all

i know every one cursing me under breathe for not updating


plz give time will update that in next week hopefully

here you go i written an OS long back for monthly celebration but i didn't thought to open a thread and post here but my friend "deepu" told me it was good post it on thread so here i am opening new thread

read this and do give your like and comment

it was my first OS in my life so i am hell nervous so tell me your views how it

everything i am welcoming

and i will write OS for every month for celebration thread will post in this thread

My Honey Bee( scrool down plz)

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with love

pooja

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My Honey Bee



The sky was clouded due to monsoon and was ready to pour at any time.




He was in his jeep riding it with his jet speed, the cool breeze was giving chillness to him. He was going to hoshiarpur after so many years for his sister aniee's marriage. Aniee was getting married to an nri from London who is his childhood friend. Its dadi wish to do the all the marriage rituals in hoshiarpur. His family already reached there for the marriage preparations.





He is none other than "Maan singh khurana" a prefect bachelor with killer looks every girl will dreamof. Maan is leading his construction company which is top most in the world. He loves to go to the long drive by himself so he was going on his jeep. He don't want to drench in the rain so he is driving the jeep very fastly as the weather is such way that the rain will come at any moment.
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"geet dheere chalo suno meri bath" said heer who is trying to stop her friend.



"ab nahi mai ne kaha na aaj mai wo kaam karke rokhungi"





said geet not listening to her friend running just like a honey bee. Heer was unable to match with her speed but trying her best to do that.

"mai har bet jeethjayegi aur ye bhi mera hai samji tum" said geet with pride in her voice glaring at heer who is hell bent to stop her at any cost.
"Tum pagal hogaya kya ye itna asani bath nahi hai tume kuch hua tho" said heer with fear in her voice hoping atleast she will obey for now.But it was vain

"tume meri sath aana hai tho chup chap aavo nahi tho javo"
said geet with irritating tone. Heer expectes the same answer. She very well knows that her friend is soo subborn how she can go leaving her friend like this. She is "Geet handa" who lives her life at her own. She was cursing the girls who keep this bet and see geet was stick with that. Babaji please help me and save this hoshirpur express she prayed to god silently. With no other option left she followed her sherni friend who was running like maniac.
"dekh na aaj babaji bhi meri sath nahi hai jaroor barish ayegi isse pehle mai ye kaam karna hai"
said geet looking at the clouded sky.
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Maan was driving his jeep enjoying the clouded sky view but suddenly halted as somebody came in front of his jeep. Maan wants to beat that person who did this" did they have any common sense or not" with determination he get down from his jeep.

But the view what he seen just stopped him at his tracks. It was none other than "Ms. Hoshiyarpur express" who was busy in cleaning her dress as she fell down with sudden jeep entry. Heer helped her to stand on her feet and was giving dealthy glares to maan. Geet just said sorry to maan without glancing at him and flew away with heer who was busy in cursing maan as she was very eager to do her task. Heer cursing and geet sorry none reached to maan's ears as he was busy in admiring geet.
He was blown away from her beauty, she was looking soo cute, innocent and beautiful he thought.


He doesn't know when he started walking in the direction where geet just left. He was in trance he really doesn't know what he is doing where he is going, it was her spell. He smiled and tries to figure out where she would be. He started running behind them not wanting to loose her.
Geet reached the tree panting heavily which is having honey comb which was in deserted place. Heer was almost at the edge of fainting due to their marathon run, cursing badly geet for doing this to her. Maan checks a safe place and hides behind the tree that was near by them only. He was checking out her with content smile on his lips. He wants to touch her lips which were pouted listening to heer coursing. He smiled at her antiques she is looking like apple with red colour nose due to heavy panting. But what she was up to what she was doing at this tree he thought.
Geet picked stone from ground and trying to aim at honey comb. Heer tries to stop her with fear says
"It's dangerous don't do that"

"I don't have any other option other than this"
replied geet casually and hits the honey comb.

Geet without wasting any second hand over heer some cover saying her to hide under that. When she herself going to do the same unexpectedly she saw maan standing there. She runs to him indicating him to hide in the cover, not getting any reaction from him she just covered both of them securely. While honey bee's were flying all over in fear to save themselves. The cover was not big enough it can't hide both of them securely so geet tries to hide both of them unknowingly both gluded to each other.


Maan came back to reality with her sudden touch which was electrifying his body with desires. Geet concentration was only on honey bees so she gives least concentration in what condition she was now. Being gentle maan tries to move away, geet caught his hand instantly nodded for a no checking around if honey bees were still there.

"Its dangerous don't go" said geet with concerned voice. She knows he was a stranger to her but she created all this right so she has to save him it's the only thing that was residing in her mind.
Maan was just flat for her beauty at first sight itself and here she was concerned for him trying to protect him from honey bees. He just loves her Maan's self confession surprised himself he was living in fast forward city yet he don't like any girl. Not to forget he was not impressed with any girl that his family chosen for him . he don't want to tied up with responsibilities very soon so he kept on dragging the matter. At last his family given up and leave him at peace. But he has his own view and plans for his life partner and there married life.
He smiled to himself as his family wish will come true getting badi bahu of khurana's.


"What you are doing"
asked maan breaking the silence that was prevailed.


"It was a bet I want to take honey"
said geet still checking out.

"It was very dangerous right"

"I won't get afraid to face danger"
said geet with attitude that brought smile on maan lips.


"Uffo attitude wo tho hona hi tha"
thought maan
"What is your name"
asked maan casually

Geet realized that she was very close to a stranger and conversing with him was not a good idea. With a jerk she throws out the cover and tries to go away as honey bee's got cleared as well. Maan sensed she was getting wrong way he tries to stop her by holding her wrist
"Wait just tell me your name I am not road side Romeo" said maan
Geet tries to push him this time. Maan blocks her between him and tree, geet was startled with his sudden action. But watching his eyes that were saying something she forget everything just staring at his eyes. Maan condition was also not less he again asked her

"What is your name?"
Breaking her trance she just pushed him with all her energy

"You want my name right know it by your self"
saying soo geet flew away from there dragging heer who was still under the cover due to fear.

"My honey bee I love you"
wishepered maan with killer smile.



Geet want to give some piece of mind for his sudden advancement but there is something that was stopping her. So she challenged him as she knows he will come for her, She saw the love for her in his eyes.
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"Geet tum kaha thi abhi tak"
asked rano watching geet condition. Geet makes a face pleading her dad to save her now.



"wo bachi hai chodo na use"
said geet dad mohinder how he can he refuse her plead. She is papa's daughter after all.




"Ha bachi uski umar abhi 22 hai aur aap keh rahi hai ki wo bachi hai"
said rano glaring at both daughter and father and continued.
"aur kal use dekhne keliye ladke wale arahi hai aap ki bachi ko bolo sambal ke rehne keliye"

Geet knows that some one was coming for her but she didn't except it will happen soo fast.she gives a disbelieving look to his papa, he assured her by blinking his eyes.

"Ha geet beti hum haina ye sab dekhnekeliye tum jake aram karlo" said mohinder with mean look

Rano just left from there saying they won't change at all.
At night mohinder goes to geet room who was smiling herself watching the moon by sitting on her room window. She was reminding the stranger that she met today and was smiling to herself as she behaved like teenager.


"Beta kal ki tayyari hogaya"
asked mohinder startling her with sudden entry.

Geet kept num he knows she don't want to go by leaving all. She completed her MBA and was doing job in a promising company but she keep on travelling weekly ones she will come to hp.
"Beta he is very good choice for you and you can join in his business also as he is running construction company"
said mohinder with assuring look. Geet was bounded with family respect and love she thought she will refuse that guy but after listening to mohinder assurance talk and expectant look she can't do that. For a unknown stranger she can't broke her father trust on her but she was helpless. She nodded her head for yes hiding the tears that were ready to flow in her hazels. she prayed to god to give her some courage to face the guy.
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"dadimaa aap ko patha haina maan bhai won't obey for any of us then app yeisa kyun kar raha hai"
Asked aniee seeing dadi who was busy talking with their dad and mother.






"aniee beta bahut ho chukka hai now hum ek game khelthe hai maan ko ye kaam karna padega"




Said dadi with determined voice.
God please help me to face bhai aniee prayed silently.
Maan reached the farm house that his family was residing for marriage. He got warm welcome from his family. When he tries to tell everyone about his "honey bee" love story suddenly his dadimaa fainted scaring everyone like hell. With lots of drama she makes him obey for seeing a girl for him. Maan don't want this he will definitely refuse the girl after seeing her he thought what ever the consequences may be how he can give up on his love. Maaan decided mentally that he will refuse her.
It was very big night for both maan and geet. The cloudes were cleared for now bringing a new day but both were not happy there hearts were paining especially geet was not sure what to do it was very heart wrenching for her. With heavy heart and tear sticken face geet herself don't know when she slept off.
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"maa aagaya ladkewale"
said raji running into haveli.


Handa's welcomed the whole khurana family warmly and the tradition they have impressed khurana's which they were missing in the city culture. Maan was least bothered in all these checking his mails in his black berry. Handa's likes maan very much he has that charm but he was not giving any importance they thought that he was a rich business man so he is busy.


Geet was not at all happy by heart but plastered a smile on her face not wanting to hurt her parents which were looking soo happy with all these rituals. Geet was looking like an angel desended from heaven in that red chudidar.





aniee liked her simplicity very much. Whole khurana's liked her and was pestering maan to see her once especially dadi. Geet sat in front of all with her head down was praying to god silently to do some miracle.

Without glancing at her atleast once maan said
"I want to talk to her alone"
maan was hoping that now they will back off as they were looking typical cultured family.

"kyun nahi beta jaise aap kahe geet beta use peche wali room pe lejavo"
said mohinder maan was caught offguard now. Mohinder knows they were from cultured and it was common for them so without hesitation he sent them to room.
In room
"I don't want this alliance"
maan said straightly without wasting time he continued
"I know it is very hard for you but I loved some one else"





By that time geet already recognised him from hall itself she has that doubt he was him only. Maan was facing his back to her not wanting to see that girl for once also, his mind was occupied with his "honey bee" thoughts only. Geet was at first happy as he was refusing the alliance trying to see his face her anklets were making faint sounds, here maan was trying to tell his pov.
"I don't know her name don't know any thing about her and I met her yester day only"
"You know she was my 'honey bee' she is risking her life for her stupid bet"
Thinking about his honey bee forgetting that he is telling this to a stranger.

"Honey bee?"

asked geet who was smiling with tears of happiness as she know he was telling about her only.
"Yes she flies like honey bee I love her a lot"
said maan who was in trance of his "honey bee" and realised where he was for what purpose then instantly turned her side as he recognised her. The happiness for both of them has no bounds.
They they sensed some thing wrong at hall as as they listened mohinder angry voice.
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"I thought your family was very respected family aap log yaha meri beti ka dil dukhane keliye aaye kya" said mohinder with furious tone.

rajji was very curious to see whats going and she can get opportunity to tease her didi so hiding behind the window she listened that maan was not wanting this allince with that he ran to her papa and told him about that.
"beta shanth hojayiye pehle sach kya hai wo jaana hoga hume" said Darji


he was very furious but he wants to get clear what raji saying was true or not. as he know khurana's were well cultured family.
"we are here because dadi we respect her decision but what you were saying"
dev maan's younger brother tried to protest.




"hume kuch mat batavo ye bathayiye ki maan ko ye rishta manjur hai ya nahi"
asked geets tayji to get straight answer


The khurana family was stood silent as they know maan was not interested in all these it was there continous pestering he came here.


"muje manjoor hai muje honey bee se shadi karna manjoor hai"
said maan who witnessed the whole events from stair case. And he continued

"I love her soo much papaji aap muje geet ki hath dedo I will take her to my paradise will keep her always happy its my promise."

The hall was dead silent but every can see the depth of his words and the love in his eyes. with smiling face mohinder nodded his head but gives a glace to his daughter who stood at stair case she nodded with smiling face and shied as maan was seeing her without a blink.


"jiju per ye honey bee kaun hai "
asked raji with chirpy voice .


Ha bhai aniee, dev even dadimaa and tayji added to her without mercy. maan ones look at geet who was standing beside his father after coming down pleading him not to say anything. every one sensed their eye talk at ones all coughed and laugh out loud. maan glared at younger ones for making fun of him. geet hugged his father with shyness.


maan very well know her answer will be yes only as he sees the love for him in her eyes. with glint of happiness they did the engagement not to forget with all teasing and all. Maan was very eager to brought her to his life he wishepered something and she asked handas politely.
"agar aap ko bura nahi lagatho hum ye shadi bhi aniee ki sath karvathe hai"
said dadi with hopeful face.

Darji agreed instantly and the joy for every one was on sky.
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"geet is bar mai ye sab nahi karne dunga"
said maan with stern voice as geet again standing under the same tree stubbornly.

"dekho aap geet handa ek baar faisala leliya tho wo karke dikahyengi"
said geet with attitude

"acha mai bhi dektha hu ab tum geet handa nahi balki geet maan singh khurana ho"
Said maan teasingly

"And my honey bee take this"
maan hand over her bottle that filled with honey which he himself collected on that day only.

"aap sach mai mere liye kiya per honey bees se aap ko kuch kiya tho"
Said geet very scary voice.

"they take training from my honey bee so they wont harm her own maan"
said maan hugging her tightly




Geet just gave in his love what else she wants


"By the way I love those honey bees rather than this stubborn honey bee"
said maan teasing her again


Geet pushed him with all her energy and attacked him maan stops her by holding her both hands
Wishepered in her ears
"I love my honey bee only" and kissed her lips geet just gave in for his passion.
Dedicating this OS to my drakulla aks(kingofme) and my parents as jun6th is their marriage day wish them guys
"HAPPY MARRIAGE DAY (pelliroju subhakankshalu)" amma and dady
And special thanks to my sam who became an English teacher of mine for this OS
I don't know how it came it was my first ever OS in my life and that too I was dedicating to my drakulla and my parents now you all can sense how much happy I am.
Ctistism, stones, bashing and appreciation everything welcome
Do leave me your views and comments
With love pooj
Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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MY 1ST OS

My Honey Bee
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SECOND OS

KAAM KARNA MANA HAI 😆

OFFICE MAI😳




Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovelyyy
poo n wish uncle n aunty happy anniversary frm my side
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww.! Sucha cute OS dear.! Loved it...
Maaneet and their honey bee love was too adorable.!
Finally they are together.! 😊

Story chala bagundi.! 😉 ( I am assuming u know Telugu after reading the Telugu wishes written above 😊 )

Keep up the good work 😊
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Beautiful cute sa os
Really liked it
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Awesum and lovely os. Nice concept.
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lovely os di...
i really liked his name 'honey bee' for her
very different and very cute
he fell for her in the first sight itself
and same was with her too
and maan bina dekhe hi shaadi se mana kar diya ufff
if they wouldnt have cleared it... khurana;s and handa's would have seen a war between them lol
but i loved it
very cute os
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Superb part yar...anyways im rufia...😳dis part is fab yar...👏
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the update was sweet as honey yaar..wonderfull,,,keep writing..

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