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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing yaar...i love their fight... virat was so strong...continue soon thanks for the pm
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wow! lina updated!!! 😛n thanks for dis 2 beautiful updates!! dat garden lizard part was super cute! n virat's dialogue! dis is wat I love abt ur writing da romance is so subtle n it makes me go all awww!😳 n virman convo in da next part was just bang on! u were just too gud in dis part! superb! fab work lina n pls continue soon don't take forever to update da next part!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part : 20

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Hello… Shining girls… I haven't gone crazy to update like this. It was the part of yesterdays update. Don't get bored.. This is the last update for some days. Don't think I am disappearing. I m just giving you time to read it…

Have a cool night cuties…

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It was a dark rainy night and there was no sound in the house. I told my mom about everything. But she didn't say anything. It was almost 11.00 in the night, he still hadn't been home. And his phone was out of reach. So I started to worry about him. I sat on the sofa, staring at the clock for some time. But everything in the room started to irritate me. I even called to his granddad, but he told me that Virat wasn't there. I knew that something was wrong. People say that "It's not easy to estimate the depth of your feelings for the one you love, until they disappear from your life". I finally understood what it means. I finally had decided to find him. But where to start… I didn't know anything about him. His friends, his favorite places in the city… I went to his office, but he wasn't there either. I searched some random places in the city. But no use….

There was a thin rain falling and the streets were gleaming. The wind that night felt like sharp knives cutting into me. So cold that even my bones hurt. Love might be a terrible thing. I lost my mind and ran madly up the streets, searching for him everywhere. Sometimes I even retraced my steps unknowingly, and realized I was alone on the strange roads. When I lost all my strength then I suddenly remembered about the beach house. Once he told me that, whenever he was sad or happy he used to go there. With a blind confidence I went there. But I felt like I went to a place where I shouldn't be at. I searched here and there, but the doors were closed. There weren't any lights. So I removed my slippers and walked pensively along the slippery sidewalks. Luckily rain had stopped. And the sky was covered with white clouds which provided enough light to see the things.

I went to the beach searching for him, for my relief I saw him there. He sat on the stone bench looking to the ground. I looked at him keenly, conforming my vision that I had discovered him. Seeing him there like that, a deep pain took hold of me. He looked so depressed. I went slowly forward in his direction. At last he sensed me and looked up….

Instead of saying something I stood still and stared at him for a minute. Before I get angry I wanted to confirm that he was fine. After a moment of silence I spoke at once…..

"If you want to disappear then do it forever. Don't make people worry about you like this. I m…"

Suddenly I felt stunned. In a blink he stood up from the bench, clasped me very close, with one arm against my back and another on my cheek and started to kiss me on the lips. At first I trembled and twitched and unable to grasp that unexpected shock, I parted my lips lightly and my eyes wide open to him. I actually didn't know how to react in that situation. I lifted my hands impulsively and put around him as I pressed my fingers deeply into him, feeling a slight fear. After a few seconds when things slowly came to me, it roused a warmth in me. I slowly adjusted myself and slowly lifted my feet to his height… I didn't kiss him back and I didn't stop him either. . He kissed me passionately like it was the only thing he wanted so much in the world. After a few minutes he slowly drew his head back and looked at me intensely. But I remained standing at the same spot, unable to turn my eyes from him. He was half drenched in rain. I smelled a light radius perfume from him which made me feel intoxicated. With his sturdy, graceful figure and messy hair; he looked more mysteriously desirable than ever. In the background, the wind was moaning steadily, making the whole atmosphere gentle and thrilling. I thought these things were limited to dramas. Whenever our favorite couple lips meet for the first time, we feel a level of excitement. But in reality it was like a delicious dream more fascinating than any other thing.

First kisses are wondrous things. When we met for the first time, he kissed me on my lips lightly. But the feeling at that time was different than love or hate. Technically it was my second kiss. But according to 'Dictionary of kisses' it was my first kiss. That kiss after the rain made me feel different. He kissed me for the first time in the darkness where I could not see him but only feel him. For the first time in my life I had the pleasure of giving up to a man. It was a strange stimulant. It carried a divine touch which would shine on us forever. Everyone says that "Some things are beyond the power of words". May be they were talking about situations like this.

When I came out of the trance, I quickly composed myself.

"What …" I cleared my throat at once and started speaking but…

"Don't be shocked. This is the natural result of what you have done to me. If you ever talk such nonsense, I will kiss you again" he said in a peremptory voice. Did you hear that? Natural result… What an absurd kissing explanation.. If it was a punishment then I was elated with that divine punishment.

I didn't know what to say. I at once became awkward with the earlier incident. So usually I was silent. Seeing me calm, he continued…

"Are you searching for me?" he asked me authoritatively. He wasn't awkward at all. And acted so simply as if there was nothing to feel awkward. He might have kissed so many girls. Don't you think?

"If you know that then why did you disappear" I demanded coldly.

"Are you worried about me?" he re-questioned me.

"Don't answer a question with another question" I shouted in a low voice. All this while he made me worry. Now he did not even answer me.

He glared at me a while. At the same instant seeing me hurt, his eyes grew gentle and soft.

"You know you are like every other girl when you are in love" he commented in a detached and dreamy voice.

"Who said I m in love" I denied instantly.

"Me" he answered softly.

"Don't talk nonsense. Otherwise…" I was intended to threaten him but he cut me off.

"You will kiss me. Right!!" he finished the sentence. For once I felt oddly shy as I quickly turned my head aside.

"If you ever want to disappear then first let me know where you are going. So that I can find you easily" I said coolly, still looking at the other side.

"If you are so much worried about me then why did you hurt me in the first place" he asked me in a low and intense voice which made me turn my eyes to him. There was a faint shine on his face with the half elated expression.

"Because I have a frozen heart" I replied honestly.

"How much temperature do you need to melt it?" he questioned me. But it sounded like he was mocking me. So I chose not to reply to that question.

"No problem… I will figure it out myself" he said casually.

"Are you still sad?" I asked him as I looked at him with flashing eyes. Cause I couldn't read his expression. But nothing came as a reply so I added again "If you are still sad then there is no reason for my existence here".

"If you don't want me to be sad then keep me entertained. Right now you are boring" he said in a soft voice and had an irritated expression.

"Boring!!" I repeated after him.

"You must have seen romantic movies na. At such times heroine rushes over in slow motion to hug the hero. Don't you know that?" he explained the meaning of boring. Such an actor he was!!

"You are watching so many movies. That is why you are…" I thought of giving him some lecture but he didn't let me finish it.

"I don't have to watch movies. You are enough to make me feel romantic" he said as he came closer to me, slightly leaned over me, and started caressing my cheeks. He touched me gently like he was checking the softness and fragility of my skin.

"Cheesy!!" I smiled.

"I m sorry" he said gently. The honesty of his words which seemed to come from his heart, soothed me and melted me instantly.

"Is it because you have made me feel guilty for too long?" I remarked.

"May be" he replied.

"I m also sorry" I confessed finally which I wanted to say from the day I met him. Don't think I've lost my pride to say this. The fact is 'you need pride to throw away your pride'.

"Is it because you keep rejecting me?" he remarked this time.

"May be" I replied.

"You missed me. Didn't you?" he exclaimed it amusingly as he distanced himself a bit from me.

"Did I say like that" I tried to deny it.

"You are about to say it" he guessed.

"Let's go home. Mom is waiting for you" I informed as I looked at him half tremulously. As long he was close to me I didn't feel the cold. But when he distanced I started to tremble. Ahh… He was a person who can make me warm even in the cold breeze.

"Mom is waiting for me.. It sounds awkward. Do you have any other reason for me to go home with you?" his endless demands started here.

"If you need a reason then you better stay here" I said and started walking to the car, unable to bear the wind.

"Find your humanity Manvi" I heard him shouting. In a split second he erased the distance between us. He was fast cause he has long legs.

"Aren't you tired of chasing me?" I asked him proudly.

"May be I was born to love you. Therefore, my life clings to you" he answered. These words sounded like a quote from a romantic poem which made me feel special for a moment.

"I heard this line somewhere" I shot at him. I didn't know from where he got that line. I just wanted to tease him.. You know 'why should boys have all the fun"…

"Then I copied it from there" he shot back at me. He never let me win in any of the arguments. When we about to reach my car, he caught my hand suddenly and took me with him to his car.

"My car…" I faltered.

"Can't you just give me a chance to drop you at the office tomorrow?" he said as a sort of request.

"You never let go of any chance huh!!" I commented softly.

"Because chances are rare" he said as he opened the car door for me and we both adjusted in his car. Because of todays incidents or whatever I didn't know. When we came into the light I started staring at him.

"Why are you looking at me like that?" he questioned which made me shift my gaze. I was embarrassed for a while.

"Cause you are too nice" I covered my embarrassment.

"So" he demanded a clarification as he imperceptibly raised his eyebrows in confusion.

"I heard that nice men are dangerous" I clarified

"They are. So you better stay with me. Otherwise I can't protect you from myself" he warned me. There was no such word called 'offense' in his dictionary I guess.

"Looking at it in another way, It is better for me to find another 'not so nice' man. Don't you think?" I said as I shifted my gaze to the window, pretended to look at the moving objects.

"That's difficult. Because you are too twisted. In this world 99% men can't match up with you" he mocked me.

"What if I find one from the remaining 1%" I re-questioned him.

"I will make it impossible for you to do it" he threatened me. He wasn't childishly jealous. But the way he shows his jealousy through his confidence was interesting.

"You are really dangerous then" I said with a smile as I shifted my eyes on him.

"For you.. I m" he also replied with a smile.

From all the relationships of the humans…. A couple who shares a destiny together is special. There is a special charm about it. They tease and they support, they hurt and they embrace, and they fight and they make up… A relationship as beautiful as the seasons. Like every season brings a fresh air, every phase between a couple brings fresh memories. If it must for a human to have memories, then good memories are better than bad one's. In Virat's case from the day one, I started to control everything. But at the end I came to believe that 'No matter how desperately you try to control it, things that are meant to happen will eventually happen'…. If you can't avoid it then just enjoy it…

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Be Happy..

Lina..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Be happy???? How do expect me to be happy when u end the chapter like that???? R u kidding I'm so mad...:p

BUT omg let me pinch myself first... Back to back updateees in a week?? Lina being generous to us??? Lottery lage hai??? Whateva the reason is I LOVEEE THIS LINAAA!!!! I want update every single day now.. Greedy much .. I don't careee I loveee fake fianc way too much...

U will be my first n last writer whom I won't say MAKE MY BOY A BAD BOY cuz this virat don't need anything else he is perfect the way he is ... Up to the mark... Special character evaaa n I want him aliveee!!! Can u make him aliveee plzz?? Lol crazy much? Too bad this story makes me crazyyy alwaysss!!

Ok coming back o the critic.. Let me breath first... Holy smoke "DEFEAT" doesn't exist in this vadhera 's dictionary... I LOVEEE IT!!!

Begin with the kisss <3 <3 manvi's eyes was wide open n my mouth was open I re read that line jst to make sure I didn't read wrong lolol!
U know I always wanted the main lead to do like this n thadaaa u just gave me the scene.. Eeekksss thank u!!!!

U r a good soul aren't u??? Like for real... I thought manvi gonna slap him or do blah blah BUT NO she was okey with it n didn't shy much!!!
Which makes ur story reach into an extraordinary level.. She is accepting the love indirectly...
After the kisss te dialogs literary took my breath away... I put both of my hands on my cheeks n was saying "haiii... Give me this viraaat plzzz! Oh boy he is sooo sweet n smart"

LINA tell me honestly that it's not fictional but real.. Haha god u r such a talented person.. May god bless u!!!

---->. He kissed me for the first time in the darkness where I could not see him but only feel him. For the first time in my life I had the pleasure of giving up to a man. It was a strange stimulant. It carried a divine touch which would shine on us forever. Everyone says that "Some things are beyond the power of words". May be they were talking about situations like this.


PURE ESSENCE of how love sud be... Feel it live it n cherish it!!!!


------->"Don't be shocked. This is the natural result of what you have done to me. If you ever talk such nonsense, I will kiss you again" he said in a peremptory voice. Did you hear that? Natural result… What an absurd kissing explanation.. If it was a punishment then I was elated with that divine punishment.


IF THIS IS A NATURAL reaction then what will he do when she accepts his love??? Can sense the boundless amount of joy n te screams too ;) I was chanting "I want another kisss ...once more plzzz" habaha Wat to do dil mange more


------->. "Don't talk nonsense. Otherwise…" I was intended to threaten him but he cut me off.
"You will kiss me. Right!!" he finished the sentence. For once I felt oddly shy as I quickly turned my head aside.


I DON'T want manvi to accept the love so soon.. Call me greedy, mean or stone heart but she can't accept untill I have seen the craziness in his eyes n action!'n. want him to go above n beyond to cherish that love for life time! Don't make it easy after all u don't get stuff for free! U gotta earn it.. N I'm willing to wait for the day.. Idk about others but I don't want her to accept so soon lolol


------>. "Because I have a frozen heart" I replied honestly.
"How much temperature do you need to melt it?" he questioned me. But it sounded like he was mocking me. So I chose not to reply to that question.

MY TEMPERATURE is dropping.. Heart jump from the chest n doing Gangnam styleee!!! Good gosh y u r making him sooo perfecttt??? But I love it don't change him


-------->"You must have seen romantic movies na. At such times heroine rushes over in slow motion to hug the hero. Don't you know that?" he explained the meaning of boring. Such an actor he was!!


FLIRTINg openly?? Hahaha naughty boy... Want manvi to kiss him once n blow off his heart :p can I get that scene??


----------->"May be I was born to love you. Therefore, my life clings to you" he answered. These words sounded like a quote from a romantic poem which made me feel special for a moment.
"I heard this line somewhere" I shot at him. I didn't know from where he got that line. I just wanted to tease him.. You know 'why should boys have all the fun"…
"Then I copied it from there" he shot back at me. He never let me win in any of the arguments. When we about to reach my car, he caught my hand suddenly and took me with him to his car.


LET me die now... His endless encounters r way too impossible to resist... Good gosh he got answer for every damn sentence she speaks <3
Plz don't change the attitude!! N his divine love ufff I always tell u to stop making him so good but in real I want him to be like that... If anyone is seeking for a good boy thn he is a perfect example!!!


Want more drama so bring back Manvi's father lol... Chessy but u can make a twist... Do anything n everything possible to continue... Cux when u end it I will be the first in line to hunt u down... :p

Anyone bring this boy alive plzzz!!!!

Saying Update soon will be a torture to u but psh who cares u r updating soon! N plzzz don't disappear... Y do I feel like u will.. Don't even dare to think about it.. Or else tch tch...

Thank u sooo much for te surprise update it was my pleasure reading it! Muaaah
Edited by Faria12345 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update with impactful dialogues ..highlights of this update is indeed the "kiss"..virat kissing her is expected but manvi not protesting or stopping him came as a "shocker"...
nw waiting for manvi to take a step forward.. by accepting n trusting virat... she should forget her past n concentrate on her present n future.. but for now she is a prisoner of her past.. waiting for nxt part..
thanks for the back to back updates❤️
Edited by roshreb - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE.
LOVED IT.
THANKS FOR PM IN ADVANCE.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...i love this virat...
you do magic with words ..i am very very busy right now..but cant stop myself from reading ..
thank you for update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous as usual. Thanks for giving us 3 updates in 3 consecutive days. Rgds.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome..!! M so happy u updated soon..Loved it..Virat kissed her ..I was shocked while reading n then re-red again to confirm if m reading it right...n the most beautiful part..Maanvi did not stop..n yes something are meant to happen..so we should stop being abdamant n accept it...Virat doesn't leave a chance to be with her or spent time with her...I simply wish she over comes her fear n starts trusting him...which isn't simple at the same time...again loved the quote.."Some things are beyond the power of words"👍🏼 Actually by each update m falling short of words..Superb Lina n Thnks for the PM..!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow aweosome update i just loved it plzzz do continue soon and thanks for the pm😊😊

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