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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: love_taarey

awesome idea dear

loved it
u should continue it
😊

thanks a lot will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: shahz

Interesting SS...plz continue.😛

thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: disha93

Lovely concept!!!!!!!! 😊

thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: .-.SaNaYa.-.

I loved the concept Hommie and Mrunmaye <3
Update soon <33333

thanks sweetie bear
will try to update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: miss_nehaFFs

Sounds really interesting, im looking forward to reading the first part!!

thanks dear :D
will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: tbp4ever

intrstng concept...
Look forward to read it
Plz pm when u update dear
N the banner it beautiful <3

thanks a lot dear
will surely gonna pm
n thanks for liking the banner as well

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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Chapter 1:-

It was a nice cloudy evening with cool breeze making the evening more loveable. A girl in a taxi was sitting by the open window of the taxi with her eyes closed and a big smile on her face as she was feeling the cool breeze that was touching her beautiful face. Her hairs were coming on her face every now and then but she was least bothered about it as she was blushing by now due to the thoughts of her last moments spend with her Maa and Pappa.

Flashback

"Taani… Taani…" an old yet clear voice come shouting in Taani's bedroom.

Taani who was admiring herself in the mirror and thinking about her someone special came out of her trance and replied with a sweet and soothing voice "ji maa, araam se pehle ap yahan baithiye" she said holding the lady from her shoulders and making her sit on her bed as maa was panting for breath.

Seeing Taani's concern maa's eyes became wet and she says while putting her hand on Taani's head "mei bohot khush naseeb ho k mujhe tujh jaisi baiti mili hai [Taani sat on the floor keeping her head on her maa's lap] tu chali jaey gi toh hamara kya hoga? [A tear rolled down from Taani's most beautiful eyes] Magar mei khush hoon k tu apne prince k pass ja rahi hai [this statement of maa made Taani blush making her go all red] tu waha ja kr meray baita ka dehaan rakhna use roz ghar ka khana khilana aur khoob sari parhai karna and na kay shaitaniyan." Saying this she holds Taani's ears and Taani takes out a fake scream which made maa leave her ear instantly thinking that her grip was too tight. Seeing her worried expression Taani couldn't hold herself and burst out laughing. Maa made an O shape and stood up to beat her up seeing her gesture Taani ran out of her room and went straight to her pappa who was reading newspaper on the chair by the balcony.

"pappa bachao" Taani screamed bringing him out of his news world and she went and sit beside him on floor putting her head on his lap and hugging him. "kya howa bacha" a concern pappa asks. "mei batati hoon yeah itni masti khor hai pata nahi apne prince ka kya haal karay gi" maa says in full on anger but of course fake one and listening to her, pappa laughed and Taani blushes by only the thought of her prince. Seeing her blush both maa and pappa smiles and he snaps his fingers in front of Taani which brought her back to them. She feels shy an awkward so runs away leaving both maa and pappa smiling at her and her prince.

Flashback Ends

Thinking the last part she again feels embarrassed and shy and puts her both palms on her beautiful face and hides it. She realizes that she is in taxi so she sits properly still blushing and starts looking out of the window. Her heartbeat was getting faster and faster with every single second that passes just with the thought that she is going close to her prince with every passing second. Suddenly the taxi stops, she looks out thinking she has reached but alas it was a traffic jam. This wait and separateness was making her impatient every minute she would look at her wrist watch and then outside to check if the traffic was cleared. She hated the traffic so bad she sat for almost 30 mins and the traffic finally was cleared. She excitedly waits for the taxi to reach at her prince palace. And at last the moment came and the taxi stops at the beautiful house. She steps out quickly making herself look presentable her heartbeats could be heard by anyone may be taxi driver could hear it too.

She slowly and nervously walks towards the Singhania mansion and rings the bell to surprise her prince. But as soon as door opens she gets surprised herself as she sees some unknown face at the door.

Taani:Ji,aap kaun??

Someone:Pehle ye batao tum kaun???

Taani:Main Taani. Aur aap??

Someone:Tumse matlab??Tum apna ye saaman leke yaha kyon aayi ho???

Taani:Vo Main

But before she could complete someone interrupted

Someone:Shayad tum galat address pe aayi ho.

Taani:Nahi Main sahi address pe aayi hoon..Mujhe singhania mansion hi aana tha.

Someone:Shayad tum

But this time Taani doesn't listen to that person and just marches in with her luggage.

Here team is having gala time except Rey as he is inside n is making coffee for everyone.

All:Ye kaun hai Vicky???

Vicky: Main bhi nahi jaanta. Kabse puch raha hoon. But she's not telling.

Taani:(in her mind)Hey Krishnaji,Ye sab log kaun hai??Aur Rey kaha hai???Shayad ye sab unke frnz honge.

Swayam:Hey,sorry to disappoint you But I think tum galat address pe aayi ho.

Taani:Nahi. Main sahi address pe hi aayi hoon

Sharon:Nahi,Kyonki yeh ghar jiska hai use hum bahut acche se jaante hai aur wo tumhe definitely nahi pehchanta.

All:Yeah.

Taani:Main sahi address pe aayi hoon Mujhe Singhania mansion hi aana tha .Waise aap sab kaun hain??

Sharon:Hey u Tum jo koi bhi ho.Who the hell are you to ask us who are we???

Taani:Main..Vo Main hoon Taani Hi (n smiles)

Swayam:Oh..Hi (smiles back)

Sharon feels jealous and gives him a glare.

Taani:Vo main actually

Nil cuts her.

Nil:Ohhh Now I understood.

All:What??

Nil:Are dekho Ta..Taani right??

Taani:Haan

Nil:Yeah. Toh guys lagta hai ise yeh misunderstanding hui hai ki yah ape tenants allowed hai..

Taani:Main. But get cuts by Bharat

Bharat:Kya be gaali kyon de raha hai???

Amar:Ale,ye gaali nahi hai. Tenant matlab vo log jo lent yaani paita dekal lehte hai

Bharat: Achha. Tabhi main sochu ki yah ape kabse koi rehne aane lag gaya..Dekh Taani,Tu na galat jagah pe aayi hai.

Vicky: Ohh. Like dat.

Taani:Meri ba… But again gets cut by Sharon.

Sharon:Ohhh I thought ki tum bhi yahi rehne wali ho.

Girls:Yeah.

Taani:Par. Meri baat toh suniye. Aap sab galat

Till then Rey enters the scene. As Taani was there Rey see's everyone's back. He keeps the tray on the table. But den he notices that something is wrong.

Rey:Guys?

Everyone turns as everyone was standing infront of Taani,she automatically gets hide behind them.

All:Haan.

Rey:Kya hua??AIse kyun khade ho??Coffee ready hai.Chalo have it

They all are about to move when they hear her saying or it shud b better known as screaming

Someone:Prince!!!

Rey:Princess??

Yeah guys it's none other than Taani.

Everyone moves and now Rey and Taani are facing each other

He is unable to believe what he is seeing.

Taani:Prince,aap mujhe bhul gaye nah???

Rey comes back to his senses.

Rey:Princess,Tum sachem yaha ho???

Everyone is hell shocked.

Now both Taani and Rey have tears in their eyes. Rey just runs and hugs her as tightly as possible. Taani also hugs him back.

Rey:I missed u so much. (Saying this he tightens his grip on Taani)

Taani:I missed u tooo.

All are hell shocked as they are not able to anticipate what's happening. Rey who never gives even a side hud to a girl outside d grp is hugging Taani willingly and that too tightly

All:(In unison)Prince????Princess????

This brings them back to real world.

Now both Taani and Rey are feeling awkward

Precap:What will be gang's reaction???How does Taani and Rey know eachother???Why is Taani at Rey's place.

Hey guys hope you all liked the first chapter. And I am really sorry for the late update wasn't feeling good and had busy schedule so couldn't write my part. But here we are with the update and now please do your part by commenting and liking and sharing your views on the update.

PMs/Scraps will be sent as the time permits 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Tahira-2013

great work 👏👏 brillaint concept and update soon 😊

thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Sonu...Taarey

Awesome concept ...
Teaser is really interesting plss updt soon

thanks dear i m glad u like it

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