~Good Girl And Bad Boy~#2 epi pg 111

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Uma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Such a sweet update, will be always bookmarked and will read it again and again...

Loved ur writing..

And loved our sweet Rishab

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LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

this was the awesomest update u have ever made 👏 sorry for the late reply but it happened coz i didn't recieved the pm 😭 i wish i could have a bf like rishab 😳 coming to ur question i don't remember anything that has ever been magical to me please update the next part soon & pm it to me 😊 ⭐️

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 34

*Madhu's POV*

"what are you doing here?" i asked once Rishab settled on my bed comfortably hugging my fluffy ywllow pooh.

"what ? are you not happy?" he asked

'of course i am happy stupid but that i mean i didn't expect" i said as a matter of fact.

"well dad had some work here and told me that he is gonna get you on the way so i thought i can't wait for you there and lied that i have got some entrance exam and tagged along with him" he shrugged casually.

"and uncle didn't doubt when you were talking about studies?" i asked shocked.

Rishab do pass in exams but it doesn't bring him in bright students' list. I wonder if he knows the difference between anode and cathode.

" i made mom do the talking for me and yeah Ranveer supported" he said.

Now uncle couldn't have gone against the two, could he?

" come on Barbie doll i have come all the way for you but you are interrogating me." He complained.

I sat near him placing my head on his shoulder and grabbed my doll from him.

" why do you have so many dolls? What are you? Five?" he asked looking around

" i don't know why but people always gift me only dolls on my birthday even now" i said

I love my birthdays though i have one more month left before i become 19.

" btw when is your birthday?" i asked curious

Oh god we have never discussed about birthdays yet. What if his birthday is over? Uff silly me they never celebrated when i was there so probably it comes after mine. Sh** that will make him younger to me.

" july 24. Why?" he asked

That can't be true. We couldn't be sharing same birthdates. That is crazy.

"are you sure?" i asked

" barbie doll its my birthday of course i am sure" he said

" You know when is my birthday?" i asked excited

"yeah july 24" he said casually.

"huh?"

Did he know that already? But he never told me that we share same birthdays. Dumbo. I pouted at him.

" Aren't we some magical couple" i asked

Rishab shook his head with a smile saying as if saying i was stupid. But i just ignored. We share same birthday how cool is that?

" whatever you say barbie doll" he said

You know what he can be the best boyfriend at times, well most of the times for that matter. Only sometimes he puts on the moron Khundra mask. I leaned and kissed his cheeks.

"you want something to eat?" i asked

" your parents will be here for lunch at 12 right?" he asked

" how did you know?" i asked shocked

Dad is returning from his business trip today and mom told me that she will pick him up and we all can have family dinner before i go back to the Khundras tomorrow morning. We generally don't do these family stuffs but strangely my parents are insisting that we eat together. So whatever it is i am fine as far as they don't fight.

" Dad told me that we are joining you for lunch at 12" he said looking at his watch " and i should go now" he added

" Dumbo you are anyway returning here so why can't you stay?" i asked.

" because dad doesn't know i am here of course. I told him i am in a college giving exam" Rishab said

How can this boy so efficiently and convincingly form lies. I mean all his planning is just wow. No one will know that he is lying. I should be careful, i guess.

" bye barbie doll anyway i ll be here in an hour " he said kissing my forehead before getting up.

" And don't forget to behave in front of my parents " i warned

"oh s*** ' he hit his hand on his head as if he forgot something.

" what?" i asked

" i am gonna meet your parents for the first time " he said

I never thought about it. Not that i am gonna introduce him as my boyfriend at least not yet. But he should impress them.

" You better impress them Rishab " i said

" of course barbie doll you know my charms " he winked.

I know that what worries me. My father hates guys like him. Now what am i going to do?

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Presently i am sitting with my father talking about my experience at the Khundras and my college. I really missed this father- daughter time together. Ah lovely smell of my mother's cooking tempted us both.

"Are the khundras always late?" my father asked looking at the clock that was nearing 1.

I smiled foolishly. What should i tell now? I can't even call Rishab. I was relieved when the door bell rang. My father greeted uncle. My father was surprised to see Rishab. He knew that khundras has three sons maybe he didn't expect their son to be someone handsome, who could tempt me least that my father knows that i am already in love with the younger Khundra.

After formal greetings we went to dining directly. I sat in between my parents while Khundra uncle sat opposite dad and Rishab opposite me. My dad and Khundra uncle were talking about business until their attention turned to Rishab.

" So what percentage are you maintaining in college?" dad asked Rishab

" 55%?" Rishab said so proud of it

My father nodded disapprovingly. He likes kids who study well. Now already he would have started hating Rishab.

"what to do Mr.Malik always sports and culturals. He never studies " uncle complained.

Wow just great.

" that is good. Kids should realize their various talents. What will happen to our future if everyone just study and do nothing else?' my mom appreciated Rishab

Now Rishab's score Dad-0, Mom-1.

"So you are not participating in national level science club meet?" my father asked.

"what meet uncle?" Rishab asked as if he is hearing the word for the first time.

Ahh i feel like shouting. I looked at Rishab with a complaining face. Rishab just shrugged.

" Aunty this mutton curry is out of the world" he praised

My mom looked so happy as she hardly receive praises for cooking.

" uncle why don't you try?" Rishab passed the bowl to my father.

" i am vegetarian" my dad said with disgust in face.

Damaged. Rishab's score Dad- -1 and mom 2. I signaled Rishab to be quiet. Its very bad if he forms a bad image.

Later after lunch. My parents and Khundra uncle were talking random stuffs and they asked me to show Rishab around the house and back garden. Thank god. We both went to the garden.

Rishab leaned on a tree and pulled me closer hugging me from back.

"is your dad always like this?" he asked

" My dad is a sweet heart its just he doesn't like kids who have no no future plans and who are not determinate enough " i said.

" whatever barbie doll. I think its true that all fathers who has beautiful daughters are wiredos " he said

" i will kill you if i use that word again " i warned pointing a finger at him.

" sorry baby" he said kissing the tip of my finger.

I turned to look at him and put my arms around his shoulders.

" What if you are not successful in future?" i asked

" so will you leave me?" he asked

"Of course for some IT guy who earns 8 lakhs per anum " i joked. Duh! We both know i would never do that.

" Don't worry barbie doll i will be the boss of your IT guy" he said

Now i am not gonna worry about that. Rishab may not be Einstein but he is tremendously talented and i trust him more than i trust myself.

After tea in the evening i packed all my stuffs as we had a flight to catch at 3 in the morning. We decided that i stay with Khundra uncle and Rishab in the hotel so that we have no trouble going to air port.

" take care princess " my dad said kissing my cheeks

" of course dad. You take care of yourself." I said

After hugging and few tears from me and my mom i sat in the car. I was happy for going back to the Khundras but then i miss my parents as well. Rishab held me closer seeing me sob. Khundra uncle took another cab leaving me and Rishab in one separate cab.

Rishab stroked my hair and kissed my forehead. I cuddled closer to him.

" Don't cry barbie doll you know i will take care of you " he said

"But you are being moron-ish at times" i complained sniffing. He chuckled.

" Next time when i talk anything stupid kiss me shutting my mouth " he said

" And what if we are in middle of a crowd?" i asked
" i don't mind " he shrugged.

" shameless " i hit his arm playfully.

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" stop bothering me " i warned Rishab who was on other side on the phone drying my hair with a towel while another is warped around me as i am just back from shower.

God he is not letting me free for even an hour. Now how am i supposed to get ready to air port.

" So what are you wearing?" he asked and i could tell he was smirking

" Shut up Moron i can't entertain your dirty talks" i scolded

" come on barbie doll i was just asking what are you wearing to Air port, i thought maybe we could wear same color. I am not responsible for your ' Batameez Dil's thoughts." He said grinning.

" I hate you" i said picking a top and jean from my bag.

"Why? Your batameez dil wants me to talk dirty" he said pretending innocent voice.

" Rishab Khundra if you are not gonna cut the call now then i ll punch your face" i warned

"you don't have any problem kissing bruised face?" he asked

" grrr SHUT UP " i literally shouted over phone before disconnecting it.

For someone who does sweet things for me he can be really irritating and annoying at times. Oh god why did you give me a Batameez boyfriend. But however he is I am falling in love with his whole package. Sighing i packed my bag. I am going back hurray!!!!!!!!

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I am just going with the flow of the story hope you like it ...

And some good news Finally next four years of my life settled I am gonna do engineering in Sri Ramakrishna college Of engineering

Everyone ask me how i get such cute romantic ideas.

well its very simple i am girl and so i very well know how any girl expect her boyfriend to react. so its just everyone's inner wish that reflects as Rishab. And also to be frank RK's character is big inspiration for the story .

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QUESTION

There may be birthday update soon in the FF. So have any ideas ? from personal experiance or you wish anything that happened in your birthday something like that.

Once when i was 15 we we stopped our car on our way to getting down from ooty mountains and cut cake there. We disturbed traffic and yeah police did come there. I don't know how but they just left us with warning. That was unforgettable birthday ever.

I seriously wish someone give me surprise birthday party but everyone here are hell bent on wasting my money and i end up giving treat. no one arranges party for me.

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REPLIES

@aakriti18 - Now you are giving tight competition to Zara by commenting first . Idea comes from heart not experience. I personally believe guys like RK were abolished from world even before Dinosaurs. Lol. I do hear some OD songs but all time fav 'what makes you beautiful'

@Zara_92 - Don't ask me where i get these ideas from. i dun't know😳

@mansiahmed- awww that sounds soo romantic... guess you have your own RK

@aDarkAngel - RK is perfect combo

@pooja1210 - Thanks

@ rita88 - thanks a lot

@ RohiDDan4ever- thanks u😆

@Clara20 - so yeah madhu falling for him. its not early right/

@ cool_sri- thanks

@bhanu_rekhag - Thanks ya

@khushi2gp - sure will PM ya. but i hardly send Pms

@ trishnawaliya - thanks

@Syed695 - Rk is sweeter than candy and cuter than teddy ...( wah wah)

@rut93 - thanks

@Janani24 - that is so sweet... your fiance seems a nice guy. i know how it feels when bro gives surprises coz my bro missed his chennai trip and gave a surprise with a cake on the eve of my b' day

@ saakhi01 - bf like rishab lots of competition here

@ zoshad3119 - thanks a lot . thats so sweet of you

@ Desire6 - Thanks. What is with you and water or rain or dam? the first thing that crossed my mind when i stood on a suicide point is ' How cool it is to jump from here?' i know i m a bit wired

@gurudrishti- thanks

@revti21 - ha thanks a lot

@zina.92 Thank ya

@memad - thank you 😆

@Jane523 - thanks 😆

@ mahira.siddiq - thanks will PM ya

@ApurvaLovesARVI - Sweet heart now you are giving complex to me your comments are one day going to be longer than my updates. Anyways sweet moments with family can never be compared to anything. trust me i know how it feels to have an awesome family and i am glad you do as well. And clas mates and friends they are like best part in your life. My friends are crazy. Once i and my frd got scoldings because she was pestering me to tell her what happened in Qubool hai the previous night but then its fine. As long as we enjoy. And to your final question I am so glad to accept to be your friend. Awesome Girl make awesome friends.😉

@ bria- thanks. ha RK is taken

@ uma88 - thanks

@ lwrimaforever - sry about Pm. i am very lazy

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Aliya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Hahahaha akriti, Zaru I'm first 😆

PT 33:
Aww it was simply amazing ❤️
I loved what Rishab did for Madhu he is such a sweetheart
I knew the moment when I read aman wants a pic that he will post it on FB.
Btw I really like Zayn Malik ❤️ he is so handsome 😳
Superb update 👍🏼

PT 34:
Rishab is really smart 😎
I really liked Rishab and Madhu's dad's convo 😆
Poor Rishab couldn't impress him 😆
The cab scene was lovely

Engineering sounds interesting. 😃 congratulations dear
On my 9th birthday after eating the cake I went out with my cousins and had a fight with girls who were 5 years older than me 🤣 🤣 but I don't think that's a good idea for the FF 😆
Last year there was a big party for my birthday😃
A firework would be awesome RISHAB & MADHU ❤️

Edited by ..Aliya.. - 13 years ago

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mansiahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

First thnx for ur reply n yea i got my own rk like in ur story not rightkamina in our serial 😉.

N update is batamiz update 😆, n his thought is right all beautiful girls has wierdo dads😆 n bros that coldwar b/n men in ourlives will be there i have my own eXperience n our boy will be our moms sweetheart n dad n bro will CBI officers infront of our guy😆.cold war for who love my girl the most😊.yeh tho chltha hai. thts cool they share same bday , my dewar n his wife they share same bdays april 18th.(newly wedded.).me n my hubby share same month jan,me n mine is on25thjan n bros 26th jan.

N dirty talks was a cherry. On top of the story😉

Madhu making scoreboard for rk was so funny on dining table

I too do such stuffs in my life when it is a serious situation i think like tht too. I told when i met my hubby n the song n all.my first thinking was when he was near to me was bandhe ka perfume hayyeee ktna acha smell hain bandha pate ya na pate i really wanna know the name of his perfume yeh chal rahi thi mere man mein😉

Awsome update yaar i love both maneet n rishbala version loved it.

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princessradhika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

nice part dear👏👏..rishabh is a genius⭐️..i mean forming such a convincing lie with this expertness is really commendable😆👏...enjoyed the dinner scene, uuh! why is madhu's father such a akdu..can't he be nice to his guests but madhu's mom is a sweetheart..finally they are going back to the kundra mansion..loved rishabh & madhu's battameez talks.😉.

do update soon..thanx for the pm ..will wait for the next part

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cool_sri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

as always awesome update...i love this rishab...he is so cute sweet smart & intelligent too...

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Kanchi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Awesome update..loved Rishabh's and his future in-laws's convo lol!!! So Rishabh impressing his MIL going to come handy hehe!! Hmm dirty badtameez talks..hehehe!! Can they get any cuter😃... Well I really loved his reply of becoming the boss of that IT guy...n Madhu thinks he doesn't have untrue plans..I can see he knows what he can do😊

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

superb part 33...i couldn't agree more with u...every gal wants bf like rishabh...update is cute as always...

1 more thing to mention..this is the only FF that has kept the interest level high throughout as i see other FFs get lil slow in the end..no offense to other writers as i love their work too n all rishbala FF/SS/OS...but this 1 particularly has kept me riveted from part 1 to 33...not a single time,i'm bored... m loving this teenage romance...

congrats for ur engg. enrollment...

Edited by memad - 13 years ago