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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
wow 10 pages r already filled with spamming of aanya nd ishita
congo guys aise hi lage raho aur di ka dimag khali kardo
jab tak update nahi milta tab tak inka dimag hi khali karo


i think aanya will behind me after seeing my congo post on this thread😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread dear
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Congrats on the new thread...

update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD👏
WAITING FOR THE UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for new thread..
waiting for next part..
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aaja waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jyada mat uchhal
thoda time lagega edit karne me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

jyada mat uchhal
thoda time lagega edit karne me





ok me going for lunch banane baad mein padoongi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-60



Geet was watching Priest and maan with a lot of confusion.Maan looked at her.then he looked at his hands which were red with the vermilion which he put in the boxes.his hands were wet that time due to the rain so the vermilion was still sticking in his nails and fingers.when the ritual of putting sindoor in the maang of brides was being performed by the grooms, Maan tooo settled Geet hair by combing them with his fingers and he unknowingly filled her maang with that sindoor.
Maan was still staring at the forehead of Geet. geet looked at Maan's red hand and and then she touched her forehead.when she brought her hand back she could see the redness on her fingers too.
Geet was horified to see that redness-Maan ye kaise hua? and she put her hand on her forehead to rub it.
Priest-nahin bitiya aisa paap mat karna.
Geet-aap aisa kyun kah rahe hain?
Priest-Ye mandir hai bitiya.aur aaj ek aisi shubh ghadi hai ki yahaan shadi karne wale jode janam janam ke rishte mein bandh gaye hain.
Geet-Par hamaari shadi thode hi hui hai.ye to galati se ho gaya.
Priest-haan,tumhaari shadi to nahin hui par bhagwaan ne ishara zaroor diya hai ki tum janam janam ke saathi ho.yahaan jo kuchh bhi hota hai ussi ki ichcha se hota hai.ham sab to uske ishare par chalta hain.
Geet-Aap shayad nahin jaante ki aaj shaam ko inki aur meri bahan ki sagaai hai.hum ek doosre se pyar zaroor karte hain par ek doosre ka saath hamaari takdeer me nahin hai.hum to bas ye kuchh pal saath me bitana chahte the issi liye chalte chalte yahaan aa gaye.
Priest-wo sab main nahin jaanta.main to bas itna jaanta hoon ki ishwar ne jo kiya hai soch samajh kar kiya hai.Wahi tumhen yahaan tak le kar aaya hai.
Geet-sahi kah rahe hain aap.Ishwar jo karta hai soch samajh kar karta hai aur shyad usko main hi nazar aati hoon apni leela dikhaane ke liye.
she was feeling like crying.
Priest-tum jo chaho socho bitiya par mujhe poora yakin hai ki ishwar yahi dikhana chahta hai ki tum ek doosre ke liye hi bane ho.
and he went to do his work
Geet tried to rub that sindoor again but Maan held her hand.
Geet-Maan why are you stopping me?tum to jaante ho na ki ye sab anjaane me hua.ye hamaari destiny nahin hai.
Maan-haan Geet main jaanta hoon ki ye anjaane me hua.that's why I m stopping you.As Priest said ki ye bhagwaan ki marzi se hua hai so let's test GOD Geet.main bhi dekhna chahta hoon ki aakhir wo chahta kya hai?Ab tak tum imtihaan deti aayi ho Geet aur tumhaare saath saath main bhi in imtihaanon se guzra hoon.But It's his turn now he said pointing at the idols of God.agar is sab mein inki marzi shamil hai to inhi ko sab kuchh theek karna padega.Let's see Geet ki ye kya karte hain.
tears again started to flow from her eyes-Maan ye tum kya kah rahe ho.You know na that you are going to be engaged with Sameera in few hours from now.to ye sab kyun kar rahe ho?
Maan-Yahi to dekhna hai Geet.aaj ye bhi prove ho jaayega Geet jo hota hai inki marzi se hota hai.ab humen kuchh nahin karna hai jo karenge ye karenge.In the evening every will go as it was planned.I m all set to engaged with Sameera. ab inhen decide karna hai ki inhen apni kaun si galati sudhaarni hai.Sameera se meri sagai ya phir mandir me khade ho kar mujhe anjaane me karwaaya gaya inka ye act.
Geet-But I m at loss at both ends Maan.
Maan-ye dekhna bhi ab inki responsibility hai Geet.he himself will give solution.Akhir sawal inke vajood ka hai.Inhen bhi to prove karna hain a that he exists.Let's go.
He held Geet with her shoulder and started to walk outside of the temple.rain was slowing down as it seemed that Rain came on a purpose to bring them to the temple.
they were climbing down the stairs.Geet was still crying.Maan made her sit on one step and set himself too. He wiped her tears and she leaned on his shoulder.
Maan-Geet please, hold yourself. jo hona tha wo to ho gaya. humne jaan boojh kar to kiya nahin.Par main aaj bahut khush hoon jaanti ho aaj mujhe yakin ho gaya hai ki mujh par sirf tumhara haq hai. tumhaare siwaa koi mere dil ko touch bhi nahin kar sakta.zindgi me bhale hi koi aaye ya jaaye par dil me sirf tum ho aur rahogi.
Is janm mein na sahi agle janm me sahi hum ek hokar hi rahenge.Achcha ek baat bataao agle janm mein tum mera intezaar karogi ya phir is janm ki tarah phir se koi threat dogi ki tum meri bahan se shadi karo warna main bhi tumhen chod kar chalo jaaoongi.
He tried to make her smile.She hit her with her light fist-Agle janm me agar tumne mujhse pahle kisi aur ka proposal except kiya to main tumhaara murder kar doongi.
Maan too laughed at this-meri itni himmat kahaan ki main ek hi galati ko repeat karoon. mujhe apna murder nahin karwana.
He too was finding it difficult to hold himself and he felt some tears on his cheeks too.
He turned her to make her look at him.Geet too saw tears in his eyes and she wiped them with her fingers and shook her head to stop him from crying.she wiped her tears too.

Tum mile,dil khile
aur jeene ko kya chahiye
Haan tum mile,dil khile
aur jeene ko kya chahiye

Maan smiled and he helped her to get up and they again started to come down from stairs.They were holding each others hand.

Na ho tu udaas tere aas paas
main rahunga zindgi bhar
Na ho tu udaas tere aas paas
main rahunga zindgi bhar

saare sansaar ka pyar
maine tujhi mein paya
Tum mile,dil khile aur
jeene ko kya chahiye

rain was still falling slowly and it was helping the vermilion to move away from her fore head slowly and slowly

Chanda tujhe hooo
dekhne ko nikla karta hai
Aaina bhi hooo
deedar ko tarsa karta hai.

tujhsa haseen
koi nahin
husn dono jahaan ka
ek tujhme simat ke aaya

Tum mile,dil khile
aur jeene ko kya chahiye
Haan tum mile,dil khile
aur jeene ko kya chahiye

They started to walk to go to the home.maan found an auto .he stopped it and both set in that.

Pyar kabhi hooo
marta nahin, hum tum marte hain
Hote hain wo hooo
log amar pyar jo karte hain.

both were silent as nothing was left to say and like they were waiting to see what was stored in for them in future. Geet was leaned on his shoulder and Maan kept her hand on her head.

Jitni ada,
utni wafa
ek nazar pyar se dekhlo
phir se zinda kar do

Auto stopped at Km.Both got down.both looked at KM. as it was the place where their future was waiting for them to be written for ever and ever.Maan gave Ramsingh two thousand rupees .1000 for the fuel and 1000 as the token of thanks.he informed him about his bike and handed over the keys.
They moved inside of the gate of KM with their hands entangled. Vermilion was completely washed away by rain.Geet was as clean now as she was before leaving the house

Tum mile,dil khile
aur jeene ko kya chahiye
Haan tum mile,dil khile
aur jeene ko kya chahiye

Morning was yet to arrive.both looked eachother before pushing the door of the house and next moment they were hugging each other tight as they were so close for the last time.Maan kissed her forehead and said-I love you Geet and will always love you.
Geet-I love you too Maan.
and they pushed the door and entered the house.everyone was still in deep sleep. Maan escorted her to her room and he kissed her hand before parting away from her.

Geet entered the room and saw Pinki in deep slumber. Geet was tired so slipped in the spread and lost in the moments which they spent together.she recalled whatever happened at temple and prayed to God for not creating much fuss in her already complicated life. she also prayed for the happy life of Maan.

Maan was too lying in her bed thinking about the same.He also recalled whatever Ram said to him long back-
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Ram Maan.You know today I felt as if that almighty is up to some thing.

Maan-what do you mean papa?

Ram-You know. mujhe aisa lagta hai ki bhagwan ne teri aur Sam ki nahin balki teri aur Geet ki jodi banaai nai.

Maan-Bhagwan bechare kya karenge jab Geet khud hi match maker ban gayi hai.Meri to samajh me nahin aata ki when she will think about herself.

Ram-mujhe lagta hai ki Geet destiny ko bhi tedhe medhe raste par chal kar manzil tak pahunchne ke liye majboor kar rahi hai. ab dekho Sam abhi shadi kar hi nahin sakti,She needs time.so i think God has given you some more time.so keep faith in God and your love.you will get it one day I m sure.

Maan-(ST)was papa right? i m very confused.i know that we are getting closer with every passing moment but how will we solve the problems which are standing in the way?I can not see Geet getting humiliated infront of any one even my family too.Pata nahin kya likha hai hamaari takdeer me
while thinkng about all this he slept as he was too tired after a long and happening day and night.

Precap-D-day starts


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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update!!!😊
waiting to see what will happen next...
hope they are destined to be together!!!
continue soon..
thanks for the pm!!!
Edited by sandymg - 12 years ago

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