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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update; all of Tanveer's deeds are out in open!

-Sona
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys! Firstly, I'm sorry I know its short! I didn't want to elaborate on the court scenes etc - too frustrated with tanveer.

I really hope it doesn't seem rushed, cuz if it does i'd be quite sad😭... but I'd like you to be honest if you feel it was a rushed ending.

Epilogue:

After all the explanation, the family rushed to the court for the hearing. Luckily there were no glitches, the recordings were accepted as proof – and no one could deny it. Tanveer tried to defend herself initially and was successful, but defending was a one-time thing. She had to give up defending herself because her stories made no sense after a point. The court had sentenced her 15 years of jail, and the child would go to the orphanage. However Zoya volunteered to adopt the child and raise it. Up until now Tanveer was seething with anger but when she saw Zoya's selfless attitude towards her child, she calmed down.

So far Tanveer had no emotional attachment to the child, but realizing that her child was her only support now – the attachment grew from nowhere. She only had a few months more with it, and then she would be all alone. She was slightly devastated and now she understood the law of karma – what goes around comes around. She had found her motivation and inspiration to be a good person. Her child would motivate her, and Zoya's selfless nature had inspired her.

While she was being taken away by the police, she apologized to Zoya and Asad for everything she had done. They both knew her apology was sincere – but there was nothing they could do about it except to forgive her and let her live through the life she created for herself.

It had been a month since the hearing and everything was well in the Khan Mansion. Aapi and Jeeju had moved to Bhopal for good – to be closer to Zoya. They lived merely ten minutes away. This way Zoya brought the two families closer, as they met for lunch every Sunday. With all the troubles gone, Dilshaad often pestered them to start their own family. Najma on the other hand, was on the verge of graduating, so Zoya kept finding guys for her. Asad and Zoya would bicker a lot about it – actually they would still bicker about every little thing. The Khan Mansion never felt normal if they were not bickering.

And this way life went on with little glitches here and there every so often. After all, this wasn't a fairy tale.

The End

I hope you guys liked it. You have been such a great audience! It's always a pleasure to write when there is appreciation of the work. And every comment did make a difference 😊

If you want to read more of my works, I still have one on-going piece of writing: FF: The Betrayal

And I will be starting a new FF very very soon! So do look out for that.

And, I wrote an OS today, so do check that out as well. OS: Promise




Edited by iaddiction - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princeegoyal

superb...jst loved it...asad is so romantic..not like in iur serial but logical..as in serial..love him..& zoay is zoya..she is such a child...yr...love her too...awesome...like ur last part(part 9) more😳


mujhe nhi pta tha..u cn write tht stuff tht wd such a grace...😳😳😳..u stumped me wd tht...love u dear..

update next & pm me

pari


hahaaha, Pari do read my next FF cuz it will be all about love - may be not like chap 9, but something along those lines :)

And thank you for the compliment ☺️

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

OMG!

Freaking awesome update.

Only if, only if, this could happen in the show, it would have been so better!

Anyways, this was a pleasure to read, and of course, wonderfully scripted.

Continue soon! :)



Thank you! ☺️

Originally posted by: AKlover101

Just read this all in one go! That was amazing! I must say you have amazing writing skills and I love reading your work! I'm just really sad that this is the second last part :( Anyways I really enjoyed reading this and can't wait for the next update so do continue soon :))[/QUOTE

Thank you! ☺️ ... and don't be sad, there are more on the way 😃


Edited by iaddiction - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved it to the core...
zoya is such a sweet heart only she can be that kind to adopt that billi's kid...
im so happy that she ended up in jail...she deserves it...😡
it is a lil bit rushed...but dont feel sad abt it...its a very good ending...👍🏼

Edited by MayurnASYA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it dear. It surely was a memorable journey..

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this adoption of tanveer's baby waala track can be actually used in the serial...great idea..
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Posted: 12 years ago
ur an awesome writer PERIOD
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome!!

Will surely miss many more moments of love :)


Do write more and pm ..love to read your writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear i m already wd tht FF...regularly studing ur updates of FF betrayal...love tht too..but abhi us mein ..i guess...part 9 jaise scene ane mein time lagega...😳...but i still be waiting..😳..love ur story yr..spcly tht epi..finally a bad person too realize tht KARMA matters at the end...

pari

Originally posted by: princeegoyal

superb...jst loved it...asad is so romantic..not like in iur serial but logical..as in serial..love him..& zoay is zoya..she is such a child...yr...love her too...awesome...like ur last part(part 9) more😳


mujhe nhi pta tha..u cn write tht stuff tht wd such a grace...😳😳😳..u stumped me wd tht...love u dear..

update next & pm me

pari


hahaaha, Pari do read my next FF cuz it will be all about love - may be not like chap 9, but something along those lines :)

And thank you for the compliment ☺️


Edited by princeegoyal - 12 years ago

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