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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Wow what a lovely, sweet and different story Vishu 👏


Read all chapters in one sitting and enjoyed everyone of them 😳

Love this character of Yash, he's so different, naughty to the core 😆

And the tiff between Yash and Aarti 😆

Can't wait for the next updates.


Vishu (if you don't mind ) a small suggestion, if possible please put a index of all chapters in the first page, as it'll make it easier (for new and all existing ) readers to search for the next chapters. Cause I had to go through all pages to search for chapters. I hope you don't mind my suggestion 😊

First of All Sorry 4 the inconvenience caused in searching chapters...
😛Thanks A Lot Nikki 4 ur Lovely Comments😊
😃Thank u For Ur Suggestion Too Nikki!!!!😳
😳I'll Do as U Say!!!!😳
😛& Thank u 4 Giving Correct Suggestion @ correct time!!!!😃
Edited by yashuaarthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
😊Chapter-5😊
(Next day- Yash Gets Ready & Comes Out Of The House & Talks With His Parents Who Were In The Frontyard)
Yash- My Ma, I'm Leaving...
G3- Bye Yash, Take care,
Today Even Pls Don't go 4 Fighting with anyone...
Yash- I'll Try Mom...
Say Bye To Dad Too That I Said him...
SP- I'm Here Yash...
Yash- No,Dad I Thought U Was Having A Bath...
SP- Yash, Am I A Baby To Take Bath In a Bathroom 4 A long Time?
G3- Ok, U Leave Yash...
He, must Go To college nah????
SP- Ok Yash ,Bye or ur mamma will cut my Breakfast...
Yash- Ok, dad bye...
Ma, i 4got 1 person!!!!
Where Is Arpita MAdam????
G3- Yash,
She got up in the morning & Went 2 pickup Aarthi!!!!
Yash- Early in The morning Even she went to chat with that JKR Aarthi?
SP- Yash,
1 Small Request my son...
Yash- What Dad????
SP- Pls,
As ur mom Said I Didn't say u 2 fight with anyone but my request is Pls, in the morning even pls don't start fighting nah????
Yash- Yes, dad ur Wish My duty!!!!
SP- That's my Boy!!!!
G3- Both Son & Father continue ur gossips later..
& Now,
Yash. Pls Go 2 ur college...
Yash- Ok, ok, Cool Down Ma..
Bye Ma...
Bye Dad...
(While Yash Leaves His House 7 Comes 2 The Road Arpita & Aarthi Too Come there , \ Arpita & Aarthi Notices Yash but Yash doesn't Notice them)
(Yash's Neighbors Children Anch, Palak & Payal Stand In front Of Yash's Frontyard...)
Anch- Good Morning Yash!!!!
Yash- Good Morning Anch Sir!!!!
Palak- Good morning Yash!!!!
Yash- Good Morning 4 u too Palak Madam!!!!
Why r u silent partner Payal????
Did Anch do u anything????
Anch what did u do????
Anch- No, Bhaiya I didn't do anything...
Yash- Then Is It U Palak????
Palak- Nai, Bhaiya , I Didn't Do anything!!!!
Yash- Then, Payal, What Is ur Problem Partner????
Come on Cheer up Partner!!!!!!!!!
Partners(Points out Anch & Palak) Do u know My Partner's problem????
Anch & Palak- Partner, Palak Has A Poet competition 2day & She isn't ready 4 it????
What can we do????
Yash- Is this The Matter partner????
Payal- Um,,,,,,,
Yash- Ok, I'll Say u A poet...
Payal- Say Bhaiya!!!!!!!!
Yash-I'm Funny.
I am Funny
That's who I am
I'm Funny
Make U laugh & cry
I'm Funny
Do Funny Things
I'm Funny
I like To Play With Strings
I'm Funny
& I don't Care
That's What I Like To be
So Let's Be funny together

Be funny like Partner...😆
How is This Partner!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Payal- great Partner!!!!!!!!!!!!
love It Thanks a lot Bhaiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But If I 4get it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yash- If u think u'll forget say this as u walk to your school!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Payal- Thanks Bhaiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anch & Palk- Thanks bhaiya!!!!!!!!!!!!
We r so much grateful 2 u!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yash- Ok, Uncle & Aunty Now Soon Go To school or the teacher will...
(Yash & The 3 kids Laugh together & enjoys their selves While Aarthi & Arpita Watches this)
Yash- Bye Partners!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
See u In The evening!!!!!!!!!!!
Anch, Palak & Payal- ok, bye Partner!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Yash & The 3 Kids Leave from The Place)
Aarthi- Arpita, I Couldn't understand Yash!!!!!!!!!
Arpita- Why Aarthi????
Aarthi- The 1st time I Saw him in The college He was a Funny Character,
The 2nd time He Seems 2 be a flirt Character,
The 3rd time He was a fighting cock,
The 4th time he Was a Interesting Character.
& Now...
He was such a cute little baby character with those kids!!!!!!!!
To say shortly Mostly He Seems 2 Be Rama & Sometimes Ravavanan Too...
Is Yash ram or Ravanan????
Arpita-So, now u want 2 know whether Yash Is Ram Or Ravanan????
Isn't it so????
Aarthi-Yes, Arpita...
Pls, Do say me nah!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Arpita- It's Getting late 2 college.
1st we'll go 4 college & there I'll say u about Yash!!!!!
& Then U Decide whether Yash Is ram or Ravanan.
Ok, Aarthi????
Aarthi- Ok, Arpita,,,
But U must say me the story.
ok????
Arpita- of ,course.
Aarthi- Ok, come let's go...
Edited by yashuaarthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Thanks poonam di😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
wow it was sooo👏
waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Hmm sounds intersting n cool dear every body falls in love with one another

Ch1

Yash is smart chap n P n aakash could not amke it he sounds cool n aarti oh she is beautiful which even yash can resist so he said dil se tht i love you but later corrected n call her sister.. offfo

P had a nice slap wow 1st chapter me hi

Ch2

then meeting n making n yahs is so cute repeating himself n then aarya cute fight oh so nice dear love it really i can imagine hpow cute they must be looking adorable

but they cant deny the spark they felt they go on n on with ch3 really poor arpita stucked in between this two crazzzy people

n then SP uncle came n met with her future daughter in law

later in schindhiya mansion all i can read all around is aarti n y not as g3 correctly said yash she is the one ..wow CH4 is nice

really i enjoy reading you story will look forward to next one

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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
super cute update vishwa dear 🥳
yash and sp time was so sweet...

and among all the kids cute naughty interaction with yash made arthi attracted towards him na..
wow i am waiting for more parts dear...
continue soon 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
A very cute update dear...😊
luvd the cute interaction b/w yash n kids..😊
well yash is ram..😊
a very well written update.. Well done..👍🏼
luking forward for further updates dear..😊
n thanx for the pm.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Very nice loving their conversation
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anshusreeja

wow it was sooo👏

waiting for next update

😛Thank u Dear😊

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