FF: ADHURI KAHANI...(CH 31 : PAGE 124)

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Dear Kunchu,

Very nice.

The different strands are being developed apace, and of course the fact that Zaid is beginning to suspect vigilante action by this unknown 'Arjun' is the most promising track of them all. Such suspicions are, as I wrote above to Vidya,only to be expected if so many of those whom 'Arjun' skewers in his articles end up being summarily despatched to Satan.

I agree with Vidya, you have made the Shree-Liza relationship unusually natural and easy-going, without the kind of stereotyped OTT behaviour shown in the TV serial, especially between Sakshi and Arjun, which set my teeth on edge. There are dark goings on that are only hinted at here; I wonder if it is organ trafficking or medical error.

There is a lot of hidden trauma inside Shaleen caused by the awful treatment meted out to him during ragging, which has made him the reclusive and remote person he is now. It seems that only Maasa was able to reach into his heart and heal this trauma at least in part. We will soon learn how, I look forward to that.

Shyamala Aunty

hello all...

here's the next part of Adhuri Kahani...

PART 4:

Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

hi kunchu di🤗...

awesome di👏👏👏👏👏...actualy i liked the character of shaleen a lot not because of arjun...but his cool calm silent nature who has a lots of pain inside but yet happy 😃...

well why i have a gut feeling that shaleen is arjun 😕...

n liza n shree lovely bonding...something is wrong in hospital...

sam ki mind reading karte hai sab 😆...shaleen was damm good while talking with sam😆😆😆...poor sam shadi se bachana chatha hai😆😆😆...

zaid n naina have a doubt on arjun ...well that's natural...

n masa she is a lovely lady😃...i loved her a lot...😃...n loved ur adhoori dua😃...

update soon di...waiting for ur response on my blog😃...🤗 di

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

first SORRY for late commenting

awsm update kunchu

i ws desperately waitingt for this update

love dth relationship of shree nd liza

ii guess ders smthng in dat liza's hospital

continue soon

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

it was awesome update..

so Arjun works sectrely..

he wants to bring light in the society..

Liza and Shree..so sweeet

Arjun and Sam,s convo...great!!!

mind readers.:p

Loved the update..

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Awesome,mind blowing,outstanding,superb and so on

De u r superb writer

I love Sam Arjun convo by MSG

Kamina hehehehehe heh

Sam said tht sab brain read kr rhay hai hehehe

Last masa and shaa convo awesome,hrt touching

Thanx 4 pm me

Update soon

Love u de and ur work

Specially I love tht ff

Mishti

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

excellent update 👍🏼
superb 😊

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Awesome Blossom Update Kunchu di...!!!

Yeh mystery toh aur bhi interesting hote jaa rahi hai..

i m having a few guesses...

But chodo.. Mostly when I guess, uska ulta hi hota hai..

So i m gonna wait for the story to uncover.

I loved Sam and Shaleen bonding in this story...

Sam is really very cool...

Shaleen is silent.. (Its different.. Makes me curious)

Ab jaldi update kijiye...

Jaldi!!

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

nice part dear..

i like zaid n naina too

naina slowlyy gt bowld by mr. hotty

why nt..no 1 cn b savd 4m his charm...whdr its only his reports bt..its his thoughts naa

lv da way u expln his report through naina n zaid

shree liza hv a diffrnt dimnsn hr

like it

smthng dfntlyy wrong happn wid dat boy

may b whn da actual culprit of dat boy cm 4ward...dey also die like dos odr criminals

shaleen know sam soo closelyy

wtn 4 more dear

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

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846182

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Wow!!

What an amazing part Kunchu di!!👏

Loved it..😉

I loved thrillers and this one is going amazing than ever!!😃

Its good that you have put so many characters into work. What I mean is that a special place for Liza, which isnt quite seen in other stories!!👏

I loved the bond between Shaleen and Sam!!

It was so pure and good..

And the family part of the boys with their mother... It was superb..

Today we also got to know a little more of Shaleen's past...!!

Boy, he had a terrible past..

Did he kill someone? A mother?

I felt though...!!

And that hospital part... When Liza was followed and later attacked... That part freaked the hell out of me..!

Her life is in danger..

And what scares me more is that.. This FF is not like the others stories where we have ACP Arjun to bring out the criminal from his hiding and crack his skull.

And its not that everyone's life is interconnected. Normally, if any character is threatened, everyone knows and tries to fetch that person. But yaha pe, (my believe) that Shaleen in the super hero and will do right the wrong, but he is miles away with his family and he doesnt know anything..

Who will save Liza? Or any other one who is in danger later?

Oh God!!

Di... U have really scared me...

Jaldi update karo!!!

Please!!

Edited by ...Mithuz... - 12 years ago