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Posted: 12 years ago
part 4
virika
loved it
<3 <3
both are damn cute together
<3 <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg continue soon n get well soon ammu babyy
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys...i'm back with my update.Sorry for being late,my hand was injured so i was not able to type for a long time.Now here's the last update of this SS,hope u like it and thank u everyone for ur likes n comments.

PART-5
Their lives were moving on fastly,the 4 of them became good friends and enjoyed the life to the core.But viren and jeevika's feelings was unspoken.They were not sure of their relationship."Are we really good friends? Or something else?"-this is the question that haunted their minds often.Days passed on,and a period came where Viren and Jeevika had to be away due to their busy schedule.They were not able to meet as always in their meeting spot-their park,have their cute lil fights and apologies or even they hardly had time to have a lil phone conversation.Their friendship seemed to have a pause for 10 days.But their fiancee's had enough time wid them.
One day,they decided to meet after a long time,in their meeting spot.It was a breezy evening and the climate was perfect.Jeevika was seated in a bench and Viren stood leaning against the lamp-post watching the kids playing in the park.
Jeevika started to laugh.

Viren: Why r u laughing?
Jeevika: No...Before when we used to come here,we will not stop a minute chatting.But u see now,we don't even have a topic to chat with.Ridiculous hai na?
Viren: Ya...u r right Jeevs.Well...I wanted to ask u one thing.
Jeevika: Ya go ahead.
Viren: Were u happy these 10 days?
Jeevika: Wat abt u?
Viren: I asked u first.Remember?
Jeevika: Okay, so u wanna know the truth?
Viren: Only the truth.
Jeevika (stood up): Well...i was not happy Viren.Not at all...(her eyes started to tear up).
Viren looked into her eyes and cud realize her pain.
Jeevika: I donno wat happened to me...I...I...I'm not the same Jeevika now Viren.I'm sure abt it.These 10 days were the worst days of my life.I had everything with me but i missed sumthing.That 'sumthing' brought me so much of happiness long back but now its giving me only sadness Viren.You know a person in love will be happy.Even i'm in love but i'm not happy Viren.Mannan loves me a lot Viren,n i'm also in love,my heart also has love in it,but...but...that 'love' is not on Mannan.Its not on Mannan...Its...its...on u Viren...It may sound insane,but its the truth...the bitter truth,that i've lost myself to u...I realized that i can't live without u even a minute...I don't know whether Anjali is impressed by you.But i'm impressed a lot Viren...i'm impressed seeing ur affection,ur care,ur funny talks,ur silly mistakes,ur naughty behaviour n ur pure love.You know these days,rather than knowing and understanding more abt Mannan i'm starting to understand abt u more.I was confused before,but now these 10 days taught me that i'm nothing without u,i don't have a life without u...I LOVE YOU VIREN...
She started crying badly as she cudn't control herself.Viren stood still watching her.Finaaly Jeevika wiped her tears and went in front of him.
Jeevika: I've spilled out my feelings.Now its ur turn Viren.I'm ready to accept ur decision watever it is.
Viren: Well...wat do u want me to say Jeevs? U said every single word that i wanted to tell u today.But,since my heart wishes to say it by myself,here i say...
I LOVE YOU JEEVIKA...Will u be Mrs.Vadhera?
Jeevika was dumb founded.She just had tears flowing down her eyes,this time not tears of PAIN but tears of HAPPINESS.She had nothing to say,so she hugged him and Viren hugged her more tightly.They have hugged many times before as friends but this is the first one as lovers.They felt peace n love in each others hug.
Suddenly their hug n their silent feel was broken by sum clapping sound.They turned to see the biggest shock...Mannan along with Jeevika's family n Anjali along wid Viren's family were standing n clapping seeing virika.
Mannan: Finally our wait is over Anjali...
Anjali: Ya Mannan...how long these 2 took to feel their love...
Virika: Wat???? (confusingly)
Anjali: You guys thought that only u are good in planning? Huh? We too have some brain dears...
Jeevika: But how come u knew this? I mean we itself got it just today...
Mannan: But we knew it from the day we came.I guessed that u both have sumthing more than Friendship and my guess was right,when i saw Jeevika's behaviour towards me n Viren.She was the real Jeevika in front of him.And we are real only in front of the person whom we really love.So we 2 behaved accordingly to fail ur plans...
Anjali: Same thing applies to u too Viren.You both are a great pair.But don't forget,i'm ur friend frm now on...
Virika smiled.Then Viren went to his parents and so did Jeevika.
Viren: Mom...i'm sry...i...
V mom: Beta...its k there's no need of sry dear.Anjali told everything abt u n Jeevika.I'm not that much bad as u think...
Viren hugged his mom,then Jeevika too hugged her soon to be MIL.
Jeevika's parents too liked Viren and virika took their elders blessings.They thanked Mannan n Anjali for their support n in making their parents to confirm their marriage.
Mannan: K guys so i think that its gud if we take a leave now coz we don't wanna disturb the new love birds.Hai na Anjali? 😉
Anjali: Haan Mannan...u guys continue ur hugging n kissing sessions.But don't forget that u r not officially married 😆
Virika gave a death glare n laughed.All the others left,leaving virika alone.

Viren: I'm so happy Jeevs.Never thought that,our family wud accept us.
Jeevika: Ya...thanks to Mannan n Anjali...
Viren: Waise Mrs.Vadhera...as we confessed our love,y don't we approve it by a kiss? 😉
Jeevika: For ur kind information,Mr.Viren,i'm still Ms.Jeevika Choudhary n our family has already approved our love so wats the need of a kiss?
Viren: OMG!!! This is the prob of all lovers!!!!!Why the hell all girls do this to us,only if we ask a simple kiss???
Jeevika smiled.
Jeevika: Ok its so sad to see u begging like this,so just one.k??
Viren's face lit up wid happiness.He went near her,and brought her close,by her waist,they were so close that they cud feel each other's breath.Jeevika circled her hands around his neck and Viren held her waist tightly.He leaned in for a kiss.Finally their lips met.The soft n sweet 'first kiss' of their's turned out to be a passionate one.
Thus viren n jeevika made their CHOICE in choosing their partners,the right partners!!!!! 😊

~THE END~
NOTE:
Thank u frnds for ur support for this SS thru ur likes n comments.I'm so happy and thanks for encouraging my work.I'm sry if this was not upto ur expectations,coz i'm not a gud writer like others in this forum.I know this was a dumb SS but thanks for bearing with it.Finally a big thanks...luv u ppl...❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
me first me first candy i am the first to coment🤣
finally virika patch up and wat an ending!!!!!!👏
really loved the story hope u write more candy
this is ur last one month na write more and post also k😊
Edited by keertu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
akka super super superrr awesome story nd awesome ending👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
res...
# unres...
lil sis...
me no first !!!!! 😭
but atleast i m on 1st page. . 😛
lil sis...this is wht u call a dumb update...
thn i m dying to read a grt update frm u... 😉
everything is so perfect in it!!!!! 😊
loved how jeevika confessed her feeling... 😳
really sweet!!!
nd viren said i luv u jeevika.. 😳
its more thn perfect lil sis...
nd family approval...wow!!! 😃
nd the last part was awsome blossom... 😆
the kiss...it was a bliss... 😳
lil sis...
its really the best!!!!!!
plzzz sis can u write a bonous chapter fr it plzzz...for me ...lil sis!!!!!!!
i know i m asking alot but plzz...can u do this!!!!!
Edited by millee18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
y did u end d story
it ws unexpected yaar
love dis story allot
plz continue
amazing
mind blowing
wow virika r one nw
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant...
loved the story..
but sad its ended...
Loved the ending though...
Mannan n Anjali knew it all...awww...
Loved it ❤️

Write more of such stories..
they're great

Cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome story...
bt its ended 😔

why u ended it ...u r such a gud writter...
plxxx continue na 😊

the update was brilliant...
finally virika r together now...

bt i wanna to read more plxxx...

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