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common mein itna bhi Ram ko khadoos nahi dhikane wali.
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Originally posted by: sandhyasn


common mein itna bhi Ram ko khadoos nahi dhikane wali.


Hahaha thik hai.. 😆
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PART 26

Scene 77

KK expressed her wish to Priya

KK has decided to visit her hometown (Punjab). She called Priya in her room.

KK:- Priya idhar aao yahan mere paas baito.

Priya:- ji

KK:- Beta mein kuch dino ke liye apne ghar jana chahti hoon. Bahut din ho gaye rishtedaaro se mile. Meri didi bhi muje kabse bula rahi hai,socha kuch dino ke liye ho aao.

Priya:- teek hai maa;lekin aap kab nikal rahe hai???

KK:- parso

Priya:- ji maa mein sham ko office se aate hi aapki packing ke liye madad kar dungi

KK:- woh toh teek hai beta lekin meine tumhe kuch aur kehne ke liye bulaya hai

Priya:- ji maa kahiye. Kya baat karni hai

KK:-beta tum iss ghar mein bahut saari khushiyaa lekar aayi ho. Tum iss ghar ki badi bahu ho.Tum dono settle bhi ho gaye ho.abb ek hi kami hai iss ghar mein;aur woh hai bachho ko kilkaariyaaan. Mere bte Ram ke bachhe.

Priya feels embarrassed and looks down.

KK continued'..

Beta abb tumhe aur Ram ko iss baare mein sochna chahiye. Mein jaanti hoon aajkal ke bachhe career se liye planning karte hain,lekin beta tum toh apni hi company mein kaam karti ho toh isse koi problem nahi hoi chahiye.

She keeps her hand on Priya's shoulder.

Bass beta iss ghar ko bachho ki kilkaariyon se bhar do,mein tumse aur kuch nahi maagoongi.

Priya becomes upset but she promises her that she will think about it.

In the office,

Priya saw her father. She becomes surprised to see her father. Sudhir went directly into the cabin of Ram.

Priya thinks "Papa Ram se milne''''Yahan!!!!"

Ram informed in receptionist that nobody will disturbs him.

Priya goes straightly into the cabin of Ram but she was stopped by receptionist and requested her to wait outside.

Sudhir and Ram talk for a long time. Priya becomes worried.

After some time Sudhir came out.

Priya:- Papa aap yahan????

Sudhir:- haan beta'.woh yahan se guzar raha tha toh socha tum dono se mill loo.

Priya not believed in him but she keeps silent

Priya:- Papa yeh file'..kya hai isme???

Sudhir:- woh kuch nahi beta'..yeh chodo aur batao tum kaisi ho

Priya:- mein teek hoon papa

Sudhir tries to change the subject.

Sudhir:- teek hai beta mein chalta hoon.tumhari maa chintaa kar rahi hongi.

Priya understand something is suspicious.

She thinks" Papa mujse kuch chupa rahe hai.meine unke chehre par pareshaani dekhi mein Ram se baat karti hoon"

She went into his cabin

Ram:- aao Priya baito.

Priya:- Ram'.Papa kyun aaye the????

Ram:- Papa'..arre Papa ko kuch property ke baare mein poochna tha, toh unhe mujse salah leni thi'issliye

Priya:- lekin'

Ram:- arre lekin wekin chodo aur yeh batao aaj subah Maa se kya baat ho rahi thi

(And gets up from his seat and sits near to her on the table). Common priya kya hua bolo na Maa tumse kya baat kar rahi thi.

Priya:- kuch nahi Maa kal jaa rahi hai toh muje kuch zimmedaariyan de rahi thi.

Ram:- achha'.bola honga na ki unke bte ki achhe tarah se khayal rakne ko

(And bends towards her to kiss).

Priya;- ji nahi maa ne eisa kuch nahi kaha

Ram:- achha toh kya kaha (and puts her hair flicks behind and starts nuzzling her neck)

Priya:- Ram please chodo koi aa jaayega

Ram:- pehle batao kya kaha.

Priya:- Ram please darwaza lock nahi hai

Ram:- koi nahi aayega!!! Sab ko pata hai jab ram-priya andar ho toh nahi aana chahiye.

Priya is worried and keep looking at the door.

Ram gets up and pushes her towards the door.

Priya:- Ram'..yeh kya hai.

Ram pins her towards the door and bolt it.

Ram:- ab koi nahi aayega.

(he unpin her pallu and put her pallu down)

Ram:- jaldi bolo Priya'nahi toh tum janti ho ki mein kya karne wala hoon.

Priya tries to stop him but he is strong and holds her both hands against the wall. Ram runs his fingers over her waist. Ram kiss on her forehead, then cheeks. He bends down and giving wet kisses in between her cleavage. Priya is feeling hard and closes her eyes. Ram looks at her expression and smiles'He slowly touches her lips with him. He puts his hand back and starts unhook the blouse. Priya open her eyes and with expression questioning him what he is doing. Ram broke the kiss and whisper in her ear "nothing dear just feeling u more and now don't disturbs me let me finish this completely".

Priya:- achha mein batati hoon Maa ne mujse kya kaha.

Ram:- bata dena'lekin '.abhi muje kuch aur karne ka mann kar raha hai'

Priya:- Ram' aap bilkul naughty hote jaa rahe ho

(and correcting her sari)

Ram:- Rehne do Priya'.

He removed her sari and carries her and laid it properly on the sofa. He removed his tie and take off his shirt. She felt his body over her. Both are looking into each other; Ram removed her blouse, she closes her eyes, she is breathing heavily. Both are kissing very passionately.

There kiss is broken by knock on the door. It was Neha who is screaming her voice calling his name. Both separates and said "Neha!!!"

Ram:- yeh pagal kyun aayi hai.pata hai meri life mein chun chun ke kuch log diye hai jo hamesha wrong time par knock karte hai.

Priya laugh and said" jaldi utho aur meri help karo'

Both wear their dress; Ram helps her hook her blouse.

Priya:- tie toh pehen lo jaldi

Ram:- mein nahi'. waise bhi uuse joh bhi samajna hai samajne do.mein nahi darta.

Ram opens the door.

Neha:-cabin lock kyun kiya hai'.kya kar rahe the.

Then she saw Neha inside Priya correcting her sari.

Neha:- ohh'ab samji. Priya!!!!! Koi time wyme hai ya nahi'.office hai dear'Ram toh crazy hai par tum tho rok sakti ho'..

Raya blushed.

Neha:- Priya!!!!...tumhari dori khuli hai'

Priya suddenly takes her hand back

Neha laugh and said'"Mazak kar rahi thi'tumhare blouse mein dori nahi hai. waise tumdono ko dhekkar lagta hai ki abb tumhe family ke baare mein soch lena chahiye.

Priya:- NEHA'.!!!!! And looks at her.

Neha:- No, I am serious'muje lagta hai tum dono ready ho family ke liye. Kyun Ram????

Ram:- (irritatingly) Neha yahan kaise???

Neha:- hey Priya!!!...yeh fatty itne gusse mein kyun hai''achha achha mein vikram se milne aayi thi'uske saat Rahul ke college jana hai toh Vikram ne hi kaha tha ki mein office aa jau,ek saat chalte hai.

Meantime Vikram also enters'

Vikram:- Neha'chale..Ram'kaam jaldi ho gaya toh aa jaaunga

Neha:- Ram carry ur remaining work'..Priya!!! bye''

Vikram:- konsa kaam; Neha:- kuch nahi chalo'.

Scene 78

Priya is suspicious and everybody asking her about her pregnancy

Next day KK is ready to go. Priya help her doing all her packing. Priya hugs KK.

Ram:- Maa jaldi chaliye, flight ka time ho gaya hai

KK:- Ram'. Meri beti ka khayal rakna aur uuse kuch nahi hone dena'.Priya'.jo baat meine tumse kahi usspar zara dhyan dena.

Priya:- ji Maa.

Ram and Priya drop her to the airport. Priya insist Ram that she wanted to meet her parents. Ram drop Priya to her house and went to office.

Both Shipra and Priya hugs

Priya:- maa papa kahan hai

Shipra:- papa bahar gaye hai aate hi honge. Tu baith mein tere liye chai banati hoon.

Priya:- maa'adrak wali''.

Shipra:- pata hai pata hai

Priya:- achha maa Papa kal Ram se milne kyun aaye the, unke paas ek file bhi thi.

Shipra (Avoiding her):- nahi muje toh iss baare mein kuch nahi pata. Tu woh chod yeh bata ki aage ki kya planning hai???

Priya:- Planning??? kya matlab????

Shipra:- aare aage ka kuch socha hai ya nahi tum dono '..nahi toh eise hi chalne ka irada hai

Priya:- Maa muje kuch samaj nahi aa raha. Teek se bolo kya kehna chahti ho

Shipra:- iss ladki ka mein kya karu, kuch samajti hi nahi. Priyaaa'. Mein bachhe ki baat kar rahi hoon. Kuch socha hai ya nahi uske baare mein

Priya:- Maa'.aap bhi

Shipra:- mein bhi matlab'koi aur bhi tumse yeh sawal kiya hai kya'.kahi Ram ne toh nahi maanga tumse. Beta abb tumhari shaadi ko 4mahine se upar ho gaye hai muje lagta hai tumhe abb bachhe ke baare mein soch lena chahiye.

Priya:- Maa muje deri ho rahi hai. mein chalti hoon maa,der ho rahi hai

Shipra:- arre beta sun toh batati toh jaa

Priya:- bye maa..baat mein aati hoon. Papa se keh dena mein aayi thi

Priya is walking towards her car when her neighbor lady stops her and asked " arre Priya beta teek ho na beta aur koi kush khabri wagera"

Priya:- nahi aunty abhi nahi. Achha muje deri ho rahi hai mein chalti hoon.

Priya in the car thinks"kaise batau Maa Ram abhi bachha nahi chahte; muje ek aur baar ram se baat karni chahiye"

Priya reached office.

She saw Sudhir is coming out from office. She called her papa in his cell

Priya:- papa aap kahan ho, mein kabse aapka intezaar kar rahi thi ghar par'abhi thodi der pehle mein office ke liye nikal gayi

Sudhir looks here and there and said " beta who mein market gaya tha toh wahan mere purane dosth patel ji mil gaye the toh unse baat karte der ho gayi.

Priya:- achha papa mein baad mein aapse milti hoon. Mein phone rakti hoon.

Priya is doubted "kuch toh baat zaroor hai jo papa mujse chupa rahe hai. maa ne bhi kuch nahi bataya aur Ram mujse kuch nahi batane wale. Mein khud hi pata kar loongi.

Scene 79

Priya is pregnant

That night,

She is thinking about what Maa said to her, and then Neha and her own maa. Everybody telling her that it's time to think about family.

She blushed when she remembers Neha teasing her in the office and smile crept on her face.

Priya decided one more time she will talk to Ram and make him understand that it's time to start a family and what he is thinking is wrong and a child will brings happiness in our life and make our relationship even more stronger.

She is sitting on the bed waiting for Ram to come as he is discussing some important matter with Vikram.

Ram:- muje yeh ek dum jaldi chahiye Vikram. Mein chahta hoon ki yeh gift mein Priya ko uske birthday ke din du.

Vikram:- don't worry Ram sab ho jaayega, tu chinta matt kar, abhi Priya ke birthday ko do mahine aur hai,tab tak saari formalities ho jaayegi.

Ram:- achha mein rakta hoon nahi toh Priya ko shak ho jaayega.

Both hangs up the call.

In the room,

Priya:- ho gayi baate Vikram se

Ram:- haa ho gaya

Priya;- kis baare mein baat kar rahe the????

Ram:- ek deal ke baare mein baat kar rahe the.

Priya:- konsi deal????

Ram:- nahi tum nahi jaanti

Priya:- Ramm'.aap jhoot matt boliye; shayad aap bhool gaye hai ki mein bhi roz office aati hoon,muje kisi bhi deal ke baare mein nahi pata. Issliye aap mujse jhoot matt boliye. Mein kuch dino se dekh rahi hoon aap mujse kuch chupa rahe hai

Ram:- nahi toh Priya; mein kuch chupa nahi raha hoon''haan actually ek baat hai ek surprise hai lekin mein tumhe abhi kuch nahi bataunga.

Priya:- surprise??? Kaisi surprise!!!!!

Ram:- dear meine bola na abhi mein kuch nahi bataunga. So no more questions. Abhi hum so jaate hai.

Ram pulls her towards him and she falls on his chest and he switched off the light.

Priya thinks "Ram ka mood achha hai muje unse abhi baat kar leni chahiye".

Priya:- Rammm'.

Ram:- hmm'.

Priya:- aap pooch rahe the na ki maa mujse kya baat kar rahi thi.

Ram:- haan'batao kya kaha maa ne'.

Priya becomes silent.

Ram:- arre batao na kya kaha'chup kyun ho

Priya:- pehle aap wada kijiye ki aap gussa nahi karenge???

Ram:- arre!!!!pehle batao toh sahi''achha teek hai wada karta hoon ki mein gussa nahi karunga.

Priya:- woh actually maa chahti hai ki hame abhi family ke baare mein soch lena chahiye. Ram'..meri maa bhi yahi chahti hai'aur Neha ne bhi toh kaha ki abb hame iss baare mein soch lena chahiye''actually mein bhi'.

Ram cuts her in between'

Ram:- Priya'meine tumse pehle bhi kaha hai ki mein abhi bachha nahi chahta. Neha kya sochti hai uuse muje koi matlab nahi. Meri maa tumhari maa jo chahte hai meine uske liye mana nahi kiya'lekin abhi mein sirf tumhare saat rehna chahta hoon. Hum sochenge lekin abhi mein yeh responsibility uthne ke liye ready nahi hoon.

Priya:- lekin aapko eisa kyun lagta hai Ram ki aap yeh reposibility uthane ke liye ready nahi hai. mein hoon na aapke saat'please Ram.

Ram(In angry tone):- no, priya'.hum kahi baar iss baare mein baat kar chuke hai so mein abhi iss baare mein baat nahi karna chahta'.agar saaf saaf sunna chahti ho toh mein abhi bachha nahi chahta.

Priya is upset and not agreeing with Ram.

Priya thinks "aapne apni baat toh keh di Ram lekin mujse ek baar bhi nahi poocha ki mein kya chahti hoon, lekin meine bhi kuch faisla liya hai; afterall yeh meri bhi zindagi hai aur mera bhi haq banta hai"

Next morning,

Priya stirred from her sleep; Takes bath, get ready for office. She opens the cabinet. She saw the Pregnancy kit. She takes kit in her hand and throws it in the dustbin.

Priya pregnancy continues''

(Many people ask me that in BALH Ram likes children's very much; even I know in BALH Ram is very much exited for the junior. then, why he doesn't want children then in my FF. In this ff he is not saying he don't want children but want after sometime. So,I request please don't compare it with BALH)

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Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome and sweet updt sandy 😃
I loved it to core
but what was sudhir and ram secret I
dont know
very sad for priya
ram is not understanding her
and wow priya is preggy hain
am happy
just wish that
this pregnancy dont create distance but
increase more love btw them 😃
thanks for pm
cont soon
waiting ...
Edited by .sangs123. - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .sangs123.

awesome and sweet updt sandy 😃
I loved it to core
but what was sudhir and ram secret I
dont know
very sad for priya
ram is not understanding her
and wow priya is preggy hain
am happy
just wish that
this pregnancy dont create distance but
increase more love btw them 😃
thanks for pm
cont soon
waiting ...

thank u very much dear for comments
Priya preggy nahi hai but ho jaayegi. distance toh aayega afterall its Priya's own decision.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandhyasn


thank u very much dear for comments
Priya preggy nahi hai but ho jaayegi. distance toh aayega afterall its Priya's own decision.



oh mujhey laga woh preggy hogayi
koi baat nahi
hum tho intezaar karengey
distance thoda baadaa tho hi
agey bohut romantic hoga
kyunki jab raya dono ala rahengey
tabhi dono
kitna miss karthey pathachaltha
aur pyaar badthaa naa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .sangs123.



oh mujhey laga woh preggy hogayi
koi baat nahi
hum tho intezaar karengey
distance thoda baadaa tho hi
agey bohut romantic hoga
kyunki jab raya dono ala rahengey
tabhi dono
kitna miss karthey pathachaltha
aur pyaar badthaa naa

hehe...achha laga likha hua.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandhyasn


<div>hehe...achha laga likha hua.😊



thank u for compliment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
loved office romance
but what was sudhir and ram secret
waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon
thx 4 PM
Edited by Dsudipa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Thx for the PM.
Shaadi huai nahi logoan ko bacchoan ki padi hoti hai ..Hadh hai yaar bade log bade log..
Over excited shipra and super hyper Neha aur upar se Krishnaji . and neighbour's bhi.
hhh..

I agree with ram to take your time., get ready be prepared n have kids.. If he wants have kid after sometime it doesn't mean he do not like kids.
accha move hai.. Yeh ramji kahi bhi, kabhi bhi romancing ke liye shuru ho jaate hai kya😆😆
Whats next?
Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago

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