VIRMAN:SS HATE AND LOVE STORY Chapter 13 and Epilogue pg 64,21/9 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its great n the concept is awesm. Do om me whn u cont...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Garimavirmanksg

Its great n the concept is awesm. Do om me whn u cont...



thanx dear
and ofcourse I'll
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hiii sweet dolls'. I try to write something hope u liked it..

Happy reading


VIRMAN:SS HATE AND LOVE STORY



CHAPTER-1

It's her 2nd day in Mumbai and she read in an article that vadhera industry searching a candidate for the post of finance manager in finance department... Now Manvi knows very well what she'll do... Her first step of taking revenge is established she in all manners and after that makes his so called life damn hell... She only takes breath for making him suffer and giving him pain... Which nobody can reduce...

You just wait some more time or live your life peacefully coz in next 3 month I'm gonna make your life more than hell

Just wait and watch... What MANVI do... Manvi thought to herself

She lives in a chall which muskan and rahul arranged for her... muskan and rahul her best buddies who help her in the hours of need... Only these people calls as forever friends...

She is getting ready for her interview in Vadhera Industry.

She put black jean and white shirt simply professional look as well as looking killer like ready to kill someone' she simply awesome

She looks herself in the mirror for the last time before enter the world of WEB'

She was died 27 month ago only her heart takes breath'. Nothing else

3 year back

Jeevika: Manvi i'm selected in my campus interview and i've to move Mumbai for service. And you know what that owner of that industry is breath taking.

Manvi: so you decided to move on... I'm happy for u Jeevika but I'm gonna miss u like anything in this world... U r my World Jeevika

Jeevika: u r also my world Manvi... I'm also gonna miss u. Tears beaming in their eyes

After all they love each other and they r each other's world... Their lives surrounded by each other, what they were do without each other

But that's a life, success always want something very precious of us'.

This is a life'..

Jeevika later at evening as her train is later in the night so manvi help her in packing her stuff or neccessities

Manvi, Jeevika, Muskan and Rahul reached at railway station and bid good byee to Jeevika and give their best wishes for beginning of new life.

End

Present

Manvi locked her house and took a taxi for reaching their destination and taking first step of her revenge. In taxi she take a deep breath and closed her eyes, her minds always keeps thinking what she do, where she is wrong, why this happen with her, what sin she made that the destiny play that kind of cruelty with her.

She only knows her orphanage, their friends, and her group. She is a gals who makes smile on other face and for that she can do anything.

She lives for other than why it is all happen with her.

And she can't find the answer of this mere question.

People always says every question ain't deserve an answer or sometimes it is unanswerable...for whole lifetime

And this is happening to her, her unforgettable past makes her life miserable.

She only think about her past and try to find out what her mistake and a mistake which can't be rectified.

Basically it is life

A life which we've to live whether we want or not'.in good notes or bad

She is regularly thinking of all these things when driver put a break and suddenly Manvi eyes open with jerk'

In her thought she forgot where she is.

She comes out from the Taxi and pays his fare

Now she is standing outside the Vadhera Industry.

She took quick deep breath and does a little pray to God, to give her strength for this alien path of life... Which is unknown for her and little she did for her enemy to keep him healthy and wealthy so that she only can broke him in zillion pieces which can't be repaired again in his 7 life.

And she is ready to enter in her new office and take first steps of REVENGE

That's all for today

I know it is very short but have really very short time' so

Hit the like button

And d comment if you all liked it

It's totally my story, may be resemblance with films but it is totally my idea '..i tried my level best to convey this part to all of you

Hope it reached to all of your heart

Love you all

Jannat

Edited by jannat89 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey ya...nyc story must say...amazing start wid so much suspense...
hayee is she going to take revenge from virat...wat did he do now...again suspense I knw...so u better update soon ya...

pm me dis story as well dr...


wait wait wait... m 1st one to comment...I can't believe...lolz
Edited by sweettasi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg!! You have a new ss! Wow great work di, so proud that your finally becoming more comfortable to write
This new ff is really intriguing an i cant wait to read on... Its already filled with suspense and tension
Great work
And thanx for the pm :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start Jannat!! ⭐️ Full of suspense.. Whatever happened 27 months ago, that incident ruined Manvi's life.. Really eager to know about her past.. So Jeevika left for Mumbai 3 years back and at present Manvi is there for her revenge.. She is going to join Vadhera industries now.. Very interesting.. Looking forward to the next part.. Loved the update ❤️.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow... a new story huh...!!!😃😃
it really sounds amazing...👏👏
i loved d theme REVENGE... it sounds interesting...😉😉
so i guess manvi hs a ugly pst wid virat...😭😭
egerly waitng 4 ur frthr updates...😃😃
thanks 4 d pm dear...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmm interesting story looking forward to read it gud job👏 dear do update soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my god jannat you again with new ss
this was simply mind blowing and breath taking
and what is this yaar in this story there is also a suspense like your other ff
and from whom she wants to take revenge
does her past related with jeevika or vadhera industries
did virat do something with jeevika or something else
omg am already jumping on the result
so it's better for you yo update soon and don't kill me with this suspense ok 😳
plz cont soon
and don't forget to pm me which am sure you definately not forget
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story ...
update was really good...
waiting to know who is her enemy...might be virat...
looking forward to read more...

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