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aanchal_c

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Posted: 13 years ago

#531

finally...iss baar plz update soon..😊

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Sameera

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: teenorchid
yaaar sammmy tusssi cha gaye hooo.

Par isme koi arsh scenes nahi haiii... Bus parhai parhai jis se mai aajkal bhag rhi hu wohi tha pooore part me.

Ab exams hatam karao.
Thore exciting romantic moments lao.

Nd i thot armaan d suggest shilpa to b the assistant. ;)

but khair all in all i am glad u updated. Plz ab jaldi jaldi krna update jaaanuuu. Mehndiii aur sun leyna pe b nazre karam dalooo

Thank you Thank you🤗
ArSh scene na hone ki wajah hai!! next part mein pata lag jayegii...
Shilpa and Assistant??? kya hogaya??? Phir to Armaan ko doob k mar jana chahiye... khud itni mehnat karne k baad wahan tak pohcha aur Shilpa ko yun jhatke mein apni jagah betha deta??? impossible!!!

Ab mujhe lag raha hai ek question answer ki list banani paregi tum sab bohat confused ho !!🤔

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Sameera

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: KaShforever06
Finally Sam di... You updated..
It was awesome updates..
Yay!!! They are done with their exams..
Poor Abhi he got busted by all the students..
Armaan emotionally blackmailed Abhi to work in his company...
and I thought maybe just to solve this problem he will come back..
He misses Shilpa.. but he didn't even contact her after living...
Everything was just beautiful..
Now time for their results..
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon

yess i updated
Abhi khatam kahan hue exams???
Mauritius party itni dariya dill to hone se rah k apna nuksaan karwa k usse bole jab chahe ao jab chahe jao... to wo to ho nahi sakta😆
Yes usne Shilpa ko contact nahi kiya!! aur kyun ka answer agle part mein mil jaega...
Glad u like it😊

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Sameera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: teenorchid
meri baat nhi sunti tm

Sunn rahi hun tumhari baat!

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Sameera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#535

As soon as the students realized that paper was been set by Armaan, they started sweating...
"Isska matlab, agla paper bhi ussi ka set kiya hua hoga???" Anjali thought...
"O God!! Isiliye message kiya tha paper se pehle... warna pichle paper k time to koi msg nahi aya tha.." Shilpa huffed..
"Lekin yeh paper itna difficult nahi tha as compared to that mock paper.. mujhe nahi lagta yeh Armaan Sir ne set kiya hoga..." Samrat scratched his head.. "Lekin yeh quote wali harkat unke ilawa aur koi karta bhi to nahi hai!!!" He gave it another thought..

Almost all the students in the room were thinking same... As soon as they all got out of the examination hall, they started disussing the paper...
"Yaar!!! mein to soch bhi nahi sakta tha k unki wo Bad News yeh hogi!!" Rohn breathed deep..
"Wo to shukar hai meine Abhimanyu Sir ki baat maan ke poora paper shuru mein nahi parha.. aur yeh line end mein mujhe nazar i... warna to wahin tunn hojati!!" Sonia who was still in shock spoke out her heart...
"Lekin paper to sahi laga mujhe... itna koi khass difficult nahi tha..." Anjali interrupted..
"Lekin techniqal to tha naa... ek word bhi miss kiya to gaya poora question!!" Shilpa spoke out for the very first time..
"Anyways, jo bhi tha... Abhi Sir ko thanks kehna chahiye!! Unhi ki tip ki wajah se paper acha hogaya warna agar pehle pata chal jata ke humara examiner kaun hai to wahin faint hojate.." Tanya suggested...
"Actually!! Good Idea.. will do that.." Liking Tanya's idea everyone headed towards Abhi's office from where they got the news that he is not in the campus...
"Mein bet laga sakti hun wo bhaaga hai!!! Usse pata tha paper Armaan ne set kiya hai.. Aur issi liye usne wo tip bhi di thi humay..." Anjali folded her arms against her chest...
"O Aunty!!! Kal bhi paper hai!! And i am sure unhun ne he set kiya hoga wo bhi... So, i am getting late... i am leaving!!!" Shilpa spoke sarcastically who was hell irritated as she wanted to go home and was pulled by everyone forcelly in that good for nothing discussion...

...

"Hello Uncle!!" Abhi greeted Billy as he stepped inside his cabin...
"Ao ao... tumhara he intezaar ho raha hai!!" Billy gave him a warm smile...
"So.. Kya fuzuliaat kar k gaye hain wo uncle mauritius??" Abhi asked with a mischevious look which made Billy laugh...
Abhi did worked with Malliks in the past, so he was very well aware about their working style...
"Wo gaya nahi hai... almost bhaga hai Mauritius!!" Billy chuckled...
"Hmmm... lekin uncle!! Ek dum se kya hogaya ??? i mean bhaga hai ya jo bhi.. apne hisse ka kaam to kar k gaya hoga naa?? aur wo tha he kitne arse ke liye yahan jo usska bohat zyaada pending kaam ho??" Abhi questioned...
"Tum ek minute ruko... tumhe saari details deta hun!!" Billy smirked..
He got that idea that Abhi is not fully aware about the situation...He called Rohail inside as Rahul was out with Arjun...
"Hii!!" Rohail grinned as he saw Abhi...

"So... situation aisi hai, k hum log already 4 bade projects handle kar rahe hain!! Infacts do mein Atul bhi kaam kar raha hain aur un mein se ek Malhotra's ke saath bhi hai!!" Rohail explained..
"Jo pehla project hai!!" Billy handed Abhi a file... " Yeh mere aur Arjun ke under hai completely jisse khatam hone mein abhi ek sal baaki hai!!"
"Yeh jo doosra hai! Isse Rohail aur Atul handle kar rahe hai!! iss mein kya ho raha hai kya nahi, mujhe nahi pata... Armaan iss mein thodi bohat help kar raha tha!!" Billy handed over another file to Abhi and told him more...
"Aur yeh jo project hai!! Isse Bade papa, dad, Rahul handle kar rahe thai, Shashank uncle ke saath... Aur iss mein haath daala tha bhai ne... Aur iss mein usska jo bhi kaam tha wo khatam kar ke gaya hai so, no worries about it!!" Rohail gave some usefull information this time..
"Yeh jo akhri project hai!! Yeh poori tarah se bhai ne haath mein le liya tha and iss mein... Mein aur Rahul usse assist kar rahe thai!! So... u are needed here!!" Rohail slowly came on point...

"Sorry!! but yeh koi itna bada kaam to nahi lag raha jis hisaab se wo mujhe force kar raha tha!!" Abhi narrowd his eyes...
"Haan to.. musibatein ab tak batai kahan hain meine tumhe??" Rohail chuckled...
"Huh???" Abhi frowned...

"Iss doraan, jo tum keh rahe ho ke wo yahan tha ke kitane arse ke liye jo kuch bada impact ho uski absence ka... " Billy paused for a moment and looked at Rohail...
"As u know!! Office mein to Hitler ke naam se he jana jata hai!! kuch bhi karta hai!!" Rohail joked.. "So, yeh sochte hue ke wo khud yeh sab karne wala hai, ussne ek contract accept kiya tha! jiss pe kaam agle do maheene baad start hoga!! Yeh wohi contract hai jiske liye humay MBA qualified required honge" Rohail broke the actual news...
"OKAY!! Aur isi k liye ussne un sab ko already training bhi deni start kardi thi... aur wo offer bhi kiya tha jisse mujhe nahi lagta Shilpa ko chor ke koi bhi reject karne wala hai!!" Abhi got it slowly...
"Exactly!!" Rohail grinned...
"Ohh!!! " Abhi shook his head...
"Sirf itna he Ohhh nahi!! agay bhi hai!!" Rohail laughed... " Agay yeh k... abb hum iss contract se peeche nahi hatt sakte kyunki its really big!! company k shares aise girenge market mein k... soch hai tumhari!!" Rohail told him the real problem!!
"Aur kuch???" Abhi asked taking his glasses off...
"Aurr yeh k... Yeh jis type ka project hai!! iss mein humare pass experience almost 5% hai, jab k we need a reliable and experience person jo ya to wo khud tha... ya tum ho!!" Rohail ended...
"OMG!! Mein to chota mota kaam samjha tha!!" Abhi slapped his head as he discovered fully about the circumstances... It wasn't just a part time job, Armaan has pushed him into but a Full Time Work!! And it wasn't about a month or so... It was huge which will drag Abhi for about 2-3 years..
After alot more discussions and deatiled work, it was decided that from now on, Abhimanyu Modi will take charge of everything Armaan Mallik was involved in... The post, rights and salary Armaan was given, now got transfered to Abhi...

The week passed was hectic for the two as nothing was arranged properly... The one who used to get up early in the morning, makes coffee and prepares breakfast that was simply applying jam or butter on the toast, then wakes up the other one, gets ready and waits for the company car to pick them up...
Whole day, they spend in office, it was a bit hard and difficult to adjust with the surrounding there but they were getting used to it now... There lunch consist of few fruits or may be a dine in in some restuarant... Later, after office the same car drops them off home where they have alot to set and dinner was usually the same as breakfast or lunch...
So, now when they both got the very first weekend, they went for some shopping...
"Abay kya kya utha raha hai?? Mujhe naam bhi nahi pata in sabziyun ke..." Sid narrowed his eyes looking at the things Armaan was purchasing...
"Hahahaha!!! jab banao gay to naam bhi jaan jao gay!!" Armaan chuckled..
"Mein banoon gaa??? Dimagh sahi hai???" Sid raised his eyes...
"Nahi to kya mein banoon gaa???" Armaan raised his shoulders...
"Khareed kaun raha hai?? mein ya tum?? Mujhe to sirf maggi banana aya hai!!" Sid pulled his hands up...
"Jee Bilkul!! Pata hai mujhe!!" Armaan shook his head...
"Abay jaldi kar na... Tum to aise gocery shopping kar rahe ho jese pata nahi kitne experienced ho... Biwi khush rahe gii wese!!" Sid commented with a grin...
"Aur tumhari nahi rahegi!!" Armaan retorted back making Sid run away to look for something else or he knew the taunting session will start...

...

Looking around in search for Sid, Arnaan passed by a shop when something caught his attention and stepping backward, he stopped right infront of the huge glass wall... He looked down at the thing which wasn't so special to catch his attention but made him close his eyes and imagine how will it look on her...
"Nah!!" He opened his eyes not getting the proper image... "By the way... from which right am i going to give this to her??" He questioned himself.
The peice looked incomplete and he wasn't just able to think about anything which will go along with it... He kept on thinking for the next ten minutes and then walked inside the showroom to inquire more... The salesman showed him almost every possible thing he has which will go with that little incomplete peice but was still unable to satisfy Armaan...
"Why the hell am i wasting my time here??? jab leyna he nahi hai to phir kya suit karega aur kya nahi... isse kya farq parta hai??" He scolded himself and walked out of the showroom...
Spending almost whole day in the mall, Armaan and Sid were done with everything they needed for their survival in Mauritius from now on... Getting back home, it was time to set things on their places...
Sid knew Armaan as a workholic man but what he don't know was... that in NewYork, Armaan ever kept a servant and did all house chores by his own, he didn't knew that he knows cooking really well now... It was only Rohail and Rahul who found it out after spending few days with him there... Armaan being Armaan was enjoying seeing Sid trying to cook up something, ofcorse it was first time was him... Sid was the one making breakfast or frying frozen stuff as he thought This man even doesn't know how to make a cup of tea for himself... What amaized sid was the type of shopping Armaan was doing but then when he saw the list in his hand, he thought maybe its been preapred by Annaya or someone to tell him that they will be needing these things to setup the kitchen...
"Ufff!!!" Ajj mom khushi se pagal ho jati agar mujhe yeh sab karte dekh leyti to..." Sid commened while throwing himself on the sofa...
"Abay thuk gaya yaar!!" Armaan too fall down on another sofa...
"Huhh!!! Khane ka kuch karo ab tum... yeh roz roz ootpatang aur bahar ka kha kha ke pakk gaya hun mein!!" Sid passed and order, switiching on the T.V...
"Laaya hun na samaan!! jao banao!!" Armaan smiled inwardly..
"Dekho bhai!! Ajj se pehle meine kabhi shakal bhi nahi dekhi tumhare uss laye hue samaan ki... banana to door ki baat hai!! Aur mujhe koi cook samjha hai kya?? Roz ka naashtamein banaoon... khaana aur lunch to wese he bahar hota hai!!" Sid made a face, here was was hungry and tired and there Armaan was making fun of him...
"Khud kabhi ek cup chai bhi banai hai apne liye??? jao karo kuch abhi k liye..." Sid turned his side completely getting annoyed...
"Hahahahaha!!! Karta hun kuch!!" Armaan laughed...

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"O teri!! Yeh tumne banaya hai???" Sid almost fell down seeing the home food in front of him and that even tasted very good!
"Nahi!! Ghar walon ne courier kiya hai!!" Armaan replied sarcastically...
"Very Funny!!" Sid made a face and started eating!!
"Nautanki!! tum pehle nahi bata sakte thai k tumhe cooking ati hai??? pichle ek hafte se rull rahe hain hum!!" Sid complaint...
"Don't even think k mein roz roz khana banoon gaa... !!" Armaan warned taking a bite of his food...
"To phir mein bhi roz roz naashta banane se raha!!" Sid backfired..
"Chaloo cheez ho tum!!" Armaan comment biting his lower lip...
"Tumse to kum he hun!!" Sid grinned...

"Paper kesa gaya Shilpa??" Shashank asked sitting beside her on the swing where she was on with her last minute preparation for the next day paper...
"Mere hisaab se to bohat acha gaya!!" Shilpa smiled.. "Par examiner bohat kharus hai!! Agar mujhe pehle pata chal gaya hota k kaun hai to pakka paper ka bera gark hojana tha!!" She pouted...
"Kyun bhae?? Examiner se kya problem hogai ab??? examiner koi bhi ho... tumhe isse kya matlab??" He asked smiling at her pouted face...
"Matlab kese nahi hai?? " Shilpa frowned...
"Acha... to kaun hai examiner jis ke baare mein pata chal jata to paper ka bera gark hojana tha??" Shashank asked while having a sip of his tea...
"Wo..." Shilpa was about to blurt it out but stopped feeling a little shy...
"Wo kya?? hmm??" Shashank asked raising his eyes..
"Wo... ummm.. Arr.. Armaan Mallik!!" Atlast she spoke out his name making Shashank spit out his tea...
"Kya???" He asked with widen eyes...
"Haan! Aur wo checking ke mamle mein bohat strict hai!!" Shilpa replied looking down making a sad face...
"Hahahahaha!!! Aur yeh tum kese keh sakti ho k wohi examnier hai tum logon ka??" Shashank asked holding back his laugh...
"Kyunki paper ke end mein student ko jalaane wale quotes wohi daalte hain!!! You know?? Itna tuff paper tha, i mean itna techniqal tha ke zara sa concentration idhar udhar hota to gaya tha... usske neeche quote daal diya k..
The difference between school and life??? In school, you're taught a lesson and then given a test.
In life. you're given a test that teaches you a lesson!! " Shilpa told Shashank with an annoyed look... "Bhala bataein yeh koi baat hui???" She frowned..
"Kuch ghalat to nahi likha ussne..." Shashank laughed out loud...

"App ko hassi a rahi hai??" Shilpa passed an angry look to Shashank...

...

Lying down on the bed, he once again started thinking about the incomplete peice he saw... "Why the hell am i so interested in it??? Jab dena nahi hai... kisi bhi cheez ke saath ja nahi raha phir khareed k kya achaar daalunga??? wese bhi kaafi expensive tha wo!!" He tried to give himself some really good explanation so that his mind will stop thinking about it...

"Ek to pata nahi ab yeh neend kyun nahi arahi hai!!" He scratched his head and taking out his laptop, switched it on...
Immediately a wrinkles appeared on his forehead as he saw Rohail still online... He looked at the wall clock which was stricking 12 midnight...
"Wahan...2 baj rahe honge!!! Yeh ab tak soya kyun nahi??"Armaan thought as Rohail was an early sleeper and if he is awake, means something is wrong...

"Everything ok??? Tum abhi tak jaag rahe ho??" Armaan asked as soon as the video chat started...
"Haan! Sab theek hai!!" Rohail sounded a little low...
"Kitna theek hai, wo to awaaz bata rahi hai!!" Armaan raised an eyebrow...
"Arre bus... kaam ka thoda load hai! Abhi se to ghalti se bhi contact mat karna... warna joote lagaye gaa tumhe!!" Rohail tried a weak attempt to change the topic...
"Wo mujhe pata hai!! Aur yeh bhi k uske join karne ke baad kaam ka itna tension nahi hoga!! Plus kaam ka tension ho, tab bhi tum time pe sote ho beshak jaldi uth jao!! So, stop changing the topic and tell me what is it??" He narrowed his eyes...
"Arre kuch nahi hai!! kya hogaya??? detective bante ja rahe ho!!" Rohail giggled lightly...

"Dekho kuch to bohat badi garbar hai! i can sense that!! Tum share nahi karna chahte... wo alag baat hai!" Armaan was still on his point...
"Hhh!! Kabhi kabhi ho jata hai mood kharab!! iss mein kisi baat ka hona zaroori nahi!!" Rohail tried to justify himself...

"Ahan!!" Armaan shook his head... "By the way... ghar pe sab kese hain??" He asked...

"Sab maze mein hain!!" Rohail smiled.. "And yeah!! mujhe Rahul bata raha tha k... Sid tumhare saath hai??" Rohail asked,,,

"Haan mere saath hai!! Bechara roz subha uth ke breakfast banata hai!!" Armaan laughed...
"Aur khana??" Rohail chuckled...

"Yaar ab tak to ulta pulta, kabhi bahar se, kabhi fruits yehi sab chal raha tha!!! Ab aj chutti thi to ja ke ki hai shopping, i hope se hojayega sab within 2-3 days..." He replied...

"Mein batata hun kya set hoga?? Tumhari hitler giri jaari rahegi office mein, aur ghar a ke wo tumhe jharegaa!!" Rohail giggled... Armaan can see Rohail coming out of his bad mood...
"Office to alag cheez hai yaar!! usko to chordo... Hopefully within a week or two yahan gadi mil jayegi mujhe!! Phir mujhe lagay gaa ke haan!! Ab sab set hai!!" Armaan grinned...

"Haan!! Gadi ke bagair to you are helpless i know!!" Rohail laughed...
"So? Engagement pe wapsi pakki haina??" Rohail winked at him...

"Agar hogi... to zaroor!!" Armaan chuckled...
"Matlab??" Roahil frowned...
"Matlab??? khud he pata lag jayega tumhe kuch dinow mein!!" He smirked...
"Hahahaha!! Acha ab mujhe neend a rahi hai!! so let me go to sleep!! " Rohail told him with heavy eyes... He was normal now..
"Chalo... Good Night!!" Armaan smiled and ended the conversation...

Putting his laptop aside, he closed his eyes and drifted off to sleep for another hectic day...

The Next Paper was much more difficult than anyones imagination... There wasn't any quote in the end today but the questions themselves were shouting "Mujhe Armaan Mallik ne banaya hai!"

"Hell yaar!! Yeh kesa paper bana ke diya hai??? fail karna tha to pehle he bata dete..." Shilpa cursed him under her breath...
"Huhhh!! Beta! Passing marks uthao... aur nikal lo!!" She advised herself and once again started reading the paper...
"Ab mujhepata hai ke iss paper mein kuch acha to hona nahi hai!! bura he bura hoga... to araam se solve karna chahiye naa!!" Shilpa told herself sarcastically and just with a click, all the exam pressure from her head went aside somewhere... "Unhi ki tarah se solve karna try karte hain!!" With a sarcastic smile on her face, she actually started playing with her exam paper... Instead on the whole scenerio, she started reading out the questions first like Armaan used to do while teaching them... He first read out the questions and then reads the whole scenerio...
"Wow!! part a aur b ka scenerio se talluk he nahi!! Simple definition!!" She mentally patted herself as if she has acheived something really big and started solving it...

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"Yeh kya bakwaas hai???" Anjali gritted her teeth... "Yeh chahta kya hai humse??" She soliloquized.. Her eyes travelled around the whole hall to see what other's reactions are... She saw samrat busy with the calculator... Nitin glaring at the exam paper, Sonia busy in writing and almost same actions by others...
The thing that made her frown was Shilpa's facial expressions... Sometimes she is clapping silently. sometimes making faces, sometime writing down something with a sarcastic smile plastered on her face...
"Bechari!! Sadme se pagal hogai hai shayad!!" Anjali thought and once again brought all her concentration towards her paper...

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"Shilpa! tum kar kya rahi thi??" Anjali thought only she noticed this but she was wrong... The whole class was asking Shilpa about her weird actions now...
"Kya kar rahi thi???" Shilpa asked innocently at this same question from everyone...
"The way you were making faces, clapping and patting yourself... i mean what was that??" Tanya questioned...
"Wo... wo actually yeh to pata tha k paper haath se gaya!! so i started the way he used to make us solve in class aur mein phir i don't know what happend to me? i started playing with the questions and luckily poora paper solve hogaya!!" Shilpa giggled...
"Weird!!" Anjali blinked her eyes...
"Whatever!! Paper khatam!!" Shilpa jumped with joy...

Once again, it was a hectic day, Armaan and Sid were on their way back home when the passed by the same mall and Armaan's thoughts again took a turn...
"Why the hell am i thinking over it again and again!! Le k kya karunga??? Its an incomplete peice!!" He scolded himself...
"Kahan gayab hogaye???" Sid nudged him...
"Ummm.. kahin nahi!!" Armaan shook his head...
"Mobile pe message aya hai tumhare!!!" Sid informed him pointing at his mobile...
"Oh!!" Armaan looked down to see as its ring got unnoticed by him...
"Fail he karna tha to wese he bata dete... 3 ghante humara B.P low karwane ki kya zaroorat thi???" A sarcastic message from Anjali made him laugh...
"Tabeat theek hai??? ya pagal hogaye??" Sid rolled his eyes and snatched his mobile to see which Armaan gave him easily...
"Yeh kya hai???" Sid asked with narrow eyes and that is when Armaan told him the whole story...
"Hahahahaha!!!" Sid laughed out loud... "I don't believe this!! I mean yaar, your life is getting hell ineteresting and entertaining!!" Sid commented...
"Armaan Sir!!! wow!!!" Sid held his stomach...

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Feeling herself on cloud 9, Shilpa came back home almost dancing!!
"Lagat hai paper kuch zyaada he acha hogaya hai!!" Padma smiled looking at her...
"Wo to nahi pata!! lekin khatam zaroor hogaye hain!!" Shilpa giggled...
"Hmmm... To phir aj to tumhari taraf se treat milni chahiye sab ko..." Padma laughed silently seeing her change of expressions...
"Kis khushi mein??? Parhai meri, mehnt meri, paper mera aur mein treat bhi dun??" She pouted...
"Hahahahaha!! Acha thuk gai hogi... thoda sojao!! Kuch khaogi?? Padma asked...
"Nahi!! Mein Anjali ke saath bahar paani puri urra kar i hun!!! bus thoda araam karungi ab!!" Shilpa chirped and went upstairs towards her room...

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"To?? tumne kuch socha hai sagai ki tareekh ke baare mein??" Annanya asked Padma over the phone...
"Ab aj to iss ladki k papers khatam hue hain!! Dekho baat karti hun mein Shashank se..." Padma pressed her lips together...
"Hmmm... Kyunki date decide hone ke baad tayyariyun mein bhi time lagay gaa aur Armaan ko ane mein bhi..." Annanya put her thoughts forward...
"Haan yeh to hai!! cheezein tay hojaein to phir tayyari shuru ki jaye...wese mein soch rahi thi k ek din nikaal k tumhare saath shopping pe jaoon!!" Padma chirped...
"Haan yaar!! shaadi k baad kabhi mauqa he nahi mila iss tarah ghoomne phirne kaa.. Wo to agar iss tarah na takrate to shayad milna bhi nahi hota kabhi!!" Annanya too got excited with the idea of shopping together...

About 9 at night, when Shilpa saw Muskaan engrossed with her assignment, Shashank and Padma busy with some discussion and her Dadi busy with her Bua in some serial, she got down at the backward and comfortably adjusting herself on the swing along with Bella on her stomach, took out her chocolate and started munching...
"Hmmm..." She took a deep breath looking up at the sky with twinkling starts all over...
"Papers khatam!!! But how mean he is... jane k baad se hi hello bhi nahi kiya, ek sms aya to wo bhi khud k set kiye hue paper ko dene se pehle... huh!!" Shilpa huffed... "Isse pehle bhi to ek paper diya tha... usspe koi sms nahi aya... na he ajj k paper pe..." She pouted complaing as if he was listening to everything...
"Aise chale gaa mera relationship??? silent mode mein???" She thought...
"Lekin agar phone kiya bhi to mein kya baat karungi???" An opposite thought strike her...
"Aur meine wo jo gift diya tha??? pata nahi kesa laga hoga??" She soliloquized taking another bite of her chocolate...
Half an hour passed by and Shilpa was still lying down on the swing with earphones plugged in her ears allowing her to listen some romantic number with her complaning thoughts still on when the music suddenly stopped and she heard her ringtone...Still looking up at the sky at those twinkling stars, without looking at the muner or caller ID, she pressed the button and said "Hello???"
"Hi!!" She fell down from the swing with a jerk as she heard that unexpected voice...
"Meow!!!" Bella cried at this sudden fall of Shilpa which disturbed her sleep and she found herself on grass along with Shilpa...
"Huh???" Earphones went out of her ears and quickly controlling her actions, she pulled them back in her ears and muttered... "Aaa...Aap???"
"Haan mein!! But u ok naa??? mujhe kuch girne ki awaaz i thi!!" He asked...
"Haan wo... Bella achanak se khood gai thi..." She made an excuse...
"Bella???" He questioned narrowing his eyes...
"Meri billi!!" Shilpa once again got back on the swing, allowing Bella to go anywhere she wants...
"SO?? How is life??" He started...
"Pathetic!!" She blurted out at once...
"Huh???" He wasn't expecting an answer like that...
"Aapne wo papers set kiye thai naa?" She asked in a grumpy tone...
"Hahahahaha!! part of my job yaar!" He laughed.. "But yahan meine papers ke baare mein baat karne k liye bilkul phone nahi kiya hai! Aur isse pehle bhi kabhi isiliye call nahi kiya tha coz tum sirf papers k baare mein baat karti..." Before she can complain or something he was done with his explaination...
"Hehehe!!" Shilpa giggled at his answer... " So??? how is life in mauritius??" She asked with alight smile on her face...
"Hectic yaar!! jab tak gadi nahi ayegi mere haath mein, kuch nahi hosakta yahan!!" She sighed...
"Hehehehe!!! Matlab gadi nahi hai to paoon bandhe hue hain!!" She giggled...
"Ofcourse... Wahan har koi soch raha hai k mein yahan bohat maze mein hun, enjoying beaches and all... Mujhse poocho yahan aye almost ek hafte se zyaada hogay beech ki shakal nahi dekhi hai meine abhi tak!!" He shook his head making a sad face...
"Oh!! yeh to bohat bura hua!!" She laughed silently making fun of him...
"Hass lo!! Tum bhi kum nahi ho jawab dene mein... faaltu mein har koi bechari samajhta rehta hai tumhe..." He chuckled...
"Samajhta kya hai??? mein hun bechari!!" She bit her lowerlip with a mischevious smile on her face...
"Oye hoye!! Tum bechari ho??? tab to phir jo waqai bechare h ain, unhe pata nahi kya naya naam dena parega??" He snapped back at her...
"Very Funny!!" She rolled her eyes...
They kept on talking for almost another half an hour, pulling eachothers leg in a decent manner and then hung up as Armaan needed to go...

...

"Baatein hogain to khane pe ajao!!" Sid smirked looking at Armaan as he saw him ending the call...
"Chup bay!!" Armaan threw a cusion over him knowing he was making fun of him...
"Wese aj kitna bara kaam kiya tumne!! Bhabhi ko call kiya!!! yahan ane ke poore derh hafte baad!! wow!!" Sid clapped...
"To??? meri marzi jab call karun!!" He made a face while walking towards the dining table...
"Bilkul!!! Bilkul!! Tumhari he marzi pe to chalegi wo...!!" Sid thined his lips to form a sarcastic smile on his face... "Aise he chalta rehta na??? to engagement to naa hoti tumhari usse... koi aur pasand a jata aur nikal jati wo uske saath!!" Sid taunted...
"Excuse me???" Armaan raised his brow...
"Excused!!! Yhana beth k baat bhi nahi karoge... to aag lagane wale kum nahi hain!!" Sid threw Armaan's words on him...
"I know that very well!! Aur ab agar tumhari chapar chapar bund hogai ho to hum khana khaein???" He asked taking a chair...

"NO NO NO NO NO!!! Mere ghar wale pagal ho gaye hain!!" Rohail kicked the ball away gritting his teeth with anger...
"Urghhh!!! Kya musibat hai yaar!! Ek to yeh bhai ko abhi jaana zaroori tha???" Rohail held his head in his palm... "Humesha yehi hota hai!! yeh jab bhi jata hai, koi na koi mushibat a he jaati hai!!! Aur jab ata hai to... uski khud ki harkatein hoti hain kuch na kuch!!" Roahil was hell angry today...
"Aur yeh Rahul ka bacha!!! Isse baat he nahi ki ja sakti iss topic pe!!! Mera band baj raha tha aur yeh maze se khana urra raha tha!! Ek lafz jo bola ho mere favour mein!!!" Rohail cursed Rahul under his breath...
"Ab bhook lag rahi hai mujhe!!!" He huffed sitting down on the bed with a pillow in his lap...

"O ho!!! Itna gussa!!!" Rohail glared at the door where Rahul was standing with a glass of Mangoshake...
"Kya hua yaar!! kyun itna gussa ho raha hai???" Rahul laughed keeping the glass aside...
"Tum pe to musibat nahi i naa??? tum chup he betho!! tumhe to bohat maze a rahe hain!!" Rohail yelled...
"Aur tumhe lagta hai tum bhooke raho gay to problem solve ho jayegii??? Tumne khud ko ladki samjha hai kya??? tum do ansoon bahao gay aur ghar wale pighal jaeinge!! wow!!" Rahul taunted...
"Taunts maarna bund karo!!! Tum bhai nahi ho!!" Rohail glared at him...
"Ooo!!! To tum yeh sab kuch uske mu se sunna chahte ho??? chalo chalo phone mialoon usko abhi???" Rahul said while taking out his mobile which Rohail snatched and threw away on the bed...
"Mein kisi bhi kism ki bakwaas sunne k mood mein nahi hun iss waqt!!" Rohail scowled...
"Fine!! Lets get a bit serious here!!" Rahul stopped making fun of Rohail knowing he is very very serious about the issue...
"Tum itna kyun taari kar rahe ho khud pe issko??? Jisko jo bolna hai bolne do, kisi k kuch bhi kehne se kuch ho nahi jaye gaa... Bhai ki example le lo... sab logon ne, yahan tak k hum donow ne bhi oppose kiya tha uske jaane k decision pe... Lekin gaya naa??? Kyun?? Kyunki usne already decide kiya hua tha..." Rahul tried to provide Rahul with some solution...
"Baat to sahi hai!!" Rohail nodded while taking the glass of mangoshake in his hands and started drinking it to which Rahul smiled knowing he was cooling down now...
"To bus!!! Bolne do jisko jo bolna hai!! Sunn liya karo... baat khatam!!" Rahul smiled...
"Thanks!! Mujhe laga nahi tha tum mujhe samjho gay aur meri help karoge iss baar!!" Rohail pressed his lips together emptying the glass...
"Kisne bola tha yeh sochne ko??" Rahul smacked his shoulder... "Bhai ko involve kiya??" Rahul asked with a chuckle...
"Hahahahaha!! Joke???" Rohail asked sarcastically...

...

Armaan was arranging his clothes for the morning, when his eyes dropped over a small box...
"Arre isse meine pehle kyun nahi khola??" He thought taking fast fast steps towards it.. It was the same box Shilpa gifted him the night he was leaving...
Tearing off the wrapper, he opened it up to see and found small silver cufflinks... They were stylish yet simple just the way he loves and used to wear...
He got not a bit but very very much surprised as unknown to him, she just noticed what kind of things he wear and choose to buy for himself...
A smile came on his face as he traced those cufflinks with his hands..
"Nice!!!" He commented biting his lower lip...
"Ek to yaar!!! mere dimagh se wo cheez kyun nahi nikal rahi hai??? Filhaal mein de nahi sakta wo... Aur wo hai bhi incomplete, kisi bhi cheez k saath nahi ja raha then why the hell am i thinking about it again and again... Expensive alag hai!!!" Once again that image flashed in his mind...
"Infact, bik chuka hoga ab tak..." He mentally kicked himself...

Chapter 14 B, agle 2-4 dinow mein agar time pe comments a gaye to...
Now Comments please...
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Sameera
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Edited by sameera_12 - 13 years ago

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Sameera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#536

Expected Complains And Questions...

Ab iss chapter mein, jisko bhi lagta hai k Armaan k scene kum thai, ya Shilpa k kum thai, Ya ArSh scene sirf ek tha wo bhi full on romance nahi tha...

So unko bata dun ke isse zyaada Armaan Shilpa iss mein nahi ho sakte thai... there is a limit okay??? Baaki characters ko bhi apna space chahiye aur wait for part B before concluding anything kyunki har ek scene ka reason hai! Har ek conversation ka reason hai!! Maybe abhi disclose nahi ho raha hai, Agay ja ke ho jayegaa but trust me!! jo bhi hoga ArSh related he hoga kisi na kisi manner mein...

Phir... ArSh scenes ho he nahi sakte zyaada kisi bhi keemat pe coz they are away... Aur aisa bilkul bhi possible nahi hai k wo saara waqt ek doosre k baare mein sochte rahein... You see they are not laila majnoo!! They are normal people...

Then the phone conversation! Guys wo itni romantic nahi ho sakti hai as they are still on an initial stage, they don't have much to talk about, nor they very much free with eachother... so time lagay gaa wese bhi yeh sirf pehla call tha...

Ab poocho gay papers se pehle wahan pohunch k call kyun nahi kiya???

Isliye kyunki usko pata tha ussne paper set kiya hai aur he is a professional so Shilpa uski jo bhi lagti ho when its about work, all are equal to him... Jab office mein Rahul Rohail tak ka lihaz nahi karta to phir yahan yeh possible he nahi tha...

Sid Armaan k tafreeh scenes aur ho sakte thai!!

Ji Bilkul nahi! Nahi ho sakte thai kyunki unko kaafi work pressure hai plus settle hone mein bhi masla ho raha hai!! So settle ho jaein poori tarah se... Phir tafreehaan bhi aingi!!

Iss chapter mein trouble kya tha???

Sabse bara trouble paper tha!!
Doosra Abhi k liye trouble Armaan virasat mein chor k gaya hai!
Rohail bhi kisi trouble mein hai!! Agay ja ke pata chal jayega wo kya hai...
Armaan aur Sid kaafi troubles face kar rahe hain! Car nahi mili hai ab tak, jagah pe set hone mein time lagta hai...

Yeh to ab tak k troubles thai!! Agay k liye wait kijye! Naya chapter ayega to naye troubles bhi a jeinge...

Aur complains aur masle hain kisi ko to feel free to post them!! Aj kal mein answer karne k bohat zyaada mood mein hun!!!

Edited by sameera_12 - 13 years ago

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NEHA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#537

Pehale toh jor se taliya bajane padegi 👏 ladki sudhar gayi jaldi jaldi update kar rahi hai very good
now part par ate hai as usual amazing tha. I like it how u explained their office work and arman sid condition in mauritius very nice 😊 . Shilpa ke paper khatam huve thats good but exam scenes were awesme yar that scene u write that que themselves shout that they are made by arman mallik crack me up 😆
i really love the way u write their phone convo very cute and decent
Arman ne pata nahi mall mein kya dekh liya hai ki use woh bhul nahi pa raha i hope use kharid le 😃
ananya padma discussing about engagement and shoping chalo surwat toh hui 🥱
poor rohail egar to know woh kis trouble mein hai. The gift given by shilpa to arman was really cute 😳 amazingwork sam yar ur seriously a great writer kitani acchi tarah se tum choti si choti baat bhi tumane itane efficiently likhti ho i just love it great ho yar tum 😃 pls update next part soon itana maska lagaya hai na ab uska payment bhi milna chahiye 😆

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surlin_chhabra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#538

Loved the update
Eager to know the gift that armaan wanna buy for shilpa

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garimaksgian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#539

Firstly thnku for gvng update fast... now come to the update I luvd ths part. Atlast arsh started the coversation it was beautifully written. I luvd the way u hav xpressed there feeling as they were unknwn it will tak tim for thm to get comfortable with each other. I didnt get Yeh ideas aate kaha se hai. Jo bhi ho its amazing.👏 Jitna bhi bolu the compliments will be less infront of ur wonderful writting.

Whn r u planning the engagement? Waiting for the nxt part...😊