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I don't know..tumhe ye part kese lagega...
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Hello Shallo
aur kitna time lagegi
i feel sleepy
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hahaha i liked it
ur empty update was superb

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due to some problem I couldn't able to update...
Now I am updating
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Originally posted by: Faria.

Hello Shallo
aur kitna time lagegi
i feel sleepy


Sorry..
power failure ho gaya tha
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Originally posted by: Faria.


hahaha i liked it
ur empty update was superb


I am updating now...
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here is the update
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Love Never Looses

Part 61

They had there Burger and were fondly eating it…

Shriya:Nanu…bahut tasty hain…

Aanvi:Haan..thank you so much…

Mr.Bhushan:Thank you bolne ki kya baat hain…mere bacho ko bhook lagi thi isliye hum tum dono ko yahan le aaye…

Shriya…forwarding her burger infront of her Dadu:Dadu..aap bhi ek bite lo..bahut bahut tasty hain…yummy….

Mr.Sharma:Nahi beta bhook nahi hain…

Shriya:Please..please….Ek bite mele haath se..please..

Mr.Sharma:Acha thik hain jese tum chaho….

He took a small bite from her burger…while she passed her sweet smile to him..

Shriya..to Mr.Bhushan:Ab Nanu aap bhi zaayeda bahv mat kahao…aur chup chaap ek bite..lo..mele..bulgel se…

Mr.Bhushan..giggling..at her innocence..:Ji Madam ji

He too took a small bite from her burger..even Aanvi..too asked them to take bite from her burger…and they does same as with they done with Shriya's Burger….

They were enjoying there burger when Mr.Sharma's Phone rang…..

Mr.Sharma:Haan..Mayank bol…

Mayank:Dad…kahan ho aa log…

Mr.Sharma:Beta vo..Shriya aur Aanvi ko bhook lag rahi thi isliye hum unhe food ourt le aaye…

Mayank:Acha…okay listen jab in dono ka ho jaaye to neeche aa jaaye ga…Shrya k liye dresses select karni hain…

Mr.Sharma:Haan hum bas aa rahe hain…..

Mr.Bhushan:Kya huya….itni der baad inko ab pata chala ki hum yahan hain…

Mr.Sharma:Haan ji…!! To Shriya and Aanvi..acha bacho jaldi jaldi finish kar lo fir ab aap dono ki shopping krenge….

Shriya:Wow…Shopping…..

Eating their burger fast they clunged to their granparent's making them to move fast..

Shriya: Chalo Dadu jaldi..Nanu chalo…

Mr.Sharma:Chal rahe hain…beta…lo aa gyi shop…

Shriya….walked towards Mayank who was looking to other stuff…she reached to him and hugged him from behind..:Dadda…

He turned her to him and asked,"Kahan the Aaap…

Shriya:Dadu k saath…bhook lag rahi thi..to Dadu ne mujhe aur Aanvi ko bulgel khilaya…

Nupur..pulling her cheek..:Conflakes doon to bhook nahi aur vese burger khaya jaa raha hain..

Shriya:Mammaa….conflakes yummy nahi hote…

Nupur:Mujhe pata hain kya yummy hota hain aur kya nutricious...

She helplessly look to her father in a hope that he could save her….Understanding her gesture he diverted the topic,"Acha vo sab chodo…ab Hum ne apni wedding dress select kar li..aur ab hum apni Shriya ki dress select krenge…"

Nupur:Haan..ye dekho shona..ye waali kesi hain….

She showed her a dark purple coloured dress with silver and grey embroidery at the border and was having net seleves…it's duptta was also..of net…

Before Shriya could retort Mayank exclaimed,'Not this one Nupur..you know Shriya is fair..and on her this colour won't suite..let's see other ones..not this…

Nupur:But Mayank..see the design..it's really good…

Shriya:No Mamma..Dadda ne bola na..koi doosri dress.to fir doosri dress dekhte hain…

Just then Mayank…took a dress:Ye dekho ye waali…kesai hain..

It was combination of Green and golden brocate..and was sleveless…indeed it was more beautifull than the previous one…

Even Nupur was astound at Mayank's choice…she said in a surprise tone,"Mr.Mayank Sharma…khud k liye aapse apni dress to select nahi ho rahi thi…but baat jab beti ki aati hain…I hate to admit..it's just..fantastic…

Shriya:Mamma…mere Dada ki choice to ek dum pelfect hain…

Mayank:Dekha ..ye baat sirf tum jaanti hoo…Shriya apni Mamma ko ye bhi bata do..ki…unki dress selection bhi mene hi kiya tha…and turning to her..aur jab baat mere biwi aur meri beti ki hogi..than you know I'll be at my best…

She passed a sweet smile to him..as what was he saying is a complete truth..he can never be wrong when came the matter of her's and his daughter…

While Shriya just kissed his cheeks….conveying her unsaid love to her father….:Mere Dadda world k best Dadda hain…Kyu Mamma….

Nupur admiting this fact…:So to hain…

Mayank..Pulling her cheek…:Aur meri Shriya world ki best daughter hain…

Shriya:Sachiii….Dadda…

Nupur…kissing her cheek..:Haan Shona….to ab tumhari…dress to pakki ho gayi…

Mayank:Haan ab sangeet ki bhi…..

Nupur:Uske liye mene ye dress select ki hain…..

Mayank:Nahi Nupur ye achi nahi hain…showing another dress to her…ye wali..ye wali achi hain…

Nupur:Kya Mayank har baar tumhari Mann mani nahi chalegi..mein keh rahi hoon na..ye pink waali achi hain..to bas ye hi achi hain…

Mayank:Nupur..mein bhi keh raha hoon..ki ye blue waali achi hain to matlab ye blue waali hi achi hain samjhi tum….

Nupur..in a little annoyed tone..:Har baar tum hi select karoge…mein nahi karungi ki kya meri beti k liye…

Mayank:Are mene kab kaha ki tum Shriya k liye kuch select nahi ker satki mein to bas ye keh raha hoon..ki jo tumne select ki hain vo usper achi nahi lagi…

Nupur:Bas Mayank…tum na…mein jaanti hoon tumko..harbaar apni baat manwate rehte ho..but iss barr nahi…meri shaadi hain aur mein apni beti ko apne pasand k dresses kharidungi….

Mayank:To Nupur..akele tumhari hi nahi meri bhi shaadi hain…aur mein bhi apne pasand k dresses apni beti ko dilwana chahta hoon….

Nupur:Haan to tum already dila to chuke ho usse dress…..ab meri baari…

Mayank:Mein mana nahi karta..but iska ye matlab nahi hain tum usse vo dress dilwao jisme vo achi na lage…

Nupur:What do you mean meri pasand achi nahi hain…aur tum kya…tumhari choice…to bahut bhut achi hain..jiske aage kisi ka koi muqabla bhi nahi hain…

Mayank:Obviously Nupur…tumhe bhi mene hi pasand kia hain…

Nupur:Excuse me…!!!..Tum kehna kya chata ho…

Mayank:Mein bas ye kehna chata hoon ki abhi jo mene dress select ki hain…vo meri beti per zaayeda achi lagegi…

Nupur..pointing her finger on him..:Don't try to divert your topic Mayank…tum kehna kya chahte ho..ki agar tum mujhe pasand nahi karte mujhse pyar nahi karte…than mein apne liye…kuch acha nahi choose kar sakti thi…

Mayank:Nupur..mene aisa kab kaha…

Nupur:Matlab to yahi tha kehne ka….

Shriya who was listening to their non-stop fight..seeing that her father is on weak side..she stood beside him..and said before Mayank could retort to her statement and said,"Mammaa…ye aap kya ker rahi hoo.."

Nupur:Shriya:Ye tum apna Dadda se pucho…

Shriya:Mammaa..Dadda ne galat hi kya kaha hain…

While Mayank looked at her in surprise…while Nupur face was huge open in a complete 'o' shape……

Nupur:Tum kehna kya chati ho…

Shriya:Mamma…aap bhi na..Dadda aapko pasand nahi krte aur pyal nahi klte..to fil mein apne Dadda se kese mil paati…mere Dadda world k best Dadda isliye hain kyunki vo..aapse pyar kalte hain..aur iska matlab to ye hua na ki aap world ki best lady jisse mele Dadda pyal kalte hain..to mele Dadda ne aapki tareef ki..aur aap unper gussa kyu ho rahi…kyu Dadda sahi kaha na mene…"

Though her little mind didn't knew the fact that what she has blurted out from her little mouth..the thing which no one can understood..which has deep meaning..Nupur's eyes filled with tears..her daughter is so intelligent..and understanding…she felt so proud of herself that she has Mayank's genes in her..as if now they have started reflecting…while Mayank was all dumb and shocked to react h couldn't think that his daughter could show this view also..to their illogical fight…she just turned it so meaning full explaining them how much they love each other…..

Wiping her tears off…she patted on her head and said lovingly,"Bilkul baap per gayi hain apne…."

While she just giggled listening that she is more like her father….

Mayank..coming out from his trance..lighten the atmosphere and said,"So …"

Nupur:So ab kya….ab jab tumhari beti ne bol hi diya hain uske Dadda ki choice world ki best choice hain uske aage ein kuch keh sakti hoon…kya…

He gave his huge smile to her..while holding her hand…passing a comfort level to her..while she just enterwin..her hands with his…

Their family moment broke when Mrs.Sharma cam and said,"Chalo ..chalo..ab agar Shriya ki dresses ka selection ho gaya hain to…ab jewellery kharid le…"

Mrs.Sharma..putting her finger infront of her in gesture to her to hold her..finger…:Chal Shriya….Mamma k liye bhut pyari pyari jewellery khridte hain..

Holding her finger,"Yeyyy…!!! Chalo Dadi…Mamma Dadda chalo…"


Mayank:Haan chalo hum ye sab pack karwa k aa rahe hain….

Nupur holds the packet and was moving when Mayank caught her wrist making her turn towards her….cupping her face he intently said to her,"You are best thing to be happen in my life…to meri choice to best hui na..coz it's have you…"

Looking intently in his eyes,"I am so blissed to have you in my..life…thank you for choosing me Mayank..thank you for loving me…"

Nearing abit to her he said in her ear more over in a whisper tone:My pleasure dear….

Nupur:Chale…

Mayank:After you… he forwards his hand infront of her…and she clutched it without much delay moving to the jewellery shop…


Hope you like it...

NOTE:All of You..are cardily invited in the sangeet and the wedding ceremony of our own MAYANK-NUPUR .
PLease do come and bless them for their happy life...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Blossom Update, Di👏

Thanks for the invitation, main to jarur aungi😳

To Dadu n Nanu ko payar se burger khilaye ja rahe hain.. After all share karne se khane ka maza dugni ho jati hain😎

Shuru ho gaye hain MayUr ke Tom & Jerry fights.. Ye MayUr bhi na.. Aab Nupur mane ya na mane wo hi hain Mayank ka best choice..☺️

Shriya is right and wo kaise apni Dada ko mamma se fight mein harte hue dekhe, usse to Dada ki side leni hi thi kyun wo to hain apni Dada ki princess😃

Last wali part ki to Hayeee main kya kahoon
YaY!! Me first

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*,, muuuah !!
Edited by Humayra - 12 years ago
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thnax for update
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Shaffy- sweet heart- awww kitna sone kuri update tha jaani

It was fantastic. Both shrya and avni were very cute. Bapre- MAYUR fight ki tou daad deni paregi. Bilkul mayurish updae tha. I enjoyed their damn adorable nok-jhok. Koi kisi se kam nehi. Lekin yaar NUPUR ki choice ka bhi thoda preference dena chaiye tha na???? Nupur was right- mayank ki choice se ek tou dress le he liya, pher nupur ki bari thi – uska choice bhi kadar kar leti. R after all she choose mayank for herself. So uska pasand bhi tou best hai na. and abt shreya – bilkul apni baap pe gayi hai- she was so intelligent. Hahaha bapki ladli bhi hai yaar

Very nice update.

Loved it to the core

Keep it up

Note: thanx for ur invitation. I'll definitely join Mayurs' sangeet and marriage ceremony. Meri liye card bhej dena..


Edited by Faria. - 12 years ago

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