virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 66

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was sucha cute part

espclly piyali's small baby wala part toh too gud tha

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
NAINA!!! your ff its awesome!!! plis continue sooon!!!!!:DD we love it!!!:D 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Deeksha...

Update. Plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 20
manvi was sitting in her room cursing maya for saying something to her piyali when piyali came running again to manvi and laid her head in her lap.
piyali : vilat jhooth bol raha tha na...
manvi : kya hua piya...?? alley mela baby sad kyun hai...
piyali : vilat ne mujhse jhooth bola...
manvi : kya jhooth bola chachu ne piya se...??
piyali : chachu ne kaha ke ye lap wali jagah unki hai... but ye toh meli hai manvi chachi...
manvi : haan baby... aapki hi hai... tumhare chachu toh -
piyali : please vilat ko kuch mat bolo...
manvi : arrey waah... abhi khud chachu complaint kar rahi ho but chachu ke khilaf kuch sunn bhi nahi sakti...
piyali : manvi chachi ek secet hai...
manvi : u mean secret...
piyali : haan...
manvi : toh kya hai secet...???
piyali : vilat small baby ki lamming kar raha hai na, toh main gussa ho gayi toh vilat mujhe small baby ke saath play nahi karne dega...
manvi : omg... aap kitne smart ho gaye ho piya... woww...
piyali : haan mujhe smart bhi toh vilat ne banaya hai...
manvi : chachu ki chamchi...
piyali : alley manvi chachi... aise nahi kehte... kehte hai chachu ki chachi... chamchi kuch hota hi nahi hai...
manvi : chamchi hota hai piya... aur pta hai chamchi kya h...?? piyali is a chamchi...
piyali : ohh toh main toh chamchi... ok...
manvi giggled listening to piyali's reply...
piyali : manvi.. ek baat pucchun...??
manvi : pucho...
piyali : vilat kab ayega...?? main usko bahut miss kar rahi hoon...
manvi : abhi toh gaye hai chachu office... piya itni jaldi miss nahi karte... chachu will come soon...
piyali : fir kab karun miss...???
manvi : thodi der mein...
piyali : manvi woh witch kab jaege apne house...??
manvi : piya... its bad manners to like that... witch nahi kehte beta...
piyali : mera vilat hi achha... wo mujhe kabhi scold nahi karta... par manvi mujhe woh maya aunty achhi nahi lagti...
manvi : piya...
piyali : main jaa li hoon...
manvi : ye ladki bhi na...
after sometime
manvi : maa aapne piya ko dekha...??
vanshika : jeevika ke saath hi hogi...
jeevika : main bhi toh piya ke baare mein puchne aayi thi... mannu...??
manvi : mujhe nahi pta di...
kabir : ye yahan hai... hum ice cream khane gaye the...
piyali : but iss uncle ke blueberry ice cream nahi dilai jaise vilat dilata hai (this uncle didnt buy me a blueberry icr cream like virat does...)
jeevika : blueberry ice cream...??
manvi : yes di... actually virat once made piyali eat that ice cream n now she is just fond of it...
vanshika : ye dono na... virat bhi na kya kya karta rehta hai...
manvi : haan... bilkul...
jeevika : mannu...
manvi : di i meant...
piyali : manvi na mere vilat pyaal nahi karti...
kabir : i am sorry piyali... mujhe nahi pta ke aapko blueberry ice cream pasand hai...
piyali : its okk uncle... kal khila dena...
kabir : hehe... okk...
piyali : daadi... vilat kab ayega,,,,??
virat : virat aa gaya meri jaan...
piyali ran to virat throwing her ice cream which she was holding in her hands...
virat : alley mela baccha mujhe miss kar raha tha...
piyali : haan... bahut saara...
virat : aww... chalo room mein chalte n hii ladies... n hi kabir..
everybody smiled at virat n virat was going to his room when piyali kissed his cheek n said " ek minute... "
virat : kya hua...??
piyali : uncle... ice cream bhulna mat... okk...?? (pointing at kabir)
kabir : okk... done... she is soo cute... (saying this he went to his room)
virat : ab chale meri jaan...
piyali : vilat main tumhari chamchi hoon...
virat : kya...???
piyali : manvi ne bola tha ke main tumhari chamchi hoon...
virat : accha... toh chal meri chamchi... raat ko tujhe main hi ice cream khilaunga... woh bhi meri baby ki favourite...
manvi : mujhe bhi le chalna huh...
virat : hurr...
piyali : haha... manvi hurrr...
vanshika : ye dono ko toh ko aur chahie hi nahi...
jeevika : haan maa... virat ke aati hi mujhe aur viren ji ko bhi bhool jati hai...
manvi : aur mujhe tang karte hain...
jeevika : hehe... jaa virat ke liye chai le ja..
manvi : hmm...
manvi entered her room and saw piyali jumping on teh bed while virat busy in admiring himself in teh mirror.
piyali : toh na vilat... usne mujhe chocolate ice cream khilayi... chocolate ice cream bhi koi khilata hai kya... aur main usko kaha bhi ek mall mein achi ice cream milti hai...
virat : achha...
piyali : haan aur accha hua woh witch nahi gayi thi... pya hai woh na kabir pe shout kar rahi thi... mujeh toh bahut scary lagti hai...
virat : hehe... mujhe bhi... poori witch hai...
piyali : par manvi kehti hai ke woh witch nahi hai...
virat : manvi bechari bachi hai... usko maaf kardo meri jaan...
piyali : okkk... par mele papa kab ayege...??
virat : abhi toh aap virat ko miss kar rahe the ab papa ko miss kar rahe ho...
piyali : vilat mujeh small baby ke saath play karne doge na...
virat went towards piya n pecked his cheek...
virat : aur kya...?? small baby meri piya ke liye hi toh ayega...
piyali : pakka...??
virat : 100 %
piyali : par woh girl hogi ya boy...
virat : woh toh manvi hi btaegi... mujhe nahi pta...
piyali : chachi se puchon...???
virat : haan...
piyali : arrey chachi toh ye rahi... (pointing at manvi whose mouth was opened in o shape hearing to the convo)
manvi : mujeh nahi pta... main chai laai thi... u both continue...
saying this manvi kept tea on the table, and ran out of the room before facing any more embarassment.
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ps : guys i am confused... tell me which ff's update do u want next...??? 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lolzzz

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My Piya izzz chooo cuteee!!!!! loved d convo! I dnt like this kabira person!! trying to win over mannu!!! An unsuccessful effort! lolzzz nd yeah nest turn either DMG or PTYKA😉
Edited by abbay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
super cute update...waiting for u r nxt update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update dear😊...cont soon
want dil mil gaye's update
Edited by amnavirman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pmkk or dmg btw loved it update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update piyali is so sweet
her bonding with virat and manvi was great
update soon and this story

virman NEW ff LINMFA also

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!! Loved the update!!
Piyali is soo cute!!!😊
I want either bad boy or dmg update next!!
Waiting for ur next update!!
x Avika x

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