(J of a Wife - BOOK 3) A FAMILY REUNITES - Page 101

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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.K

Wohoo🥳 , 67 di , congrats.

Thanks Kavya , I can't believe it either😳!
Amazing update Di , loved it sooo much😳.
Thank you 🤗 .
Jai is a good girl now, I'm happy about dat, please let her marry Jaggat quickly😆. Let her come out of the asylum first dear😉.
Manyata ruined da suhag raath😡. Dat was not da time to talk about dat, stupid girl. Yep , very stupid girl😡!
Very excited about da honeymmon ,
please Friday come fast😳. Friday is here , but u won't get much of a honeymoon😕.
Sorry about the late comment,
Bhai was discharged only tody. Only 1 brother I got di😆. I had to ask that Kavi , because Suhaan sent me a scrap on Tuesday (I think) , and he didn't mention being in an accident.
Enjoyed the chappy lot & lots & los😳. Awww😳!!!!!!!!
Waiting for the honeymoon cruise. Don't day dream so much about it😆!
Da promo u gave on W/c was cute. I like da father -daughter convo😃. Ahhh , u found it ... glad u liked it😊.
Love u NavinaDi 🤗 Love you 2 Kavi ❤️

Loved the comment Kavya , thanx so much 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshab

finally read this update :D Yeah , I was wondering what happened to you!
Srry for being late ..wrk is helding me up ..the reason for me being MIA frm IF :P That's a pity , but really glad u came back😃.

jay turned gud...how i wishh to watch goood jay all the tym ..she is the character i loved apart frm manveer :) Awww , ya she'll be good from now onward in my ff.
Jay n udita hide seek was cutee
isshhh why do uday hav to put VB down ..in other wrds manyata was no different ..a stubborn ,illogical,illiterate,mannerless woman until she was assigned her duties, responsibilities comes with tym he needs to understnd dat ..i hope he dsnt make the love birds cry .. I hope so too, I'll work on him soon😆!
Nd the honeymoon ;) What honeymoon😕?😆
Cont soon :)

In a few hours😊.

Thanks Shab , for such a lovely comment 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ NavinaDi
Why no purple updates? I read u told in Andys comment.
😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.K

@ NavinaDi

Why no purple updates? I read u told in Andys comment.
😭

Because Uday gets into Manyata's bad books!
But you'll get your purple scenes in ch14😳.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...



<font color="#ff0000" size="4">They know who they are ... I know who they are ; let's leave it there! </font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="4">Kutte log se maafi maang rahe ho , Mahi 😆?</font>

haye nai meri jaan mein sorry kyun bolu un kutte logon se??? mein toh tujhe sorry bol rahi thi tere thread pein galiya dene keliye!!!!! woh kutte log unke toh mein daat tod du!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER : 13 :

Huh? Manyata asked with her mouth wide open. Princess - dhyaan se suno ... I'll say it slowly for you : I-bought-a-yacht-and-we'll-be-sailing-in-it-to-India! Kal Raviwaar hain , Somwaar tak hum India pohonch jayenge ? , she asked enthusiastically . Uday , lovingly looked at Udita in his arms ... Baccha - jab aap bade honge ... toh Mamma jaise "SMART" mat bano! The baby laughed as if she understood and Manyata shot threatening glares to Uday through her narrowed eyes.
Princess , it'll take us months to dock in India ... in that many months ; we'll be visiting different countries , sight-seeing and enjoying our honeymoon. Manyata began blushing , on hearing "HONEYMOON". Excited Princess? , he nudged her and she gave him a cute smile , without answering.
As soon as Rajjat returned , he drove Manveer , Giriraj , Brijraj and Udita to Galveston. Uday - why are we going there? Well Princess , we stay in Austin and there's no port there ; so we have to go to Galveston Harbour. Our boat is there , waiting for us. Manyata was nervous , but at the same time very excited about their travel plans.
After a 6 hour drive , they reached their desired destination. It was nearing evening time , but the port was well lit and Uday's yacht was easily recognised - what with a golden "MANVEER FOREVER" engraved just above the hull of the boat. U named the boat after us!, Manyata exclaimed in awe. Do U approve? Of-course I do - I love it Uday! , she kissed him on the cheek.
Giriraj handed Uday a bottle of champagne , which he cracked on the bow of the boat ... to christen it. Why did U do that , Uday? It's tradition , Princess! Below the deck of the boat ; was a beautiful boat-house , with all the luxurious necessities , required for the long trip. There was a kitchen and dining area as 1 room .. that led to a larger bedroom - fitted with an en-suite and then a smaller room , which was to be the nursery. So Princess - what do u think? It's gorgeous!
The 2 fathers bid then farewell , and Rajjat drove them back to the ranch. Giriraj was given a very important task of packing everything from the farm-house and sending it to Manveer's home in Mumbai. Along with that , he had to ship the horses to Jaigarh Ranch and most importantly ... he had to sell the ranch in Texas. Yaar , Giri ... ye jagah bohot hi khoobsurat hain. Isse mat bechiye! , Brijraj told. I know ... I love this place ... it's where our Udita was born ; it can be an ideal holiday-home, Giriraj said , before deciding not to sell the place. I'll talk to Uday about it , when he comes back to India.
Manyata was feeding the baby in the cabin , while Uday was studying the map .. Uday , tell na ... when exactly will we reach India? About 6 months time , he answered without looking up from the map. Hawww , 6 months ... but Baby will need stuff! Uday came and sat next to her : What "STUFF" does she need ... I'm taking her OWN PERSONAL COW with us! Manyata glared at him angrily : Did u just call me a "COW" ? Yes , I did ... U give my baby milk ; therefore you're a "cow" , he explained only to get a punch on his arm.
Uday - who's gonna drive the boat? Princess - I'M going to "captain" the yacht. She burst out laughing ... What do u know about sailing? Definitely ... MORE THAN YOU! , he replied and she stuck out her tongue at him. Shall I find somewhere for u to put that tongue of yours? , Uday asked naughtily. When are we going? We'll spend the night here and in the morning , we'll set sail.
The night was a very "quiet" 1 for Uday as Manyata brought Udita to "sleep" with them. The baby was very crabby and refused to sleep in this new environment. Manveer tried their best to pacify her ... but her fussing continued to the early hours of the morning. Then all fell asleep due to sheer exhaustion.
That way! , Uday pointed out to a direction , which showed nothing , but the blue sea. He looked at the baby , who he was carrying ; for approval ... but did not get a single expression from her. Let me guess - U agree with your Mamma, & think that I'm gonna get us lost? She gave him an amused look , at which he rolled his eyes and muttered : WOMEN!
The anchor was lifted and the boat moved , Uday steered it to the direction , he thought ; the Bahamas was. Manyata came up from below and got quite shocked in seeing Uday dressed so casually. It was the first time she'd seen him in a white vest and khaki shorts. He looked so HOT , yet so COOL. Nice legs Uday , she said as she stared at his firm calves and muscular thighs. He turned around and walked towards her with a smirk. I could say the same for you , Princess , he complimented as he ran a finger up her milky white thigh. I hope you're wearing that swimsuit I got u , under this shorts and T-shirt. Hawww , no way am I wearing that STRINGY THING which covers NOTHING! He grinned at her and whispered : THAT WAS THE IDEA PRINCESS! She pulled the baby from him and warned : Baby ke samne , nahi! This is going to be some "HONEYMOON" , he said in his mind.
Their first stop , was NOT what Uday had hoped for. Instead of the Bahamas , they docked in Cuba, which was not exactly a tourist haven. Manyata laughed uncontrollably , seeing Uday's disappointed face. Now , do you admit ... you don't know what you're doing! When HELL FREEZES over , he mumbled .
Manyata had to literally drag Uday out of the yacht : Come on Uday - It can't be THAT BAD. Maybe not a week , but surely 2 nights , we can spend here! Reluctantly he followed his 2 girls and booked themselves into a hotel. Touring cathedrals with impressive architecture and visiting museums which told the story of the history of their land ... wasn't what Uday had in mind , but Manyata was very intrigued and even wished to spend more time there. Of-course , Uday DID NOT CONSENT to that! Finally , he found something "interesting". He pointed out a poster to Manyata : Shall we go there tonight? It was a Cuban Cabaret Dance Show to be held at 1 very posh theatre-hall. Manyata excitedly agreed , but it was not meant to be. The couple were turned away because "THEY WERE NOT DRESSED FORMAL ENOUGH TO ATTEND SUCH A SHOW!" Manyata's disappointment changed to anger , when she finally realised what type of show , she was going for. A scantily clad dancer , who was late for the show ... dashed pass Uday ; with all her assets bouncing. Uday bit hard on his bottom lip to suppress the broad smile that was forming ; when he saw Manyata's reddened face. So , THAT'S the reason you were so eager about coming here! , she spat and ran off so fast , that Uday battled to follow.
Manyata , being a stranger to the city , walked into a "less than holy" alley. 4 Men were sitting around a fire , smoking their favourite brand of weed ; were only too happy when a woman , came into their view. They said something in a language unknown to her and when she didn't respond ; 1 of the men , wobbled to her. Manyata turned to walk away , but the man grabbed her arm. She gave him a tight , back-handed slap , which caused him to spin in his spot. But ; by now , his "associates" joined in and Manyata knew , if Uday didn't get to her fast ... she and Udita would be in deep trouble. Her silent prayer was answered when 1 of the men went flying , due to a solid punch from Uday. He pushed Manyata to 1 side , while he "attended" to the goons. A kick in the stomach , a punch on the nose and a knee in the groin was all it took for the VILLAINS to be knocked down ; and for the HERO to be back in the good books of the HEROINE! Uday held Manyata in his embrace , while Udita got squashed between her parents. Uday - if u didn't come in time ... I'll ALWAYS be there on time Princess ... and I WILL KILL WHOEVER lays their hands on you! Let's get out of here Uday ... I don't care where we go ; so long as we're out of Cuba!
The cruise was on again ... and the destination : BAHAMAS! Well ; not exactly. Uday misread the map again and moved in the opposite direction to land up back in America ... Miami , Florida , this time! SHIT! Princess - what am I doing wrong? , Uday complained. Maybe , I should read the map hereafter! , Manyata teased , and Uday smiled fakely. They decided to spend the next week there - holidaying , shopping, picking up supplies ... maybe finally starting the " honeymoon" part of their trip.
Uday booked them into THE NEWPORT BEACHSIDE HOTEL & RESORT , which over-looked the famous HAULOVER BEACH. Famous ... WHY? Well , Manyata was soon going to find that out! The manager of the hotel told the couple of a very secure creche for toddlers , in the hotel itself ... in case they needed some private time. The creche was a unique place with games and all sorts of activities especially for infants. 3 Nurses were even present , in case of an emergency. Uday was not too keen on leaving his daughter there , but an elderly African -American woman assured him of Udita's safety : Mr Singh , mothers with babies , as young as a month ; have left their kiddies in my care ... your daughter will be fine! Udita , happily went to the lady , and didn't even cry when she saw her parents walk away. Manyata was very relieved as she wanted to watch the sunset from the beach , but didn't want the baby to be out with them, in the breezy evening.
Manveer walked hand-in-hand on the beach , when Manyata got the biggest shock of her life. HAULOVER BEACH was a NUDIST BEACH! , and she and Uday were the only people with clothes on. U knew about THIS , didn't you? Uday looked the other direction , trying to figure out the answer to this difficult question. To make matters worse , a busty blonde walked pass them and seductively brushed her hand against Uday's ; and then smiled at him. On reflex , he smiled back.
Manyata's blood-pressure hit the roof , she stared at him , as if she were going to eat him. What? , he asked oh-so-innocently. Angrily she shook her head from side to side : What the hell , Uday? Princess , she smiled - so , I smiled back ... what's the big deal? U were staring at her breasts Uday! It was there in front of me , so I looked , he shrugged his shoulders ... It's not like I was going to touch!
If u "touched" , you'd get a 5-finger imprint on your face! Nah Princess ... I don't think she would've slapped me. Not HER , YOU MORON ... I would've slapped you! Saying that , she walked away in a huff ; forgetting all about the sunset. Uday chuckled to himself ... "MORON" - that's new! Slowly , he walked back to the hotel.
Manyata left him a note : I'm getting a massage at the health-spa. Fetch Udita at 7. Uday wondered to himself ; if he was the husband or the servant, but did as he was ordered anyway. After tucking the sleeping baby , he stood by the window, taking in the wonderful view of the moonlight on the beach , giving the water a shimmering look. Still admiring those sl*ts , I see , Manyata snickered from the doorway , on seeing Uday at the window.
It seemed the massage didn't relieve her tension , and her anger had even doubled , since earlier. No harm in admiring! Uday announced. MEN! You're ALL the same ... put a pair of tits in front of you'll . and so quickly - you'll get hard! Uday's eyes nearly fell out of their sockets , hearing his wife's language . You're DESPICABLE! , she gave him a disgusted look. JERK! He folded his arms and smirked at Manyata's temper-tantrum. YOU'RE A DISGUSTING PIG ... I hope u know that!
She turned to walk away , when he grabbed her from behind. He encircled his arm around her stomach & threw her on the bed. Princess, me keeping quiet ... doesn't mean you can go on and on and on! Before she could get up , he pounced on her trapping her beneath him. GET OFF ME UDAY! , she screamed while flinging her arms and legs. He pressed his thighs over her legs to stop the kicking. LET ME GO! , she ordered as she punched her fists into his chest. So , I'm a despicable , disgusting pig , who's also a jerk , huh? Yes , BIG PIG and a BIG JERK ... now get off me! He held her 2 wrists in 1 hand , above her head , and rubbed his nose against her cheek : I love it when u get jealous Princess. Read my lips UdayVeer ... I'M NOT JEALOUS! She shook her head vigorously to push his face from coming so near her. I don't want to READ your lips ... I want to KISS them , he said mischievously. Again she shook her head , disallowing him to capture her lips.
A lock of hair fell onto her fore-head , causing much irritation to her. She blew upward to move the annoying strands , but in 2 seconds they fell back to their previous position. Uday smiled at her antics and seductively ... he moved the lock of hair and tucked it behind her ear. Don't u touch me! Awww Princess ... by the time this night is over ... there's not going to be a single spot on you ; that'll be UNTOUCHED BY ME!
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Sorry everyone for ending it there ...
I bet , you all are cursing me right now!
(IF I WAS IN YOUR POSITION , I'D BE CURSING ME TOO🤣) .
This was supposed to be the LAST CHAPTER for this book , but I'm a very superstitious person and didn't wanted to end the book on Ch 13. So , there'll be 1 more chapter , before this book ends.
Thanks for your time , please "LIKE" & COMMENT before u go.
NEXT UPDATE - 27 June 2013.
PRECAP - The honeymoon continues.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hailaa,mainn 1sttt aa gayiii!!!!!!!!!!! yupeee,tumhare update ke baarein mein thode baad mein batati hu pehle mein thoda nach leti hu join me navi u know wat,i have tld u earlier also,i am a fan of ur commnts(replies) also,so i jst came to read ur commnt then i jst saw "ch-13" i was lil surprsed ke kya yehi update hai,then checked my pm,tab tak koi pm nehi aaya tha,then saw dat are ye to nxt update hai,fatafat,maine res ka board laga diya,haan nehi to,yupeee!!!!!!!!!!!🥳🥳
ab agar tumhare update ke baarein mein na batau,to tum mujhe dhakka mar dogi😆😆
ahaa,uday kya arrngemnts kiya,wahh wahh rajwada hai akhir!!😉 manyata dnt wrry,meri geogrphy bhi bohut kharab hai😆😆 udita uday ke sath milkar manyata ko tease kar raha hai,so sweeet!!! bt udita also dsnt trust her dad on sailing like her mothr😆 loved it wen uday said "WOMEN"!! udayy u r being naughty😉 uday akhir hai hi humara hero!!! finally they reached their honeymoon destination!! udayyy u r so mischievous,nude beahc par le gaye😉 manyata ki gaaliyan,suprb!! and uday's dialogs were jst full of humour,i was smiling nonstop!!😉 the last dialog was creating sparks!!!! bt jaha pe tumne ending ki,teling u the truth,the 1ts thought which came to me was "ye kya ho gaya,ye to tumhara last chappy hai aur yaha pe khatam" i made up my mind dat i will tel u to wrte e nxt part of dis chappy,then maine note padha,aur tab chain aaya😊😊🤗 will be waitng for ur nxt and last dhamekadar update!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey navi... 😉
That was brilliant... i still cant stop smiling manveer moments... humour was superb here.
With each update yo out do your self. I loved every minute of it.
Seems like manveers honeymoon is going to be anything but all honeying... lol 😆
I love their silly fights... and adorable udita.
Uday wil never admit when he is wrong, will he? smartypants... knowit all😆
The nudist beach, 😆🤣 that cracked me up
LOVED THESE LINES...
i was only looking its not like i was going to touch🤣
If u "touched" , you'd get a 5-finger imprint on your face! Nah Princess ... I don't think she would've slapped me. Not HER , YOU MORON ... I would've slapped you!🤣
that was the highlight for me.. 😆 truly their dialogues were written briliantly
Typical uday, manyata is quite bold hey from living in texas so long, her dialogues
surprised me also... but at times she can be some what of a blondey... 😆 a cute adorable jealous fire breathing one that is.
Aww the whole sailing experience and atmosphere combined with these 2, is sure to be one joyride.
Written beautifully navi, full on entertaining and humourous AND YES DID YOU HAVE TO STOP AT THE END😕😒🤣
LOVED IT NAVI... one more thing dont be so surprised at the number of likes your story is awesome and deserves even more... 👏👏
HUGS 🤗
Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago

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