SS Moments of Love - Epilogue p.51(28/6) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
wow !!! amazing update
waiting for next plz continoue soon...
Thanx for pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
nice update

and jeans ka topic from episode haan😉

badhiyaan hai😆

update next soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
wats the suspense that u r building up...update soooner and brak the flashback scenes yaaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
omg tis is really good...just luv it...it awesome...
asad n zoya r just too cute n both of them r waiting fr each other to propose is just superb...
thx fr the next update...please pm me fr the next update...
please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
couldnt get better than this!
lovely!👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
superb!!!
prolong their bickering... they are too cute wen they quarrel...
continue soon and tnx for d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Ive just read all of it at once. Love your writing. Do PM me ur next update plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

So, I felt completely horrible after watching the precap. I feel so bad for both of them😭. I know things will work out for them eventually, but I still feel bad for both. And since I'm a girl, I think I empathize with zoya more, but i'm sure asad would be equally devastated.

Anyways since it was a low episode I decided to post a slightly longer update. The flashback will be out soon... I just want to have a few scenes that are feel-good fillers. This is one of them :)

I love them bickering, but do let me know if it's too much, i'll stop and continue with the track.


Part 5:

The night went by and dawn overcame them, out of habit Asad was already awake but he didn't want to get up since that would disturb Zoya's sleep. He just loved how she cuddled with him, she held him so tight and so close to her that he felt the tingling sensation of her breath. He played with her hair which caused unexpected reactions. She really was in a deep slumber, and he loved observing the involuntary changes in her expressions. But he was careful enough to not prolong playing with her hair, otherwise she really would awaken. He kissed her on her forehead and there was a lot more he wanted to do but he had to maintain his own restrictions.

Then he thought caressing her body under the sheets, that way it wouldn't be inappropriate. But his touch made her jolt slightly and her grip over him tightened. She moaned a bit and slept again.

Wow this girl can really sleep through anything! But she's squeezing me so hard I can barely breathe! It feels as though all her weight is on me, and although she's fairly light but it's been quite a while…

He wriggled a bit to get comfy and then he watched her move to adjust with his comfort, he fell asleep again just watching her sleep. Sleep never overcame him this fast, guess she was a relaxant for him.

x-x-x

It was nine in the morning and everyone was ready for breakfast, except the bride and groom. The rest decided to let them be, they anyways needed to spend some time alone.

"Why don't we go for a picnic today?" Dilshaad suggested.

"Yea ammi, that's a good idea, I'll go tell bhaijaan and zoya bhabhi"

"No, no, no, no… don't go, we'll leave before they are ready. This way they'll have some time to themselves"

"Yea Dilshaad bi, that's a very good idea!" Zeenat was grateful that Zoya got such a good mother-in-law. On the other hand Tanveer cursed her luck.

"Woh, khala, humari tabiyat theek nahi lag rahi, hum nahi chal payenge"

"Oh, what should we do then?" Najma thought aloud

"Hmmm, in that case, we'll send Asad and Zoya to a resort" Everyone cheered up as this was a better idea

"Haan bi, yeh accha rahega!"

"Yea and tannu can rest also! We four can have a picnic at home instead"

"Y..yea" time wasn't on her side. If they were at home, she could have got something done… like poison zoya's food. But if they were going out, it would be hard to keep track of them.

"Where will they going khala?"

"I don't know, and I'd rather not ask. I want them to have complete privacy" Although Dilshaad wasn't aware of Tannu's intentions, she had realized that tannu could drift them apart. She wanted to keep her away from them.

x-x-x

Zoya woke up but didn't find Asad anywhere in the room.

He must've gotten up early, and then gotten ready and left for work. He's such a workaholic, urghhh. Why did I have to wake up so late?? I missed him.

She rubbed her eyes and headed to the washroom with a grumpy face. She walked in and brushed her teeth. As she turned the tap on, he screamed "Ms. Farooqui what are you doing here?"… He was relaxing with his eyes closed, taking his extra long bath. And she, her eyes were barely open while brushing. When she heard him scream her eyes flew wide open and she turned to him. She covered her eyes…or at least tried.

"Aap, yahan kya kar rahe hain?"

"Can't you see, I'm taking a bath… will you please leave?"

"I'm brushing I can't leave" she said with toothpaste dripping from her mouth

"you cover your eyes while brushing?"

"Allah Miyaan, what's wrong with you? I don't do that, but you're here, in front of me, like this… what am I supposed to do" she tried her best to be earnest

He grinned at her. Nobody would expect them to be husband and wife.

"You can join me in the bath tub, if you want" he tried to sound sarcastic, but it came out quite sincerely.

"Oh, actually I can. That's a very good idea Mr. Khan, and this way we'll save water too, right Mr. Khan?" his expression was worth seeing! He was embarrassed, yet shy and he blushed profusely. His eyes grew wide with shock, that she would even consider it. But his lips formed a cute smile thinking about sharing such a private moment together.

"No, I'm done anyways. If you want you can re-use this water, but I wouldn't suggest it."

"Aww, Mr. Khan you're so red, like a tamatar! I was just agreeing to what you suggested" He rolled his eyes at her, and knew she wasn't going to let this go.

"Ms. Farooqui, pass me the towel" he sounded stern.

"Ok ok, by the way it's Mrs. Khan, or Zoya… whatever you prefer"

"Zoya, just hand it to me already" he pleaded

*knock knock*

"Wait, I'll go see who it is" she didn't bother pass the towel to him… why would she give him the opportunity to cover up those six pack abs and well toned chest?

He was irritated! What made it worse is that she left the bathroom door wide open, so he had a choice… either he hurried up at get the towel to cover up before she opened the door or sit in the bathtub till the other person left. Whoever it was would be able to see into the bathroom because there were mirrors opposite the door. He was lucky enough to grab the towel and cover himself before she opened the door. He wasn't going out though; he was decent enough to close the door to the bathroom. But for that he wasn't quick enough. His ammi had spotted him in his towel and her with toothpaste in her mouth.

"Oh, did I come in at the wrong time?"

"No ammi" zoya babbled through the toothpaste, she ran to the washroom to gargle… leaving asad to face his mom.

"Woh, ammi. Actually…" before he could say anything Zoya was back.

"Come ammi, sit with us!" She made her sit on the slightly messy bed. Asad rolled his eyes, is this the only time she gets to chat with my mother? I'm half naked and she doesn't care. What's wrong with her! He went into the washroom again, waiting for his ammi to leave and hopefully taking Zoya along

"Zoya, I want you and Asad to go for a picnic today to the Taj resort. I have a booking done on your names, however don't tell anyone ok? It's a secret for now" Asad heard all this and was delighted. But he didn't understand why his mom wanted it to be a secret. But Zoya read and understood Dilshaad expressions. She realized it was a secret so that Tanveer wouldn't know and wouldn't interrupt them.

She hugged Dilshaad and whispered "thank you"

"Beta, I just want the two of you happy. Go have fun" She gave her a huge smile and left.

"Ok Mr. Khan, you can come out now"

"What's wrong with you Zoya! Is this the only time you get to talk to her? You left me without a towel there! And then you make her sit here so that I'm forced to go back into the bathroom?"

"I'm sorry Mr. Khan" she pouted. She realized that it was her fault, and if she argued now – their picnic would be the same. Instead it was better to just be on good terms, so that later she could at least have some romantic moments with him

"It's ok, you can use the washroom now. And please don't make a mess"

"Mr. Khan, I'm not messy, I'm just not OCD like you"

"Ms. Farooqui" he rolled his eyes at her again

"It's Zoya"

"Please go" he desperately needed some clothes, and this was the way out.

How was it guys? Do comment, and feel free to remove your frustration about the ep as well 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: -cyndu-

"Mei na small reply dene mei expert hun aaj dekhna" :D



That was awesome
I loved it yaar.
Uff i am dieing to read the next part.

And now i am gussa and sad
Tumne update kiya aur PM nahi...chal koi nahi mei yaha thi hi nahi varna i would keep an eye on this os! :D

next time jaldi PM karna aur update bhi <3


Sorry 😳 ... but after this, I promise I will PM for sure! And keep writing "short" comments... The shorter the better... 😉 hahahaha




Intend to unres anytime soon? Love reading your comments, hence I'm waiting 😊
Edited by ws12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it... This was lighter.. The shock that we received after the episode.. This was needed.. Thanks for the update.. Loved it.

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