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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sweet_sanju
Awesome update
Well written👏
loved d update
Very emotional 😭

thank u for comment and like its means alot to me 😆

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
it was emotional... destiny play their game...
superb and fabulous ending ... 😭
😭😭

thank u 😊

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
it was emotional... destiny play their game...
superb and fabulous ending ... 😭
😭😭

thank u 😊

Originally posted by: --RAINA--
awsome update...
Lykd it...
Thankx 4 d pm

thanku so much

Originally posted by: Kiarawinget16
awsm

thank u 😊

Originally posted by: sumimita
nice one dear... just loved it...outstanding..

oh god why rey is so selfish... 😔 but ultimately he understood his fault.. thats enough...

thnks for the pm

thank u so much
m happy with the responce
thank u 😊

Originally posted by: nature2
Very well written

thank u bhai 😊

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: yogini64
ohhh... that was heartwrenching beautiful 👏 thanku so much *hugs*
pichle update me.. it felt .. rey love her alot.. 😊 yes that was another phase
but iss update me.. it feels like she's a burden on him .. 😒 mmm umm there is a mistery
career banana tha.. its ok ..
but wats the need to breakup because according to him it just a crape to get married
thats absurd..😡
& now marrying another gal ... 🤬 yesh how mean
poor kriya... got free from every pain atlast 😭 ya so true

ha lovely comment like always love u thanku
m glade ki u loved it 😉 aroma

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: aishu3003
fabulous update aro🤗

beautifully written👏

kria dead😲😭

rey realised his mistake

s der nxt part to ittt

aha next par no plane but i will try as so many work are on hold but i will try let see😉 thank u for loving it
aroma

Originally posted by: kanchi01
Faboulous update...

i m speechless...!!

i was crying while reading...

amazingly written...👏

nd de terrace scene was mast...

luvd dis os...❤️

aww matlab maney rula diya apko
sorry for that
terrace scene that one is my fav also
thank u so much dear

Originally posted by: kria_reyd3
so heart touching story . . . .
So, sad for kriya.
N amazing updte.

thanku😊

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
awesome OS...loved it very very much

thank u
aroma

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Roxxy47
Haila!!! Di tussi Kria nu mar dita *Shock laging* 😲...
N Rey ki engagement karwa di , kossi aur se *Doosra shock laging* ...
Kria did wait for Rey , for three long years but Rey nai aya 😒...
After spending such beautiful time with Kria , when she asked for marrying her , all Rey cared was for his 'So-called-career' 🤔...
Ab mujhe first part samajh mein araha hai 😳...
Well!!! This is a great story 😃...
But unfortunately iss story ki Happy ending nai hui ...
I loved it anyway ❤️...
N thanks for the pm 😊.

yes itna mat shock mey jao yaar sorry
hahah i know wo yada shocking hoga
ha bohat mean hey this rey
ha wahi to mujey b bura lga but maney 2 week lgaye is plot ko create karney k liye

haye finally apko first art samaz mey a gya
thank u
har story ki happy ending ho jroori nahi hota
awww so cute
aroma😊

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: vaishu88
awesome os.. loved d way u showed kria's love for rey n rey's selfishness which made him not think abt kria ever.. now after she s gone he s feeling for d mistake he did.. he got engaged to another girl that he didnt think abt kria at al.. n here kria was waiting for him.. felt bad n sad for kria.. hating this selfish rey.. beautifully u portrayed al d emotions...

thank u so much dear
u know tum logo k comment read karna treat for me
thank u so much for this lovely comment
it means a lot to me
aroma😊

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

******

okay
Finally i think i replied each and every comment sorry if i didn't
first of all thank u so much everyone
for your likes and lovely comments
its means alot to me
you reading your comment is treat for me
m glade that u all love this piece of work
i know its ending was sad
but as you know har story ki happy ending nahi hoti
so maney people asked me that is there another part of this work
then i would like to clear that
still i have no plane
as there is so many work of mine on hold
it is the end of story
but at the end thank u so much
love u all
aroma😊

*******

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

wowsoem work di
thnku for the pm

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

so sorry... for late comment, i guess main last one hun..

waise this was most unexpected end i have ever read.. Kriya died, although accidentally but i had read and re-read that part.

I really loved the way you flowed out kriya's emotions and her reactions to rey's confession abt his big offer.. but mujhe sachi main buhat bura laga jab rey ne kriya ko chod diya...

but the way u wrote every bit of past and present expressions of both kriya and rey made me role over my brain... i just so so loved every thing..
ur dialogues were fab, and the situation was nice even though sad ending but i liked it very much..

what more i can say..amazing usage of emotions, be it unconditional love of kriya or working aspirations of rey...

fabulous, superb... and the end made me teary though she didnt wanted to die but her destiny left her hand..i really was shocked at that...

thanks aro for giving me scraps abt this OS..love u...

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