virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 58

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Posted: 12 years ago
nahi... maine abhi socha nahi meera...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

nahi... maine abhi socha nahi meera...

hmmm 🤓
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Posted: 12 years ago
update was sooo sweet full on virman only - loved it especially the way manvi wakes up in virats arms in the morning n her cute way of talkin n tellin him to put AC on 😳nice waiting for next chapter nw - thanx a lot for this nice n romantic update😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Huma0301

update was sooo sweet full on virman only - loved it especially the way manvi wakes up in virats arms in the morning n her cute way of talkin n tellin him to put AC on 😳nice waiting for next chapter nw - thanx a lot for this nice n romantic update😉

thank u huma 😃
next chapter also coming soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
romantic update...
thank you naina..didn't read the other one..
will comment one i do...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb se b upper wala update grl full of romance with such a lovely song ❤️👏👏👏👏👏👏 maanvi was seducing virat 😲😲 n poor virat can't control himself luved dis side of her 😊😊😊 n liked dat part very much when she ask him who was at door he says maya n she replies did she say anything 2 u tell me i will broke her legs totally sheri avatar 😃😃😃 i m wondering wht will happened whn maanvi came 2 know dat maya was d 1 who broke his virat heart n make his life like hell surely she will kill maya may god keep maya save 4rm sherni
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

Superb se b upper wala update grl full of romance with such a lovely song ❤️👏👏👏👏👏👏 maanvi was seducing virat 😲😲 n poor virat can't control himself luved dis side of her 😊😊😊 n liked dat part very much when she ask him who was at door he says maya n she replies did she say anything 2 u tell me i will broke her legs totally sheri avatar 😃😃😃 i m wondering wht will happened whn maanvi came 2 know dat maya was d 1 who broke his virat heart n make his life like hell surely she will kill maya may god keep maya save 4rm sherni

first of all thank u for the comment... i am in love with ur comments yaar... 😳 😃 the question that u a re asking is on everybody's mind... what will manvi do when she comes in terms with the truth 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
next update coming in
10 minutes...!!!!
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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PART 18

" knock knock "

manvi woke up suddenly hearing the knock on the door.
virat : what happened...??
manvi : someone is at the door banging it from donno how much time...
both got dressed n manvi opened the door.
manvi : tarun...??
tarun : manvi bhabhi swamini madam aap dono ko neeche bula rahe hai...
manvi ; acha theek hai... tum jao...
manvi closed the door n told virat.
virat : what do u they need yaar...?? humari khushi dekhi nahi jaati inse...
manvi : virat... i am damn hungry...
virat : me too...
manvi : lagta hai aaj pani se hi kaam chalana padhega...
virat : i think i have some cookies in stock...
manvi : oh yeah... we have a stock mantained... there is no need to worry...
virat : exactly...
virman stuffed themselves with cookies n wafers n made their way downstairs after getting fresh.
manvi : good morning maa... good morning buaji...
virat : good morning mom n bua...
vanshika : good morning... where were u two in the morning...???
manvi : vo actually... hum wo... 😳
virat : raat ko room mein machar bahut the...
swamini : hmmm... macchar... i see... 😉
manvi : acchhu...
virat : manvi...
manvi : acchuu... acchhuu...
virat : dekha thand lag gayi na...
manvi : i m fine...accchhhuu...
virat : kya jarurat thi baarish mein baby doll banne ki...??
viren : exactly... u guys are just impossible junior mrs. n mr. vadera...
manvi : jiju he meant...
viren : i know what u both meant guys... i am also a married man... i can understand... 😉
swamini : viren...
viren : badi maa... mera matlab...
vanshika : dont tease them viren... its okk...
virat n manvi till now were hell embarrased n looking down.
swamini : anyways virat... bauji said he wants u to go to meet some client in delhi along with viren...
virat : what...??? no... i mean... i have pending work over here...
swamini : this is also work... i am not sending u for chilling out over there...
viren : chal na... dono bhai chalenge na...
virat glared at viren listening this while manvi was just too upset thinking of being away from virat...
manvi : kitne din ka trip hai...???
swamini looked at manvi n laughed " already missing ur partner... "
vanshika got up n hugged manvi n said " cmon... it wouldnt take that long... and u have ur friends here, u can spend time with them... "
virat suddenly remembered about kabir n maya... two people who are probably hell bent on spoiling his marriage, his relationship everything. he there n then decided that he wouldnt leave manvi alone with these two...
virat : bhai i wanna talk to you...
viren : okk... come to the study...

scene shifts
viren : so what do u want to talk about...???
virat : i dont want to leave manvi alone with kabir n maya...
viren : hmmm...
virat : bhai they are surely upto something... last night at the dinner table, they thought that piyali is my and manvi's daughter -
viren : and their body language n facial expression... i also think something is fishy...
virat : i think i was right... kabir has feelings for manvi... i think he loves manvi...
viren : and may be maya wants you back...
virat : exactly...
viren : dont worry n stay here only... n let them play whatever tricks they wish to...
virat : bhai...??
viren : manvi's n your love is strong enough to face anything they both can bring on... just tell manvi about maya n fir dikhio, kuch galat nahi hoga... aur meri saali sahiba toh sherni hai... sherni hai...
virat : hmm... i think u are right... i should tell manvi...
viren : bingo... by the way office toh chal sakta hai na...???
virat : yeah... gimme 15 minutes... see u in car bhai...
viren : okkk...

scene shifts
virat entered his room n saw manvi sitting on the bed n crying...
virat : manvi...
manvi : please dont go... i will miss u so much 😭
virat : what can you do stop me from going...??
manvi : anything... kuch bhi...
virat : promise...??
manvi : pakka promise... please dont go...
virat jumped on the bed n lay down with his head in manvi's lap n said ' theek hai... toh fir jaana cancel... "
manvi : really...??
virat : really wala really... i talked to bhai n he is going alone...
manvi : woww... i love you...
virat : i love you tooo... now kissy time...
manvi : kissy time at night... not now...
virat : haaww... cmon na... (holding her neck and pulling her towards him)
" ohhh fooo "
manvi n virat looked at the source of the sound n saw piyali standing there with her hands on her hips...
virat : piya... mela baby.. come here...
piyali came running n stood on the bed
piyali : vilat... ye meli jagah hai... (pointing towards manvi's lap)
virat : nahi... ye meli jagah hai...
piyali : meli hai...
virat : meri hai... try to understand piyali...
manvi : virat kya kar rahe ho...???
piyali : chachi dekho na...
manvi : all becos of u virat, she doesnt calls me masi... she calls me chachi...
piyali : chachi ko masi thodi kehte hai... hai na vilat...??
virat : haan meri jaan...
manvi : arghh...
someone knocked on the door n it was maya and kabir.

@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@today is my little brother's birthday... so i was very busy in making his day special... but how can i forget you all... here is cake for all of u... enjoyyy...
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
:)

**** :D ****

Loved the upd8! VirMan as always d best and my Viren chooo cute as always! lolzzz The way he said "I am married and I too understand" lollzzz!!!!!! Iss " KaYA" ko jaldi futa story se and haan jane se pehle make manvi give a Karara jawaab to Maya ki bachchii and kabir as well!


Edited by abbay - 12 years ago

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