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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Aww Angel is tooo. Cute, I love her antics l
Reyam are too funny even with age they didn't Change. Swayam possessive bhai side is hilarious. Hmm poor Raj now he have four soldiers looking at him from different sides lol. Angel love her bhais so much
Adi and Yash is too sweet, omg they beat up the guy who throw a ball at their.Angel making her bleed is unacceptable. Reyam are so scared of Shani lol. Love the cockroach lol, it was amazing. I love the entire update

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: raveena1

sorry sorry di...sorry for late cmmnt..


wow ...amazing update di...haaye i lovd it...that 4 possisive men scene was hilarious...wow pehle to adi and rey hi the par ab ro swayam and yash bhi...bechara raj...shaani talk was nyc...really these possisive bro's ,father and mamu are amazing...
then reyam tlk in office was so nyc...swayam is still a possesive bhai...

hate that guy..how could he hurt angel...adiyash ne bilkul sahi kiya...lovd the way they beat that guy...then reyam taking their side..angel getting angry with 4 of them...then shaani scolding adiyash and reyam apreciating them was hilarious...sach mein dono apni wifes se kitna darte h...and at last that cockroach scene and TR & SS romance was superb...


overall the whole chapter was mind-blowing...i didnt loose my focus or interest for even a single secnd...amazing wrk di..lovd it.

banner on pg1 is also beutiful...
plz update nxt soon...i m in love with ur writting and this FF.


its ok dear don't say soory
n thanku 4 such a big comment muah love u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Gosh dr,has haske mera pet duk raha hai,lolz.Do kam reh gaya ta kya,ab char aa gaya.Bechare Raj & ths boys.Shani wr amazing in mtrly & wife avtars.D lst TR & SS scn ws damn cute.


thanks dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelypriya

wow so superb update angle has so many people around her n loved her alot n she tooo lucky n thank for pm do uypdate soion dear

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Awsum part
Angel is so adorable
N shaani chup kra diya reyam ko hehehe.!!!
Then yash adi n angel were funny
N reyam ko humesha romance sujta rehta h
Update soon n do PM me

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taareylove

awesome update loved it so much

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CHAPTER-4

TWO YEARS LATER- ANGEL-14, ADI-16 N YASH-17

Singhania house

It was a normal working day n taani was asusual in hurry…she had to prepare breakfast 4 the family….get ready for office….she is working as fast as she could in kitchen she tied her pallu on her waiste n start working

Rey come downstairs wearing his watch n calls

Rey-taani!!!

Taani-kitchen mai ho

Rey goes to kitchen n found his wife working in kitchen..here taani removes sweat from her face n continues her work

She again pull her hands to remove sweat when rey holds her hand n taani looks at him in confusion…rey removes sweat from his hand n hugs her from back..placing his chin on her shoulder…taani smiles on her caring husband

Rey-taani tumse itne baar kaha hai k ek cook rakh lete hai tum meri baat sunte kyu nai ho

Taani-nai koi cook nai aaega mai apne bacho ko khud khana bana k khilonge

Rey(rolled his eyes she is never gonna listen to him)-acha baba koi cook nai aaega kush….he again hugs her n kiss her neck

Taani-rey kya kar rahe ho aap bache dekh lenge toh kya khenge

Rey-arre yahi khenge k dekho papa mumma se abhi bhi kitna pyaar karte hai..aur mummy k kitne taarif karte hai

Taani-acha aapne kab meri taarif k

Rey-acha toh lo abhi kar deta ho…n he starts singing n dancing

Yeh chandsa roshan chehra(rey holding taani's face)
Zulfon ka rang sunehra(touching her hairs)
Yeh jheel si neeli ankhen(looking at her eyes)
Koi raaz hai inme gehra
Taarif karun kya uski jisne tumhe banaya(rey singing n taani blushing)

Yeh chandsa roshan chehra(rey holding taani's face)
Zulfon ka rang sunehra(touching her hairs)
Yeh jheel si neeli ankhen(looking at her eyes)
Koi raaz hai inme gehra
Taarif karun kya uski jisne tumhe banaya

Ek cheez qayamat bhi hai
Logon se suna karte the(spinning taani in air)
Tumhe dekh ke maine mana
Woh theek kaha karte the(looking lovingly at her)
Woh theek kaha karte the

Hai chaal mein teri zaalim
Kuch aisi bala ka jaadu(looking at her as she walk to other place in kitchen)
Sau baar sambhala dilko
Par ho ke raha bekabu(placing his hand on his heart n acting as if handling it)
Taarif karun kya uski jisne tumhe banaya(rey singing while dancing with taani)

Yeh chandsa roshan chehra(showing taani a mirror n saying u have a beautiful face)
Zulfon ka rang sunehra(playing with her hairs)
Yeh jheel si neeli ankhen
Koi raaz hai inme gehra(looks deeply in her eyes)
Taarif karun kya uski jisne tumhe banaya(kneeling infront of her n singing)

Har subah kiran ki lali
Hai rang tere gaalo ka(rey singing while touching taani's cheeks)
Har shaam ki chadar kali
Saaya hai tere balo ka(kissing her hairs)

Har subah kiran ki lali
Hai rang tere gaalo ka(kissing her cheeks)
Har shaam ki chadar kali
Saaya hai tere balo ka(smelling her hairs)

Tu balkhati ek nadiya
Har mauj teri angdaayee
Jo in maujo mein dooba
Usne hi yeh duniya payi(doing a salsa step with her while she is trying to cook)
Taarif karun kya uski jisne tumhe banaya

taarey hug n taani smiles n thanks to god 4 such a loving husband

Just then a voice came

Voice-mom!!!

Taarey gets apart n stands sepraretly n adi enters wearing his watch(just like his dad)

Adi-mom I m leaving….(looks at them n raised his eyebrows)-r u guys ok???

Rey-ha ha bilkul bikul

Adi-really???...like really???

Taani(changes topic)-tu kaha ja raha hai…school ka time to late hai na

Adi-ma match k practice k liye ja raha ho

Taani-toh breakfast kon karega tera papa!!!

Adi(normally)-ha unko karna hai toh wo kare

Taani-adi!!! Tu breakfast kiye bina nai jaega bol diya maine

Adi-mom plz solid late ho raha ho

Taani-nai mujhe kuch nai sunna tu ja phele angel ko uta

Adi-wo nai hai…(rey n adi eyes popped out n they mummers shit)

Taani-nai hai matlab…kaha gaye….yeh ladki bhi na bina batae kaha chale jati hai

Rey-arre jane do na taani

Taani-aap toh chup he karo…aapke wajah se meri bachi bigar jayege

Adi rolled his eyes n said-mom…dad aapke saath puri life hai

Taarey-ha toh

Adi-toh aap dad ko baad mai daat lena…abhi breakfast do I m getting super late

Rey-late k bache ruk tu..(rey runs after him n adi runs outside now both sit on dinning table waiting 4 breakfast)

Soon they saw a window open n someone peeps inside n adi whistle(this was the sign that taani is not der)

Angel jumps in n goes n hugs her dadda n kiss him on cheeks n goes n sit beside adi

Adi-ma tere bare mai pooch rahe the

An-oh tere!!! Hey Krishna ji mar gaye mai….ma ko pata chal gaya k mai nai thi…mai ja rahe ho(she was about to run when adi holds her hand)

Adi-breakfast???

An-arre nai karna….jane do na ma aajayege

Adi-nai phele breakfast

An-arre mamu k ghar kar longi abhi jane do

Adi-no way

An-bhai aap mujhe jane de rahe ho ya nai

Adi-nai

An-fine…looking at door…hi naina

Adi(leaves her hand)-kaha hai kaha hai

Angel runs out laughing

Adi-angel k bachi tu ghar par aa phir batata ho tujhe n sit blushing a bit

Rey(raiseing his eyebrows)-yeh naina kon hai

Adi-meri…meri…meri friend hai ha friemd hai classmate…classmate hai meri

Rey-acha…classmate(thinks-beta apne baap se jooth bol raha tere papa ne in feeling mai phd kare hai)

Just then taani came

Taani-kaha gae angel abhi toh yahi thi…mai kheh dete ho agli baar yeh bina batae gae na toh mujhse bura koi nai hoga

Adi n rey rolled their eyes n adi said-mom mai ja raha ho bye

Rey-mai bhi chalta ho…both leave

Taani-haad hai meri baat toh koi sunta he nai hai

IN SHIKHAWAT HOUSE

An enter an-mamu!!!

Sh-lo aa gae madam…

Sw-angel aaja jaldi se breakfast kar le

Sh serves her but she looks here n there n asked-bhaiyu kaha hai???

Sw-janab upar hai neeche aane ka naam he nai le raha pata nai kya kar raha hai

An-mai dekh kar aati ho

Angel goes to his room n found him holding a dumbbell but lost in thoughts

An-bhaiyu…(no reponse)…bhaiyu(no reponse)

An shakes him bhaiyu!!!!...

Yash-ha kya hai….ahhh(his dumbbell hurt him as he was holding it from long time)

An-bhaiyu aap kya kar rahe ho!!!! Lag gae na abhi!!!! Kar kya rahe the aap

Yash-na na kuch nai chal na breakfast karte hai

Both went down n had breakfast

An-mamu mai ja rahe ho bye…bye mami bye bhaiyu

Yash-aee mujhe kya bye bol rahe hai mai tere saath chal raha ho

An-bhaiyu shayad aap bhool gaye ho k aap na 12th pass kar le hai ab aap collage jaoge school nai

Yash(smile)-meri sweet se pyaari se angel mai kuch nai bhola ho mai tere saath school ja raha ho tujhe drop karna as adi has already left

Angel smiles fades-u r kidding right???

Yash-no sweety

An-u can't do this to me…mamu dekho na

Sw(taking yash side)-arre angel karne de na drop acha he toh hai

An-nai…mami kuch kaho na

Sh-yash wo bachi nai hai wo chali jaege

Swn yash-bachi he hai

An-nai mai aapke saath nai jaane wale

Yash-hahahha u don't have any choice my baby sister…(he picked her from stomach n took her with him)

Yash-taxi!!!

A taxi come n stop n both sit n reached an's school

An comes out n closed door loudly n said-I hate u bhaiyu

Yash-but I love u my baby sister muah!!!

Here in "REYAM ACADMY"

Rey was reading a file when someone knock on door…rey said come in…but he didn't turn as he was reading the file

A couple enter…but rey didn't saw them….the guy called on his phone…

Rey's phone rings n he without seeing picks up

Rey-hello

Guy-rey

Rey-who's this???

Guy-saale ab tu meri awaaz bhol gaya peeche dekh

Rey turn n saw the couple n said

Rey-tum log yaha

Couple-surprise

Rey-saale tu kab aaya wapas aur bataya kyu nai

Guy-abbe agar bata deta toh surprise kaisa

Rey-tu kabhi nai sudhrega "Vicky"

Yes the couple was viha but this is not my surprise entry…there is one more(this is specially for u-me-aur-d3…n vini)


Vicky hug rey…vic-kaisa hai tu

Rey-ek dum fit n fine aur tu kaisa hai…neha kaise ho tum

Neha-all good rey…acha rey where is sh

Rey-sw k cabin mai…neha went to meet sh..

Rey-hey by the way mera rockstar kaha hai

Vic-school gaya hai milne

Rey-ok good

HERE IN ANGEL'S SCHOOL

Adi was busy in his match practice n angel was walking in corridor when someone block her way

An-excuse me???? Will u let me go

Guy-n if I say no then???

An observe the guy oh crap he was the same guy who hit her with ball 2 year ago…

An(again)-will u just leave my way

Guy-no miss "angel"

Now angel hate it she loves calling angel only n only by her family n close friends

An-the name is "shanaya singhania" not angel get it

Guy-what if I still prefer angel

Voice from back-what if I complain about ur stupid act to principal

Angel saw him n a big smile came she goes n hugs him but the guy was looking at guy who was teasing angel

Guy-who the hell r u….I have never seen u in this school

Voice-I m vihaan….. "vihaan kalsi"(surprise ok vihaan is the only son of viha n best friend of angel…he is also 14…n rey,sw adi n yash have no prob with him being angel's best friend)

Vihaan-look she is my best friend ok n sister of adi I guess u know it…so u better stay away from her getting it

Guy-whatever(leave)

Vihaan turn n angel hugs him tighitly

An-I miss u I miss u I miss u sooo much

Vihaan-I miss u too

An-miss u k bache jabse delhi gaya hai ek baar bhi call nai kiya….ab tu yaha kaise

Vihaan(putting hands on her shoulder)-dear ab mai yahi rhene wala ho aur tere saath issi school mai padhonga

An-what!!! Wow she hugs her

Just then some girls came

G1-oh my my…angel on her new catch

An-y r u jealous

G1-y will I be jealous….anyways I m feeling sad 4 u

An-really n y is that(kya attitude hai bilkul rey par gae haišŸ˜†šŸ˜†)

G2-because school ek week k liye trip pe jar aha hai aur tum nai aa paogi

An-acha tumhe kisne kaha k mai nai aa paongi

G1-kaise jaogi miss "angel" is trip k baad directly adi ka match hai toh adi toh ja nai paega so wo tumhe akele jane bhi nai dega "angel"

An-mai jaogi chahe joh ho

G2-keep dreaming angel

An-for the first and the last time the name is shanaya singhania not angel…..n mai is trip jaoge u both just wait n watch

Both girls went….

Now the confidient face of angel has turned into tensed n she looked at vihaan blinking her eyes continuously

Vihaan-what!!!! Don't even ask me I m not gonna help u in this

An-how could u tu mera best friend hai…tu mere liya itna nai kar sakta

Vihaan-nai!!! Dekh mujhe na adi or yash se pitne ka koi shock nai hai samjhe n I m not doing anything

An-plz na kuch kar na plz(making a puppy face)

Vihaan-ab yeh puppy face mat bana…acha ruk kuch soochta ho

An starts laughing n vihaan gave her what look

An-tu aur sopchega hehehehehe rare hai

Vihaan glared at her…an-sorry sorry sooch na plz

Vihaan-acha sun agar tere dad aur mamu…adi aur yash permission de dete hai toh mai tere saath is trip mai chalne ko tayyar ho

An glared at him

An(sarcastic way)-reaaly!!! Itne bade help kar raha hai tu meri wow I m so blessed

Vihaan-yr ek toh mai aaj he aaya ho aur bina rest kiya tere saath 2 din bad trip pe jane k liye ready bhi ho aur tu hai k aisa kheh rahe hai

An-acha acha sorry..natak mat kar…mai he kuch soochte ho

EVENING AT SINGHANIA HOUSE

An was sitting n thinking how to patao everyone

An thinks-kya karo kaise patao sabko

Rey saw her weird expressions n asked-an beta kyu hua

An-kuch nai dadda…..dadda bhai kaha hai

Rey-wo sw k ghar par hai

Angel runs to sw's huse n asked sh where is bhai n bhaiyu n sh told they r in yash's room…angel goes there

Angel enter n saw adi n yash playing play station n an thinks-hey khrishna ji plz bacha lena ha plz

She went to then n said cutely-bhai…bhaiyu

Adi-angel abhi disturb mat kar

An-mujhe kuch poochna hai

Yash-ha toh jaldi pooch

An-wo…mai…mai…mai school trip pe jao

Adi n yash-ha ja na isme pooch kya rahe hai

An-yes!!! She was about to go when

Adi(realize what she asked)-ek min ruk kaha jana hai

An-school trip pe

Adi-no way

Yash-arre jane de na angel tu ja

Adi-arre kya ja…mai us trip pe nai ja raha ho n mai angel ko akele nai jane donga

Yash-kya tu nai ja raha hai

Adi-ha mera match hai isiliye….angel tu nai ja rahe hai

An-mai ja rahe ho maine kheh diya nai

Adi-maine kaha tu nai ja rahe hai

An-mai ja rahe ho

Yash-ek min ek min angel agar to apne dad aur mamu ko mana lete toh ja sakte hai ok

An(smile)-really thanku(she went away)

Adi-kya kiya tune

Yash-tu chill kar dad aur fufaji(rey) kabhi nai maanne wale

Adi-really tu yeh bhool raha hai k wo "shanaya singhania" hai wo dad aur mamu dono ko pata legi

Huh finally done with chapter-5 do like it n comment plz(big one)

Prcap-will angel be able to get the pwrmission from rey n sw….n if yes what will happen in the trip with her…n how rey sw adi n yash gonna live without her for a week……stay tune

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing uodate dear😊
loved it😃
first taarey romance that was speechless😳😳
then adi's entry...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
naina...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
then surprise entries vicky neha n vihaan awwwšŸ˜›
vihaan is soo caringšŸ˜›šŸ˜›
that guy hmmm abi b vo angel ki piche kyu hei😔😔😔
update soon n pm me
thanks alot for the update vo b itni jaldi
thank uuušŸ¤—
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awww so sweet update šŸ‘šŸ‘

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