||FF- Pyar Ka Asar||Ch-1 to Ch-34||CLOSED!!! - Page 98

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

123.4k

Users

33

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

kiran_28 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushika

Hi kiran an awesome update. . Lalit and preet chase ! Prem's and gay3's convo regarding heer. . Awwie cho cute. <3 <3 and then prem coming over to heer's house and saying that cute sorry and then heer getting pissed off at prem's leg pulling. . Awesome. . Hehehe i loved the dialogues. . The update was very cute. Waiting for next. And better that rampal doesnt do anything stupid. . Otherwise forget prem but m surely gonna kill him. Thanks for the pm tc

thanks vrushu for reading and commenting😃...dont worry nothing gonna happen to premeer...trust me 😳
Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
jerrenkarthi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
love the preet n lalit scene
ragvir92 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late comment dear
The update was really good
Ya and ofcourse happy and smooth without that ramphal
Prem is as usual really understanding and sweet
His talks with balraj-teji is really good and emotional
I liked how prem said sorry to heer even without asking reason
he is really understanding and loves heer a lot
Their scene was short but cute
Now what will happen in Ramphal's house?
Waiting for it
Thanks for pm
Update soon with more premeer scenes
kiran_28 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

love the preet n lalit scene

thank u so much 😳
kiran_28 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ragvir92

Sorry for the late comment dear

The update was really good
Ya and ofcourse happy and smooth without that ramphal
Prem is as usual really understanding and sweet
His talks with balraj-teji is really good and emotional
I liked how prem said sorry to heer even without asking reason
he is really understanding and loves heer a lot
Their scene was short but cute
Now what will happen in Ramphal's house?
Waiting for it
Thanks for pm
Update soon with more premeer scenes

ya i know Prem is really very cute and understanding...😳 glad u liked the chap...will try to update asap...i'd started writing next chap...will update as soon as i finish writing next chap...thanks for the comment 😃
kiran_28 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Thank u so much for liking..🤗
kiran_28 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter-33

Rampal Mansion

Rishab was roaming here and there in the living room. He was eagerly waiting for Heer. His eyes were on the door or on the clock. It was 7.45 P.M still no sign of Prem and Heer. Seeing her brother restless Sanjana got curious.

Sanjana:- Bhaiya, kya baat hai. Ap baar baar darwaze ki taraf ya ghardi ki taraf kyun dekh rahe hain.

Rishab:- umm nahi, umm main to yeh dekh raha tha ki 7.45 baj gaye hain or Heer abhi tak'(Sanjana looked at rishab surprisingly) ummm'mera matlab hai Heer aur Prem abhi tak nahi aaye. Unhe to 7.30 baje tak ajana tha na, to abhi tak kyun nahi aye.

Sanjana:- Don't worry bhaiya, wo log ajayenge. Shayad traffic mein phas gaye honge.

Rishab:- Main call karke dekhta hun.

He accidently dialed Heer's number. And when he noticed it, he immediately disconnects it.

Sanjana:- Kya hua bhaiya?

Rishab:- nahi kuch nahi wo maine galati se kisi or ka number dail kar diya tha.

And saying this he starts dialing Prem's number

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

Both Prem and Heer reached Rampal Mansion. Prem stops the car, he looked at Heer and smiled and nodded his head as if he was asking shall we go inside. Heer too smiled and nodded her head positively. Prem got out from the car, went to Heer's side, opened the door and stretched his hand towards her. Heer smilingly looked at Prem and put her hand on his and came out of the car. Prem closed the door. He gave signal to watchman and when he came he asked him to park the car and handed him his car keys. Just then Heer's phone starts ringing. She looked at her phone. The call was from the same unknown number.

Heer (thinks):- Phir se wohi number!!! Kon hai yeh idiot.

She was about to accept the call but before that her phone stops ringing.

Prem:- Oh madam, kaha khoi woi ho, chale andar?

Heer smiled

Heer:- Han chalo'

They reached near the door. Prem was about to press the door bell, just then his phone started ringing. Prem looked at his phone

Prem:- Rishab ka call!!!

Hearing Rishab's name Heer got suspicious and starts thinking

Heer (thinks):- Abhi muje us unknown number se miss call aai or ab Prem ko rishab ka call aya. Kahin yeh unknown number Rishab ka to nahi'. Nahi nahi, Heer tu kuch zyada hi james bond banne ki koshish kar rahi hai. Rishab tuje aise call karke kyun pareshan karega. Ab faltu mein apna zyada dimang mat chala Heer'

Heer's thought was interrupted by Prem's voice who was talking to Rishab on the phone

Prem:- Han Rishab hum log tumhare ghar ke bahar hi hain, darwaza kholo

Rishab:- acha tum log bahar hi ho, ok main abhi darwaza kholta hun

Rishab almost ran towards the door. He opened the door. He got numb for a second when he saw heer in dark green neckline top with black jeans. She left her hairs loosen. She didn't apply any makeup except kajal in her beautiful eyes. Rishab was too busy in admiring Heer that he didn't notice Prem who getting little furious on the way he was looking at Heer. When Prem saw Heer is getting till nervous because of Rishab's gaze, he possessively put his hand on her waist in order to tell Rishab that he was eyeing on his Heer.

Sanjana being the witness of this uncomfortable situation, tried to interrupted this session.

Sanjana:- umm hi Heer, hi Prem'welcome!!!

Now Prem got little uncomfortable in presence of Sanjana and Heer passes a weak smile to her. After hearing Sanjana's voice, Rishab came out of his dreamland and notice Prem. He quickly stretched his hand to shake hand with Prem.

Rishab:- Welcome Prem!!!

Prem (with fake smile):- Thanks Rishab

Rishab:- Hi heer, how are you?

Heer:- umm I am fine thank you

Sanjana:- arre tum yahin kharde rahoge kya? Andar aaouna'

Both Prem and Heer entered. Prem's hand was still on Heer's waist. Rishab didn't like the way Prem was possessively holding Heer's waist. He purposely stumbled on Prem which make Prem leave Heer's waist to balance himself from falling'

Rishab (with fake guilt):- Oh I am so sorry Prem, pata nahi achanak se kya hua..mera pair slip ho gaya'I am sorry..

Prem:- Its ok Rishab..koi baat nahi hota hai..

Sanjana:- Prem tum thik to hona..tumhe kahin chot to nahi lagi..

Now it's time for Heer to get jealous. She saw Sanjana was coming near Prem asking him how he was. But before that Heer came forward and hold Prem's arm.

Heer (curtly):- Don't worry sanju'Main huna mere Prem ke sath wo thik bilkul thik hai'

Sanjana got the message from Heer's tone that she is not liking her concern for Prem and decided to keep quite. Prem smiled seeing his possessive Heer. And Rishab was boiling in anger. Just then Rishab's parents Mr. Ranjeet Singh Rampal and Mrs Ponam Rampal came there and greet their guests..Prem and Heer took their blessings..

Mr and Mrs Rampal:- Khush raho!!!

Prem and Heer smiled. Sanjana smiled sadly and Rishab's face was like "what the hell is going on"

Ponam:- Arre tum sab log aise hi kharde rahoge 'baitho na'

Prem, Rishab and Ranjeet sit together and Heer, Sanjana and Ponam sit together.

Ranjeet:- I am so sorry Prem, hum sab tumhari engagement pe nahi asake'Invitation to mila tha lekin kya hua na ussi din Rishab India wapis aya tha to isiliye hum nahi apaye..I hope you understand beta..

Prem:- Its ok uncle'I can understand..koi baat nahi'

Just then servants came there with snacks and tea. Seeing the snacks Heer got excited and exclaimed

Heer (excitedly):- Aloo-Gobi ke pakorde!!!!

Everyone looked at Heer with surprise. When she realize, she got embarrass

Heer (embarrassed):- umm wo sorry

Prem smiled seeing Heer's reaction and explain everyone.

Prem:- actually wo kya haina Heer ko Aloo-Gobi ke pakorde bohot pasand hai. Aur jab bhi wo Aloo-gobi ke pakorde dekhti hai to wo kuch zyada hi excited ho jati hai..

Rishab got delighted knowing that Heer loves Aloo-gobi ke pakorde because he too loves it'

Rishab (thinks):- Meri or Heer ki pasand kitni milti hai'no doubt we are perfect for each other'

Ponam:- Koi baat nahi beta'yeh sab tumhare liye hi to hai'jitney marzi ho sake khao..

Everyone started eating the snacks and Heer was eating like she haven't seen pakorde since ages'Everyone was admiring Heer's childish behavior. Rishab was continuously gazing at Heer'Prem was smilingly looking at Heer'Sanjana saw Prem looking at Heer admiringly..he was continuously smiling at Heer's childish behavior..

Sanjana (think):- Heer kitni lucky ke usse Prem..mila'.kitni achi or pyari Jodi hai dono ki'.i wish in dono ki Jodi ko kisi ki nazar na lage'meri bhi nahi'.

Then sanjana saw her brother was intensly gazing at Heer'Sanjana got suspicious'

Sanjana (thinks):- Bhaiya heer ko aise kyun dekh rahe hai???'kahin unke mann mein heer ke liye kuch'.muje bhaiya se baat karni hogi is bare mein'

After everyone finished eating snacks..sanjana and Ponam took the plates and tray to the kitchen'Heer looked at Prem who was continuously smiling at her. She raised her eyebrows asking him what happen'prem smilingly nodded his head saying nothing'Heer gave Prem a very cute look and got from her seat took her plate and went to the kitchen with sanjana and Ponam. This little eye conversation of Prem and Heer didn't missed by Rishab. He angrily looked at Prem who was now talking to his dad.

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

Heer put her plate into the sink.

Ponam:- Arre Heer beta 'tum kyun yeh sab kar rahi ho..chordo'servants haina wo sab karlenge..tum rehne do..

Heer:- koi baat nahi aunty..

Sanjana:- Kya koi baat nahi Heer'.mumma bilkul thik keh rahi hai..tum yeh sab rehne do'

Ponam:- Tum bahar jaake aram se baitho..

Heer:- aunty bahar saare gents log business ki baatien kar rahe hai'main wahan bore ho jaoungi...

Sanjana:- Heer ek kam karte hain'tum mere sath mere room mein chalo..hum baith ke baatien karte hai..

Ponam:- Han, tum dono snaju ke room mein jaake baatien karo..dinner ke time mein tumhe bula lungi..ok

Sanjana:- Han yeh thik hai'chalo heer

Heer gave a smile to Ponam and went with Sanjana to her room.

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

Ranjeet:- Prem main or rishab soch rahe the'ki Rampal and juneja's ne kai projects pe ek sath kaam kiya hai'which results a good profit to our companies'.to kyun na hum ek or project mein kaam kare..meine tumhare bauji se is bare mein baat ki hai'unhone bataya ho ga tumhe us project ke bare mein'.

Prem:- Ji uncle bauji ne bataya tha'lekin'yeh jo apka naya mall project hai'jiske bare mein ap baat kar rahe hai'apne us project ka turnover 200 crore rakha hai'uncle yeh amount kuch zyada nahi hai..

Ranjeet:- han mein janta hun 200 crore bohot bardi rakam hai..lekin yeh idea rishab ka hai'or muje uspe poora bharosa hai'usne soch samjh ke hi yeh amount decide ki hogi'

Prem:- kya rishab ne????

Rishab:- han Prem maine'don't worry'maine jo plan banaya hai'usme loss ka koi chance hi nahi'

Prem:- wo to thik hai rishab..lekin'jis jagaha yeh mall ban raha..hai'.wo jagha kitni sunsan hai'are you sure it will work'

Rishab:- off-course Prem'I am 100% sure'it will work'bas tum is deal ke liye razi ho jao'phir rampals & junejas companies india ki top 10 ki jagha top 5 companies mein se ek hogi'.

Prem:- Lekin'rishab ek baar socho'agar galti se bhi koi galti ho gai..to humari companies ko bohot barda nuksaan ho saakta'and business mein profit ke ilawa hume loss ka bhi estimation lagaage bhi chalna pardta hai'ek choti si laparwai bohot barda nuksaan karwa sakti hai'just think about it'

Rishab:- Prem tum loss ki chinta mat karo'koi loss nahi hoga'main aisa kuch nahi hone dunga'trust me'

Prem:- Thik hai'lekin yeh itna barda fiasla mein akele nahi le sakta'muje apne board of directors se bhi is bare mein baat karni hogi'uske baat hi mein bata paounga tumhe'.

Rishab:- ok Prem no problem'take your time

Rishab smiled at Prem.Ranjeet starts giving details of the project to Prem'.as his father and Prem was busy in talking Rishab saw Sanjana and Heer are going upstairs'after thinking something he excuse himself from his dad and Prem he went upstairs behind Sanjana and Heer..

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

Sanjana's room

Sanjana:- Heer baitho na

Sanjana took her phone's charger and put her phone on charging'Heer was roaming around the room. She noticed a stain on Sanjana's dress

Heer:- Sanju'yeh tumhari dress pe yeh stain kaisa'

Sanjana looked at her dress and found a reddish stain'

Sanjana:- oh lagta hai'pakorde khane ke time tomato sauce gir gai hogi'tum baitho'make yourself comfortable main bas 5 minute mein dress change karke athi hun ok'

Heer:- han han koi baat nahi tum jao change karlo'mae yahin hun'

Sanjana took her new dress from the closet and went inside the washroom

Heer was just looking around the room'she stood in front of the dressing table and start adjusting her hairs, earings, dress etc'after few seconds she saw rishab from the mirror, he was standing at the door folded his arms on his chest..And he was busy in admiring her'Heer immediately turned around'and looked at Rishab.

Heer:- ap..ap kab aaye'

Rishab smiled at her'he came near her'.brought his finger near her face and sided the flicks from her face and said

Rishab:- bas abhi abhi'jab tum apne baal sawar rahi thi..

Heer got uncomfortable at his touch and she immediately took one step backward away from rishab.

Rishab smiled at her reaction'

Rishab:- Anyway..yeh batao tum aj kal kya kar rahi ho'

Heer:- excuse me'kya kar rahi hun matlab?

Rishab:- umm I mean I was asking about your studies'

Heer:- studies!! Ap shayad bhul rahe hai'ki mae apki hi behen ke sath uske college mein pardti thi'sanju ke final semesters khatam ho gaye hain..To obviously mere semesters bhi khatam ho gaye honge'right'and now we are waiting for results..

Rishab was really surprised at heer's answer'no one in his life dared talk to him like the way she talked. But he liked it'.he wasn't angry on her for this'

Rishab (thinks):- smart girl!!!...dont worry sweetheart is ka jawab main tumhe bohot jald hi dunga'

Rishab was continuously looking at her with a smirk on his face'he saw her thinking about something'And here our heer is really pissed now'the way rishab was looking at her...urghhh'I can't take this anymore'thought Heer

Heer gave an irritated look to rishab'just then sanjana came out of the washroom..she looked at her brother who smilingly looking at heer and heer was feeling really uncomfortable and was angrily glaring at rishab'

Sanjana:- Bhaiya ap yahan'

Rishab and Heer looked at Sanjana'who standing with the confusing expression on her face'.

Rishab:- han wo main bas yahan se guzar raha tha'heer ko kamre mein akele dekha to maine socha kyun na heer ko company de dun'right heer!!!

Heer angrily looked at Rishab'and then she looked at confused sanjana'.and then left from there angrily'.

Sanjana:- Heer!!!! Heer!!!

Sanjana turned towards rishab and asked

Sanjana:- Bhaiya..Heer ko kya hua'wo itni gusse mein kyun thi'

Rishab:- kuch nahi sanju'tum tension mat lo'main Heer ki narazgi zarur dor kar dunga'don't worry!!!

Rishab smirked thinking about Heer'and Sanjana was dam confused'.

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

Heer was angrily thinking about the incident that happened in sanjana's room just few minutes ago'she was coming down from the stairs. Heer was so busy in her thought that she didn't realized Prem was coming in front of her'she collided with him and was about to hit the ground'but before that Prem immediately caught her by her waist'.

Heer was hell shocked'.she looked at Prem who was busy in looking at her with full of love'seeing his love for her in his eyes, heer forget about Rishab and stared at him lovingly'..

Rishab was angrily looking at them from the distance'.He balled his hand into fist as he looked at Prem and Heer who was lost in their own world of love'.just then Rishab's phone rang'he picked it up and said hello'while looking at Prem and Heer..and then after giving the displeased looked to them he left from there to talk on the phone'

Both Prem and Heer came out of their eye lock session..Prem make heer stand on her feet properly'Heer shyly looked at Prem'and Prem tucked her flicks behind her ears'.looking at her lovingly'

Prem:- Are you ok..

Heer:- Agar tum muje sambhalo ge to muje kuch ho sakta hai kya'

Prem smiled'bring her near him by holding her waist

Prem:- hmm'yeh baat to hai'.i won't let anything happen to you

Heer smiled at Prem

Prem:- Waise tum chalte chalte kya soch rahi thi ki tumhe muje bhi ate hue nahi dekha'

Soon Heer's smile vanished into anger as the thought of rishab come to her mind again'Prem looked at her expression..and cupped her face with his palms and asked

Prem:- Kya hua Heer??

Heer:- Prem please ab chalte hain yahan se'mera yahan or rokne ka mann nahi kar raha'please lets go from here'

Prem:- lekin Heer aise achanak se'what wrong??? Kisi ne kuch kaha tumse????

Heer remember rishab was tucking her flicks'while coming towards her'she remembered the way he was talking to her, the way he was looking at her'

Heer (thinks):- kya karun'Prem ko bataoun ya nahi'

Her thought was interrupted by Prem's voice'

Prem:- Kya hua jaan'bataao

Heer:- umm nahi Prem..kuch nahi'kisi ne kuch nahi kaha mujhse..wo to bus mera mann nahi lag raha yahan'bohot ajeeb sa lag raha hai yahan par..

Prem:- Han heer I can understand'muje bhi bohot ajeeb lag raha hai yahan..lekin abhi kya kar sakte hai'Rishab ne hume yahan dinner ke liye invite kiya'.to atleast dinner ke liye to rokna hi pardega'agar hum aise hi chale gaye'to kitna bura lagega..or Rishab, Sanju, uncle, aunty'un sab ko bhi bohot bura lagega na'but tum chinta mat karo'dinner karte hi hum yahan se challenge ok'

Heer nodded her head in agreement; Prem smiled at her and kissed her on her forehead'

Prem:- mera bacha!!!

Heer smiled as Prem hugged her'

Ahem!!! Ahem!!!

Prem and Heer broke their hug and turned around and looked Sanjana'

Sanjana:- umm sorry I didn't mean to disturb you guys'actually main tum dono ko bulane aai thi'dinner ke liye'

Heer:- han sanju hum abhi ate hain'

Sanjana left from there'Heer looked at Prem

Prem:- chale???

Heer nodded her head'and they both went downstairs hand in hand'

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

[Ok guys here is the next update'how was it???'eagerly waiting for your feedbacks. Thank you]


Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
-Xpress- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
WOW a long update... thanks

Loved the update..
Loved both the possessive prem and heer
and Rishab..oh ho.. hope his intentions will out soon infront of everyone especially prem so he will the protective possessive prem

Fabulous update



kiran_28 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

WOW a long update... thanks

Loved the update..
Loved both the possessive prem and heer
and Rishab..oh ho.. hope his intentions will out soon infront of everyone especially prem so he will the protective possessive prem

Fabulous update



thanks sadi..lets see what happens next 😳
ragvir92 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update dear
And Heer's james bond mind predicted rightly
ARGH😡that gadha rishab
he is always making heer uncomfortable
Prem is really caring and understanding
He cares for everyone's feelings
The way he dealt abt contract and dinner showed his maturity and his golden heart
Prem heer's small moment was also cute
Ya prem is also possessive abt heer
Heer's antics were cute
That rishab whenever he comes is making me angy
How dare he thinks that his and heer's taste are same
Now I want a cute update with more premeer scenes please
We rarely got premeer scenes
PLease update next one fast

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".