MG SS Love Zealots.LAST CHAPTER-PG 68,21/6/2013

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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

Waiting for an update... It has been 3 days, actually 4 :D :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

@ 7sanjiri,Anu_R, tamanna, laughing barbie

Thank you so much dearies for liking this sad update...!!!

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glitch1110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: -AnushaGurtian-
Awesome update.! Broke my heart.!
Really waiting for the next part...update soon please 😊

I will try anusha...

sorry for breaking your heart...😛

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glitch1110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Mujhe office me sab k samne ruladiya😭
Sab mujhe hi dekh rshe hai😕

I am really sorry dear..

You know,i was remembering the day you had said that this story brings smile on your otherwise angry face...I am really sorry for bringing tears in your eyes but I can't help..This was how I had imagined the story when i started it..!!!!

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glitch1110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: dqno1
Sobbing...

I love these two!{and i love you...🤗}

The last scene where she is hiding the shoes broke the dam...

Maan and Daadi both losing something precious.

He could not even come back knowing he has to hurt her...oh my..

Her asking for her Eidi...staying strong so he won't be more hurt...

She forgot to even give him her gift.

Beautiful story.

I love the brain that comes up with this...{and I love you...!!!!!!!!🤗}

Thanks for updating...

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glitch1110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: ylaraib
it was so. . . .
Oh God i m still crying
Their sepration their love their togatherness everything was superbly written
Maan came home at night
Geet waiting for hm
And than asking for edi.
My favourite part was when geet trying to hide maan's shoes
Waiting for next

Thanks dear..update would not have been completed without your help...😊

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glitch1110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: kiran_rati
awesome update
thanx for the pm dear

My pleasure dear...

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glitch1110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Hello all...

Here is the first "teaser" for this story..I never give teasers but I have to do so this time,as I want "approval as well as permission" of my beloved readers{especially Muslim Reaeders},for continuing this story further the way I had thought...Kindly read this "Teaser" and If you find something offending,please let me know,I would stop this story at this point only...

TEASER:

He sighed loudly as he wondered when people would start think rationally to save themselves from becoming emotional fools and puppets of such so called leaders.

He was about to enter the mosque when his gaze caught something which made his breath hitch in his throat. There was "Ram" written with a piece of coal on the outer wall of the mosque.He came closer to take a proper look and found the whole wall filled with word "Ram".He had no idea who had played this cheap joke or whose mischief was this but he knew,it was going to bring something really bad for the people of both the colonies. His wrinkled eyes had seen the bloodshed and he did not want to relive it again,hence his hands got busy in erasing that 'word"from the wall.His hands were busy rubbing the wall,when he heard some foot steps behind him.He turned around to find "Rizwaq Khan" standing behind him."Hatred" in his eyes and that wicked smile on his face told him ,how he was going to use this "spark" to blaze the "fire of riots" for his political benefits'.

Waiting for your response...and if i have offended unintentionally any of my reader somehow with this teaser,i sincerely apologize...!!!!