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PART 45

Only today geet.. From tomorrow there will be no fear..I ll surely teach that Rahul a lesson.. For nearing my family..rahul...be ready to face your hell..

He roared mentally...n he waited for the night to pass soon n sun to rise.. so he may think a way to get out from here. He trusted his jiju adi n his bgs.. They will surely come in search of them.

Maan was awake the whole night . He was Keenly observing the sounds outside. Wished the goons did not find their hidden place. He has nothing to do..but he has thought a lot about the next day..he was waiting for the sunrise..

The goons searched the whole jungle..the rain was their biggest enemy which made them back up..they too searched a shade to keep themselves away from rain.. it was 3 am..when the rain stopped.. n they started to search'but it was not their day..

It was early morning maans lids felt heavy n maan dosed off..he held geet securely while sleeping also..jaanu was also sleeping peacefully bcoz of the tiredful day..

Its an hr ,he slept..he woke up with the chirping sounds of birds..he was shocked..how could he sleep..his eyes looked at the crib..jaanu was sleeping still..geet was hugging him n sleeping.he gently caressed her back n hugged her.he kissed her head feeling content..his both angels are safe n sound before him..

The sky was getting bright as the day is going to start..maan looked at the watch..its 5.30..there was no sound of goons..they must get out of jungle.this half darkness will be safe to get out before the sun rises..

..he slowly called geet..

Maan:mishty,utto jaan..

Geet:maan,pls sone dona..

She was feeling like she is in home sleeping on him..not aware of the situation being in his arms..maan gently kissed her cheeks n his hands touched her bare tummy..geet felt ticklish as he started to carress it.

Geet:maan..she snuggled close to him..

Maan:utto jaan..pls..we must get out of here..

Then the reality stuck her..they are in danger..n she is sleeping peacefully..how can she be irresponsible..

Geet:maan..jaanu..

She sat in her place looking for her life..she sighed in relief seeing jaanu asleep..

Maan:relax geetu..she is sleeping..

Geet looked out..

Geet:we must go from here now..

Maan:yes

Geet:maan,ill take jaanu u remove my sari i ll wear it..then we will move..

Maan:ok..

Geet cradled jaanu in her arms when maan started to remove the sari from the tree branch..he gave to her..n she gave jaanu to maan..

Jaanus sleep was disturbed n she started to whimper in sleep..there was a deep fear inside the small soul as the previous days flashed in her dream..she wailed loud

Jaanu:mama..

Geet :jaanu,mama is here only..

She again took jaanu n placed her on shoulder n patted her back'jaanu clutched the start of blouse in her fist..

Jaanu:cried ..mama,,papa..

Maan hugged jaanu along with geet..

Maan:papa is also here jaanu..come to me..

He tried to take her..but jaanu was now clutching both..not leaving them...

Geet:maan ,jaanu must calm down..i cant come without wearing sari..lets jaanu sleep..we will go..or her cry will make them find us..

Maan:hmm..

Maan heared some foot steps out..

Maan:shh..geetu..

Geet cradled jaanu close to her n sat in a corner..she was scared to extent..jaanu was half asleep..

Geet:maan,did they found us..

She asked in fear..

Maan:no..it cant be..

He though said..he was also worried..what if they are there..this cave has no other ways to escape..he rubbed his temples..if they are caught,its their last day..

Maan moved to the entrance..there was no source of light ..the fire they created last night has turned into ashes..the light came through the branches of trees which he hided the entrance..he looked out..

He heared someone saying..

Maan:baby sound came this side only..they must be hear only..search in all places..

Maan could not see the person..but he can hear more foot steps around the cave..

He turned n looked at geet who was looking at him pale..she was holding jaanu tightly as she is holding her breathe in hand.n her another hand went to her flat stomach..

.maan can understand her turmoil..he looked out through the leaves..

A man:I heared sound this side only..but where are they..

Man2:don't waste time..i want my family safe..u all are here only to search them..

Man 1:sir,it its not raining we would have found out..dogs would have easily identified their spot with the smell..

Man2:I don't want explanations..i want them to be safe..

Maan smiled seeing the second person..his adi..maan turned to geet..

Man:geetu,its adi outside..we are safe..

Geet:s eyes filled in happy tears..

Man moved the branches from the entrance of cave n came out..

Adi rushed to him n hugged him tight..

Adi:man..are u alright..geet jaanu..wo kahaan hai..how are they..

Maan:im fine..n they are also safe too..inside the cave..you did not break my trust..i was sure you will come here..

Man:jiju,wo..goons..they were here..

The mens behind adi came there..they were all high officials in police..

Police:sir,they are arrested..you don't have to worry..they will rot in jail for life time..

Man :thank you officers..

Adi:man,ill go n see geet n jaanu..

Adi was about to go inside the cave..maan stopped him..

Maan:jiju..wo..i ll get them..

He entered the ave only to see again the serene sight..geet feeding jaanu..the re was peace in her face..

Man:geetu,we must go..

Geet:wo..i know..it will take time to get out of jungle..n jaanu cant starve till we reach highways..n a girl who takes solid food cant be satisfied with milk only..last night too she slept only becoz of tiredness n hunger..ab bhi wo bhooki pyaasi hai..she is crying becoz of that..so,only..i..

He came near her n cupped her face..

Maan:you don't want to give explanations to me..i will wait outside..you finish n come..

Geet:ji..

Adi:man wo dono kahaan hai..

Maan:they will come..before they come I want to make some arrangements..

Do you have phone..

Adi gave him..

Adi:but tower..

Man:im just going 2 type msgs..n I will save it..when we are out of jungle this msgs will be sent..

Adi looked at maan.

Man:do u have any bikes..i don't want geet to walk again..

Heasked one of the officials..

Police:yes sir..ill send one in'

Man:you all can move ..ill follow u in 5 minutes..i want to talk to adi in private..

They left both alone..but had a tab on them..n the surroundings..

Man came to adi n said somethings..what he have thought..n what he have to do..adi only nodded his head n cleared some doubts regarding what he said..

After some time geet came out with jaanu..

Jaanu:adi uncle..

She screamed in joy..adi was in tears seeing the angel safe..he took her in arms n kissed her madly..

Adi turned to geet:I don't know what to say..tum durga maa se kam nehi ho...

Geet:bhaiya..im not a god..only a human..

Adi:but ur love n care is equal to god..he told me ur brave acts of night..

N im happy for u both..i heared the gud news..

Geet:thanks bhaiya..but don't say in house, till we confirm it..

Maan:ok baki ki baath baad mei karei..lets go..

Maneet started to walk ..adi was carrying jaanu..n jaanu was saying what all they did yesterday..she even told him how hunger she was..making adi also cry..

In mid way they got bikes n maan made geet sit with baby n one more police n adi accompanied them ..his body gaurds also soon joined them who was searching them..

Maan signaled adi n he sent all the msgs saved in drafts..

Man n geet sat in one car..adi sat with body gaurds..now they started to move with high securities..adi has made it tough,that no one could reach them..

Geet leaned on man

Geet:man how adi bhaiya found us..

Man:its easy geet..they traced my phone..it has showed the coverage place..n our car number..which they found breaking the rails of bridge..so,they started to search in jungle ..rain only delayed them too..morning they caught the goons who confirmed we are here..then jaanus cry made them search near the cave..

Geet:thank god..

The car stopped ..

Geet:man car kyun ruk gayi..

Adi came to car opening the door..

Adi:get down soon..we must have to travel more..the sooner you finish the sooner we can leave..

Geet got down with confusion..then she saw its an high was hotel/restaurant..

She looked at adi:its maans idea..not mine..

Maan:lets go..he took geet in..the hotel was not a 5star..but a normal one..the manager gave him keys n some packets..

Man took them to the room ..all 3 freshed up n changed to the clothes in the packet..

Geet:how did you do this..

Man:I have my men to work'.Now lets go for breakfast..

Maneet came to restaurant..

There was no one..

Geet:man this is gud hotel na..

Man:yes

Geet:then why no one is here..

Man:ive paide for a whole 2 hrs..noone will disturb us..n bgs are around this hotel for our safety..so no one will come..

Soon the waiters came n placed all the items they prepared..the table was full with different variety of dishes..

Man:eat geetu..

Adi was making jaanu eat..

Geet:you also did not have anything maan..

Adi:enuf of tut u..both serve each other n finish soon..

Both had the breakfast..n again started the journey..

The car entered delhi n geet was surprised when they entered the hospital..

She turned to maan..who gave her a sweet smile..

Maan:u only said na ,we must confirm..

Maan n geet walked inside dr.s cabin..she was already informed by adi..

Dr.took her tests..n asked man to wait out till she examine geet more..

Man saw the kids section in hospital..n an idea popped in his mind..

He asked adi to arrange the things n went inside.

Geet came out adjusting her dress..maan took the opposite seat to dr..

A nurse came n gave a file to dr.n went ..

Maan:dr..wo..geet ..

Dr. smiled at both..

Dr:mr n mrs khurana..congrats..geet is pregnant..its confirmed..

Maan hugged geet tight n kissed her hard making geet blush..

Dr.cleared her throat..

Maan:im sry dr..

He was also shy..

Dr:its ok..but as you both know about geets first pregnancy..i want geet to be more careful with her diets..more of calcium n iron..n one more..

She turned to geet:mrs.khurana..if u continue feeding ur health will only go down..jaanu will grow strong..but not you..so,u can understand what im saying.

Geet:ill do all u say dr..will take ur diet chart too..but last one..my answer is same like before.i cant..its god who is making me still bonded with her..then how can I go thru the same feeling yesterday..when I fed her first time..

Dr:think about the baby u r carrying..it too needs strength..

Geet:I know dr..for that ill try sincerely..

Dr.sighed as she accepted..

Dr.advised her ..what to do n what not..

Man n geet came out of dr's room..he held her arms..

N said:im so happy..thank you..

She turned to him..i must only say thank you man..its becoz of you im getting this happiness again..bus..i..

She left the sentence half..

He knew she is fearing still..

Man:everything will be fine..

He held her shoulders n moved..

A small girl came n gave a rose to geet..then a boy came giving her a teddy..then again aboy came n gave her chocos..geet was surprised..why all kids are giving her gifts..but she cant hide the smile in her face..at last jaanu came with a bunch of rose n a baby doll in her hand..

She gave to geet..geet bent to her size njaanu kissed her cheeks..n gave her a chocolate to eat..

Geet stood straight..

Geet:jaanu,ye kisne di tumhe..

Jaanu tiptoed to geet s stomach n kissed..

Jaanu:mama..baby is inside you na..so ,its all for him'if u eat na..he will also have it.. Geet:who said all this..to do..

She showed adi..n adi showed maan..

Geet st:how much he thinks about me n my happiness'

Jaanu:mama,baby kab ayega..when I will play with him..

Geet:when ur next birthday comes..he will be in your arms..

Jaanu:heeiii..

She jumped in joy..geet took her in arms..maan immediately took jaanu from geet..

Man:geet.jaanu chota hai..phir bhi,u cant lift weights..u know that..

Geet blinked her eyes..he is protective from now..

They moved out..he stopped in the canteen of the hospital n ordered juice for jaanu n geet..

Geet:maan we ate now only..

Maan:no..its b4 2 hrs..

She nodded her head like..uff mei kahaan phasgayi..n had it..

Maan looked at his watch..then at adi..adi showed his eyes like I ve done..

Maneet entered the mansion..the car stopped at the entrance gate itself..maan gave his hands to geet to get down..

She was confused with his behavior..but it all turned shock when she was out of car..the full path was filled with rose petals..n the side full was having toys n babies pictures..there was a band to welcome them..there was a big banner..WELCOME MUMMY PAPA..she turned to maan who was smiling at her..her eyes moisted..he did it all for her..to celebrate the happiness..maan hugged her by waist n took her inside..dadi , pinky, vaishali n her father was waiting there.. pinky did the aarthi n welcomed them both..

Geet took blessings from dadi n vaishalis dad..

Man has strictly informed all not to talk about the previous day..

Dadi:god bless you dear..you don't know geet..how much happy im...you have given again a light to this place..i was worried how you both will lead your life..im happy to see you both found your love in each other..

Geet hugged dadima..words were short to say anything..to show her joy too..

Pinky n vaishali started to tease geet.jaanvi n priya were playing.did she missed something..her eyes roamed n then saw a lady with a big bump nearing her..

Lady:jug jug jiyo beti..wo kya haina..dadi ne bulaya tha..ashirwad denekeliye..maan ne bola tum bohut gabrahi hui ho..see me.i got married before 6 yrs...i m having 6 childrens now.this is 7th one..dont think I gave birth to twins..all are singles..but dr.said this is twins..

Geet:kya..

Vaishali..:didi..wo the two months left in every year na..calculate it..

Geet pulled the ladies ears.

geet:ye kya mazaak hai..

Bhabhi bhabhi..chodo.choda na..its paining..

The lady jumped n the sari fell down along with the pillow..n Vicky was standing there with naughtiness n fake pain being still held by bhabhi..

All were laughing..

Geet:what sthat vicky..

Vicky:wo..i was showing you how will you look after 7 months with big belly..geet took the pillow n threw it on him..

He jumped n nudged..maan looked at geet..she has totally forgotten the incident..

Adi came n touched his shoulder..

Maan:thanks jiju..you brought smile in my geetus face..

Adi:its your plan..i only did what u said..

Maan:about rahul..

Adi:he is out station..he will be tomorrow here'

Maan:his schedule of tomorrow..

Adi:ive with me..

Maan:I want to meet him..but he must not know it..

Adi:he is attending a function in xyz hotel at 4 pm..we can corner him there..

Maan:ok..but don't say anything to geet ..n from now pinky n geet will not attend office also.n jaanvi will be in home only..i'll arrange teachers to teach her in home itself..

Adi:gud idea..till we make rahul out of our reach..lets keep them safe..n I know ladies will be worried if they know what we are doing..

Maan:hmm..i will teach that rahul a gud lesson..so,he wont try to touch my family again..

Still geet was throwing things on him..it was vaishali who was giving things to geet to throw on him encouraging her ..

Dadi:bus bus beta..geet n all lets have lunch together'

Soon the dining was filled with laughters..

Dadi:now you all go n take rest..at evening I ve arranged a small puja at house..all must bethere..

Geet:dadi:im not sleepy..mei help karoon..

Pinky:no ways..you must take rest..go..

Vaishali:didi..im here na..will take care of the preparations..

All pushed geet to the room to sleep..

Man made her relax in his arms..

Maankissed her stomach..i cant believe it geet..our love is breathing inside you..what you think it will be..boy or girl..

Geet:maan,itni jaldi kyun ho aap..

Man:tell me na..

Geet:we have a daughter man..so I want a boy..its jaanvis wish too..

Man:ok..then..next time we will try for another jaanu..

Geet: (shockingly)what..

Man was kissing her crook of neck..he came to her ears n whispered huskily..i want a girl..this time let ur wish come true..but next time you must give me a girl..

Geet:man..you are ..chado..

Geet:this baby has not yet born n you are thinking for next one now itself..

Man was still busy kissing her n making her shudder.

Maan:not one more..i want a cricket team..i ve planned totally for eleven..6 girls n 5 boys..

Geets eyes grew wider,

Maan are you joking..he was now near her face..his hot breathe falling on her..

no..im serious

geet:what..seriously..

maan:yes im going to follow government rules..two is enuf..

geets face was worth watchable when he bursted into laugh..he was kidding her till now..she hit him with her fist..he hugged her..

man:geet do u really think ill ask u for 10 childrens..n make ur health weak..two is enuf geet..i cant risk ur health..

geet hugged him dearly..n she slept soon..she knew all are trying to keep her happy n forget the previous day..n she too don't want to give them pain by reminding it..

after a small nap..geet woke up n saw man coming out from washroom..

man:geet..go n freshup..panditji is waiting for us..

geet rushed to washroom n got another surprise..

maan has decorated the tub with rose petals ,milk n room with candles.the tub had small toys too which made geet smile..he thought her as a kid to play with these kya?

Maan:don't stand still lost in it..we must be there in 10 minutes..

Geet:ji..aayi..she removed her clothes n sat in the tub.

It was not new for her..she has mostly took bath like this in Palace..but it was like a duty n mechanical..done by her servants..but to be pampered by loving ones..it cant be expressed..she was feeling very relaxed n calm after the bath..she came out n saw a sari..with jewels..

Maan:this is my mothers..can u dress it for me..

Geet:u don't want to ask me maan..

She happily dressed up n both came down..

Dadi arranged this pooja for the would be parents n the happiness of family..the pooja went well..he did not fail to see a glimpse of sadness in geets eyes..something is still bothering her..whats it..he went in deep thought..

after dinner all went to their rooms bidding gud night..

Maan somehow managed to make jaanu before geet comes..he must be careful now to be with both..not to hurt anyone of them..

Geet was again turning to go..

Man:where are you goinggeetu..

Man st:is she hurt with my behavior..

Geet:wo..i forget to give dadis medicines..

Man:oh..u be here..i ll give n come..

He left her..geet came to the window n stood there watching the moon..

Sab ne ashirwad di mujei..but the one who must bless me..i couldn't say them ..im pregnant..

Her corners of eyes burned..before it fell down her phone rang..

She took it n the voice made her eyes flow now in happy tears..

Geet:rani maa..

Rani:god bless you n your child beta..damadji told me..you are pregnant..i cant come straight..but I will pray to god..that you give birth to a healthy n naughty boy..jo meri beti ko tang kere..

Geet smiled between her tears..

Rani ma:arei rorahi ho kya princess..then my pota will also be a cry baby..now wipe ur tears..n smile..she did..

Geet wants to talk so much..but she felt her tongue tied..

Geet:rani maa. Papaji..

Rani:geet.papa ko jaanthi ho..he wont even listen to hear ur name too..im hapy that u got a gud life partner..god bless you both beta..ho sake tho is batnazeeb maa ko maaf kardo..who cant be with you now..

Geet:maa.aapne phone kiya..ashirwaad di..wo mereliye kaafi hai..

The next side went dead..geet st:shayad papa aagayi hogi..maa ne kaatliya..

She saw man..who was looking at her..she throwed herself on him n hugging him..

Geet:thanks maan..thanks for making my maa calling me..

Maan lifted her chin ..how can I see u dull geetu..i cant see u in tears.ur inside was saying you to call ur mother n share ur happiness..but u r feared of ur father..i called ramsingh n asked him to deliver the news to ur maa n call you..

Geet:thank you..thank you so much..

Maan:is this the way to say thank you geetu..i was expecting more..

He winked..she closed the distance between their lips..she sucked his upper lip..n he took her lower lips tasting her sweetness..she tasted his hard lips n entered inside his mouth ..rolling her tongue inside his every corner..he pulled her closer n cherished her taste exchanging n mingling their salivas..her hands went inside his vest feeling his taut body..he was squeezing her bare back..

Maan slowly placed her on bed without breaking the kiss..

Maan broke the kiss for air..he pecked her forehead..

Its enough geetu..or we will lose our control..it will harm baby..

She nodded..but settled herself in his arms to have a peaceful sleep..

Precap:fight with rahul or kidnapping rahul..


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eagerly waiting dear

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updated dear..
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lovely update
Maeet out of jungle
Maan making geet feel special
Maneet performing pooja
Maan teasing geet
Geet's mom calling her and blessing her
Janu happy with the news of tne baby
Maan demandinga cricket team and then saying he is joking
Maneet sleep peacefully after a day of hardship
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me 2 tooo late to comment prachi solly h

update was mindblowing awesome
me loved it soo much
at last addi find them
n maan is soo fast jaldi jaldi sarii
taiyaria kar lia
for clothes food hospital
suprises
then cute family moments then
maan teasing geet
then taking care of her'
making rani maa call geet
n alll
it was beautiful waiting for next
Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago

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