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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Yay!!! This thread is gonna be completed soon...

Super duper happy!!
Congratulations TaSha...

And the promo is very scary..
Poor Navika...
Hope that she is fine,,,

Ok..Again happy to know that now focus will be on TaaRey...
Hmm..Karan Wahi's entry...
Interesting..
Kabab main haddi...Haha!! That dialogue of yours cracked me up...
Update soon, dear...

Thanks a lot dear
ya now its gonna be taarey
and karan's entry will be in 2nd thread
updating in few :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Wow Dii ... I Read Your Story Like Just Now And It Is Just Fantastic ... I Really Don't Know What To Say About The Concept ... Like Really ... Taani's Small Child and Her Didu and 3J ... Oh And Before I watched D3 I Loved Ek Hazaron Mein ... And VirIka were my Fav before TaaRey ... Now I watch Less But Their couple is cute ... And Nanhi is just too cute ... Taani as a dancer Great Choice ... Well I Have To Say, The TaaYam Meet Really got me ... I mean it was really beautiful ... Swayam's Reaction was Different , I was Shocked to see him in so much anger ... I thought He would Be Soft and Caring and being The Typical Bhai but I really Have to say that was different ...
I Can't wait to see TaaRey ... I'm interested to know how their Love Story will start ...
I really Love your other work too ... One Man Army ... I have always been a super silent follower of it but I promise Ki Main Zaroor Comment Karungi Ab

Thanks a lot dear I m so happy that you commented and like my FF so much. no doubt virika are cute couple and Swayam is Swayam but this time I tried show a whole new side of Swayam. I am glad u liked it.
I am sure will not have to wait for long for taarey 😳
and haw 😲 u read my One Man Army but didnt comment on it 😭 but I am glad to read ur last sentence. so i will be waiting for your valuable comment 😃
Love
TaSha
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy2012

chapter 1:

first solly for late comment..I am so lazyy😳

you have put the comic sense so perfectly with portraying Rey's character..I love this when he advised to get a gal friend😆

this is superb chapter Tasha..you wrote it beautifully👏

Its ok dear u commented and read my FF that's what matter 😃
Thanks a lot for liking the gf and fun part 😊
Awe thanks dear I am glad u like it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys I m here with the update after dealing lots of difficulties so lambu comment toh banta hai

Part 9

It was a bright morning, Viren and Jeevika were on dining table having there morning tea. They both were quiet today usually viren would be romantic with Jeevika or talk to their child but today they both were engrossed in their thoughts. Finally after a prolong silence, Jeevika breaks the silence and says "I can't believe Taani is a mom and Nanhi is Taani's daughter." Viren takes a deep breath and says "I know it's hard to believe it. No one can imagine seeing Taani as a mom and that too like this." Without wasting a single second Jeevika says "I want to know everything. Why did she leave us and …" before she could continue Viren cuts her and say "you can't ask her anything. You are meeting her after so long. Didn't you notice she was so uncomfy last night when she was introducing Nanhi? If you going to force yourself on her she might going to go away from you instead of coming close to you. Give her sometime let her come to you like before. Okay?" she smiled and nodded in a 'yes' after giving it a thought. "That's like my Jeevika. Now drink your tea and give me a hug" Viren says that and they both stand up and they hug each other. "I love you" Viren says and Jeevika blushes and replies "I love you too."

"And what about me?" they hear a voice coming from the stairs. They turned around to see angry Taani standing with her both hands on her hips just like a small kid or should I say like Nanhi. They both smile and Jeevika was about to break the hug but naughty Viren didn't let her. Viren says "well I love you too my princess" and extends his one hand while holding Jeevika from other. Taani smiles seeing her 3J and didu and goes hug both of them. Everyone wakes up eventually and they all had breakfast together enjoying the cute antics of Nanhi. Everyone was there including Sharon except one person, Rey. He was supposed to attend a meeting related to the upcoming grand event so he had to leave early. He desperately wanted to finish the meeting as soon as possible so he can go meet Taani.

Aesi kabhi pehle hui na thi khawahishein
Kisi se bhi milne kin a kit hi koshishein
Uljhan meri suljha de, chaahon mein ya na
Aankhon aankhon mein jata de, chahun main ya na

Finally he was done with the meeting; he sat in his car with a big smile and drives towards his second home which was Swayam's house but he would spend most of the time there. On the other hand Taani, Sharon and Nanhi were on pool side. Shaani were busy talking and Nanhi was by the pool. She was busing finding chavanni (25 paise) which was fallen somewhere around the pool. SPLASH the sound came and attracted Shaani towards it. "NANHI" Sharon screamed seeing the poor girl fallen in the big pool. Taani froze at her place. Sharon ran towards the pool but Taani was still standing there as for her everything her entire world stopped. SPLASH another sound came and brought her to world again. She looked at the other side of the pool and saw someone swimming in suit with a great speed towards drowning Nanhi.

She ran towards the pool where Sharon was already standing. Soon they both were on the surface of the water and Taani saw panting Nanhi in Rey's arms. She took a breath of relief and sat down just beside pool where Rey kept Nanhi. He pressed her stomach as a precaution and she coughed and threw some water out from her mouth. Seeing this Taani pushes Rey again in the water thinking he is hurting her daughter. Understanding her Rey holds his both hands up like surrendering himself in front of her. She looks at him and his actions and then towards Nanhi who was now fine but just a little scared. Realizing her mistake she says "sorry" and he nodes in 'it's ok'. He gestures towards Nanhi as if asking her permission to go near her daughter she says "sure."

Mujhko na jitna mujh pe
Utna iss dil ko tujh pe
Hone laga aitbaar

He reaches her still in the water and picks the chavanni which was laying on the corner of the pool because of it everything happened. "hey chavanni, you okay na?" Rey said in full on nautanki style. Nanhi looks up to him and say "I am not chavanni, I am Nanhi." "no you are chavanni for me from now on as you were saying chavanni so many times like you call your own name" Rey explained her the reason of him calling her chavanni confusing the poor girl but of course distracting her from the pool incident too. Nanhi after hearing Rey kept her index finger on her chin, curves her eyebrows, narrows her eyes and starts thinking something. Everyone around her was smiling at her cute antics. After thinking a lot Nanhi says "fine if you don't call me from my name than I will also not call you Rey.[she takes a pause and continues] Hmmm you saved both the chavannis [pointing towards the coin in his hand and at herself smiling] so I am going to call you Spiderman. Okay?" She asks in full hope and fear of Rey rejecting the name but when Rey nodded in a 'Yes', she jumps and hugs him without any fear of water or anything. "Wwooohoo" Rey was startled at her actions but loved it to the core. "So chavanni you are not scared of water?" he asked with his one eyebrow lifted a little. "no because I am with my Spiderman" Nanhi replies in full on excitement and splashes some water at his face and he does the same and the process went on till Taani stops them. "Nanhi come on now come out or you going to get sick. You know that you don't go along with water" Taani said while going closer towards the pool and stretching her hands. "No ma…AAACHI…" before Nanhi could say she sneezed and now she had nowhere to go but to listen to her mom. "come on ….. AAACCCHHHIII" another sneeze interrupted Taani but this time it was strange one because it was Nanhi who sneezed it was rey who sneezed this time. Taani giggles and say "I think you also don't go along with water come on come out you both." They both listened to her like she was mother of both and were coming out when Swayam came running and shocked and says "what happened? I was on the phone so I didn't realize anything." Rey looking at him in shock says "dude poori kahani khatam ho gai and tu ab pooch raha hai hero ka naam kiya tha." Listening to him everyone laughs except poor Nanhi with a confuse look on her face she asks "story? Why anyone didn't told me about it." Looking at her cute pout everyone laughed holding their stomachs including Swayam and Rey kissed her cheeks with an Awe expression.

*Part 9 Ends*

Guys will be late in future updates hope u all understand and keep supporting and liking my updates dear

Love You All

TaSha

NO PMS ARE SEND AS OF NOW CANT DO IT NOW JUST WANTED TO UPDATE SO YOU GUYS DON'T GET MAD AT ME. PLEASE PRAY FOR MY STUPID BACK PAIN

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update...
loved it to the core...
loved the names "chavaani" and "Spiderman"
really love nanhi...
she is soo cute...
loved ur update...
first get well soon and then update and pm me😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...it was soo soo cutee...
rey <3
awww..he is soo adorable <3 <3
loved it alott!
spidr-man and chavanni ki jodi achi hai.. 😆
it short, cutee update...
looking forward to the next part...
and apna kyal rakhna..and get well soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
realy enjoyed d update chavanni n spidermen 😆 lol rey obeying taani like she is his mother sho cute..😆 oww u suffering frm back pain wishing u a speedy recovery get wel soon 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome loved it dear
muah continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
A big tight hug to you for such an adorable update...
It was so cute...Full of cuteness...
Loved the VirIka Conversation...
Loved how Viren advised jeevika maturely...
And then their hug was sweet..
But what followed it was even more sweeter..
Taani and her cute antics...
Loved how Rey was desperate to meet Taani...
Poor Navika...
Taani was so shocked and scared..

But loved how Rey saved her...
Rey is so understanding...
Loved to see his care towards Navika...
Loved how Rey again tried to ease up the tension..
And the way he distracted the little girl was commendable...

Awww.. Loved the names... Chavanni and Spiderman...
Again it was so adorable to see how Rey listened to Taani like his mother...

Now I am so so excited to read further...
TaaRey track has started...
Again I would say Take care of your health first, TaSha..
Hope you recover soon...
And then you can update..OK...
I AM VERY SERIOUS ABOUT IT..
Take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hii... Em akshita i read ur ff wen i was viewing som1ns posts ,it is vry vry nice i realy like it n i'm sending u a buddy req. Do accept it. It seem 2 b dat u r EHMMBH fan n also a NBTNMKK fan bt i personaly dont like na bole tum. So much, i just hope dat d story aftr dis wil nt completely b like dat . (Dis is jst my personal opinion, plss dont mind) cont. Soon n pm me
:* n yes plsss make rey, rey bcoz i luv amar n i want him 2 b rey bt dats my choice u r a superb writer n plsss update fast , waiting eagerly dear :)
Edited by akshitaTaarey - 12 years ago

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