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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updt choti...thnx for d PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
u should do more PSing adi <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally commenting *phew*
really sorry for such a late comment...

so coming to the update...

that was least expected...

buggati must be so jealous ...

but me is so happpyyy :D

a beautiful love ride indeed it was...

i just loved how u used the words and blended them together... the flow was just so perfect and amazing...

the way they felt they were complete... and how they became one...

just amazing..

awesomely written... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayee hayeee loveddd it... thnxxx fr pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing ff...
I can't believe I read 41 updates in 3 days...huh...
Wonderful story...
I loved rey's character in this story...
But I am upset with Sharon role as I like Sharon in positive role...
I loved amma's character as well...
Overall the story is too good...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-42

Cape Town it is! She was looking through the window of airplane. Beautiful city, sunshine all around and instructions were announced to tighten the seat belt as plane was about to land.

She looked at Rey with big smile and said "I am excited". "Yeah! I can see that" He answered!

In few minutes, they were at Cape Town airport. She in jeans shorts and sky blue tank top was in full swing of being Jaunty. Rey was clearing the luggage and she along with Neha was somewhere checking out every beauty of this beautiful city! Both girls were in giggling mood! Rey's eyes were on her smiling spirit. He was seeing her that carefree after so long!

They were picked up by a local named Kevon! He was one happy-go-lucky person! They were heading towards their hotel! Kevon was going to coordinate "Dazzlers" here in Cape Town!

Vicky was busy cracking his lame jokes on Kevon! Rey was finding her glance but cue was so long! She was busy in sightseeing! She and Neha were typically ignorant from the moment they landed here!

Rey stretched his arm on back of seat to reach her shoulder! He brushed it slowly to draw her attention! She flicked her shoulder and kept looking out of window! Rey made that disappointed face and started looking outside window!

They were at Hotel gate in few minutes! Rey cleared his throat 4-5 times when they were taking keys of their room but she advanced towards Elevator by saying, "you need medicine baby". Rey wanted to pull his hairs out of irritation!

"Is she doing it deliberately? Or she just forgot that she has a boyfriend." He was calculating! Vicky tapped his back hard to bring him back in present! "What the hell bro! You are day dreaming in this beautiful city!" Vicky blurt out.

Kevon put his hand on Rey's shoulder and said, " oh my man! You ain't looking at those mermaids in swimming pool down there! Are you? You gotta loose yourself mate! " Rey gave him a hard look on that! But this SA boy was way too loose up to get any of Rey's tight hard looks! He kept on talking like a machine in his ear!

Vicky finally met someone of his league! Rey mumbled, "oh man! I am missing you Ali!"

Kria and Neha were in her big sea side suite! They both were on bed jumping, dancing and screaming over this awesome trip!

Rey sat on his bed in his room! He was tired, out of his elements and down! He leaned over and covered his face with pillow!

Kria was in shower. "OMG! It's beautiful!" She looked out of big glass pane! "And here bathrooms have big windows. This is crazy." She turned the music on loud!

Her phone was ringing outside. Ring was almost closing down and Rey on other side was fuming over her avoidance. And he heard, "Hello!" Rey in happiness said, "Thank God! Finally you picked up!"

"It's Neha!" Neha clarified! "Rey asked, "Where is your crazy friend?" Neha answered, "She is in shower! I will tell her to call you". Rey hung up the call!

Vicky was back in room after that pool sightseeing with Kevon! Rey looked carefully towards door to make sure Kevon is not coming with him!

Vicky asked, "What's up with you bro? You look almost constipated and dried out!" Rey looked at him furiously! Vicky continued, " What? Why you are behaving like tantrum queen from the moment we landed in! Look at you! You need to loosen up bro!" Rey had it and he blasted, "yeah! I need to loosen up! Some freaking SA guy is preaching me to loosen up! My best friend is asking me the same! My girl is so busy that she almost forgot me! My cars are not here! I am missing only sane person on our group Ali! I am tightened to the dead! And you are asking me to loosen up?" He said it in one breath!

Vicky was standing with still expression! "Oh okay! Don't loosen up! I think I should get going! Shower time!" He escaped because Rey was in worst mood!

Rey held his head in palms! "duh! What am I doing?" he mumbled!

Tantrum queen??? Really? He introspected!

Next moment he saw that serene name on screen of phone! "Kria" his face lit up!

He picked up the phone! "Hey! Finally!" She in her melodiously giggling voice answered, "Missed me?" Rey answered, "oh! Finally! You figured it out! Missing you since afternoon!

"This place is freaking awesome Rey! Beautiful beach along side hotel, awesome room and I heard that super awesome food too! Let's go out for dinner!"

Rey agreed and both met in lobby of Hotel! She was in casuals and was looking fully fresh! She bestowed a gentle kiss on his lips! Rey was certainly feeling better! "Shall we go?" She asked! Both were walking hand in hand.

"Vegetable Lasanga, Casseroles, Enchiladas and Burritos, Stir fry'." She kept on naming all these while choosing the main course! Rey was enjoying her innocence over small things! Waiter was off with order and Rey held her hand tight! She had that loving look in her eyes! "So what's the plan for tonight?" He asked. She answered, "Nothing! May be a walk on seaside and then sweet sleep!" Rey for some unknown reason was little insecure about her and things! He had those weird thoughts about what if she starts ignoring him!

"And why we took separate room here? I mean'he stuttered'you know what I am talking about!" He concluded!

She gave him a "what the hell look". "Are you for real? How we even think about letting others know about it!" You know I am not comfortable with publishing this consummated status of us!" She clarified! Her one brow was still on seesaw mode! Rey kept quiet! He certainly is facing an out of element phase in his life!

She stroked his hand in a ticklish way! "We have all the time to spend together otherwise!" She winked! Rey's smile was back! Kria can sense his unquiet heart and mind! His face speaks volume!
Before they could start eating, a familiar accent struck Rey's ears! He turned to see and Kevon along with Vicky and Neha were coming towards their table! An exclusive dinner date has now become a PJ party! Rey was busy in eating his food! Kevon was busy in pampering girls by telling them awesome shopping places here in Cape Town! And Ta Da! Tomorrow girls are going along with him to some shopping mall! Rey's thoughts were prologue of the situation!

He walked her to room after dinner! She bid a passionate prolonged kiss to him and said "don't worry so much! Everything will be okay!" Rey answered, "I am not worrying". His agitation was so clear!

Night ended on this note! He was working out in gym area in morning!! His eyes were on sea and mind was working as fast as treadmill! Song was playing loud in ears! His eyes were in zoom out mode! Sea and limitless sea, all he could see! And suddenly eyes zoomed in to a familiar figure! Kria was there playing in water, happy and cheerful! Rey tried out her cell but nobody picked it up! He was pissed off. He paced the tread mill! Music went louder! And running didn't end till that tap on his back! He turned off the tread mill and turned around! Someone was back! Rey's eyes had surprise and element of shock! A hand advanced to him! Elena? He was certainly not expecting her here! "You here?" He blurted! She with her lovely smile nodded her head in yes! "Well yeah! I guess it's time to get back into business!" Rey's eyes were searching someone! "He is here" She told!

Rey smiled and said, "I was wondering the same! You are here then he ought to be here!" She smiled mysteriously! "Leo is at tracks! I guess it's time to take back what belongs to him!" She said with confidence! Rey smirked on that one and said, "We will see! Anyway! It is nice to have you both back in business!" "Same sentiments here! Leo can't wait to win championship" She added!

Rey smiled while shaking his head. "I can't wait to see him on track either!" She bid a bye kiss on his cheek and left!

How can he forget the great Leo! Before Rey entered the business, this territory belonged to him! He is a pro and he loves to win! He had that little extra something for Rey as he was the one who dethroned him! Rey never had any rivalry but last race left him in bad taste! He still remembers how Leo ended up in Hospital in attempt of murdering Rey on tracks! His killing skills backfired! Since that day, it is always more than a competition! Elena and Leo! Two inseparable wicked minds! Rey with these two had quite a history! Beyond races, there used to some sparks!

Things were spiced up! Rey wiped the sweat away and had that wicked smile on face!

Ali called to tell about his arrival in Cape Town with cars! Rey was all ready to take on Leo! He asked Ali to meet him on tracks directly! In the line of events, he almost forgot to tell Kria that he is going to tracks!

She is been trying Rey's cell from 1 hour now! Her mind was not in shopping anymore! "Bubbles busted" yeah! That's how feeling can be explained!

Now turn to go restless was of Kria! Rey was one happy man after seeing his lovely cars and Ali! Tracks were beauty! Sunshine was perfect and it was time to take a hot speeded lap! He took his bugatti and accelerated the engine. In few seconds, bugatti was talking to winds!

"Some old charm" Ali wondered! "There was something old in him today" He thought!

"Leo is back" Rey told Ali after completing lap! Ali was shocked as well as afraid now!

Kria on other hand was now building some annoyance in her! Rey's cell was not reachable now! She called Vicky but he was unaware!

"Is he ignoring me?" She doubted!

Kevon was on full swing in pampering her while shopping! But her mind was somewhere else!

That's it for now!😳

Thanks for reading! Please leave your feedback!😊

In next part:

More webs of ambiguity

First race of season

Return of wicked "Sharon" in a new avatar

And romance will take turn of envy and passion

Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated!😊
Yup! PC is better now! Bro fixed it and it's behaving little sane now!😆
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mornings cant get better than this...oh man...
:D :D :D :D :D

amazingly brilliant part aditi...

So CAPE TOWN is here...and Racing is back... *super excited*

Too happy to see old rey and kria BACK...

Kevon seems fun...😆specially with rey🤣...chalo atleast vicky got company...hehe

that irritated and annoyed rey was so cute..lol
awww he was missing ali so desparately🤣

poor guy...dinner date bhi kharab kar dia...gosh.. :p

great...leo is back...and so is REY...its gonna be fun nw...really


wowww...first rey and now kria...nw she will will be annoyed and having those feelings...lol

And that precap...

Oh god...sharon again...i hope this time she dnt create any big problems for rey and kria...please..

"romance will take turn of envy and passion"

why why why
why do you do this...

Bada maza aata hai na tadpane me... 😭
tadpa tadpa...huh...


continue soonish... 😛
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshaholic

u should do more PSing adi <3

I too wanna do it more but time issues..

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