hey guys!!
and i am back🥳but still it will be a while till i update the story. sorry about that.and also sorry for being away for so many months.long story. will explain later.all i wanted was to tell you that i am still alive and kicking.😃
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hey guys!!
and i am back🥳but still it will be a while till i update the story. sorry about that.and also sorry for being away for so many months.long story. will explain later.all i wanted was to tell you that i am still alive and kicking.😃
I know. I am sorry again for my sudden absence for so long but believe me it was not planned. I just had to concentrate on my course. And believe it or not I had to seriously stop doing anything creative except for my fashion course. Not even music so that I could give my best performance so that explains my disappearance from the forum for well a few months. But still I am greatly sorry. But here it goes your part 17
PS: i would like everyone to imagine vikrant massey as the ayaan here and even in the previous part if possible because to tell you the truth i like him much more than rishab.(no offence to rishab fans) literally speaking i have been his fan from dhoom machao dhoom days so well just try to imagine him as he is a very good actor.
"kya?!!!"
All the girls cringed and shireen, dadi and dilshad just stared at razia for her outburst.
Zoya looked around and then again repeated herself, "hum sab nikhat ke nikah ke liye shopping karne jana chahte hai."
Razia: ha vo suna maine. Tum log nahi ja sakte.
Shireen: oh ho bhabi jane dijiye na. nikhat ko bhi thoda waqt milega nuzat aur humeira ke saat nikah se pehle.
Razia just rolled her eyes and looked at shireen.
"shireen samjne ki koshish karo. Ladki ki sagai ho gayi hai aur vo bhi chalo nazar andaz kar de par ek ladki ka gadi chalana... ab mein bolungi to bologe ki bolti hai par mujhe is ladki par zara sab hi bharosa nahi."
"par mujhe hai." Said dilshad as she looked at zoya and smiled. "najima, tum aur zoya zarur ja sakte ho"
"aur nikhat aur nuzat bhi" said badi bi as she looked at dilshad and smiled.
Humeira looked at razia waiting for her to answer. Razia looked at her and at last gave in.
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Asad came home after finishing his meeting. Mainly he came back because he was worried for his ammi. He had decided not to leave his mother alone in this house. If hadn't it been for this extremely important meeting he would have never left her and gone to office.
But when he came home he came to know that aall the girls had gone shopping. And what was worse was that zoya was the one driving. He rushed out as he had come in, praying that people on the road would be still alive and in one piece.
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"awesome!!!!!"
"wah baji, aap toh kya lag rahi hai." Said nuzat as she circled around nikhat admiring the beautiful golden zari work on her purple anarkali suit.
Zoya held nikhat's netted dhupatta in her hand and agreed. "sahi kaha. Tum bilkul angel lag rahi ho."
Nikhat blushed and said, 'shukriya zoya. Lekin hum yahan humare liye nahi balki aap ke liye shopping karne aaye hai. Aap bhi ja kar kuch dekh lijiye."
"don't worry. Meri shopping toh ho jayegi lekin right now you are the centre of attraction miss dulhan. Well isi baat pe ek sher arz hai
Barat aa gayi, darwaze par hai khade
Barat aa gayi, darwaze par hai khade
Apna ghungat sambhal ke uthana,
Kahi suhag raat hospital mein na bitani pade."
nikhat and nuzat both burst out laughing. All of them were laughing when at the same time humeira and najima both entered looking gorgeous in pink and maroon salwar suit respectively. Najima's was a beautiful velvet dress with silver embroidery work where as humeira's was a beautiful pink with large blue peacocks beautifully embroider at the hem.
As the other three girls looked at them they were short of words. Just then the sales person came in with another huge stack of beautiful salwar suits. He placed them on the round table in the middle of the room as all girls took their seats around it touching the materials to feel their softness. Nikhat pulled out a beautiful royal blue lehenga with heavy golden zari work. But the moment she pulled it out the sales person put his hand on it.
"maaf kijiyega ma'am par mujhe nahi lagta ki apke upar ye itna aacha lagega. Ye colour aapko aur sawla dikhayega."
Nikhat abruptly dropped the dress and all looked at her. The sales person apologised for over stepping his line but zoya quickly told him not to mind and that he need not apologise. Zoya turned to nikhat and said, "nikhat, uska tumhe chot pohchane ka koi irada nahi tha. Don't take it to heart."
Nuzat annoyed at the sales person said, "kya zarurat thi usse yeh kehne ki. Baji ka mood kharabkar diya."
"no nuzat." Said zoya, "yeh wrong hai. Uss ka nikhat ko chot pohchane ka koi irada nahi tha. Aur waise bhi har koi kuch na kuch toh kahega hi. Log toh hamesha kuch na kuch kehte hai. Iska matlab yeh toh nahi ki hum nikhat ko humesha shield karke rakhe. Agar usse pata nahi ki log kya bolte hai toh wo apne aap ke liye ladegi kaise."
"par'"
"nuzat, zoya sahi keh rahi hai. Agar har bar koi mere rang ki baat karte hi mujhe bura lagne laga toh' chodo ye sab. Tum log jao aur wo pilli aur hari dresses try karo."
All girls after some hesitation went back in to change except for zoya who stayed with nikhat.
Zoya put a hand on nikhat's shoulder and said, "are you okay?"
"pata nahi zoya. Har bar jab koi mujhe mera rang yaad dilate hai toh mujhe bohot bura lagta hai."
"but why? Sawla hona koi crime nahi. Aur tum gori nahi hui toh kya hua. You are still very pretty. And that's what matters right?"
"zoya par'"
"bright side dekho. Tum jaisi ho imraan ne tumhe waise pasand kiya hai. Without any reservations about your complexion. Sab itne lucky nahi hote. Kash mujhe bhi aisa koi mile."
Nikhat smiled to herself.
"zoya aapko aise kisi kya zarurat hai. Aap toh itni sundar hai."
Zoya just looked ahead in the mirror beyond the strings of beads acting as curtain and then brought back her smile and urged nikhat to try a white suit. What she failed to notice in the mirror was that just behind the mannequins in the back was asad. But he hadn't missed the sad look on zoya's face then and the longing look she gave at that blue lehenga nikhat had dropped. As nikhat left to change after placing a red lehenga in zoya's hands to try on zoya picked up the blue lehenga and kept it on the table. It was beautiful, exotic even but it had short sleeves. She again touched the soft fabric oblivious to asad's eyes on her.
Asad was still wondering why zoya wasn't trying that dress on if she liked it so much. But then he thought maybe she was being sensitive to nikhat's feelings. Asad saw her go in to change and that's when he came in full view. He went and sat at the conch as he started thinking. He was really impreesed by how well zoya had handled nikhat. Because when he had seen nikhat drop the dress his first thought was to go and punch that sales person even though he knew that he was not at fault. But zoya had seen the real problem and tackled it. She had made nikhat feel confident rather than shut the mouth of the world.
Suddenly the window opened and a strong breeze blew in. the red dhupatta on the table went flying across asad and he abruptly went behind it. He caught it before it went out of the room. He sighed, turned around and froze. There she was zoya, looking stunning in that red lehenga, just the way he had first seen her. But right now she was not scared but annoyed. She was searching for something in the clothes. And then asad realised that what she was searching for was in his hands. He smiled without knowing what it was that was funny. He saw her sigh and go towards the mirror. He was amazed that till now she had not noticed him till now. He slowly walked towards her being careful as to not alarm her.
Zoya stood in front of the mirror straightening out her dress. Asad smiled. That was zoya. She was looking so stunning in that dress but she was not even bothered about it. Then she looked up. But clearly she was too upset about not having the dhupatta so she again failed to notice how gorgeous she looked.
(tum hi ho playing in the background.)
Asad slowly adjusted the dhupatta on her head all the while looking at her reflection totally mesmerized. But zoya too was busy staring at him in the mirror. Her brows creased as she couldn't understand what he was staring at when he looked so good in his grey suit. And then she looked down and her eyes met with the image of a gorgeous woman adorned in a beautiful red lehenga. She couldn't believe that it was her reflection that was staring back at her. so she reached out to touch the mirror.
Asad saw her right hand move up to the mirror and unknowingly his right hand to move up to touch hers as he looked down at her.
Asad's breath on her face suddenly made zoya realise how close they were and slowly she looked up to face him. They were so close. Their noses were just centimetres apart. And asad's gaze came down to her shivering lips.
"tada!!" (tum hi ho stops.)
Asad and zoya both were startled and broke apart to see najima standing near the table.
Najima innocently asked, "bhai jaan aap yaha? Aur abhi aap zoya ke saath'?"
Asad was embarrassed and zoya was blushing.
Asad: who, woh actually main'woh'
Zoya: who actually mere aakh mein kuch chala gaya than a so mr. khan'
Just then all the girls came out dressed in their respective clothes. All were shocked to see asad. Asad just smiled at his sisters at how cute all three of them looked. Asad teased them like a brother telling them that none looked good enough except nikhat. And all siblings started laughing.
Humeira was feeling out of place and a bit sad looking at how her best friends were enjoying being pampered by their elder sibling. Zoya noticed this and went to her. And soon zoya started pampering humeira asking her to dress up in almost every dress she could find.
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"tum sab mere saath meri car mein aa rahe ho."
"um'mr. khan there's just one problem jo aapne notice nahi ki. We all can't fit in there."
Actually asad did forget about it but he wouldn't be asad if he accepted it to zoya.
"mr. khan mein ek kam karti hoon. Aap sab ghar jayiye. Mujhe waise bhi badi masjid ke pas kuch kaam hai."
'miss farooqui aapko aisa kya kam hai? I mean kya akele jana zaruri hai?"
"don't worry mr. khan. Main khud ka khayal rakh sakti hoon. Isi baat pe ek sher arz hai."
Asad rolled his eyes.
"fried rice mein maza nahi aata jab tak nah o uss mein soya,
fried rice mein maza nahi aata jab tak nah o uss mein soya,
ab india mein bhi khud ka khayal rakh sakti hai zoya.
Shukriya shukriya shukriya"
All were smiling except asad who had a 'are you done with the nonsense' expression.
"do you know mr. khan? Aap ko toh creativity ki koi kadar hi nahi hai."
Asad said sarcastically,"yes miss farooqui. Mujhe sach mein creativity ki koi kadar nahi."
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Asad was on his bed in the room when he heard zoya's car come. He wanted to go down to just make sure she was fine and ask her what took her so long but ayaan had fallen asleep holding his hand like small child. Asad sighed and slowly ruffled his hair. Ayaan grumbled in his sleep and turned around pulling asad's hand under his cheek. Asad smiled at his childishness.
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Zoya looked at the photo in her hand. She had gone to the masjid where the orphanage from where her aapi had adopted her. From there she had got the address of the person who had dropped her off in that orphanage. And then she saw the house that was there in one of the photos her jiju had sent her. She had known no bounds to her happiness. So she had run in only to notice that the whole house was abandoned. Her heart sank. But still she didn't give up. She found the door was locked and that the lock itself was jammed due to rusting. So she climbed in through a broken window. And after searching through the whole house she had found one photo of a woman and a man standing in a park. She very soon realized how much the woman resembled her. So that must have been her mother. And then the man next to her must surely be her father. But the photo was very old so it was really hard to properly see the face of the man. But she could make out the basic features.
Zoya sighed and got out of the car to enter the house.
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So I guess that's it. I hope I have not lost that asya magic and still you people like it.
Also all the people who want pms please send me a buddy request.
Also all those who requested me to write this ff dialogues in English. I cannot do that because its important for the dialogues to be in hindi to give them feeling. If anyone has a problem in understanding the words or small parts then comment below and me and all my other readers who have understood will be happy to help. I request my readers to help anyone with a difficulty.
Love you all.
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part 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3355680/love-beyond-words-asya-ff-completed
Originally posted by: Enchantress
I was stalking.. I come here on daily basis.. No seriously... I really come here for an update , am so in love with this story and the way this is proceeding its just fabulous... And, this chapter was a perfect come back for you dear...
I love Zoya and her positive outlook towards everything.. So right if the world says wrong things to you that doesn't mean you should go around and shut them up, till what extend will you be able to do that.. You should try and make your self strong, confident and patient.. You want people to except as you are , then first you need to except yourself.. That is what nikhat is lagging.. I m sure zoes company would change her outlook towards herself for good...She din't go for the blue lehenga.. Sleeveless and scars , right..I m so eager to know what will come up when asad knows everything.. Btw I don't thing Asad over here knows anything related to her past... right.. There small staring session was so good... Loved it..Do continue asap.Dee
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