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diii update geet ka time hoying di :(
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PART 64


Armaan... mera bacha Geet ran calling out to her baby but there was no response. She ran from one corner to another hurting herself to such an extent tat her leg was badly injured. She wanted to kill herself but her eyes wanted to have a glimpse of her baby before she could do so. Pari who was looking here and there saw Geet running in front of her and by the look from behind she knew it was Geet. she just screamed calling for her but Geet was nowhere to stop making Pari to run a bit faster only to see the white marble floor covered with blood and her heart almost stopped seeing it Bhabi.. ruk jaaye.. wait Bhabi.. she called out to Geet but Geet was once again lost in the corridors of the hospital.


Here Vicky and Maan ran from one side to other when Maan was stopped by Pari who was crying Bhabi.. bhai.. Geet bhabi and she just kept pointing behind her making Maan more scared. He shook her by her shoulder asking her to open her mouth but she could only cry damn it Pari... speak up.. where the hell is Geet.. kya hua ushe. Pari looked at Maan and tried to calm herself first. She wiped her tears saying Bhabi.. blood.. she is hurt Bhai.. Geet Bhabi is bleeding.. I tried to stop her.. but she lost.. I lost her.. she is bleeding Bhai his world crashed once again while his heart stopped the moment he heard Pari say tat. He did not know wat he could do but just made dash pushing Pari who hit herself on to the wall but tat was least for her. She herself was not in senses and without wasting a second she ran to search Armaan

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A man walked towards the scheduled lone corner looking and turning each side to be sure tat he was alone. He evilly smiled entering the room where the little soul was left on the cold floor that had almost turned pale with cold body. He picked up shaking his small petite body only to hear small whimpers from him So still alive haan.. chalo lets go.. tera vanwass khatam hua.. par pray tat you stay alive by the time you get your bloody parents. The man once again covered Armaan and walked off as if he was carrying a bag while he said to himself yeh saala paisa kya kya karvata hain.. hum jaise maahir log aise bhi kabhi kaam karenge.. never ever thought.. par paisa sab karvatha hain.. aur Paisa tho sabka baap hain.. chalo.. kamine ke aulad.. ab apne kamine maa .. baap se milne ka time aaya tera. He walked carefully some distance when he heard the whimpers getting bit louder. He stopped and carefully heard and at an instant ran inside a vacant room and locked the door. He unwrapped the blanket and saw tat the little life was struggling to breathe but his anger tat he was wasting time was making him furious and not realizing wat he was doing he pulled his gun and aimed it towards Armaan Abbe marne ka itna hi shuaq hain tho keh de.. abhi boss se keh kar udda deta hoon tujhe the man gritted his teeth saying when suddenly he remembered wat he was asked to do. He gave a look at his watch and wrapped Armaan and walked at a speed to reach the exact destination.

The police team had now reached the scheduled corner of the hospital where Armaan was kept. The head of the team was bit confused as it looked weird tat this place though new looked as if it was haunted. He turned and said to one of his team mate Don't you feel tat this can be used as a hideout. The other officer looked at him confused while he said See.. this is the new part of the building and its still under construction.. I mean the other half and here.. I think no one comes.. so only workers are allowed. It can be tat any one of the worker may have kidnapped the Khuranna's child. Paise ke liye. They stood there for few seconds but suddenly he said par aaj tho.. as per the information gathered form the staff the workers are on strike due to some reasons.. so aaj koi yaha kaam karega.. not possible.. par ho bhi.. no one can think tat anyone will be hiding here.. away from the main area.


The officers stood trying to figure out the possibilities when they heard an officer calling out to them. They looked at the direction and saw another officer standing on a doorstep a bit away from them signaling them to come. They ran and the moment they did the officer said Sir.. yaha pe koi tha. And he picked the burned ends of cigarette tat were lying here. He closely observed them and said These are not old.. inhe aaj hi use kiya hain.. so its means someone was here this cleared the doubts and the moment they scanned the area carefully they saw the dark patch on the floor while some was wet due to Armaan's urine when he urinated on tat man. They smelled it and the officer spoke The baby was kept here... yahi tha woh.. lets move.. he is still inside the hospital and the other officer alerted all other on walkie talkie informing tat the kidnapper and the baby was still inside as the kidnapper would have no option to leave the hospital due to closure of all the exits.


Maan looked out for Geet and Armaan simultaneously but he was only met with the failure. He screamed and called out for them while people who were held captive inside the hospital gave pity look at him seeing the way he was. He fell on his knees praying to the almighty please God.. meri gunnah ki sazza sweety ko mat do.. don't punish him for my sins.. please I beg you.. kill me.. drain every ounce of blood from my body.. but please keep my baby safe..aur kuch nahi.. he begged and cried for the safety of his little soul. He could not think a life without their Sweety and wat would he answer if he failed to get him. His mind reached to Geet and again the thought tat she was bleeding killed him Please Jaan.. don't do anything.. I promise sweety will be safe in your hands.. please ish baar kuch nahi hone dunga main apne bache ko he said as if he was asking Geet to listen to him. He stood wiping his tears when he saw Dadima walking towards him in tears along with Rano as the Handa's were informed and later were inside the hospital. Arjun was baffled and he almost killed the head of the hospital for the mishap. Dadima looked at Maan while he broke down again he punished by baby sweety dadima.. my sins will never give any happiness' he is punishing my geet and baby for wat I did.. tell him dadima..maar de mujhe par mere bache aur Geet ko baksh de.. please dadima.. please he cried falling on her legs asking her to tell god not to do this. Rano cried bitterly seeing him in this condition while the people only gasped seeing the MSK falling on someone's knees. They knew MSK as terror with power but seeing him like this was new and never expected. Rano held Maan by his shoulder and said wiping his tears Jab Geet ne kabhi tumhe sazza nahi di.. than how can Babaji give beta... he will never betray Geet and her love for you.. Armaan mil jayega..he will be safe. Just pray to god and Maan pushed her slightly and ran again to search for his angels.


The man walked carrying Armaan making his way through the lone corridor making sure tat none could see him. He knew a slight mistake and he would be at the end of his life from Khuranna's but he was smart enough to know wat he had to do Chup ho gaya.. ya saase atak gayi bache he said pulling the blanket near his lips and he could feel the slight breadth of Armaan. He sighed and he instantly walked reaching the place tat was right now all empty. He looked here and there and confirmed tat no one was there and unwrapped Armaan and placed him on the bare cold floor and ran before he was caught knowing tat within seconds Armaan would be sighted by one or the other and ran to the crowded area making sure tat none observed his moves waiting for the confirmation tat the Khuranna's have found him.


Geet who had been frantically running from one end to another reached the empty corridor to search her baby. She did not know where she was running but just went where her legs took. She stopped hearing a small sound or say a small whimper and being a mother she knew tat it was her baby Sweety... mera bacha... mera bacha kaha hain tu. She ran calling out to Armaan who had heard his mother and trying his best to wail out loud but his body was giving up. He could not scream nor cry loud as his whole body had turned cold and his eyes almost closed taking him to darkness. Geet who was crossing the same path stopped seeing something lying down on the bare cold floor while her heart started to beat faster while her lungs stopped inhaling air for life. Her legs walked slower towards the object and she froze the moment she saw Armaan lying lifeless on the cold floor. She dropped herself just away from Armaan crying out of top of her voice Maannn as her tears did not stop. Her body refused to stand and reach to her baby, her soul cried and she crawled as a limp person reaching to her baby and at once she grabbed her soul into her. She hugged him tight and kissed all over making sure tat he was safe but the moment she felt he was still and there was no response she parted to see her baby. She patted his cheeks as her heart stopped beating sweety.. dekho Mumma. See Mumma is here sweety.. speak to Mumma.. na.. see Mumma here She unzipped her dress and placed Armaan's lips on her bud but he was not responding. She opened his mouth and forcibly placed her n***** in it but he was still. She pulled him and hit him on his face to wake but the was no response Sweety.. open your eyes beta.. see Mumma found you na... see Mumma ko gussa aa raha hain.. open eyes. Sweety.. she looked at him and screamed calling out for Maan running towards him Maannn.


The corridor echoed with her voice while it reached Maan's and others ears. For a second Maan feared hearing it but leaving behind everything he ran towards the source of her voice tat was till calling him. He stopped seeing her running holding something in her hand and the moment Geet saw him she stopped crying and falling down holding the little baby in her hand Maan yeh Sweety.. yeh baat nahi kar raha hain.. tell him Maan.. tell I want to talk to him.. Maan.. yeh aankhen bhi nhia khol raha hain. Geet said still patting his cheeks while Maan for a second did not get want she meant but the moment he saw Armaan's face and his hand lifelessly hanging his heart stopped while his legs took him to them. He fell on the floor and instantly pulled Armaan to him. He patted his cheeks and kissed him all over but seeing him not opening his eyes he shook him hard Sweety.. open your eyes.. dekho Dadda is here.. Mumma also there.. open your eyes beta.. please.. open them..Maan slapped him a bit hard and pinched him but still there was no response. He looked at Geet who was patting Armaan Baby open your eyes baby.. please.. Maan tell him Maan.. dekho meri Jaan jaa rahi hain.. please..Maan.. yeh dhoodh bhi nahi pi raha hain. dekho na she pulled Armaan and placed his lips on her bud once again to show Maan who was crying. He pulled Armaan and closed Geet's zip and ran taking Armaan while Geet followed screaming asking him to stop stop Maan.. rukh jaaye,, mera bacha.. give him back Maan.. he is hungry.. please Maan.. mere sweety ko de dijye.


Maan and Geet stood outside the NICU looking at their baby who lay lifeless inside on the small bed. He was surrounded by wires, tubes and machines while here Geet was crying asking them to let her in. The woman's had hard time to control her while she still bled from her leg. She pushed everyone tat tried to stop her jaane dijiye.. mera bacha bhooka.. hain.. he needs me..leave me.. leave me. She screamed while Maan closed his eyes in anger tightening his fist. The head of the hospital was standing there and Vicky who had been controlling his anger left everything and pounced on the head shaking him by his collar.


Zinda nahi chodunga.. agar mere Amy ko kuch hua.. than I swear you will cry for death.. make sure tat you all pray for him he warned the head who stood with a dipped head unable to meet their eyes. Apne aaknhen neeche karne se koi fayda nahi.. make sure tat the very person who is responsible for this..make sure tat he rots.. or else bhool jao ki koi hospital tha tumara. Vicky pushed the owner on the floor and pounced on him again when the police stopped him saying Mr. Khuranna I promise tat whoever is responsible for all this will be soon arrested. Just be calm now. Vicky pushed the officer saying calm.. wat do you mean.. yeh bacha sirf bacha nahi.. he is the reason for us to live.. and mind it officer I give you 12 hours just 12 hours to arrest the person or else you will face Vicky Singh Khuranna.


The man stood away witnessing the scene while he spoke on the phone Yes boss.. the work is perfectly done.. and no one I mean no one even doubted anything.. then the man carefully heard wat his boss said Yes boss will be sending it soon.. but my money. The man smirked and cut the call and moved a bit closer to get a clear view. He was very careful in his moves and he slowly videoed shooting the entire scene with the Khuranna family totally devasted and soon messaged to his boss and fled away before he was caught.


Maan just kept looking at his sweety from the small window but suddenly he was pushed aside and saw his Jaan rushing inside the NICU and started to push everyone near her baby. She pulled Armaan to her and started to kiss her while the doctors tried to free her from Armaan. Maan and others ran inside and instantly and Maan pulled Geet who had Armaan with her. Jaan Please.. give Armaan to them he pleaded while she pushed him away trying to walk with him when Maan grabbed and pulled her again just give them Armaan Geet.


No I wont.. they will take him away from me.. I wont give she said pressing Armaan to her and getting frustrated Maan pulled Armaan and settled him on bed and the doctors instantly took the charge. Geet tries pulling when Maan held her tight in him Jaan.. let them see Sweety. He needs them Jaan.. Sweety needs them please Maan said holding Geet while she just kept looking at Armaan. Maan slowly took her out and tats when he realized tat she was bleeding Jaan you need doctor. Geet did not say anything and stood outside just watching Armaan. Maan knew tat she would not do anything and so Vicky instantly asked one of the doctors to treat her there itself. Maan made her to sit while the doctor checked the wound and injected her and later dressed her wound tat was a bit deep.


Minutes passed into hour and hour into hours. After 3 hours the doctor came out having a sigh and a small smile on his face but Geet did not wait to hear anything and just barged inside the NICU while Maan stood looking at the doctor to hear something tat would stop his pain. He is all fine now.. it was too close Mr. Khuranna.. his body was all pale and cold but he is a strong boy and now out of danger. Maan broke down completely hearing wat the doctor said while none stopped him. they knew tat he needed tat but his words just broke everyone again Nahijaunga uske pass.. I wont go near him..I wont let my shadow fall on tat soul.. m a culprit.. I cant keep him safe.. nahi I will not go near him his words slit everyone present there and before they could say anything to him he stormed out of the place leaving everyone broken with his words while his other half was unaware of wats going out.

The evil laugh echoed all over the room while the video was being displayed on the big screen tats just the start Khuranna's this is the beginning of the destruction.. a mere few hours away from Armaan Maan Singh Khuranna and here see you all are torn.. abhi tho bahut kuch baaki hain.. Zinda rehna hain.. need to stay alive to see the way I destroy everyone with my hands. Just remember this is just a trailer a mere small gift from my side to you all..



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Rakhi here is my Update.. You were begging me na.. aur Heytal.. see Sweety is fine.. and Harika.. tu ab khush na.. and Mali.. how could I forget your warning.. Love you all


Next update will not be before I get 210+ likes with 20 pages of comment without spamming and people who just comment one word please its request either you comment or don't. It looks like you are not interested and this hurts me a lot.

Thank you



NEXT : PART 65

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Edited by sdlife19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phew...I was reading d updt vd my heart in my mouth...Amy is fine and I sighed...god dat was a tormenting updt...it tortured me till Amy was fine...

U are just superb...u bring out thrill, excitement and at d same time u scare people to death...

Hey m first...I was so lost in Amy...maan and Vicky dis time is not to sulk and feel helpless...u r khurana and show dat to dat SOB...dat basterd...whoever it is...b it Annie,pari's dad or any one...dey should rot in maan Singh khuranas hell...

How could anybody b so cruel to such a small kid...m really shocked and stressed after reading dis updt...Pari tell maan dat Annie is bck and yash tell maan abt Pari...
Edited by maanmeet1 - 12 years ago
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don't have words to express my feelings about this..
Heart-wrenching part..
all the while I cried for ammy..
well written di..
ur words to express geet's emotion were out of this world..
maan cried, he's broken for ammy ;(
at the last vicky in action..loved it
very emotional part..l
will be waiting plz continue..
Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
u[pdate armaan safe maan guilt



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Thank god sweety is ok but geet is in danger...oh the pain she felt staying far away from the baby...uff whomever plotting the plan against khuranas gonna pay very dearly..let the evil dance once again & at the end the evil once again fades away to the darkness...painful but was very emotional update too shoba dear do continue soon!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the short comment...
But heart breaking update!. Glad that armaan is back to Maaneet...
Want that b****** who tortured amy to rot in hell.!
Update soon Di.! 😊 Will be waiting for the next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum painful update
aww my poor baby amy😭😭😭😭😭
geet hurt herself n searching for amy 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
maan broke down n in pain 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
thnk god amy mil gaya but poor baby suffering soo much😭😭😭
ohhh nooo maan going away frm amy n nt even seeing him as he feel guilty for nt having being able to protect him 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
plzzz maan dnt do this baby n geet need u 😭😭😭😭
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional update, my poor sweety and maaneet face too much pain 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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