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Posted: 12 years ago
as usual u gave nice update zara👏...madhu proposed rk..dat was so sweet..
all of a sudden the ss got ended sad😕...i dint expect so early
plz write an epilogue too...😊
Edited by cool_sri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
the end was so unexpected...i was nt expecting it anytime soon...but just loved it:D again a happy ending to our rishabala story
great!
Thanks fr pm:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update n a really lovely SS Zara..but u ended it so soon😲..we were loving it!!!
loved madhu proposing RK..n d whole RK Madhu scene in his appartment!!!
regarding Trish...cn i assume dat Rohan n Trish vl be dating nw!!!

plz do write an epilogue!!!

Edited by sangeet6690 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved ❤️ ❤️ both the updates . From dinner to party to Madhu being rescued & taken care of by RK . Clearing misunderstandings superbly written ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
totally awesome story 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago





It has been precisely 2yrs that RK and Madhu have been in a beautiful passionate relationship.. They have their hot moments almost every minute since being 2 young hot people their adrenaline rush is always at its peak! But till now they haven't had sex ...coz no matter how modernised they are ..RK doesn't wanna do this before gettin into the loving relation of marriage and thts somethin Madhu adores about RK !!


'Aahhh finally Today Madhu is returning from Milan !! After full 1 week ... I'm dying to meet her ' RK thought sitting in his cabin..

He picked up her picture 'my hotness !! Miss u so muchhh !! Come sooon now'

Just then Rohan and Trishna walk in..

'Look at the lovestruck puppy' Rohan chuckled

'Shutup Dude !!!' RK laughed too..

'When is Madhu returning RK ? Wt time is her flight ???' Trishna asked

'8pm... And Trish I'm taking her straight to my place ' RK smirked

'Awesome !' Rohan blurted out

'So I'm coming to ur place ' he spoke to trishna

'Awww baby ! Ofcourse ' Trishna blushed

'Now look at u both ! Lovestruck idiots' RK smiled broadly

And they all started laughing...

Madhu was in her flight !! She was all smiles .. She experienced one of the best fashions shows ever and walkin as a show stopper for Milan Fashion week was her dream come true ! She felt like she achieved everything she wanted ..

She switchd on her laptop .. Her screensaver was RK's picture ..

'Gosh ! Missed u so much RK ... Can't wait to see u ...' She smiled

Madhu was one of the best models today in town .. She had been a showstopper for almost every designer in town .. She had been on the cover of magazines to big hoardings .. In 2yrs she had achieved everything she wanted in her life wid the support of RK .. She felt like the luckiest girl alive coz RK was soo supportive of her and guided her whenever she was in a dilemma ..

'ThankYou God ! For giving me everything I wanted ' madhu smiled and closed her eyes desperately waiting for the flight to land..

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RK had decorated his room only for Madhu.. It had been 1 full week since he hugged her , touched her , kissed her .. 1 week seemed like a decade for RK .. He was so used to Madhu tht it was impossible for him to imagine a life widout her ..

He lighted aroma candles ... Ordered her favourite Italian cuisine and champagne to celebrate her successful fashion show ! Her all time obsession wid orchids made RK to decor the room wid orchids all over ..

Finally it was 9pm ...his driver had informed tht Madhu had landed about an hour back .. RK knew now anytime she would arrive ... He checked himself in the mirror .. Black shirt and faded jeans thts what madhu likes him in..

Suddenly the door bell rang ..

RK's heart skipped a beat .. 'Madhu Finally '

He rushed to the door and opened it ...

And there stood his Madhu in a white shirt and high waisted grey skirt .. Her eyes brimming wid tears..

Tht very moment she dropped all her belongings and hugged RK tightly ... RK held her tightly too in his arms .. Her fragrance .. He missed it so much .. He picked her up and twirled her around..

Madhu smiled as she stood on the floor ..

'I missed u so much Madhu' RK spoke cupping her face ...

'I missed u too RK like crazyy ...' She closed her eyes taking in the feel of his warm hands ..

'I have a surprise for u' RK spoke taking her hand..

'Really??? I have a surprise for u too' Madhu spoke

'But first my surprise' RK demanded

As she nodded wid a smile ..

RK stood behind madhu and covered her eyes wid his palm as he started moving her towards his room.

Once they were inside ... RK removed his palm and whispered in her ear ..

'Open ur eyes'

As Madhu slowly opened her eyes .. She saw the room beautifully decorated wid her favourite candles and flowers ..

'OHMYGOD ! This is beautiful RK' she turned around and hugged him tightly ..

'Its the best surprise ever ...I love u sooo much' she hugged him even more tightly ...

RK could feel Madhu getting emotional..it was unusual her..

'What happened sweetheart? Are u alright?' He asked stroking her cheeks softly..

'Yaa I'm okay ! I justt...missed u so much' she had tears in her eyes...

RK gently kissed her hand ...'I'm wid u Madhu .. Forever and ever ' and he again hugged her tightly ...

RK opened the champagne and poured it 2 glasses ...

'To my Love's successful fashionweek' he raised the glass for a toast..

As they both did a cheers ...

'So what about ur surprise ?' RK asked ..

'Can we first eat ? I'm starving' Madhu requested ...

Well hunger was just an excuse for Madhu .. More she was scared of giving her surprise to Rk .. What if he doesn't like it ?

Within few minutes the dinner was also over ...

'The dinner was yummm' Madhu spoke sitting on the couch ..

RK sat next to her and made her sit on his lap ...

'Not yummier than u' he spoke nuzzling on her neck ..

Madhu let out a soft moan .. As she enjoyed RK's lips on her neck ..

'Wait a minute my surprise' she blurted out ..

'Oh yeah tell me ???? I'm dying to know' RK spoke

'Close ur eyes first' Madhu demanded

'What? Madhu are we like 5 ?' RK spoke annoyed

'Shutup RK I sed close ur eyes NOW !' Madhu yelled

'Okay okay fine' and RK closed his eyes ..

Madhu took a deep breath...a relly deep one !

After a few seconds she spoke

'Open'

RK shot open his eyes only to find Madhu on her knees yet again..

'Repeat telecast?' His mind wondered

'Madhu again???' He blurted out instantly

But seeing her expressions he got a bit more serious..

'Hey madhu ... What happened love ?' He asked in a whisper ...

Madhu looked up to him and held his hand ...

'RK ! This one week I spent widout u made me realize ur true value in my life .. I never thought I would feel so empty living my dream.. I was walking on my dream ramp but my eyes were constantly searching for u .. And thts when I realized my dreams mean nothing until u there wid me in them.. I realised my life is nothing widout u RK ... Everything seemed so dull widout u .. My success is incomplete widout u ... In short I realised ur the one who makes my life worthful ... I cannot imagine a day widout u ...'

A tear escaped her eyes ..she closed her eyes as her heartbeat rose ..

'Will ...u...marry ...me ?' She stuttered

Her eyes still closed

Heartbeat racing to the speed of light

No response from RK

Slowly she opened her eyes

Only to find RK sitting right infront of her on his knees..

He held both her hands ...and kissed them..

'Yes Madhu ! I will marry you ... U make my life beautiful ... Widout u RK is incomplete ...I love u Madhubala Mallik'

'Oops soon to be Madhubala Kundra' he smiled as Madhu blushed

And he took her in his arms... Embracing her for forever and ever...

'Now let's put these candles to some use' RK spoke against her ear ...

Madhu broke the hug hearing tht..

'If u don't kiss me now I swear I might just force myself on u ' she whispered

RK smiled and pulled her to him in a passionate , longing hungry kiss ..

In a minute their clothes were lying on the floor and they on the bed .. Loving each other like wild animals ...

Well that's what Distance does to u !!



P.s - Hope u guys liked the epilogue? 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome...sry like buttons are not working
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ending Zara.

Do come up with another FF soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Zara it has ended..what..uff no..when i was reading i was thinking why u wrote everything in this part..and than the note broke my heart..yeah awesome ending..but i dont like ending..but zara awesome..i mean the best..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow finally madhubala mane gayi... hurray... par trish ka kya... fantastic update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg wat an epilogue no no what a story... its mindblowing...

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