YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread2*ch.34 page.141 - Page 85

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Charucrazy



Yeah Yeah I don't mind on whatever you call me 😆 😆

Bt Zaaine is ONLY mine 😡

I have a idea of a new story.. I'm not sure that should I start or not


no he isn't... he's actually mine 😆

start it weirdo
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Charucrazy

People do not reply 😕


is that something new?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kays94



is that something new?



No 🤣

You want me to start it? Do you think I write something worth reading? 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
Please update I'm dying to read the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
HATS OFF !!!! to you first of all...this was flawless...

you won't believe me but i sat for continuous three n a half years reading this right from Chapter 1 to chapter 32..n even skipped my dinner...but it was definitely worth my time...i lost all my Hunger here ;)

Zaanie is soo freaking adorable...and man he's Jr.Viren...love his questions...alwaus ready to 'Shoot'..lol

VIRIKA couldn't really get any Perfect...they way you portrayed each emotion...i just end up feeling i was watching a movie with probably the best cast EVER!!!!!!

i amm sooo excited for the coming Princess...ahhh i wish her to be Jr.Jeevika now..lol.. ;)

Loved everyy character ...Zoya,Maanvi,Karan ,Virat ...everyone's sooo cutee :D

Not to forget...you reminded me of my days in California ..n travelling to LA ...Starbucksss..cookies ;)

i have never ever seen a writer as PERFECT as you...

sorry for commenting super late ;) ..but i wasn't being a Silent reader..i started reading today only when you sent me ur Index...and Girlll..you have a new Fan!!! 😊

Get ready to be bugged up for updates...can't wait at all to read moreee


THANK YOU for get me engrossed..it was a sheer pleasure going through this most amazing Story...
UPDATE SOOONNN!!!!!!!! 😉


Lots of loveee and a biggg huggg 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
i need more of the daa and mommy updateee... ;)

pleaseee updateee ...i have no patience to read more this flawless beautiful awesome-blossom story...

don't make us wait more...UPDATEEE!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
The wait is taking my 'heartbeat' away...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Karina di...pls update soon i'm waiting for my Zaaine...
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 33

Jeevika woke up around 4 to see Viren and Zaaine sitting together on the other bed eating and doing something on the laptop.

j - "What are you two upto"
z - "Mommy, daa showing me Statue Lib..Libb"
v - "The Statue of Liberty"
Zaaine just giggled and so did Jeevika seeing Zaaine unable to pronounce it.
v - "I was thinking we go there tomorrow morning"
j - "How about when everyone comes in two days"
v - "I don't think anyone is going to want to go sightseeing since we've all seen everything. So thought of getting it done before they come and show Zaaine everything"
j - "That works also. Where should we go tonight?"
v - "Just walk around the city and pray it snows soon"
z - "Daa it still no snow"
j - "Good job bringing the topic back up Viren"
v - "Don't worry it will soon"
z - "What if it doesn't daa?"
v - "We will make it snow okay?"
z - "Mommy when it christmas? And santa give me gifts here or at home?"
v - "Uhm. don't worry Santa knows that you are in New York. He will drop your gifts here okay"
z - "But how Santa know daa?"
v - "Santa knows everything!!!"
z - "Everything?"
v - "Yes everything. He knows when Zaaine listens to his parents and he knows when he doesn't behave"
z - "Santa get mad at me?"
j - "No. You've been such a good boy' no one is mad at you"
z - "Thank you mommy" he said getting off the bed and going to the other side to hug Jeevika"

Jeevika hugged him back tightly and kissed his soft little cheeks.
j - "Are you feeling better now?"
z - "Yup. But hungry"
v - "Me too"
j - "Me three and four"
v - "Awww is my junior Jeevika hungry too?"
j - "Yesss"
z - "Mommy why you three and four?"
j - "Because I'm very very very hungry"
v - "Yeah right" 😛
z - "Then me five, six, seven"
v - "Let's get ready and then go have some fun. I feel like having pizza"
z - "Me too daa"
v - "Then that's what we're having"
j - "I don't want pizza"
z - "Why mommy?"
j - "I don't feel like having it"
v - "We will get you whatever you feel like eating. Zaaine do you want to wear your night suit and go" he said sarcastically
z - "NOOO' daa silly" 😆
v - "Zaaine is more silly"
j - "Zaaine I already took out your clothes. Its in the bathroom' do you need help changing"
z - "Noo' me do by myself"
v - "Go fast then"
Zaaine sped to the bathroom to change while Jeevika moved to Viren's lap.
j - "I'm feeling cold"
v - "So thats why you're sitting on me so I can cuddle you and make you warm"
j - "You know me so well" 😳
v - "That I do" he said kissing her on her cheek.

The kiss which started on the cheek led to Jeevika's chin, her neck, and slowly making its way to her perfect lips. That romantic kiss on the lips was short-lived though thanks to Zaaine Vadhera!!!

v - "Zaaine ughhh" he whispered in Jeevika's ears making her laugh.
z - "Why you laugh mommy?"
j - "Nothing Zaaine. Go get your jacket out fast. I'll go change quickly okay?"
z - "Okay mommy. Daa me really really hungry"
v - "Okay as soon as Jeevika comes we will run to the restaurant. Quickly put on your shoes"
z - "Daa me wanna go to toy store"
v - "Again?"
z - "Yes please"
v - "Whyyy?"
z - "Secret"
v - "You're going to keep a secret from me?"
z - "hehehe yes"
v - "Why don't you tell me. Maybe I can help you?"
z - "No daa its secret. Please daa me wanna go again"
v - "Okay we can go before we go back home. Deal?"
z - "Deal!"

Zaaine went to the bathroom door and knocked' "Mommy come fast"
j - "Coming Zaaine!"

Jeevika came out to see Viren and Zaaine both ready to go!

❤️ Likes and Comments Please ❤️

Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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:P Me first on your update for the first time! LOL!
Zainee is damn awesum yaar!
I feel like having him all for myself! :P
Haha! Spoiling my Virika's perfect romantic moment!
Loved how Viren said "My little Jeevika!" :P
Good to see you updating my love!
And now you've left me craving for more! :P
Update ASAP!!!!
Lotss of love!

Edited by karankrysle - 12 years ago

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