Surprising Poetic Corner: Silent Sun-quake - Page 19

Originally posted by: crizal

Ahha haa very diferent concept

N the title..aww 😳

Beautifully highlighting the plight of warriors but still they live in hope 😳

Your every spoken words have insight meaning 😛

Truly this one is amazing 😉

U surely touched one of the untouched topic 😃

Keep it up yaar 👍🏼

Waiting to read more of urs 🤗

diffrent concept!!!
poem mein bhi😕😳

thanks a lot dear⭐️

btw untouched topic!!! u mean pahele kisine hoping poem nehi lekha😉

Originally posted by: crizal

Haww 😲 ( no other meaning ..just Arnav left her ,thatz why 😆 )

I never imagine Arnav n Khushi when nt required in poem 😆

but in this one I m imagining Arnav leaving Khushi 😡

U r just amazing dear 👏

I think I also have to write on this topic 😆

He is leaving Khushi after enjoying with her 😡

I loved Arnav's line in which he said
" My eyes are seemed to be amazing but actually dead! "
I m in awe with this line

Comeone give us one more update na 😆

are...they're lovers...that's it dear😛
now u can imagine them as ur own choice😉
to me they're Samrat & Helen, 18 yr younger queen😳 than him😆

btw more upd!
u want me to continue this convo??⭐️

it was just superb lovely so beautiffuly written words touched heart😊

Originally posted by: surprising

are...they're lovers...that's it dear😛
now u can imagine them as ur own choice😉
to me they're Samrat & Helen, 18 yr younger queen😳 than him😆

btw more upd!
u want me to continue this convo??⭐️

Ya doo continue 😉

Originally posted by: daydreamer...

beautiful poem di...you express feeling very well...loved it...🤗

the way you've described the yearning for each other is really touching...

but some lines just outshone the others...( copmpletely my POV)

"a constant couple with the language of silence"--- silence often keeps us bonded when we don't have anything to say...distance can break the bond of words, but the thread of silence is enough to stay connected...

"a conservative heart like a dark chamber"--- our deepest secrets, most horrifying fears, and our most innate desires, lie hidden in the depths of our heart. and when someone or something threatens our self imposed barriers, we more often than not make a conscious effort to push them away. we humans are very insecure that way. we reveal what we want to but when someone edges close to our true being unearthing the treasure that lies hidden, bringing light into the otherwise dark cavern, we tend to resist, for for we feel that somethings are better kept in folds than revealed.

"don't hope against hope" --- how unthinking is the human heart which welcomes false hope with open arms until it escapes draining us of whatever we have and even then, regaining consciousness we rush to fall into the snares of delusion once again...

"like a mirage i fascinated you once upon a time"--- on being torn apart from something or someone precious to us, we grieve and curse our fate but ultimately we look for ways to move on, ways to convince our heart that it was just a fragment of destined imagination. we end up classifying it as surreal reality, something which was never meant for permanence just like a mirage. but alas! the heart is not so easily be-fooled...for though it learns to smile through the tears and the tears do dry up sooner or later, memories, even if a mirage, are not so easily forgotten...

"a completely finished man"--- despair is the most treacherous enemy...it makes people offer you a helping hand and on the other hand it makes you reject all help...

a king who is defeated must be prepared to see strange looks,

so bitter a thing is the heart of man.

a man is finished only when he admits defeat to life and to himself...

and till the time he has even a last remaining vestige of self- respect and hope, he's still got something left in him.

love is not about being physically present all the time...sometimes its just about two hearts beating for each other. it is foolish to hold on to something which you know to be a forbidden fruit. but then it is also foolish to let go something which was all that you've ever wanted...

i don't know how far i'm right...i may be completely wrong...but these were the thoughts which came to me as i read your poem...😳

and once again...beautifully written di...you're awesome...🤗

my sweet sis-----------so much hugs to you🤗

VeRy beAutiFuL...!!!!

Shundor,
amar khub valo legeche!!

thnx 4 PM


wahh⭐️
thanku too😊

Stand In Time's Eye

My dead heart doesn't know what to do...

It still wants to get alive with your warmth

But...the light of truth darkens its leafy desire...

...Now, it's the time to bid adieu forever...

Sunbeam or iceberg- what awaits us beyond this world??

Belief is just an apparent word

Truth is so atrocious & loves to jeer...

I can't help depending on you

Though I want to sever."

The night is foggy violet

Dew drops share a warm hug with the pearls

Untold words perform a silent cry...

What if the eyes're deprived??

Uncertain colourful brine of ours

Forms an ocean full of compassion &...conquest!

...Melodious pain is greater king than me...

I & my part...my part & I

Seemingly to be apart...but...

Our relation lies in frozen tears-

Just like the rainbow & the rain...

A bright beam makes difference between us.

Life is a beautiful thorn

Likely to be a soft thunderstorm...

Full of ablaze brine with pink fire!

If you're in the ocean of tears or happiness

Or even of beam or snow...

...The only certain thing is uncertainty...

Awesome poem dr.

u are writing awesome poems😊

that was really a nice one...