Love Struck 2 A SwaRon Love Journey - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWww sooo cuteee... cant stop my laughter... <3 thnxxx fr d pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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perfect story telling .. im loving the way the story is going, especially the swaron fights and shanaya's story telling ..


Update soon n pls do pm ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1
Its OOosum and nice begining of story...So moving on...I like the attitude of both swayam and sharon...Swayam as a famous singer and dancer...Wow...thats great...And here sharon is also one of the biggest choreographer...And yes loved the way u express shanaya and sharon relation as a sisters...

Sharon break up part was like LOL.😆.She bit him and broke down his ribs...😆 I like this..Then loved the way shanaya makes sharon agree to accept that contract..But swayam came again with egoistic behaviour...He will take audition of sharon...?? Now,its really interesting ahead...

And last,i just loved u'r line "Shanaya is like sandwich portion between two egoistic holder person"..Now she is in big trouble...

Loved u'r update and Thanx for PM

Prateek
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am wondering how did I miss this master piece.. it is an amazing story... oh I so loved it... both Sharon and Swayam are interesting and I am looking forward for the next part eagerly... plz update soon and pm me. I cant handle the curious devil inside me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i just read ur love struck 1 in one go it was awesome.and love struck 2 just one for it mind blowing.i love to read more about it .thnx for pm and plz pm when u update the next part dying to read more.awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part.. loved it.. their 1st meet turned to b hurricane hit place.. they fighted pulling each others hairs.. poor shaimak has totally lost his cool.. loved d way shanaya was there as sweet sister n friend.. loved d names they gave for each other junglee n miss brown swine... love it.. waiting for next part eagerly..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is so fun reading...i love this update...swaron first meet with a BANG!!!!!!!!!
i njoyed it to the core ..their fight...aww ...junglee n swan.
also love shanaya swayam bonding...
Also lyked the way u narrating story to tanya...
this is uniqueness about ur writeups pratik...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow..Wow..Wow!!!
This is so interesting...
Like Shanya, i also wanted the story to go on...
Really nice bro and sorry i could not comment on each part..
But i read all the updates in one go and this is superb story...
Continue soon
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Pratik please update when will you update?
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Thank you so much everyone for the love and support to this story. I am really very busy and stuck in some work so i am not able to reply the comments i have received here and on my birthday thread. But i promise i will reply to all the comments as soon as i get free from my work. Now please forgive me for updating late and enjoy the update.

Part 3 Beginning of Friendship

"Here you go with your snacks and tea, now let's just go ahead with the story please" Tanya said looked very Irritated
"Ok-ok so let's start, you know where we left ok we were finally decided on one thing about video" Shanaya said
"Ya what ahead now" Tanya asked excited now
Ok so after Sharon Di left from studio, we all prepared for outdoor shoot schedules and required things.
I had almost finished my work when Swayam came to me.
"Hey Sweetheart done with your baggage's" Swayam said
"What? Did you call them baggage? You are supposed to wear those baggage's in your video do you understand that?" I said shouting out of my lungs because work had already irritated me a lot and to add on to that Swayam was irritating me more.
"Oh Jesus somebody is in very mood today, what happened?" Swayam asked
"Thank you so much for asking at least now, do you know how much we had to prepare just to shoot a bloody video of you and Di and to add on to our miseries you and Di fight and waste our times" I said
"Oh so you mean I was the one who started that fight?" Swayam said
"Yes absolutely, I mean any blind can also tell that you intentionally pushed her anger to limits" I replied
With this reply of mine I guess he understood that I was in real mood by then. But you know what the best part of Swayam is he cannot see anybody sad. He can sense very well when you are sad or stressed up. So he would do something which will make you really relaxed and you get fresh up like anything.
Actually you know I can sum up in short that the best part of Swayam is he can make any dam person in this world happy without doing many efforts. I am his friend for almost like 8 years now but I never understand how he finds out what you need exactly to compose yourself.
"Ok let's just stop the work for today and come with me" Swayam said dragging me up from my desk
"Are you crazy Swayam we have to leave for shooting in 4 days and we don't have much time to prepare and where do you want to go now" I asked
"Oh god please does bring some sense to this girl's head. You know what sweetheart we still have 4 whole days which we can utilize for work but when it can happen?" Swayam asked
"Oh I didn't know that thank you for reminding me" I replied
He dragged me to sofa and made me sit there and he sat beside me.
"Look Sweetheart right now you are in no mood and work without mood is not good any day so let's just stop now and we can start afresh in morning when your mood is nice. Right now let me do something to cheer you up" Swayam said
"Oh really ok I stop my work here, and now let's see what you can do to make me happy" I said
Swayam took me outside and made me sit in his car. He called somebody and told something to that person I don't know what he did say to him but he looked very happy after putting the phone down.
He came to car and started driving. I did not have any clue where he was taking me? But one thing was sure that it was something like surprise for me.
We reached at a house. It was a beautiful house. It looked like palace or something. It was well decorated and I was puzzled that whose house it was?
"Swayam, where have you brought me? Whose house is this?" I asked him in puzzle state
"It's mine" He replied
"What? When did you buy this house?" I asked
"Nope, I haven't bought this house" he replied
"Then how come I don't know about this house" I asked
"Because I have never brought you here, simple you dumb" he replied
"Ha-ha-ha very funny now tell me why did you hide such beautiful place from us" I asked
"Well let's go inside I will reply you there everything" he said
We went inside the house. He showed me the whole house. It was very beautiful house. There was a big swimming pool in one of the bedroom and there was common swimming pool also and the hall was like it was a mentioned of some old ruler. Everything I saw in that house resembled to something royalty. It was like a dream house anybody would want to have but here I was seeing a person did not enjoy the place much.
I was just trying to digest this surprise about a dream house. There was another surprise in store for me. As soon as we completed seeing the house and reached outside at swimming pool and what I was saw really shocked me up totally.
"What was it Masi?" Tanya asked
"Wait I have to go to fresh room first and then I will tell you what it was" Shanaya replied
"Oh god why always you have to do something when something important part of the story has to come out" Tanya asked
"Sweetheart it's natural I cannot hold that and please bear with it. I will comeback in 5 minutes" Shanaya replied
Shanaya came out from fresh room and sat besides Tanya again
"Now tell me what it was" Tanya asked
"I am telling you baba let me sit at least" Shanaya replied
Ok we reached Swimming Pool and what I saw that somebody was waiting for us. We reached there to see who it was?
And to my surprise it was Sharon Di. I didn't have a bloody Idea how Sharon Di agreed to come to Swayam's house after all the fights.
"OMG Di you here, but how did you agree to come to Swayam's house" I asked
"What this is Swayam's house?" Di asked back
"Ya it is" I replied
"But the driver who came to pick me up said that you have sent the car and you are waiting for me for dinner" Di said
"But I haven't sent any car Di, I am here with Swayam and I don't know why he has brought me here" I said
"Yes I called Sharon here and I had to use your name otherwise she couldn't have agreed to come, I am sorry for lying" Swayam said
"But why you brought us here?" I asked
"For dinner and I actually wanted to apologize to Sharon for what I did with her, I was actually too much harsh on her and I realized that after she went from office" Swayam said
Wow I felt like I was dreaming. Swayam would apologize to Di. This was something unusual for Swayam. But he was living up to his tag of being unpredictable and making people happy.
I was sad because of fights between Swayam and Di because both them held special place in my life and I wanted to see them happy working together but instead of that I saw them fighting.
But I have to admit Swayam was smart enough to catch the reason behind my sadness.
"Sharon I am really sorry. Actually that day I wanted to give you surprise by calling you for audition and then selecting you without audition but things didn't turn out that way and I was angry that you scolded me on phone so I intentionally pushed you to limits where you cannot hold your anger. But I am really sorry and the reason I am saying sorry is that I really don't want to make enemies in my life. I want friends and moreover we are going to work together so if we fight then we won't be able to work right" Swayam said like a matured person
And you know there was small weakness in Di and that was if anybody does anything sweetly for her then she cannot be angry on that person anymore. Here Swayam had actually done sweetest thing in the world by admitting the reasons and apologizing so I know Di would forgive him
"That was impressive Mr. Junglee... Leave it actually I was also rude with you so things evened up there. Now can we eat dinner because if I don't get food now then I will faint anytime" Sharon Di replied
I and Swayam smiled and Swayam asked his servants to arrange the dinner table and we sat for dinner.
It was all like dream come true for me because it was a perfect place and it was perfect set up for the journey now.
We finished dinner and sat at swimming pool and we were drinking one of favorite brand of Vodka of Swayam. It looked like alcohol had taken control all over us.
"Do you know the actual reason of this celebration today?" Swayam
"What?" I asked
"It's my birthday today" Swayam replied
"What? It's your birthday today?" I asked
"Yes it's my birthday, this is the day I was actually born the birthday that world know is a fake date just for the sake of fans" Swayam said
"Why are you getting so surprise Shani to hear that it's his birthday today" Di asked
"I am getting surprised because we never knew that his actually birth date is different from records" I replied
"Oh but you all are best friends right?" Sharon Di said
"Ya that's the point in spite of being best friends we didn't know about this" I replied
Swayam was trying to explained himself during my and Di's conversation but we were chatting like we were the two there and Swayam didn't even exist. Now Swayam was frustrated to limits because he was not getting chance to speak.
"Will both allow me to speak and explain myself?" Swayam spoke loudly
"Ya please care to explain" I replied
"Look my birthday is something I hate most in my life that's why I never told anybody about my real birthday ever" Swayam spoke to our surprises
We were like how can anybody hate birthday of his own. But this was a side of Swayam that even I haven't seen in all these years. This was not the Swayam we know, anybody could have judged it the way he spoke.
"But why do you hate your own birthday?" Sharon Di asked out of curiosity and even I wanted to ask the same
"Because my parents left me with this wealth to stay alone and they considered me as a burden in their life" Swayam said
"What? Your parents are dead?" I asked
"No they aren't dead, they are alive" Swayam replied
"Then why they left you?" I asked
"Because they wanted to leave each other and no one was ready to take responsibility of me" He replied
"What your parents have separated?" Sharon Di asked now
"Ya my parents have separated when I was 12" Swayam replied
"Then who took care of you all these years" Sharon Di asked
"Orphanage" Swayam replied
"What? Really, no you are joking right?" Sharon Di and I spoke in unison
"No I am not joking they had left this house for me when I grow 18 and they had left enough money which I can use to survive" Swayam said
"How rude… what kind of parents are they?" Sharon Di said
Sharon Di was very emotional and such incidents used to shake her up. But such things were very normal for Swayam because he had somewhere made up his mind that his friends are integral part of his life and he can survive with them.
"Well they are mind-blowing parent's babes, because they were honest enough to admit that I was an unwanted child in their life and they wanted to move on leaving me behind" Swayam said
Sharon Di went to Swayam and hugged him tight as if she could feel his pain. For some time I went blank because how can they understand each other so well after all these fights and shouting.
But something looked obvious in them. Di could read Swayam better than me for the first time I was not having any idea how it could have felt to Swayam when his parents left him.
But Destiny play its game now that unwanted child had became so famous that every parents wanted a child like Swayam. He was loved by one and all but he always seemed indifferent after all the love he received.
I was always puzzled that how can anybody just take granted the love he gets from his fans but today only I realized the guy never felt love in his life then how could he just know what love is.
"You know Swayam don't worry somebody will come into your life and fill your life with love that you have been missing all this years" Sharon Di said
Swayam just broke the hug and started laughing like maniac as if Di had cracked some joke.
We were staring at him and wondering if he has gone mad or what, we couldn't understand why he was laughing so much
"Are you crazy or what? Love, who the hell wants love, I have my friends who are with me all the way and I am happy with the present equation of my life. So chill I don't want love" Swayam said
"Friendship is in its own place Swayam and love has its own means" Sharon Di said
"Look I don't know why you are backing Love so much but for me love is just game where the one who falls in love with other loses badly" Swayam said
"But Swayam Love has the power to heal everything" Sharon Di said
"Ya it would have the power for heal for all of you but not for me, anyways I respect your views on love and you can follow them but they cannot be made applicable to me" Swayam said
"Ok good but you will realize one day" Sharon Di said
"I have realized one thing that we can be friends because you are actually more matured then what you should be so you need some Swayam baba lessons to break free" Swayam said
We all laughed at this line. This was Swayam I know. Swayam cannot be sad any time. If you can make out that confession was the saddest thing that happened in his life but he still recovered from it and was smiling from heart.
That was the quality of Swayam which made us love him. We all pray in life that we find a true friend and I always thank god that he brought Swayam in my life because he made the best and perfect possible friend for me.
"Ok now look both of you I did all this because I did not want anybody to be sad on my birthday, and today when I saw Shanaya sad in office it felt bad to see her like that. I realized that she was sad for reasons for which I was responsible in one way, so I planned this and Sharon I promise from next time I will be just a friend as I am to Shanaya to you also" Swayam said
"Oh wow so sweet you did all this because I was sad. You are such Sweetheart Swayam" I said
"Well if you say I am your friend then be ready for madness in shoot" Sharon Di said hugging me and Swayam together.
Well finally Di and Swayam became normal and now I was totally excited for shooting now.
"Masi Papa is the Sweetest person on the earth then how could have grand paa and grand maa left him" Tanya asked
"I don't know Sweetheart it was their bad luck that they left your Papa, and it was our good luck that your papa came into our lives right" Shanaya said
"Ya we are lucky that he is with us, now tell me how shooting went then?" Tanya asked
"Well shooting that is one crazy story in itself and because it was the after effect of Swayam and Sharon friendship and it can be nothing less than huge story in itself" Shanaya said
"Then tell me Na" Tanya
"Ya I am telling you na wait just let me drink a sip of water first" Shanaya said

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