Hey Sweetheart🤗
This FF has a special place in my heart as it started as an OS...which was dedicated to ur frnds..i was one of them😳...i have not followed few parts..due to time issues...but i am well aware about the storyline😊
Beautiful end of a story of love...loved the way u showed the mature Swaron...along with tanya and tanvi...loved it😃
The night sequence where he was working and she forcefully sat with him till he finishes...cute and adorable swaron...ahaaa..i love them..the caring sharon...was a treat to read...
The morning scene where he gave those cute tags to his siren and junior siren was cute and funny😆
Swayam- Sharon..you know you are My "First Class Siren"'
Sharon looked at him..but like a Glare'
Swayam- Don't give me that look'let me clear'.
Sharon- Hann !!
Swayam- Tum..meri "First class Siren"'then tumse Chhoti Tannu'"Upper KG Siren"'and usse bhi chhoti yeh'Tanvi'"Lower KG" Siren'.
😆😆😆
Loved the part where they cherished tanya's 1st step memories with tanvi's 1st step...so thoughtful😳
The BEST PART was the poem..those verses...summerized the whole FF...lovelyyy
I just loved these lines
Our Love is like A Perennial River'
So fortunate, to have this awesome family'
Just wanna mesmerize'this Dream like Reality'
Swayam'My Soul'My Heart's Jury'
Thus..The First And The Last Chapter Of
"My Eternal'Shining..Pure'Love Life Story"
Loved the epilogue dear...BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...plz write something new..SOON..
PS- thanks for mentioning me..and for being so sweet to me..always..love u😳
Luv
Ur Di
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