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Posted: 12 years ago
nice teaser
waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
U are seriously teasing us with so much suspense yaar . Eagerly waiting for rams reaction hope it is positive plsss don't give us more shock 😆
Update sooon
Love aanya
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice teaser...
waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Note

power supply is off I m posting this note from Lappy
update is saved in PC.as soon as power supply is on I will update.You all can imagine that the power conditions are horrible in Delhi and NCR.

so few hours more and you all will get the update.
thanks for liking the teaser.

Rashmi
Edited by rashmivaish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
no problem dear we can understand there is lot of power cut every where. will be waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Teaser dara raha hai mujhe...
Ky Hoga???
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Note

power supply is off I m posting this note from Lappy
update is saved in PC.as soon as power supply is on I will update.You all can imagine that the power conditions are horrible in Delhi and NCR.

so few hours more and you all will get the update.
thanks for liking the teaser.

Rashmi


NO WORRIES...


WILL WAIT
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ All

Don't be scared by the teaser.It is just like every action has it's reaction.Nothing bad is going to happen. Maan and Geet are not going to be changed above all dadi and priya too are like before.bus Geet is little bit more insecure.
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Posted: 12 years ago

'Dulhan wahi Jo Piya Mann Bhaaye'
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khilne se pahle murjha jaaye ,
itni naazuk toh woh kali nahi
milne se pahle ,
khushiyaan uske dar se laut jaaye
itna pathar dil toh uska ,khuda bhi nahi

haan yeh maana
sirf pathroo par chalne ka dard hi ,
hai usne jaana
par isse kaante na chubhe gulaab ke
uss bewkuf ko kabhi gulaab ki kashish ne bhi pukaara hi nahi
thik waise hi ,
jaante hai daag hai chand mein
par phir bhi ,chand sa mehboob paane ki hasrat is jamaane mein har deewane ki hai

koi marne ke baad
bana dega aapke liye tajmahal
yeh baat gujre zamaan ki hai
ab toh woh daur hai ,jisme
pyaar ka nasha charo aur hai

khilne ko hai woh kali
jo ab tak andhre se thi ghiri
suraj uska aane ko hai
dukh ka baadal ,jaane ko hai
woh laayga
uske daaman mein khusi,aur karwaayga uski roshni se pahchaan
kyoki woh hoga uska MAAN

gifted by- 9n9i9s9h9u9

Thanks nishu for the lovely poem.You gave me it on the very first day when I started this ff.and you never came back on my ff after that.


part-46

Maan went in side of the house. there too he searched in every room but couldn't find her.He was tensed now-Geet where are you?is nayi jagah me itni raat ko kaha chali gayi?Thai city is not safe for the girls in the night. God pls Keep her safe and God heard his prayer.A boy saw him searching for some thing or some one.

Boy-what are you searching.Is any one lost?

Maan-I m searching for my friend.I can't find her.Her name is Geet and
she is wearing a pink dress.

Boy-Wahi na jo subah gazhal ga rahi thi?

Maan yes.Have you seen her.Pls tell me where she is.

Boy-I saw her going on the terrace.

maan was relieved to know that Geet was all fine.He thanked that boy and ran towards terrace.He saw her there sitting with her legs up on one chair.Her face was hidden between her knees.her body was shaking, probably she was crying all alone.
maan went near her,sat on his toes to bring himself to her level and he called her softly and slowly-Geet

Geet heard his voice and lifted her face and saw Maan.her face was
wet with her constantly flowing tears.She quickly wiped her face-
Maan tum yahan.Oh I m sorry main kisi ko bataaye bina hi aa gayi.
Tum pareshaan ho rahe hoge.I m sorry for this trouble.

Maan didn't say a word.Geet got up from the chair

Geet-Party khatm ho gayi? Ghar jaane ka time ho gaya kya .chalo.
Maan was still watching her without uttering a word. geet saw him-
(in a stuttering voice)A.. a.. aise kya dekh rahe ho.wo ...wo... I
was feeling little suffocated there.so I came here to get some
fresh air.bahut bheed hai na neeche.Ab jaldi chalo.

saying this she moved towards the door of terrace.but stopped after
few steps.Maan was still standing there and was starring her.Geet
came back near him-Maan pls don't see me like this.let's go

maan-Geet agar koi baat dil ko takleef de rahi ho to It's better to
share it with some one you trust.Par itne saalon baad bhi I don't
think you consider me your that friend.kya main is laayak nahin ki
tum apnna pain mujse share kar sako.

Geet was hearing him with her head down.

Maan-you think that shedding tears before some one is the sign of
weakness.kab tak natak karogi geet majboot banne ka strong banne
ka,some time it's good to share your pain Geet and..

Next moment Geet was sobbing by hugging him.She truly needed some
one today.she grabbed Maan's waist by her both hands and her head
was kept on his chest.she was crying bitterly.May be it's true
that we can show our weakness to our closest one.Maan too hugged
her tightly as today he didn't want to leave her at her weak
moment.

Geet,while sobbing-I m sorry .I didn't want to hurt you.par main
kya karoon meri kuchh samajh me nahin aaya.Sameera often makes me
remember who I m but I never minded it.why did i feel bed today.

Maan -petting her head-Because you know Sameera well.But you never
expected it from Dadi and maa that's why you are feeling like
this.I m sorry Geet Today I m the only one who is responsible for
your pain.maine kabhi nahin socha tha ki kabhi tumhaari takleef ki
wajah main bhi banoonga.
his one hand was on her head and other was on her shoulder.

he was caressing her.Slowly Geet calmed down.when he felt her breathing
normal he made her sit on the chair and took another chair.

Geet-Aaj dadi ki baat sun kar laga ki Smaeera galat nahin sochti
mere baare me.May be i had hurt her to this level by intruding in
her family. Maan dadi uncle and aunty will too hate me after knowing
my truth?ab tak jitna pyar mujhe diya, they will regret
for it
after knowing who I m?

Maan-Geet.aisa kuchh bhi nahin hoga .Ye to unka instant reaction
tha us ladki ke baare me jise unhone na hi kabhi dekha na hi kabhi
us se mile.I m sure they would have not said all that if she was
here.Aur tumhaare baare me to wo kabhi aisa soch bhi nahin sakte

Geet-But first reaction is always true reaction.baad me to hum usko
apne hisaab se mold kar lete hain na.Now I m afraid maan, how will
I face them the day they will come to know about me.I would prefer
to die before that

Maan,sturnly-Geettt

Geet-I m saying truth maan I will not be able to see hatred for
myself in those eyes in which I always saw love for me.

She was again sobbing maan was too feeling tears in his eyes.two
lovers who love each other so much were sharing their hearts in the
name of Friendship.Maan was too scared for Geet now.How will his
family react on this.Dadi and maa showed their feelings today what
about papa? agar unhone bhi aise hi react kiya to?

Geet was still sobing and maan's cell rang.It was Ram.

Maan(st)kya Geet ko is halat me sabke samne le jana theek hoga.If
maa dadi or papa ask about this condition of Geet what will I say.I
will have to do some thing.we can't go with them in this condition.

Maan saw from the terrace where the party was going on.Party was
over and guest were leaving.He saw that Ram was with Priya and dadi
and was calling him.Sam too was with then.He quickly dialled
Rahmaan and asked him for a favor.And Rahmaan did exactly what Maan
said.

Rahmaan went near Ram and said -Ram I want Maan and Geet with me
for some time .Actually I want to do some changes in my haveli so I
want Geet to see it and design it.Ab ghar ke bachche hain to unse
behter advice ti koi nahin de sakta.

Ram-To main bhi ruk jata hoon.

Rahmaan-Kyun? tu civil engineer hai ya architect? teri zaroorat
nahin hai mujhe.tu maa bhabhi aur Sameera ko lekar ja.I will send
them in my car safly.don't you have trust on me.

Ram-ye kya kah raha hai? okey hum chalte hain.tu un dono ko jaldi
bhej dena.

...
After the all the guest were off.Maan came with Geet to Rahmaan.
Rahmaan-Maan kya baat hai beta.Geet ko kya hua hai.Isni weak kyun
lag rahi hai?

Maan-geet ki thodi tabiyat kharaab hai.dadi ko pata chalta to unko
tension ho jati,issi liye maine aapse wo sab karne ko kaha.Ab hum
chalte hain.

Rahmaan-take the car.kal driver le aayega.

Maan-Thank u uncle for your help.

He took the keys from Rahmaan. both took leave and went. Maan's
house was on the other corner of the city so it took 30 minutes to
reach there.on the way Geet requested maan to not to say anything
to dadi and Priya.when they reached Maan found Geet sleeping out of
the tiredness because of crying.he didn't want to disturb her so he
first opened the main door of the house
(there was guard on the main gate and he informed maan that Ram ordered Servants to left the door open as no body will be disturbed at late night.)Then he softy picked Geet up in his arms and and moved toward her room.he
thanked Sam today to ask for a separate room for her self on the very
first day.

Maan made her sleep on the bed and set near her.He caressed her hairs first and then put his hand on her cheek.She was so hurt that her eyes were shedding tears even in deep sleep.He wiped her tears and said-kya hum aise hi dost bane rahenge .Dosti ke naam par apne
pyar ko ignore karte rahenge.Geet bas ek baar azaad kar do mujhe
uss kasam se ,ek baar kah do ki tum mujhse pyar karti ho.I swear I
will leave every thing for you.but I know you will never be agree
for this. kabhi to apne baare me socho Geet.Please. I feel hurt when
I see you fighting alone for every thing.kab tak apne aapko khush
dikhaane ka naatak karogi Geet.I m not able to understand, what
should I do.Kismat me jo likha ho Geet but I m and will be always
with you.

Saying this he bent down and kissed her forehead.after watching her
for few minutes, he tucked her in duvet and left.

He came out and saw Ram coming towards him.

Ram-Maan kya hua.rahmaan ne kaha ki usse tumse aur geet se kuchh
kaam taha.And I called you on your mobile but you didn't pick up my
call.

Maan-papa I m sorry i could't notice it actually my phone was on
silent mode so i couldn't take your call.

Ram-geet kahan hai?

Maan-Actually she was tired and slept in the car so I helped her to
get in to her room.She is sleeping now.

Ram-Theek hai.It's quiet late so go and sleep.Good night

Maan -good night papa.

Precap- preparations for karwachauth

For pm add me at - pmatrash

sorry could not edit it nicely-rashmi


Edited by rashmivaish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update👏👏

geet hiding her pain before maan and acting as nothing happened😭😭
maan asked rehmaan's help
poor geet she was used to hear such things from sam but when she heard it from dadi and priya she couldn't bear it
geet is feels that they will hate her when they knows the truth.
waiitng for the next part
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago

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