FF...Feelings#2...UPDATED PT 30/31 PG 93 11/11/ 2013 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ashi..loved it
n welcum back..miss u n ur updates
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Temporary99

Part-25

aww...it was dreamy Love Shower.I just Love maan's actsLuv Ya.And her cute acts in shower room was phunny.Btw missed u...me didn't know u had xms...so me was like.But it was worth waiting forHappy DanceFantastic...




Love,

Zahran.


thanx for liking it...😃
even me waiting for your updates!!!!😉😉
for both your ffs...wen u updating?????

one more thing...i lovvvddd ur dp...its so damn cute!!!😆😆
Edited by Mdworld - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

u updated sachi😲😲
bt update diya toh😉😉
talli geet n my maanu uff😆
lv their cute romance😉😉
bt me wndrng abt geets reaction next morning
pta nhi kudi kya kregi😆😆
lvd it


yes...am back...😃😆
arrey you will have to wait for next update for her reaction...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaLovesMaan

wow kitne dino baad..

awesome update as always..
hayee talli geet is very nice kaash wo aise hi reh jaaye maan toh festival manayega😆 she is all goody goody touch touchy wioth maanu n wo toh in seventh heaven😆
she was missing her dad.awww..poor girl
ab utne ke baad geet ka reaction kya hoga??
waiting for next
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thanx dear!!!😊
lets just hope her reaction s positive...😆
will try n updates asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ru_21

Awesome update ashi..loved it
n welcum back..miss u n ur updates


thank you so much...
even me missed you all so much!!!😃
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**CREDIT FOR BANNER@--Rashu-- **

#guys why so less likes and comments...where are all my readers...
guys this is so disappointing...

**PART 26**

he pulled her to him and lied down while holding each other...
his heart felt contended...
he knew how much she needed him...
she had her mother and brother...and him...
she can not live without him...
but is scared to admit it...but was happy the way she was opening up...
she chuckled remembering their last kiss when she had actually slapped him...
that time also she was sad about her father when they kissed...
he mentally thanked her father for bringing them close...
with a smile on his face and her in his arms he dosed of in his
dearm world with his mishty...

SHE FELT STIFFNESS IN HER ARMS...
SHE TURNED TO OTHER DIRECTION...and tried opening her eyes slowly...
she felt her head throbbing with acute pain...
she held her head between both her hands as she sat up...
her mind was all blank...
her eyes fell on the lemon juice with a pain killer kept on side table with a note...
she quickly picked the letter first and started reading...

Goodevening Geet
hope you had a nice sleep...
wanted to wake you up didn't have heart to do so
seeing you sleep like a baby...


she smiled reading these lines...
it were the same lines that she wrote for him a day before yesterday...
she smiled and said...copy cat...

ok...i know you are smiling...
so for now take a break from my thoughts and
have this lemon juice with this medicine for the head ache...


self obssessed MSK...what else should i expect from him...
haww...how does he know am having headache...


now don't pressurise your pea sized brain about how i know...
you drank bahng...and the hangover ...


hey babajee...maaf kardo...
i had bhang...but sachee..maine jaan puchkar nai pee...
mujhe nai pta tha...
oh god...mujhe to kuch bhi nai yad...just that i had thandai...
does that mean maan mujhe yahan chodne aye the...

she wondered while proceeded to read further...

and you wont be remembering what all you did in that condition...
god..mujhe toh kehte hue bhi sharam aa rai hai...


hey babajee....she covered her mouth with her palm...
maine aisa kya kr diya...jo maan bol bhi nai paa rahe hai...
what did i do???
she tried remembering hard but couldn't...
she felt some fear creeping in...but shrugged feeling maan would be teasing me...
mai thodi na aisa kuch karungi...hai na babajee...
she consoled herself...

leave all that for now...
you have this...
and be there at office at time...
yours LOVINGLY
Maan


ye maan bhi na...he scared hell out of me...
she turned to keep the letter back on table when she noticed the bed...
she felt something different...but what she couldn't put her finger to...
entire bed sheet was crumpled...
may be i was too tired while i slept...she thought...
but then she could feel his smell all around...
she lifted her arm and smelled it...
it only smelled of him...
she felt this weird feeling down in abdomen...
she shook her head...
you have gone mad geet...


and took the medicine and sipped the lemon juice...
aah....she felt a stinging sensation at her lips...
she quickly went towards the mirror and saw her lips...
there was this cut near the corner...
how did this happen...
just then she remembered maan lifting her and
laying her on bed...
she holding his arm and asking him to stay...
but couldn't re,member further...
just then his lines came back to her mind...

"and you wont be remembering what all you did in that condition...
god..mujhe toh kehte hue bhi sharam aa rai hai..."


babajee kahin maine maan ko...
nahin...how can i...
.a lone tear fell down...
did i forcefully kissed him...
she felt so shamefull...
how could i...
here daadi s askingg me to find a girl for him and here me...
how could i ...
how will i face him tomorrow...
she ran to washroom and washed her face...

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here maan had a hearty laugh as he remembered how he wrote the letter...
earlier when he woke up...he saw her in deep sleep...
he softly pecked her forehead and stood up...
he remembered what all inspired between them and smiled...
but then his smile faltered feeling if she would remember all...
but then he thought what ever happened was neither forcefully nor one sided...
so he had to do something...
just then something mischievous came to his his mind and he gave an evil smile...
he quickly grabbed a pen and paper and started writing...

god it was so difficult for him to control his laugh...
he made lemon juice and kept it near the note with a pain killer...
after taking her view he left...
he smiled thinking of the next day...when he will meet her...
he was eagerly waiting for her reaction...
ab tum mere liye ladki dekh rai ho...
to itni si punishment to banti hai...
his eyes twinkled...

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NEXT DAY...

he made himself engrossed in his work while he knew that she was
constantly looking at him...and when he looked in her direction in order
to pick up a file she would quickly divert her gaze and would start scribbling something...
he smiled looking at her...
actually he also wanted to stare at her but was intentionally not doing so...
just then she received a call from Adi saying that Maan sir wanted xyz file...
she kept the phone and quickly took the file..shot a quick prayer to her babajee and went to his cabin
and knocked...
when she heard him asking her to step in...

she nervously stepped in and her eyes were downcast...
as she didn't have the courage to look into his eyes...
but this wasn't what he wanted...
he actually wanted her to see in his direction...
before she could say anything...
he quickly uttered...
Adi you can keep the file here...
expecting her to correct him...
but she didn't speak anything and kept the file and was about to leave
when she felt him coughing...

she quickly went to him...
Maan kya hua.....but he didn't reply anything and kept coughing badly...
she started rubbing his back to sooth him when he suddenly snapped
as if offended by her touch...
but geet didn't give it a thought and gave him a glass of water to drink...
as he grabbed the glass he intentionally made a contact with her hand...
and as he did he immediately dropped the glass...
Maan...now geet was confused...
was he actually feeling afraid of her touch!!!!!!

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PRECAP: honestly...how many of you expected it this way...
here our maan turned the tabled to geet's side...🤣
more to it...😳


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Edited by Mdworld - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yipppeee me first🥳

that was a mindblowing update

maan mind is really evil

bechari geet

maan toh just really turned table that was unexpected
Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
lol maan turned everything against geet😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
God it ws really fun to read it superb. N nxt part toh... Wud luv to c geet confuse luks n acts

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