SwaRon FF : Kahi Ankahi [JDM S2] Chap 11 : 111 - 25/10/2013 [Updated] - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
N o t e

I know this ain't such a big or such an interesting chapter, rather a very boring chapter, i suppose? Well, i dun feel like writing at all what can i do?

But i had to write and update this chapter or else i would have burst out, because i so freaking wanted to write this chapter.

This chapter revealed some deadly pasts of Swayam's life AND as well as Sharon's life and i know that you would have understand Swayam's story but not Sharon's story. I am sure! I kept it a secret! ๐Ÿ˜Ž

And for know more about Deepika, go to the character sketch post on first page and read her sketch. I posted it already!

Deepy : This small size Deepika in the chapter is dedicated to you! ๐Ÿค—

Thanks for the patience and eat more more because you have to have more energy to be more patient as this FF won't be updated till July! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Leave your precious comment and hit the like button, who knows i might get encourage and update! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

And yeah do try to collect 40+ likes on the update! :D



-Marium

Edited by -Marium- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
res
unres...

yipeee me first...
MARIUM ๐Ÿค—
only for u
bada wala comment aur woh bhi aaj hi!!!


party time ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿฅณ
dance time

sorry me yaha pm ke pehle hi aa gayi..
i was just surfing like this ki kuch mil jaye and TADDA!!!!! mil gaya
and chapter 2 updated ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

coming to the update
marium ๐Ÿค—

bilkul jhakkas dhamkedar wala update diya hain... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
loved it

so well written
agar tum " NOT IN MOOD TO WRITE" main aisa likhti ho toh please cont.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


loved the way you portrayed what dev means to swayam from sharon's POV ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
nice work..

hate swayam's mom ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
and that bloddy boyfriend of hers ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
attacked!!!
kidnapped!!!
& to top it murdered...!!! ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข

how can someone be so low...
how can she be so selfish!!! ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข

and you were right..
it really did clear a lot about swayam and his past... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Q;) hey did you add Deepika rai prakash in your CS...
or did i missed it before??

loved how you characterized deepika
she considers sharon like her mom... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

nugget !!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

and the sharon and deepika convo were super duper adorable ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


"Di, where is jiju?" Deepy asked in her beautiful and innocent tone to Sharon. Simi stopped in her track listening to her question and turned back to look at Sharon."Swayam needed to go to see Tani so he will stay there for tonight."


this part confused me??? ๐Ÿ˜•
jiju!!!! that to swayam... ๐Ÿ˜•


thank you for the lamba wala update ๐Ÿค—
thank you for the pm ๐Ÿ˜‰
thank you for the revelation
cleared a lot of stuff in my head ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›


update soon ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
and do pm me
im very excited
wanna read more ๐Ÿ˜‰

i'm waiting ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š





Edited by spongy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: spongy

res

unres...

yipeee me first...
MARIUM ๐Ÿค—
only for u
bada wala comment aur woh bhi aaj hi!!!


party time ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿฅณ
dance time

sorry me yaha pm ke pehle hi aa gayi..
i was just surfing like this ki kuch mil jaye and TADDA!!!!! mil gaya
and chapter 2 updated ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

coming to the update
marium ๐Ÿค—

bilkul jhakkas dhamkedar wala update diya hain... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
loved it

so well written
agar tum " NOT IN MOOD TO WRITE" main aisa likhti ho toh please cont.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


loved the way you portrayed what dev means to swayam from sharon's POV ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
nice work..

hate swayam's mom ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
and that bloddy boyfriend of hers ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
attacked!!!
kidnapped!!!
& to top it murdered...!!! ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข

how can someone be so low...
how can she be so selfish!!! ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข

and you were right..
it really did clear a lot about swayam and his past... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Q;) hey did you add Deepika rai prakash in your CS...
or did i missed it before??

loved how you characterized deepika
she considers sharon like her mom... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

nugget !!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

and the sharon and deepika convo were super duper adorable ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


"Di, where is jiju?" Deepy asked in her beautiful and innocent tone to Sharon. Simi stopped in her track listening to her question and turned back to look at Sharon."Swayam needed to go to see Tani so he will stay there for tonight."


this part confused me??? ๐Ÿ˜•
jiju!!!! that to swayam... ๐Ÿ˜•


thank you for the lamba wala update ๐Ÿค—
thank you for the pm ๐Ÿ˜‰
thank you for the revelation
cleared a lot of stuff in my head ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›


update soon ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
and do pm me
im very excited
wanna read more ๐Ÿ˜‰

i'm waiting ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š







Muah! Thanks a lot for such an amazing comment! :D And yes, i just added Deepy's character sketch so that you all can know a bit more about her! :D

You know i am writing next part now, who may know if i feel like updating i will update it in a day or two or may be shayed exams ke baad tak na karun! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Well really nice chapter don't you dare to say it a bore chapter
Nicely penned down thnx for the pm but jaldi jaldi update kia karo
Btw one question is Sharon n swayam engaged
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: -Marium-



Muah! Thanks a lot for such an amazing comment! :D And yes, i just added Deepy's character sketch so that you all can know a bit more about her! :D

You know i am writing next part now, who may know if i feel like updating i will update it in a day or two or may be shayed exams ke baad tak na karun! :P


i like the in a day or two wala option more better than exams ke baad ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
but anyway the choice is yours...
p.s. i'll try my best to get the first res... ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

vaise bhi u have to update so many story's in june ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
KUCH YAAD AAYA!!!
and what bout my last ques
kuch toh explain karo..
how is swayam deepika's JEEJU...???
Edited by spongy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: spongy


i like the in a day or two wala option more better than exams ke baad ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
but anyway the choice is yours...
p.s. i'll try my best to get the first res... ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

vaise bhi u have to update so many story's in june ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
KUCH YAAD AAYA!!!
and what bout my last ques
kuch toh explain karo..
how is swayam deepika's JEEJU...???


Not in June! In July.. June main tu papers hain! And about juji.. wait and watch.. next update main clear karnai ki koshish karungi main! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Haila You Update :P
Meri taraf se ek Tight Jhappi, update ke liye. ๐Ÿค—

I thought Tumhare saare Works HOLD par Hai... Bt Anyways,
Hume toh update miley na, that the best part... ! :D
Um, Coming To the Part,
Deepy's charecter, awww!! Mast mast...
And even I m connfused, yeh Swayam Deepy Ka Jiju Kaise hua...
Jaldi yeh Clear karna please...
And haaa
Please Ek-do Din mein update kar pleaj!
Dekh ek BECHARi Nanhi Si Masum Baccchi (that is me ) Uski wish puri karde aur jaldi update kar...
๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ
bt this was A Mast Update ๐Ÿค—
LotsOf Love,
MiNi.. ๐Ÿค—
Edited by --MiNi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
res til m readdd ๐Ÿ˜ƒ DOne emotional chpterrr ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Edited by nature2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Hey so u finally updated inspite f studying for ur exams.. Thank you for updating marium..:) well for the update it was lovely poor swayam he has a very sad childhood inspite of having a mother he din get her love I feel extremly bad for him.. Sharon is worried for swayam how sweet and caring of her.. It was a very emotional update it was great loved it..:).One more thing are swayam and sharon engaged coz deepika called swayam jeju..??
Edited by sweet16cash - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
im still kinda confused...
becuz this was a big jump from the last update...
oh well too much thinking will only hurt my brain!!!
but a great update!!
i love the sharon and deepy bond!!!
they are so cute!!!
especially the whole nugget thing!!!
im not even gonna ask about the jeeju thing becuz then this comment is gonna be WAY too long...
UPDATE SOON!!!

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